FF:Back to Newton’s Laws-3...part 46.... - Page 86

dis remindz me... finshd readng around 4 tymz or so..
n each tym i feel lik gng bak n readng....

MIND-BLOWINGGG !!!!

i cdnt stop reading it-- read the whole thing in one go- well with a few pauses bt even that was with a heavy-heart (the pauses, that is)--
it was so good-- i liked the fact that there was no villian as such- except of course for sandra and ben bt that was later on-- bt the first part was just them and their feelings adn all--
also liked that it was a multiple character story even tho it was focused mainly on armaan and ridz
i love weddings adn so the fact that the first part (the indian part) had the wedding as a backdrop made it really nice- and the way u incorporated the Taj Mahal into the whole thing was really romantic and made for sum interesting parts-
I'm sure Newton will be proud for ur association of his name to the FF coz it was truly fab--
havin said that- a couple of criticisms- dont take this the wrong way- bt i thot that it was so good that other pp mite enjoy it as well and these points mite just enhance the enjoyment-- the font (italix), altho its nice that u used sumthing different can make it a litl hard to read- esp given that the paras are so long so u tend to lose where u are- the paras are kinda long which makes part of u not feel like reading it bt then teh other part really wants to knw wat happens nxt -- also wen their is dialogue its kinda hard to figure out huz sayin wat and then u hav to go bak and re-read it which can at times be a bit of a pain and also sumtimes u dont which ''he''/''she'' is sayin it-- these are just a few things that altho dint really matter at the end wd hav made it easier to read-- oh and another thing- a lot of ppl- eg: me-- like to read FFs that are already complete coz then u dont hav to wait for them to be updated or worry that the person will just leave it halfway and so if u add that its complete in the post heading that mite attract more to read it--

newez-- ur FF was Fabbbbb--- loved a whole bunch of scenes bt one thing that remains with me is the varmaala part in the last part where minnie makes aryan bend to put the garland-- i was in class at that time and well i really wanted to finish the FF coz it was at the climax and so i got to this part and i just had to stop reading coz as it is i was laughin and cd barely contain it and its a small class so i was afraid the teacher wd notice and so after bout 10 min i finally composed myself enuf to continue and even then it was SOOOO funnnyyyy--

all in all gr8 stuff-- am lookin forward to reading more of ur work-- in fact if u cd give me links to ur other FFs that wd be gr8 !!

take care--
keep writing !
~Sweetoo

NJ...ppl still read tis one..and luv to no limits...:D :D

i cnt seem to let go of this ff..m reading it for lik the nth time..

hahahah its amusing now when i hear that, not any less pleasing though mind you, but its almost like everytime someone tells me about newtons now, im like STILL? really now!!! hahaha ....glad you liked the tale shriya, it means alot, always!

hey nj i knoe its long but ths is one ff very close to my heart n i love the xpressions uu have used ...so wheneva i m like not feeling gud or not in the mood to read anything,i open up BTNL n start reading..its amazing how even after so many reads it still feels like m reading it for the 1st time..like i hv always maintained,ur ffs take me to a different world altogether..thts y i enjoy every bit..!

god nimi you had me grinning mad at this...i made nij and hinu read the comment too lolzzz...wish i could say half as muchy about newtons myself...somehow having written it, i have ne ver been able to sit down and read it myself, and so... i really have not known what it is like to be read all at once...wish i could, but then i cant stop finding all the things about it i could change and cant now and then i go mad lolzzz...

oki unleashing...i wish now, after this comment, that you do readit sometime....would love to know what you thought, its my fav of the 3!!!

cheers

nj

Originally posted by: spln

god nimi you had me grinning mad at this...i made nij and hinu read the comment too lolzzz... :D wish i could say half as muchy about newtons myself...somehow having written it, i have ne ver been able to sit down and read it myself, and so... i really have not known what it is like to be read all at once...thats what ur tremendous readers r for!!..lol...v big-hearted ppl!! *collars high* wish i could, awww... but then i cant stop finding all the things about it i could change and cant now and then i go mad lolzzz...

oki unleashing...i wish now, after this comment, that you do readit sometime....would love to know what you thought, its my fav of the 3!!! really?..then its a definite-read!!...since hols have started, i'll try n read it!!

cheers

nj

Love,
Nimu, nimi, nimisha, whatever u say!