Originally posted by: varshita
Superb update yaar.
Thanks dear π π π
Is ko padhte time mai imagine kar rahi thi jaise sab kuch meri aakhon k saamne hi ho raha hai. I loved the way u expressed the emotions of Vardaan n Kajal. Kajal apne aap ko rokne ki poori koshish kar rahi hai jab ki us ka man maanane ko ready nahi hai. Yahan Vardaan koi bhi kasar nahi chodta hai us k saath flirt karne me.
Kajal aur Vardaan me se ek dar rahi hai sach accept karne me aur doosre ne accept kar liya hai ki he is in love ab dekhna hai kab tak vo apne aap ko rok paati hai. π π π
I love the way u used Truth n Dare game in favour of Vardaan. Jaane anjaane me aisa bahut kuch keh gayi vo aur ho gaya shayad jis se hum sab ko ye to pata hi chal gaya ki kitna pyaar karti hai Kajal Vardaan se aur jab kiss karne vaala dare diya Sanya ne to mujhe kitne kushi hue mai bata nahi sakti tujhe.
Lagta hai jaise Sanya k dimaag me saare ideas bhare hue the ya Vardaan se telepatthy hue thi. π ππ
Lag raha tha ki Sanya jaise vardaan k dimaag ko read kar rahi hai. Par Kajal ka mana karna aur Vardaan ka waitress ko kiss karne vaala scene bahut cute tha. Kajal madam gusse me drink kar to rahi hain na but dekhna hai is ka response kya hota hai?
Ab drink kiya hai to koi na koi dhamaakedaar hi kaam hoga bus dekhna ye hai ki sab kuch theek hota hai ki nahi. π π π
Par sab se buri baat hai ki ab ye fic before Dec update nahi hoga. Congrats 4 completeing 100 pages but yaar jaldi se un theeno ko khatam kar k in ko ud kar dena pls..
Thanks yaar ab jaldi hi continue honewaala hai ye fic. π π π
thank u Versha π³ π³ π³
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