Bepanah: (AK/AR/KA) Part 18 pg 99 30/11 - Page 8

wonderful update... love the love between anjali, ridhima, and kripa...

please continue soon. 😊

fab part
just loved it...
the girls surely know to enjoy life
continue soon

hey I'm sooooo sorry i know i promised I would read the fanfic wayyyyyyy back, I've just been kinda busy. But now i have finally read it......

well done its really good. luv the way you described the love between the girls

NOTE

Hey Guys. Its Katie (love_iqbal_khan). First of all thank you so much for all the wonderful comments. Hershy will reply them soon. she was so excited to reply to comments..lol...and secondly...so sorry to keep you all waiting. The thing is that me and hershy still havent figured out how we're going to work around writing parts in such a way that both of us can write and not have one person take over the fanfic. We thought we figured out a way but it doesnt seem to be working because it is really hard for both of us to be online at the same time, so the parts are taking a while, i agree. but we are working on the part and are working hard enough to get it posted as soon as possible. i hope you guys will understand like you readers always do. I appreciate you guys for that.

P.S: If you have any ideas that can help us write the ff together and have quicker update than these, please feel free to PM us @ hershy_katie and letting us know.

Thanks once again!

We hope to update soon.

Take care

Love ya all!😊

dii chill....why don u guys write one part each..like alternaiting..i gues...i donno..lol!!

Originally posted by: prabhi

yea!!!!! 😛 u updated! 👏 👏
haha they fight but they still love eachother alot 😃
they bring the party eh?
it was a great part.. but could u PLEASEE make it longer.. if you can. 😊

aww thank u so muchh...lol yupp party animals..lol...thankss,,,,will try to make it longer

Originally posted by: aRohAAnGeL

researved!

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awesome part both of u..could u please do the honors of making it a bittt loooonger?? i was like lost in it and it ended..lol!! gr8 start!! loved it!!

luv ya
sammy!

lol...thanks sammy....im tryingg okayy....lol...u kno this is my first time..lol...hope u like the next part

Originally posted by: chillingal16

wow...excellent part...interstin way of introducing all three girlz..one wont go without the otha two..lolz...love their bond... hope we see the guyz next...will b waiting for ur nxt part.. 😆

aww thank u hun....yup they love eeachother to death...next part comin up

Originally posted by: *F^a^i^z^a*

awesome part; I loved it; Looking forward to the fanfic; its awesome, lol anjali and kripa were blowing eachothers heads off 😆

lol..thanks faiza...yah they are both craziii..thanks for liking it

Originally posted by: rima791

very enjoyable part, i love anjali-kripa's character 😳 😉 can't wait for the boys introduction 😳 😃 do cont soon guys 👏 👏

aww thanks rima...next part comin up in a bit

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

hey 😊
wow yaar both u girls r doing an amazing job lovely concept n ff its rocking 😉
its superb update soon
n plz pm me
👏

hey...thank u so much for liking it....will definetly pm u....thanks again

Originally posted by: kvn1983

really a nice one its very interesting waiting for next part please continue it soon

"Love is like standing in the wet cement,
The longer you stay, the harder it is to leave
And you can never go without leaving your shoe behind."

"Raat kya dhali sitare chale gaye,
koi aur kya mila aap hume bhulate chale gaye,
dosti ki baazi jeet to hum bi sakte the,
par aap ki khushi ke liye haarte chale gaye….."

"Chupa chupake raat din aansu bahana yaad hai,
Humko ab tak, Aashiqui ka, wo zamana yaad hai…
Aisa lagtaa hai, ke saaree khubsuratee tuj mein samaagaye
Raahon mein chalte ho, to nazarein tuj par rekhtee hai,
Andheraa jeevan bhi, tuj se roshan ho jata hai…"

awww thankss...once again love ur poemss..thanks soo muchh

Originally posted by: sweet honey

wonderful part.... awww even doe anjali n kripz were fytin...kripa cdnt hear a wrd agenst her...plz cont soon 😃

lol yahh thas the way they are...thanxxxxx

Originally posted by: barkha_90

😉 continue soon...

will do..thanks

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!! 👏

thankss

Originally posted by: deeya123

nice start
liked the relationshp b/w the girls.even though anjali and kripa were but still they r too close to one another

yah they are very closee...thankss

Originally posted by: lilindiangurl13

it was really nice
they love each other so much
cant wait for the guys intro
plz cont... soon

yea they do...thanksss

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing part
i really liked the frienship between the three girls it was really sweet
👏

thank u

Originally posted by: Shafoo

cool part cant wait to read next part plzz contuied soon

thanksss

Originally posted by: Mimi_Rani

lol that was a nice part...all three are party people...i wonder what their brothers would think about that 😆 😆 😆 great part do continue soon 😳

lol...the brothers will be in for a shock..lol...tthank u

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

great first part!

thanksss

Originally posted by: sujalangad_rock

fab part
just loved it...
the gilrs surely love each other a lot...
loved their fights...& also their way of party
continue soon

lol yes they do...oh yahh the grls are party animals...we decided to make it a bit differnt have the grls like to party...lol

Originally posted by: *princess*15

fab part 👏 👏
i like anju and kripa their characters are really funny 😆
wonder how boys will be 😆
continue soon 😃

lol..yah anju and kripa are funny...and as for the boys chek em out urself...next part coming up in a bit...thanksss

Originally posted by: armaan_ritz

cool part! thanks yaar......😆 😃
luv
-nirja 😳

aww thanks nirja

Originally posted by: sameira-90

hey great part.. continue soon.. 👏

thanksss

Originally posted by: GuJu_Qt

wonderful update... love the love between anjali, ridhima, and kripa...

please continue soon. 😊

thankssss...yes they love eachother alot..will be continuing in a bit

Originally posted by: sujalangad_rock

fab part
just loved it...
the girls surely know to enjoy life
continue soon

lol...thank u so much for the second comment...ur so cute..lol

Originally posted by: Sujalthegreat

hey I'm sooooo sorry i know i promised I would read the fanfic wayyyyyyy back, I've just been kinda busy. But now i have finally read it......

well done its really good. luv the way you described the love between the girls

aww its k sajid...dont say sorrie...its all gud....thank u for liking it

Part 2

"Wake up you moron"!!!! yelled Armaan as he dumped the whole jug of cold water on the bed and ran for his life.

"3, 2 ,1" counted Kavya who was sitting on the table drinking water downstairs and looked up at the stairs.

"I'm going to kill u armaan…come here NOWW!!" was the only thing that kavya heard before he saw two guys running downstairs. One being chased by the other. One running for his life, the other avenging for his wet state.

Angad: Kavya if u protect him, then you are partner in crime

He threatened kavya as he saw armaan hide behind him. Knowing the consequences kavya started running away from armaan. So armaan started running behind kavya while angad started chasing armaan.

Angad noticed the glass of water that kavya was drinking on the table and decided to use it to his advantage. He picked up the glass and threw the water at Armaan who ducked in time so it went straight onto kkavya's face.

Noticing what just happened everyone froze until angad felt a pillow hit him square on the face. After making sure his face was all right he looked up just in time to see kavya running towards him with the jug of water while armaan stood there laughing.

Angad: It was armaan's fault he moved

Kavya: who told u to throw the water?

Angad: I was just taking revenge

Kavya: I am also just taking revenge

Kavya threw the jug of water but of course angad also ducked on time and so all the water went on the petite lady standing behind angad who just came out of the kitchen. All three of them froze when they saw what kavya just did.

"MOM" yelled Angad

"AUNTY" yelled the twins in unison.

"What on earth is going on here?" yelled a furious and soaking wet Naina.

kavya pointed at angad who pointed at armaan who pointed to his other side, where stood absolutely no one. Armaan looked to see who he was pointing at, finding no one there he looked back at naina and gulped.…

"ooppss" he mumbled out loud

"Naina my breakfa-" Dilip said as he came down the stairs but stopped midway as he saw the state of his room, his son and his wife.

"Naina I think you took a shower with clothes on today. You are wet" he said trying to suppress his laughter

"No really, thank you for telling me Dilip, mujhe toh pata hi nahi tha ki main poori bheeg gayi hoon." she said sarcastically.

"Aap hasna bandh karoge, dekho kya haal kardiya in bacho ne mera" she complained to her husband.

Dilip: Accha sorrie…Bacho yeh kiski shararat thi?

Naina: Waise to pani kavya ne pheka lekin mujhe pata hai mere bete ne yeh in dono shaitan ki vajah se kiya hoga.

Angad: That's not fair mom aapko hamesha aisa kyun lagta hai ki kavya doodh ka dhula hua hai?

Kavya: Who isliye kyunki main hoon hi aisa (looking towards naina) Aunty aap bilkul theek keh rahi hai, yeh dono hi hamesha masti karte hai aur beech main main phas jaata hoon. It's all their fault.

Kavya explained the whole story too Naina and Dilip and soon enough Kavya, Angad and Naina were staring at Armaan as if ready to kill him.

Armaan: Arey main toh sirf isko utha raha tha. Aunty aap hi ne to bola tha na ki armaan ja kar angad ko uthao.

Angad: Mom ne mujhe utha ne ko bola tha mujh per pani dalne ko nahi. The water was so cold mommy (he whined to naina)

Dilip: Arey bas bas kyun sab armaan ke peche pare ho. (walking towards armaan)

Armaan: Thanks uncle ek aap hi hai jo mujhe samajte hai warna yeh sab to mere piche hi par jat-AAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

Armaan screamed on the top of his lungs while the rest were in hysterics seeing his state. Dilip had just dumped a glass of water that was on the table on Armaan's head.

Dilip: There you go problem solved…now Angad go and get ready for college and can I please have my breakfast Naina I am getting late to go to the office Suryaban must be waiting for me we have an important meeting today.

Kavya: Don't worry uncle dad must be late too because he is going to be getting breakfast late as well. All thanks to someone (giving a dirty look to Armaan who went to go get a Tshirt for himself and kavya to change into from Angad's room)

Soon enough angad got ready and came down looking hot as ever and all the three left for college after letting naina know that they will be having dinner at the sharma house today.

Angad, Armaan, and Kavya got out of their cars. As soon as they got off, Armaan and Kavya started counting down.

"3, 2, 1, Angad RUN!" said the twins in unison.

"ANGAD!!! MY SWEETU!!!" was all they heard after the twins were done counting down.

Angad was mortified...he turned around and his expression was as if he just saw a charged bull who was attacking him. He turned around and ran for his life while armaan and kavya stood there, laughing their heads off.

Angad turned around and screamed "HELP ME!!!!!!"

Armaan: Sorry man!!! we dont want to get involved!!!

Angad looked behind once again to see her running after him. god! who told her that this is how you show a man that you're crushing over him??

"Angad!!! Dont run away from me!!", she yelled.

"Sorry Nisha!! I'm in a hurryy!!!!", he yelled back as he disappeared into the building, too fast for nisha to catch while armaan and kavya laughing their hearts out followed to get to their class.

As soon as Kavya and Armaan got to their class they saw Angad sitting in his seat in the back hiding his face behind a book.

Armaan: NISHAA!

Angad: where? (panicking while kavya and armaan are laughing their heads off)

Angad: Not funny guys (noticing it was just them two being retarded)

Kavya: God angad why are you scared of her? She is such a nice girl. I am sure aunty would love to have her as a daughter-in-law.(laughing)

Angad (looking at kavya as if he has two heads) Are you always this crazy or is today a special day.

Armaan: No bhaiya is always like this, but he is right you know Nisha likes you so much. You two would look good together like a toothpick and a tree trunk

Angad: Well I think she would make a better bhabhi for you armaan….what say?

Kavya: No way angad I could never do that to you, I know how crushed you would be.Angad: oh yea...im going to be crushed like a walnut which has been walked over by an ant

And the three went on like this until the professor came and started his lecture which eventually lead to Armaan falling asleep and Angad and Kavya taking notes for him.

Finally after the class ended the three went out to go to the cafeteria to hang out for a bit before their next class which also they had together.

Armaan: Hmmm class went by pretty fast today don't you think? (he asked the other two who were walking next to him)

Angad: Of course it did for YOU who was asleep five minutes into the lecture.

Armaan: Well duhh it's a LECTURE…and you know that Armaan Sharma never listens to them…be it from my mother, your mother or the professor. (he looked up proudly)

Kavya: You don't listen to anyone's lecture except for one persons.

Angad: let me guess….your sister?

Armaan: Really? Is there a note on my back??…..is it on my face???…how did you know??

Angad: Um armaan….its kind of obvious…you almost hijacked the plane for her..so should she be the only one you listen to?

kavya: That is not the reason....it's because she can knock him down in two karate moves...

kavya was so busy making fun of armaan, he didnt realize he was going into the girls washroom until some girl inside screamed which made kavya take quick steps backwards. Angad and armaan laughed as if they had sworn to die laughing.

Angad: I wish mom was here than she would know how innocent her Kavya really is. (giving a high five to armaan)

Kavya: oh yea?? You two are saying as if you have never done anything embarrassing before…who was the one that hijacked the plane? (looking at armaan)

Armaan: (turning red) um….who??? Oh look…hey NISHAA!! (he yelled trying to change the subject)

As soon as he saw Angad freak out and turn around with kavya following, he took the chance and ran away to his next class before angad and kavya would realize he was just kidding. And the day went on like this with the three encountering many ridiculous things mostly lead by Armaan. Soon enough college was over for the day and the three went in their cars to the Sharma house since dinner was going to be there today.

The three parked their cars by the garage and entered the Sharma's huge mansion which resembled the Khanna bungalow in many ways.

Angad: AUNTY I'M HOMEEEEEEE!!!!! (he yelled out on the top of his lungs as the twins looked at him disapprovingly)

Armaan: (whispering to kavya) Bhaiya why would he do that knowing that we are going to be dead meat by mom since we are an hour late?

Kavya: Cause he is your friend.

Armaan: You picked him up off the street and wanted to bring him home.

Angad: Heyyyyyyyyyy I heard that

Armaan: Just Kiddingggg

"Aagaye tum log" A voice called from up the stairs. The three looked up and saw Suryaban coming downstairs with a smirk on his face.

Suryaban: Aaj temperature bahaut hi garam hai….good luck boys!! (he said coming down the stairs)

The three boys gulped and looked towards the kitchen where they saw a petite lady in her late 40s standing with a belan in her hand ready to kill them. They knew they were in for it today because Gayatri Sharma looked very mad.

Gayatri: Arey tum teeno aaj thore jaldi nahin aagaye? (she said that in the most sarcastic way possible)

All three of them started talking at once, making up any excuses that came to mind. But after five minutes they realized it was no use and nothing was going to help them today because the expression on gayatri face had not changed even a millimeter so they ran and stood behind Suryaban for protection.

Gayatri: Suniye Ji...agar aaj aapne in teeno ko bachaya na...to aapko bhi maar padegi...chaliye...hatiye.....abhi inhe dikhaati hoon...

Suryaban: sorry boys....lekin mujhe maar khaane ka koi shaukh nahi hai...mujhe abhi bhukh nahi hai....

The three guys: Humein bhi nahi hai!

Gayatri: accha? Kisi ko bhukh nahi lagi hai?...theek hai...lagta hai jo kheer aaj maine banayi thi woh sirf mein hi kha leti hoon...

All four men: bhukh nahi hai? kisne kaha? humein to bahut bhukh lag rahi hai!

All four of them followed Gayatri and went to the table. They all loved the kheer that she made and finished it all even before the entire dinner could be served. Soon enough Angad went home and Armaan went to his room while Gayatri and Surya sat to watch some TV. Kavya on the other hand went to go get the phone so he call his darling sister.

Gayatri: (as soon as she spotted kavya pick up the phone) Kavya put the phone down you are not calling Kripa.

Kavya(whining) But why mom???? I haven't talked to her in such a long time.

Suryaban: You talked to her 2 hours ago.

Kavya: That is what I am saying too dad. Two hours ago that is 120 minutes. 7200 seconds. So much could have happened in that. She lives with two girls who we don't even know. You don't know what the world has become these days. My poor baby is all alone in London.

Gayatri: (in a stern voice) Kavya no means no, let the girl live in peace. Go and check on Armaan see whose life he is making a hell now.

Kavya: FINEE!! (he put the phone down and went up the stairs mumbling to himself and to complain to Armaan how mom was not letting him talk to his "poor baby who was all alone in London.")

Preview: Armaan the genius's idea

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Alright guys this was the second part..hope u like it..and sorrie for the long delay. Actually we are trying our best to coordinate with eachother..sometimes katie cant come online and sometimes i cant...but we promise to get the next part up sooner...enjoyy and thanks again for reading our fanfic😊

researved...........

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now hershy di, i already gave u side by side commentry but neways!
u rocked it!! it was awesome!! kripa is a poor baby..u think i beilive that?? lol!! angad armaan and kavya are so funnie....loved when dilip dumped water on armaan..hehehe....mere ghar ki kahani...loved it..and take a chill pill!

gr8 part! cant wait till all the girls come back to meet the guys!