Bepanah: (AK/AR/KA) Part 18 pg 99 30/11

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Monal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#561

Firstly sorry for commenting late...am really busy
and now abt the update...its was awesome...
Loved every bit of it!!!!!
Superb....pm me ok :)

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monika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#562

awesome , awesome , awesome , superb thanks a lot for pm

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Hershy Katie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#563

Hey guys!!! So we finally got this ID back!! woohooo!!! We shall be continuing from this thread now onwards =D Thanks for all your patience and support!

Hershi and Katie

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Araina

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Posted: 14 years ago

#564

awesomeeeeee
this is great
now waiting for the next ud.
hoping it'll be soonnnnn
love
khushi

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Nruti

@arshluver_15

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Posted: 14 years ago

#565

Hey guys..

I truly loved the parts......I am sorry was not able to cemment earlyer coz i was in India and enjoying my vacation...............

but thanks a lot for the pm

cont soon

lods of love

nruti

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nyxx

@nyxx

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Posted: 14 years ago

#566

When are you guys going to Continuee!

Oh come on...hurry up already looll!

waiting eagerly :)

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Hershy Katie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#567

Originally posted by: angullgrl91
HAHHAHHAHAHHA greatttt part!
they're all hilarious!
good work :)

awwww thank you!! im glad u liked it =D

Originally posted by: asma_227
The cleaning session is so much fun.
The whole part was quite entertaining.
I was laughing holding my stomach reading about Kavya's decent room.
What's going on in Armaan's head?
This part was amazing.
I loved it.
plz update soon.

haha thanks so much!! im glad u liked it =D lol yes armaan is crazy lol! keep reading =)

Originally posted by: sasik
lovely part.armaan's character is hilarious.Thanks for pm.Update soon.

thanks so mcuh! glad u like it! yes armaan is crazy lol!

Originally posted by: arshbest
heyyy
hmmm hilariousss oh myy good the wholee part was sooo funnyy😆
hmmm why is Abhi at the housee???
thx for the pm
continuee soon
sakshi⭐️

LMAO! thanks sakshi!! well read the next part and u will know why abhi is at the house haha!! keep reading!!

Originally posted by: -Destiny-
Ooh I love abhi. And I love angry young gals kripsie Anjie and Ridzie. Oh I also love armaan angad kavya. What possesive siblings the guys r.
Ooooohhhhhhh n I love your FF too

hawsome job gals.*hug*

love as ever
lekha

awww lekha!! thanks so much!!! 🤗 im glad u liked the part!!! and WE LOVE U TOO! haha <33 keep reading =)

Originally posted by: xMamz2ellee
Great Part. Just hope to see more interaction btween the couples (only) in the next part 😳. You guys just keep on getting better and better and better with this ff, please continue soon and thanks for the pm. 😃
'Roshni.

aww roshni...thank you =) hope u liked the interaction between the couples! thanks so much for reading!! enjoy the next part!

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Hershy Katie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#568

Originally posted by: ammyluvridzi
D part was so hilarious cont sun

thanks so much!! glad u liked it =)

Originally posted by: spvd
awesome part dears.....................
had full fun reading the part...................
each one is worser than the other...................
abhi looks interesting....................is it abhi or abhay???????????
cont soon dears..................

thank u so much! im glad u liked it =) haha yes they all beat eachother in crazyness! It is abhi =) thanks again! keep reading =)

Originally posted by: *princess*15
Sorry for a short comment a bit busy but offcource I wanna read this ff so dnt end it cumin 2 d part it was awsum lv the silly things tht they all do lol all of thm r adorable :)
Continue soon:D

aww no prob! take ur time...we aren't ending this ff haha! the day we end it will be the day we have no readers =) thanks so much! glad u liked it!

Originally posted by: AngelsHeaven
fab part...
just loved it....
continue soon

thanks so much! glad u liked it!

Originally posted by: sindukur
Hilarious part again. You are an awesome writer keep up the good work. Continue soon

thanks so much! glad u like it =) keep reading!

Originally posted by: Shafoo
tht was sooooooo niceeeeeeeeeeeee

thanks so muchhh!!

Originally posted by: BABY-GIRL7
plz do continue,,,love this ff :D

thanks so much!! glad u like it =)

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Hershy Katie

@Hershy_Katie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#569

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva
awesome update
loved it
loved when AR fell on the floor
abhi is going to tell kripa about armaan's flings
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

aww thank u so much!! im glad u like it =) haha yes AR are at loggerheads! thanks for reading!

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
thanks for pm
superb part
abhi's entry is good..i really liked it
Pyaar ki...is my fav serial these days. really luved it

aww thank you =) im glad u like it!! yes abhi is very cute lol!

Originally posted by: Princess_Khushi
fabulous update again😛
the whole ud was hilarious and very cute.
they finally find a decent room! NOT!!!😭😭

the line i especially like the best is when kripa says, 'I WANT A REFUND ON MY HUG'😆😆

also when ridz says would u want us to follow your style sense and how the 3 boys answer NO! at the same time. 🥱😆😆

it was also hilarious when the boys found out that philly was gay!😛
the scenes bet armaan and ridz was very nice. he saved her from bumping her head on the ground! so nice....😳😳

and also i really like abhi's character. nice. u r using vivian! 😃 since u r giving the pic of person who plays abhi i m guessing he'll be playing some kind of imp. role...😕😕

yes. my sis is reading it too. but how'd u know she's my sis??? 😲😲😲
nyways, take care. and will be waiting till u find time to ud next. all the best ekta and smileyface (sorry. i don't know ur name) 😭
u both r the best ff writers
love you
👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️
👏👏👏

wow this is long haha!! first of all thanks a bunch for reading and appreciating our work! I am hershi haha =) Ekta and i are very happy to have awesome readers like u! And i know that was ur sis because she told me about u haha! Read on to see about abhi lmao....hopefully u will like what we have for u =) no Phil isn't gay...the guys think he is gay lol but in real he is straight...he is just really good friends with the girls =) more about him later! lol Thanks so much again...you are really very sweet!!! continue reading! =)

Edited by Hershy_Katie - 14 years ago

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Hershy Katie

@Hershy_Katie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#570

Originally posted by: Devil_Of_Heaven
first of all sorry for commenting sooo late....i was busy...😔
and now back to the update....it was awesome di.....⭐️
ahhhh loved it❤️....sooo hilarious.....🤣
finally the cleaning is done...now they can relax....😆
the guys are just too much...all of them hid their stuff....🤣
armaan laughed as he was on laughing gas....hahahah superb.....🤣🤣😆
this abhi looks interesting.....
once again superb update.......👏
continue soon.....😛

First of all stop apologizing..LOL <333 mah u don't need to say sorrie! im glad u liked it! yes the cleaning is finally done! but a lot more craziness is on the way haha! thanks again for reading!! i missed u again today i was out grocery shopping lol...but i will try to catch u again soon since its the weekend! lol =)

Originally posted by: Kasurbest
Firstly sorry for commenting late...am really busy
and now abt the update...its was awesome...
Loved every bit of it!!!!!
Superb....pm me ok :)

awww dont apologize we totally understand...we are getting busy with the new semester as well! Thanks so much for reading..im glad u liked it and yes will definitely PM you =)