The Unknown Desire part 39 updated pg. 149 - Page 76

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: varshita

Superb update yaar.
Thanks dear πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

Is ko padhte time mai imagine kar rahi thi jaise sab kuch meri aakhon k saamne hi ho raha hai. I loved the way u expressed the emotions of Vardaan n Kajal. Kajal apne aap ko rokne ki poori koshish kar rahi hai jab ki us ka man maanane ko ready nahi hai. Yahan Vardaan koi bhi kasar nahi chodta hai us k saath flirt karne me.
Kajal aur Vardaan me se ek dar rahi hai sach accept karne me aur doosre ne accept kar liya hai ki he is in love ab dekhna hai kab tak vo apne aap ko rok paati hai. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

I love the way u used Truth n Dare game in favour of Vardaan. Jaane anjaane me aisa bahut kuch keh gayi vo aur ho gaya shayad jis se hum sab ko ye to pata hi chal gaya ki kitna pyaar karti hai Kajal Vardaan se aur jab kiss karne vaala dare diya Sanya ne to mujhe kitne kushi hue mai bata nahi sakti tujhe.
Lagta hai jaise Sanya k dimaag me saare ideas bhare hue the ya Vardaan se telepatthy hue thi. πŸ˜† πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Lag raha tha ki Sanya jaise vardaan k dimaag ko read kar rahi hai. Par Kajal ka mana karna aur Vardaan ka waitress ko kiss karne vaala scene bahut cute tha. Kajal madam gusse me drink kar to rahi hain na but dekhna hai is ka response kya hota hai?
Ab drink kiya hai to koi na koi dhamaakedaar hi kaam hoga bus dekhna ye hai ki sab kuch theek hota hai ki nahi. πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Par sab se buri baat hai ki ab ye fic before Dec update nahi hoga. Congrats 4 completeing 100 pages but yaar jaldi se un theeno ko khatam kar k in ko ud kar dena pls..

Thanks yaar ab jaldi hi continue honewaala hai ye fic. 😊 😊 😊



thank u Versha 😳 😳 😳
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was great

let see what Kaajal do next
plz continue soon

thanks a lot darling, take care πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

jay mata di...... πŸ˜ƒ

jay mata di jee 😊 😊 😊

so sorry yaar...last week hospitalised thi...isiliye comments karte hue late ho gayi...!!! 🀒 🀒 🀒 🀒 🀒 🀒
Abe kya baat karti hai yaar, tu aaram se comment kar mere ko koi problem nahi hai.
by d way...maine toh pahle hi poocha tha ki...tu koi spl tonoc leti hai kya...??? varna itne sare fics ko itni achhi tarah se kaise handle karti hai tu...!!! mujh se toh mere char bachhe hi sambhale nahin jate...aur tu toh 6 bachhe sambhal rahi hai...!!! πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Soch kitna stamina lagta hai bacchon ko samhaalane me. Aakhir hote to apne hi hisse hain na. Ab tonic ka to pata nahi par mera stamina tum logon se banta hai na. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
AWESOME work again dear......πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
thanks dear πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
vardan ka dimag sach me kabil-e-tarif hai. use pata chal hi gaya ki kajal bhi us se pyar karti hai...par confess karne se darti hai...yeh toh natural hai yaar...!!! bichari abhi tak confused hai...!!! par is kabab me haddi sanya ko bhi abhi tapak na tha...!!! vardan ne agar kiss kar liya hota...toh kajal aur us k bich ki jo choti si confusion hai voh dur ho jati...na...!!!πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
Are Sanya to ab help kar rahi hai na dono ki, πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ bina ye jaane ki dono hubby wifey nahi hain πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†. Kiss to kar lenge hi janaab ek baar madam haan to bolein. 😳 😳 😳
lekin sanya sudhar gayi hai...yeh achha hai...!!! baht cheda us ne vardaan ko...!!! bichara toh properly romance kar hi nahin paya...par us k liye bhi sanya ne us ki taang khinch li muft me...!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
Ab us ne sahi track uthaya hai na apne liye, is se hi raasta milega. πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
game party...gr88888...!!! truth toh bol hi diya kajal ne...!!! par sanya ne vardaan ko dare karne k liye sahi option diya...!!! aur vardaan ne bhi dil aur dimag dono se kaam liya aur ja kar ek waitress ko kiss kar diya...!!! ab toh kajal ka dil bhi jalega aur dimag bhi...!!! mujhe vardaan aur kajal k bich ek long kiss scene dikhai de rahi hai...next moment par...!!! πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
Dekhte hain ki is dil k jalne se jo smoke failta hai us se kis ka muh kaala hota hai.πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† Shayad ab kuch bol dein madam Kajal. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
bas vertika maate se yahi req hai ki voh kam se kam isi saal is fic ko cont karen...!!!πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•

Ye fic is saal me hogi yaar continue don't worry sweet heart, take care πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

hi vartika how r u?
ud was fantastic
superb
mindblowing
too good
loved all the scenes
vardaan was very naughty
kajal know his intentions
sanaya is enjoying the game
waiting for the next part

love
deepa

thanks Deepa darling for reading n finding it nice. 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: arpita25

Kya yaar ye bhi fic tera jhakaas fic hai.

thanks 😊 😊 😊

Mujhe pata tha ki Vardaan ko pehli najar ka hi pyaar ho gaya hai Kajal se aur ye dekho yahan saare symptoms bhi kuch aisa hi ishara kar rahe hain. Vardaan to seedhe seedhe flirt kar raha hai na Kajal se par Kajal bhi bahut enjoy kar rahi hai i think.
Ab kabhi na kabhi koi na koi to pasand aata hi hai na hum ko bus aise hi Kajal Vardaan ko pasand aa gayi 😳 😳 😳 aur Vardaan all of a sudden itna change ho gaya.πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Ab to bilkul had hi ho gayi ki vo itne raat me Kajal se milne aa gaya us k flat me aur jab light aane par us ne Kajal ko dekha to clean bold hi ho gaya..................hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
Socho kaisa boss hai ki apne employee k ghar itna late night bhi aa jaata hai. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

thanks a lot n keep on replying for rest parts. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

superb updt yaar.....

loved it....vk wer fantastic....

ab toh kajal gayi yaa kahein ki vardaan gaya....itni pi jo li hai...ab sambhalna toh use hi padega na....

updt soon

Dekhte hain Vardaan kaisa control karta hai ab Kajal k gusse ko. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Par is poore process me agar sach saamne aa jaaye to........................ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
thanks for reply dear 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
precap for next part:-

"Tu??tum idhar dekho, tu..tu????tumhari himmat kaise hue us ko kiss karne ki?" she asked him holding his collars.

"Kya hua tum ko, tum hi ne to mana kiya tha na ki mai tum ko aise sab k same kiss nahi kar sakta to mujhe ye task diya gaya to maine is ko poora kar liya." He said innocently.

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Kajal daudte hue us ladki k paas pahuch gayi jis ko Vardaan ne kiss kiya tha. She started hitting her, "Kiss k??.kar?.karegi , kis???.kiss karegi mere pa?..pati ?..ko te??..teri hi???himm??.himmat kai??.kaise hue bol?" Kajal was doing this wired behavior and the gal was beaten up by her.

"Oh my god." Vardaan ran in that direction n saved that gal from Kajal. "Kajal chodo us ko kya kar rahi ho ye?" he said dragging her.

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"Oh my god ye vahan kab pahuch gayi aur kar kya rahi hai?" Sanya panicked.

"Pata nahi chalo chal k dekhte hain." Vardaan said n both rushed towards the stage where she was standing.

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So guys untill i post the next part i hope aap sab is part se kaam chala loge.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow....wat a precap. I was missing updates of this fic....I'm glad to hav this tit bit....isse kaam chala lungi kuch dino tak....but part jaldi chahiye pls. And yes, Vardaan did gave an innocent practical ans to Kajal....but thats not supposed to be liked by her n she gave the perfect reaction to his action. I luved it....w8ing for the part eagerly. Continue soon Vertika.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Hieeeeeee kinna pyaara tha ye waala update. 😳
Thanks dear πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

Mai itne late ho jaaongi reply karne me maine socha hi nahi tha πŸ˜•. Par sach me is ko padhne k baad maza hi aa gaya. πŸ˜†
thanks again n it's pretty fine. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
Jab Vardaan maan raha hai to Kajal ko problem kyoun hai bhai? 😑 Aur ab to Sanya bhi help kar rahi hai. πŸ˜‰
Ab is k liye mai kya bataoon? Ye to Kajal ki marzi hai na.
Kehna hi pada na Kajal ko kitna pyaar karti hai vo Vardaan se aur jab kiss ka task diya us ne my god my to khush ho gayi. πŸ˜†
Par kya fayda hua na? All went in vain. πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•
Par ye kya? 😲 Kajal to rigid hai ki us ko nahi karna hai, yahan Vardaan kehta hai ki vo kisi aur ko karega kiss aur us waitress k pass chala bhi gaya.πŸ₯±
Sab k sab kam nautanki thode na hain. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
kajal ko jalan ho rahi hai na pata chal raha hai clearly.πŸ˜‰
Haan par ab madam is baat ko samajh hi le to accha hai. 😳 😳 😳
update soon darling

Bus update aane hi waala hai just wait 4 sometime.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks dear 😊 😊 😊

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