Bepanah: (AK/AR/KA) Part 18 pg 99 30/11

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 14 years ago

#471

fantastic...................
i just loved the part....................
just the way i wanted it turn out..........................
all brothers getting protective but at the same time flirting with the other's sisters....................
the last line them having their fingers crossed was too nice.......................
cont pretty soon dear.............................

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Mona Khan

@lalala10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#472

Hey.
Great part. I really wanted to read more, so do update soon lol.
This part was funny. Especially the part where the drunk people thought the whole chasing the girls' was a game. ROFL!!!
I also like how everyone was introduced to their BFFs' siblings, though I didn't expect it to be this soon.
I hope the love stories proceed and real soon.
You know what I am about to say but still -"I love Ak."
Lol.
Great part and please update soon.
Thank u.

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26javey

@26javey

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Posted: 14 years ago

#473

love this one a lot
its so funny

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hershii

@Smileyface

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Posted: 14 years ago

#474

Originally posted by: aRohAAnGeL
resim just not gonne bother editing the last post 😆😆😆 sorry :P

Newho ladies, this was uber awesomeee....blahh!! totally loved itt.... :) fav. part: kavyaa registring f**kin 5 hours later....talk about being sloww 😆😆

the dance was good... liked itt...

seriously? why do guys get soo surprised when girls drink?? soo annoying! newhoo amazingg...totally ridiculously loved itt :)

lmao ok!

thanksssss sammy <3 haha yeah i love my kavya =D hes adorable!!! thanks for reading and commenting! im glad u liked it =) and I KNOW! hahah guys will be guys! lmao! thanks again!

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1
mindblowing part

thanks so much <3

Originally posted by: hajmaz
nice part i like it plzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon

thank you =) will update soon =)

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dazzling_armaan

@dazzling_armaan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#475

M here again :D

The part was Hilarious specially the way the three guys act protective of their respective sisters lolz

& the way all 3 cross their fingers at their back so they dont have to mean their promise i wsa grinning like a stupid when i read that lolz

thanks for the PM

Love yuh both :D

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#476

thanks for pm dear

superb part

luved it

it was damn hilarious

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Roshni

@Roshni.x

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Posted: 14 years ago

#477

Ahhhhh! loved the part! .. esp when Kavya was having those slow reactions & LOVED the end when the boys crossed their fingers!
Thanks a ton for the pm 🤗
Continueee sooon.

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tehzeeb

@tehzeebkhan

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#478

Awesome part dear plzzzz conti soon

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Harjot.

@Angel-Jot

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Posted: 14 years ago

#479

🤣That was such a hilarious update. I loved the club scenes. And how Kripa, Anjali and Riddhima ran after seeing their brothers. That was so cute especially the whole "brother-protective-ness" thing. CHooo cuuttee.

Haha.. i feel bad for the guy who got beat up. =O Violent much? Abhi....hmmm...sounds like a cute guy. ;) Honestly, he sounds like a cutie.

Angad like always...is my cutie..NOT yours.

I love the dialouges btw. You should be a script writer or something. You're amazing at doing funny parts....normal chaps in general actually. 🤣

Quite surprising because you aren't normal at all.

And seriously? You had to use DJ Got Us Falling in love again? I effin HATE that song for some reason. It's horrible but i'm obssessed to Gimme That by Chris Brown ft Lil Wayne. I love Drake but....ehhhh....

Awww it got deleted? The chaps? That sucks. It's happened a lot of times to me and it's pissed me off a lot.

Well...hope that was a good enough comment. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S0iRIFbiglE&feature=fvst

OMG! That songgg! =) I LOVE THE TUNE!

-Jot.