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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey awsome part.. continue soon

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Originally posted by: nidha1983

Hi dear How R Uits really a mind blowing one cool one so Armaan-Kavya want to know with whome Krips is going out Bachara Angad kuch bolna hi nahi diya kisi na usayplz continue it soon & thanks for the pm

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HIi 😊 i am good..hope u are well too 😊 Awww thank u so much Nidha! im glad u liked it. I love ur little kitten smileys...they are so cute haha...and ofcourse the teddy bears...thanks again for reading!

Originally posted by: dhruvikaluvsKSG

awesome part

loved AK n Armaan Kavya n Kripa
so sweet
cont soon
n thx for pm
luv dhruvika


Thank u so much for reading and liking it =) Ur welcome for the pm...and will continue soon =)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyaarsh

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!! :)


Continue as SOOON as you can. I cant wait that long. HAHA :)

Love,
Kriya <33


haha thanks! im glad u liked it =) next part will up tonite or tomorrow afternoon =) thanks again!!

Originally posted by: Armaan-KSG

Awesome part guys!

So glad you guys updated after soo long..andd yesss i better see an update in 3 days again:P..Pleasee dont take forever ;)
And about the part...the kripa-angad encounter was jokess😆 LOL...butt angad seems to be already flattered by kripa ;)...andd armaan and kripa keep fighting..thats cute..lol..
and cant wait for the partyy ;) im sure theres gunna be lots of mastiii and romancee ;)
pleasee update soon:D


thanks so much =) haah sorrie couldn't update in 3 days but it will be up tonite or tomorrow afternoon =) yupp he is flattered...but is kripa gonna take it well? read on to know =D haha yes lots of masti and romance will be there (maybe ;)) thanks for reading!!

Originally posted by: sasik

nice part.waiting for brothers n sisters meeting at party.


thanks so much =) next part will be up soon =)

Originally posted by: monikaseth

Happy Diwali To You Dear..

I love Kripa, Kavya , Armaan fighting so cute they wrere looking so sweet and cute when they fight...

Angad kripa meeting awesome look like angad gone bye after se kripa ..thank you for this sweet and cute part,,,and pm


thanks!! hope ur diwali was good =) Haha yes i love their fighting as well...very sibling-ish lol...yeah angad definitely likes kripa...im glad u liked it...thank u for reading =)

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

i loved the part!!

but the story seems like its kinda dragging..no offense...
can you move it along a bit faster? cuz its been 11 parts and angad kripa just met and they all havent even found out about all the brother-sister relationships...
besides that...you guys are awesome writers! and i really love the story :)


hey thanks for reading!! and also thank u for being honest..dont be sorry...we appreciate the criticism as well =) we will try to move it a bit faster for sure =) thanks again for being honest and liking our work =)

Originally posted by: xMamz2ellee

WOW awesomeee part again.. loved when Angad-Kripa were arguing :P
and i soooo am in love with the bro-sis relationship that armaan-kavya-kripa & ridz-anjali-angad have :D
Can't wait for the next part.. pleasee update soon. And keep up the awesome work.
😊


aww thank u so much =) im glad u liked it! yes the bro-sis relationship is very special 😊 next part will be up soon and thanks again for reading!

Originally posted by: sanjana25

wow
loved it
but why u took so long!!!...
update soon
love ur updates


thanks so much! we got busy with college and stuff...but we updated and next part will be up soon =) thanks for reading!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arshbest

heyy

veryy nice partt.hope the bro-sis relationship is out soon

thx for the pm

continuee sooon

sakshi


Aww thank u! yupp..next part =) its up!

Originally posted by: Devil_Of_Heaven

yayyyyy finally an update...
the part was superb...👏
the bro-sis relationship is awesome❤️
loved AK....😍❤️
angad spoiled krips dress...poor krips..😆😆
and angad is not a pillar he is a hot pillar...😉🤣
looking forward to the party..😛
continue asap..😊



thank u love <3 i love AK too haha...ur rite he is a VERY HOT pillar! hahah thanks for reading! next part is up =)

Originally posted by: DaShInG_DeViL

wow di such an awesome update👍🏼

ahhhhhhhhh loved ak's meeting😍

it was so great.👏

loved each and everything❤️

and lolz kripz though angad iz a pillar hahahaha🤣

and hahahahaha armaan called angad jani....hahahha....lol....i was really funny.🤣

looking forward to next update😊

continue asap.😃


thank u hun! i loved AK's meeting too hahah had so much fun writing it! Lol yes armaan is crazy =) next part is up =) thanks again!

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing part

Angad and kripa's first meeting was intresting i really liked the interaction between the two.The scne between kavya,armaan and kripas was amazingly potrayed.cant wait 2 read da next part.


aww thank u =) im glad u liked it! next part is up =)

Originally posted by: spvd

Happy Diwali to u too dears..................
very nice part...................loved it.................AK also have met but the scene was very funny......................cant wait for the party part..................cont ASAP dears....................


Happy diwali!! Thank u so much! i m glad u liked it =) next part is up =)

Originally posted by: arshluver_15

its a great part.....totally loved it.....i wonder hows angad gonna react when he gets to know that Ms Beautiful is his best friend's sis..........and how will they react when they will see girls in the party.......
cont soon
thanks a lot for the pm
nruti


aww thank u =) haha wait for the reaction! next part is up and u can see the party reaction =) thank u again nruti!

Originally posted by: ammy_ka_ashu

yaar superb! mere paas zyada time nahin hain so cant write a bigg large comment, lekin wah jo wah! continue soon! and thanks for the pm!


aww thank u! haha dont worry about the long comment...i just appreciate that u commented =) thank u so much! next part is up =)
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Originally posted by: 26javey26

love it a lot
AK's first meeting is so cute

love the Kavya, Amraan and Kripa scene a lot
its so cute


thank u hunnie <3 im glad u liked it!!

Originally posted by: dazzling_armaan

Heyz Di

Lolz i m finally commenting haha...
It would take me like forever to comment on all the parts so i m sooooooooooooooooooooooo sorry but i will just comment from this part only but i have read all the parts & mannnnn u ppl r amazinggggggg & i love the bonding the Guys & Gurl share among themselves its just supeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerbbbbbb.
But it was shooooooooooooooooooooooo shmaaaaaaaaaaaallllll.
I wanna read MORE !!!
Update soon trhis time & i BIGGGGGGGG one :)

Thnaks for the PM.

Ohh forgot i loveeeeeeeeeeeee AK bickering lolz Its Funnn


hahah hi rashu!! thanks for commenting! im glad u liked it! and LOL small? i wrote so much! all my parts are about 6 parts in word..with times new roman size 10...that is a lot of writing!! LOL this next update is big..its 12 pages..thats the most ive written lol! thanks for reading love!!

Originally posted by: sindukur

awesome part waiting for the party. continue soon


aww thanks! next part is up =)

Originally posted by: Shafoo

tht was sooooo awesome part


thanksss =)

Originally posted by: lalala10

Hey, just through it lol. 😊
I can't wait for everyone to know how they are related. And then they can hang out together, lol. 😆 😆 . Lets Party! 🥳 .
I L-O-V-E loved the part where Armaan tells Kripa their mom is pregnant. Ha! Classic. 🤣
I really like this ff, and I hope everything works out between all of them. 😛
Being honest, because that is what I would want my readers to be with me, I think you spent a little to much of time in showcasing the same things. Like for example, alot of parts had the scenes where the points were the same i.e. how the boys were over protective of their sisters. No offense, though. I mean I really like this ff, and they style of writing is good, especially the way you write the funny scenes. But I just wanted this ff to be better 😊 . I hope you don't mind.
Nyways, continue asap! And please PM me.
I hope KA, AR and AK get to know that Armaan Kripa and Kavya are siblings, and vice versa.
Continue soon.


haha hey mona! LOL lets partyyy....they will find out soon =) next part haha and omg i knowwwww i had soooo much fun writing that part with him making his mom pregnant! i was dying when i wrote that part haha! and yeah i know most of the parts are how the siblings are protective..but thats an essential part of the story...u will know why as u go on..lol and thanks again and no i didnt mind at all!! =D next part is up!! will pm u for sure =)

Originally posted by: AngelsHeaven

loved it...
contine soon


thank u!! =)

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

thanks for pm

luved it
fantastic part
ak was too good


thank u so much! i love ak too =)

Originally posted by: Angel-Jot.

UPDATE! =D Yay! LMAO.

So...i honestly have no idea why i didn't comment for the last chapter..i swear!
But this chapter guys..was AMAZING! And really funny. I seriously LOVE the characters in the story.
My characters are always serious, really serious. >:( It's weird. If i start off with a carefree storyline or character, it slowly dissolves into a depressive, calm, serous person or storyline. It's so annoying. ROFL.

The first AK meeting was soo funny! I was grinning so much. So cute. I love Angad. He's such a cutie. Ahh my sweetheart. <3

Haha..poor Armaan is always teased about the plane hijack thing. Actually, he's constantly teased about everything. Poor guy. LMAO. I love Kavya and Kripa though.

Great chap!

*Jot*


LOL yes update haha! yeah i dont know either lmao! thank u so much for liking this part..im glad u liked it =D lmaoo ur working on writing normal parts so its ok LMAO...i love angad too and psht hes my sweetheart!! hahah thanks for commentingggg!!!

Originally posted by: love_KYPH

it was amazin

loved AK meet
cont soon


thank u =) next part is up!

Originally posted by: AKForever

Hey awsome part.. continue soon

Thanks for the pm..


hey thanks for commenting =) next part is up =)
Edited by Smileyface - 14 years ago
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Part 12

As per a typical club, when the girls entered, the music was blaring out of the speaker. the fog machine and the disco lights together were creating a magical environment. a huge crowd was on the dance floor, already partying it up. And as usual, as the girls entered together like movie stars, they turned several heads towards them.

Anjali saw a cute guy sitting at the bar and elbowed Kripa.

Anjali: kripa...check him out!! he's soooo fiiineeee!

kripa: kaun? WOH?? ew!! anjali...your taste has gotten even worse!

anjali: you shouldn't talk about my taste when you're head over heels for Edward cull-

Riddhima: STOP IT YOU TWO! come on yaar...at least yahaan pe to ladai mat karo!

Anjali and Kripa rolled their eyes as the girls made their way towards the bar. On their way to the bar, Kripa walked straight into a pillar. wait. what the hell. it was a guy. again. so twice in a day, kripa Sharma had walked into a pillar.

"sorry about that" the guy started until he looked up at a frowning kripa. "well helloo beautiful."

kripa immediately checked her dress to make sure that the earlier scene with Angad hadn't repeated. nope. it didn't. her dress was dry. thank goodness.

Kripa: who are you??

Abhi: well ms. pretty you're at my party!

Kripa: oh...I'm sorry...I...

abhi: that's alright...you're pretty....you can get away with anything. where are you ladies headed?

Anjali: if we're going this way...where must we be going?

she rolled her eyes while kripa and Riddhima giggled.

Abhi: headed to the bar I see?

Anjali: oh darn! you figured it out! we thought we were being so cryptic about it!

Abhi wasn't paying attention to Anjali's blabber. he was staring at kripa.

Abhi: why do you need to go to the bar?

Kripa: what do you mean?

Abhi: your eyes are intoxicating enough. that color really brings your eyes out.

Kripa's eyes widened as she recalled angad saying something similar. wait a second. why the hell was she thinking about angad? angad the flirt? angad the "riddhima and Anjali's brother." Angad the...UGH!

Riddhima: if you're done flirting with my best friend...may we go to the bar?

Abhi stepped aside and made a sweeping motion towards the bar.

Kripa replayed it in her head as she walked.

"I walked into two guys that I thought were pillars. they'd both flirted with me. they both
noticed that thing with this damned dress and my damned eyes. my two best friends were there when these two scenes had taken place. they're never going to stop bugging me about this. And im thinking about angad Khanna. well hell."

Before she could think anything else A voice brought her back.

"hellooo beautiful" imitated Anjali in a manly voice winking at Kripa and then burst out
laughing with Riddhima.

Kripa: Not funny!

Riddhima: Oh come on kripa'we are just kidding.

Anjali: Yeah let's get some drinks (talking to the bartender) 3 shots of tequila please!

Riddhima: Shots? Already?

Anjali: Nahi toh kya party end hogi tab peena hai?

Kripa: I need one. NOW!

Anjali: That's my girl!

The three toasted to their first party'and drank it up! Soon enough they had downed four more shots and were definitely feeling it.

As the girls took their 5th tequila shot, Armaan, angad, and Kavya entered the club. The guys from the basketball team grabbed a few drinks and went up to their three star players. As if congratulating them by giving them a drink, the entire team passed around bottles of drinks.

Armaan: ABHI! Awesome party dude! I love this club!

Abhi: I'm glad u guys like it! You know how I do!

Angad: Yeah It's great'.especially the..

All the guys: GIRLSSS!!

Abhi: Talking about girls'I met these three girls'each one is gorgeous!

Armaan: Oh really? Well where are they?

Abhi: Last time I checked they were at the bar'but now I think they must be on the dance floor or maybe upstairs'you know how huge this place is.

Armaan: Well then what am I doing here? They must be waiting for me..good bye!

Saying that Armaan went to the dance floor which was mega crowded and started dancing. The other two eventually went there separate ways too as they spotted various friends.

As the guys were having fun here the girls were enjoying themselves at the bar when a guy
walked up to Anjali.

Guy: Dance?

Anjali: Me? (she looked at the other two'both giving her the nod to go) Sure!

Anjali went to the dance floor while the other two watched her have fun and soon enough the other two were also pulled into dance by other guys at the club. While one was in one corner of the room'the other was in the other corner of the room.


(The Girls Started Singing)

Bring The Beat Yo Yo Yo'Yo Yo Yo'

Yo! Put Your Hands Up,Ah! Put Your Hands Up! Yeah!
Put Your Hands Up, Pull'em Up There' Ahaan!

Put Your Hands Up, C'mon! Put Your Hands Up! C'mon!
Put'em Up, Like You Just Don't Care' /Ha Ha!'

(Riddhima)
Hey! We're Gonna Rock This Party'Hey! I Wanna Get So Naughty'
Ooh! I Know You Want My Body'C'mon Now, Get This Started'

(Anjali)
Hey! We Gonna Rock This Party'Hey! I Wanna Get So Naughty'
Ooh! I Know You Want My Body'C'mon Now, Get This Started'

(Kripa)
Tak Tak Tak Takkna Ve'Takkna Ve' Takkna Ve'
Mak Mak Mak Makhna Ve'Makhna Ve' Makhna Ve'



(Anjali)
Tak Tak Tak Takkna Ve' Ahaan!
Mak Mak Mak Makhna Ve' Ahaan!
Dhak Dhak Dil Dhadkaave'Lakk Lakk Hun Tadpaave'

(Riddhima)
Patiala Peg Lagake' Teri Gali Vich Aake'
Sab Sud-Budh-Hosh Gavaa Ke'
Deewani, Main Paagal, Main Jhalli Ho Gayi'

(All Three)
Main Talli, Main Talli, Main Talli Ho Gayi' - 2

(Armaan)
( Tak Tak Tak Takkna Ve' Ahaan!
Mak Mak Mak Makhna Ve' Ahaan! ) - 2
Dhak Dhak Dil Dhadkaave Lakk Lakk Hun Tadpaave'

(Riddhima)
Patiala Peg Lagake' Teri Gali Vich Aake'
Sab Sud-Budh-Hosh Gavaa Ke'Deewani, Main Paagal, Main Jhalli Ho Gayi'

(Armaan)
( Tu Talli, Tu Talli, Tu Talli Ho Gayi'

(Riddhima)
Main Talli, Main Talli, Main Talli Ho Gayi' ) - 2

(Anjali)
Baby Baby, I Feel So High'Baby Baby, I Can't Deny'
Baby Baby, Better Hold Me Tight'I'll Be Waiting For You Just Tonite'
Tonite' Tonite'/ Hey-Hey-Hey Hey-Hey'Hey-Hey-Hey Hey-Hey'
Wo-Ho-Ho Ho-Ho' Wo-Ho-Ho Ho-Ho' Yo! Yo!

(Kripa)
I've Been Jigging In Here Like I Just Don't Care'/Hey
If You're Up In The Club, You Can Watch Me There'/Wo-Ho-Ho Ho-Ho'
I'll Be With Mah Ladies'Ahaan
Taxi, Dropping Mercedes'/Wo-Ho-Ho Ho-Ho'

Boy You Know, You Got Your Eye On Me'Ahaan!
I'll Put Up, What You Like, What You See'/What You See'
And I Know, That You're Feeling My Style'A-Aa-Aa' Aaja'

(Angad)
*Dil Tote Tote Karke'Chal Chandni Chowk Pe Chalke'
Whisky Pe Soda Joda, Aa Chadhaayein'


(Kripa)
Peeche Tu Aa, Kya Kaake!
Eh Kya Bola Hai Agge?'Pal Do Pal Do Kyun Na Ye Bhool Jaayein'
Hun Dil Te Chale Pataake'Hun Ho Gaye Dhoom Dhadake'
Patiala Peg Lagake'Deewani, Main Paagal, Main Jhalli Ho Gayi'
Main Talli, Main Talli, Main Talli Ho Gayi' - 2

(Angad)
Tu Talli, Tu Talli, Tu Talli Ho Gayi'

(Kripa)
Main Talli, Main Talli, Main Talli Ho Gayi'

(Kavya)
Oye!'Kaali Kaali Aankhon Wali, Kaali Kaali Aankhon Wali,
Kaali Aankhon Wali'Oye, Kaali Kaali Kaali Kaali Kaali Kaali Kaali Kaali,
Kaali Aankhon Wali'

(Anjali)
Hey! We Gonna Rock This Party'Hey! I Wanna Get So Naughty'
Ooh! I Know You Want My Body'C'mon Now, Get This Started'
*Hey! Hey'We Gonna Rock This Party'Hey! Hey' I Wanna Get So Naughty'
Ooh! Ooh!'I Know You Want My Body'C'mon Now, Get This Started'

(Kavya)
Oye Balle, Balle, Balle'Oye Shava, Shava, Shava'
Uttowaan Tibbi Javaan Ye Sajaa Hai..

(Anjali)
Utte, Khalota Mundaa'Mundaa, Bada Mushtanda'
Nakaara Kaise Zidd Pe Adaa Hai'

(Kripa)
Hungama Ajj Machaa Ke'Main Dil Vich Rang Jamaa Ke'
Patiala Peg Lagake'Deewani, Main Paagal, Main Jhalli Ho Gayi'
Main Talli, Main Talli, Main Talli Ho Gayi' - 2

(Angad)
Tu Talli, Tu Talli, Tu Talli Ho Gayi'

(Kripa)
Main Talli, Main Talli, Main Talli Ho Gayi'

(Anjali)
( Tak Tak Tak Takkna Ve' Ahaan! Mak Mak Mak Makhna Ve' Ahaan! ) - 2
Dhak Dhak Dil Dhadkaave Lakk Lakk Hun Tadpaave'
Patiala Peg Lagake' Teri Gali Vich Aake'
Sab Sud-Budh-Hosh Gavaa Ke'Deewani, Main Paagal, Main Jhalli Ho Gayi'

(All)
( Main Talli, Main Talli, Main Talli Ho Gayi'Tu Talli, Tu Talli, Tu Talli Ho Gayi') - 2
Main Talli, Main Talli, Main Talli Ho Gayi' - 2

Kavya had noticed Anjali from far away as he had wandered upstairs meeting friends and she was alone..without her sister. She looked beautiful in that Red dress she was wearing. But he had felt a pang in his heart when he had seen her dancing with a guy which was not him. Not being able to ignore that feeling he decided to stay near her and see what she was doing because she didn't seem to be in her senses until she started singing'and he couldn't help but join her. And as the song ended all his worries were gone as Anjali ran up to him and gave him a friendly hug and pulled him to the dance floor.

It was the same with Angad and Kripa'the last place he had expected kripa to be was at this party. As he watched her he could see that she was kind of out of it'.the girl knew how to have fun. He realized she was kind of tipsy when she didn't make a face or go away when she saw him dancing and singing by her. This girl was definitely something he thought to himself as he walked over to her when she smiled at him and gestured him to come over and dance with her.

While on the other side of the club Armaan was busy dancing with his "girls" until he noticed a girl dancing and boy she danced well. He had excused himself and started going over to the girl but all of a sudden stopped when she turned around. Oh no! not her! What was her name again..oh yeah'riddhima? She was at a club? Dancing? He shook his head and started to turn away when all of a sudden he got an idea. Pay back. Why should he turn away? She hates to look at me but now'she is gonna have to look at me. With a smirk on his face he walked close to her and started dancing with girls around her. And winked when riddhima looked over to him as she was dancing. And the next second he got the shock of his life she had just ignored him. A girl had ignored Armaan Sharma? NO way! That is not happening! Anger and annoyance in his eyes he walked over to her only to be ignored by her again. That was it he would not tolerate this'.so he tapped her shoulder and started dancing with her even though she gave him weird looks.

(yeah man)

So we back in the club
Get that bodies rockin from side to side (side to side)

Thank God the week is done
I feel like a zombie gone back to life (back to life)

Hands up, and suddenly we all got our hands up
No control of my body

Ain't I seen you before?
I think I remember those eyes, eyes, eyes, eyes

Cause baby tonight, the DJ got us falling in love again
Yeah, baby tonight, the DJ got us falling in love again

So dance, dance, like it's the last, last night of your life, life
Gonna get you right

Cause baby tonight, the DJ got us falling in love again
Keep downing drinks like this
Not tomorrow that just right now, now, now, now, now, now
Gonna set the roof on fire
Gonna burn this mother f**ker down, down, down, down, down, down

Hands up, when the music drops We both put our hands up
Put your hands on my body Swear I seen you before
I think I remember those eyes, eyes, eyes, eyes

Cause baby tonight, the DJ got us falling in love again
Yeah, baby tonight, the DJ got us falling in love again

So dance, dance, like it's the last, last night of your life, life
Hands up, when the music drops We both put our hands up

Put your hands on my body Swear I seen you before
I think I remember those eyes, eyes, eyes, eyes

Cause baby tonight, the DJ got us falling in love again
Yeah, baby tonight, the DJ got us falling in love again

So dance, dance, like it's the last, last night of your life, life
Gonna get you right
Cause baby tonight, the DJ got us falling in love again

In the cover of the music
Get naked baby
I'm sorry chica
Better holla at Tyrone
Let him know how I jump through your foot loop
Scolla chico two can
We're from the blocka blocka o polaca
Were the boys get loose like wacka flacka
Oh no man, it's global
Was' up
Colale flacka
I wanna be your giant, no not your dada
Dale abre ai
Papa Nicholas baby
Let me see
Yo soi un Jaunito
Que stato taito
Yo freco, no OK

Cause baby tonight, the DJ got us falling in love again
Yeah, baby tonight, the DJ got us falling in love again

So dance, dance, like it's the last, last night of your life, life
Gonna get you right
Cause baby tonight, the DJ got us falling in love again
Yeah, baby tonight, the DJ got us falling in love again

So dance dance, like it's the last, last night of your life, life
Gonna get you right

Cause baby tonight, the DJ got us falling in love again
Yeah, thank you DJ

As the song went on, Armaan felt more drawn to her. His hands were lightly at her waist while she put one of her hands on his shoulder and the other around his waist. He kept trying to get closer to her but even in her tipsy state, she slapped his hands away if he got too touchy. The more she pushed him away, the closer her wanted to get to her.

On the other hand, Kavya was trying to keep his distance from a completely wild Anjali. Yeah he'd fell for her when he'd seen her but he wasn't about to take advantage of the fact that she was drunk. his arms enclosed her tiny frame easily but it was more like a restraint to keep her from getting too close to him, which she would later regret no doubt, or to keep her from getting too close to other guys who were eyeing her. She was only making it harder for the poor guy as she kept teasing him with her hands at his shoulder, waist, and arms. She was driving him absolutely insane.

Angad and kripa were a completely different story. the other two couples were a tamed and a wild while here, we had two untamed people, drunk, on the dance floor, with each other. The girls kept their distance from Angad and the guys kept their distance from kripa since it was obvious the two were "together" for the night. She'd completely forgotten that this was the same Angad "pillar" khanna that she had bumped into earlier. the same one who had flirted with her. Of course she'd meant to protest, but her nicely phrased diss went out the window as soon as he slipped his arms around her waist. He'd half expected her to pull away but was pleasantly surprised when she didn't. If he was teasing her, she was teasing him twice as much.

But as soon as the song ended everyone in the club started hooting and continued dancing except for six people who were frozen where they were in the little circle they had made unintentionally. They were so into dancing with their respective other that they had not realized that they had ended up in the center of the club.

Anjali: KRIPA!!! Hiiii!!! Come here let me introduce u to my fri'..BHAI!!

Kripa: Oh no!

Armaan: Angad'.dude'GET OFF MY SISTER!!

Riddhima: Oh'um'hi'bhai'.and you (glaring at armaan) Stop yelling at my Brother!!! Wait..how do u know'BHAI! UH..HIII!! I was just leaving! (about to run out)

Angad: Don't you dare ridz! Kavya'step away from anjali!

Kavya: Oh boy'.this is gonna be fun!

Anjali: of course its gonna be fun...we're at a party and i just ran into my........my BROTHER??? Ah hell.

Kripa: Tum dono ko pure club mein mere bhai hi mile the?

Angad: Wait..what? Bhai?

Anjali: Yeah bhai'what are you doing with my friend?

Armaan: Bhai? Friend?

Angad: what's going on kavya?

Kavya: That girl who u are holding..so close'to yourself'is OUR SISTER!

Hearing this angad looked down and as it registered in his head what kavya had just said..he jumped two feet away from kripa'.only giving her a chance to grab Anjali and make a run for it..with riddhima right behind them!

Two minutes later the guys realized that their sisters had run off and ran behind them. The girls ran around pretty much the entire club followed by the guys. A couple drunk people actually started following them thinking it was a new game'due to which the guys fall behind but not before Armaan seeing them running towards the washrooms.

As soon as they made it to the washrooms..Riddhima ran towards the ladies room when Anjali and Kripa pull her and drag her into the Men's room.

Riddhima: What are you two doing!!!

Anjali: Oh shut up di! They'll check the women's bathroom and wait there..but they won't come here!

Before they could say anything more they heard the boys yelling and banging on the door of the girls bathroom'so they put their ears to the door and started listening!

Armaan: Kripa! Get out now! Or I swear we will come in!

Kavya: KRIPAA!!

Angad: Seriously Ridz..out'I mean it'we will come in!!

Hearing them screaming riddhima started worrying.

Riddhima: I think we should go'what if they go in?

Anjali OMG where is my phone..I would have to record that!

Riddhima: wow'really? Now is not a good time!

Kripa: Shh tum dono chup raho! Let me hear what they are say'

Before she could finish they heard two loud screams from behind them'turning around they saw two guys standing in front of them shocked'all three started screaming on the top of their lungs.

While outside the guys heard the scream and looked towards the men's washroom.

Angad: That was kripa and anjali!

Kavya: And riddhima!

Armaan: Oh damn! I am gonna kill whoever it is that's doing something to them!

Armaan ran inside the mens bathroom with the other two rite behind him'all three thinking someone was misbehaving with their sisters! Without looking the three burst in the bathroom and ran towards the two guys and starting beating them up!

The girls stood wide-eyed for a second then kripa tapped anjali's shoulder and started tip-toeing towards the door.

Riddhima was still standing there with her mouth hanging open.

anjali nudged riddhima, "di move your fat bum! lets go!!" she hissed.

armaan: abe saale! teri himmat kaise huyi meri behen ko haath lagane ki?

kavya: are...Angad ne bhi to haath lagaya tha!!

armaan: you're right!!

armaan grabbed angad's collar.

kavya: are yaar par tune bhi to uski behen ko haath lagaya tha!

now angad held onto armaan's collar

now that the other stranger victims werent getting beaten up, they tried to squirm out from under Angad and armaan.

anjali's jaw dropped open. "is bhai actually sitting on that guy?"

kripa: ahan...and my brothers are sitting on the other guy...

riddhima: and our brothers caught us at the CLUB!!

"damn!" they all said in unison and ran out as soon as possible.

The three guys looked towards the door, shrugged and turned their heads away

Angad: wait a second....did they just...

Armaan: did they just leave?

Kavya: yeah...they just did.

Angad: right..

After another pause of a couple of seconds angad yelled.

Angad: RIDDHIMA!! ANJALI!! GET BACK HERE RIGHT NOW!

Armaan: KRIPA!

Armaan and Angad ran out of the washroom to find the girls. the two guys who were beaten up by armaan and angad glared at Kavya. Kavya glared back at the two men and grabbed one's collar.

kavya: what do you think you were doing in this club's washroom with my sister?........wait.........did i just.....sister?

When his brain processed that kripa was here in flesh and blood, he got up, and jumped over the other guy to get to the exit. He left the washroom and ran towards the club door to go outside and as soon as he ran out he bumped into Angad.

Kavya: What are you two doing here? Where are they?

Angad: See that car going? That's them.

Kavya: Seriously? Wow..you can't even get your sisters!

Armaan: Oh yeah? Where were you when we "couldn't get our sisters"

Kavya: Doing the needful that you both left in the bathroom!

Angad: Yeah well'

Kavya: Wait a minute'this isn't the time'lets go home! I need some answers!

Angad: Me too..lets go!

Armaan: WAIT! Before we go'I need to clear things up with u Khanna!

Angad: What?

Armaan: You'were with my sister'.that should never happen again!

Angad: Yeah well you both were with my sisters too!!

Kavya: hey I was just trying to protect her.

Angad: Uske liye main hoon'thanks!

Armaan: Fine..lets all make a promise'we are gonna stay away from each others sisters! Kapish?

Kavya/Angad: Kapish!

With that the three walked to their car not noticing that each one of them had their fingers crossed behind their back when they made that promise.

Alright that's the part guys! Hope u liked ittt!!! This was a ridiculously long part and we hated writing it LOL...we know we said we would update in 3 days and we tried our best but this part was jinxed! we wrote it and it got deleted twiceeee...and that is why we hated it!!! And we're sure if any of u are writers then u know how frustrating that is! But the third time around we think we did a great job lol casue we were laughing a lot when we wrote this part..... well anyways enough of us ranting...hope u enjoyed it! And once more...please "Like" or comment that way we know our work is being appreciated! Love u guys!!!

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res im just not gonne bother editing the last post 😆😆😆 sorry :P
Newho ladies, this was uber awesomeee....blahh!! totally loved itt.... :) fav. part: kavyaa registring f**kin 5 hours later....talk about being sloww 😆😆
the dance was good... liked itt...
seriously? why do guys get soo surprised when girls drink?? soo annoying! newhoo amazingg...totally ridiculously loved itt :)
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nice part i like it plzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon
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awesome part its hilarious. Continue soon
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ahh LOVED the end esp! when they had their fingers crossed i literally screamed in excitement - (im in my school library - and ppl just gave me some strange looks....)

anyways thanks for the pm and continue super soon!

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