The Unknown Desire part 39 updated pg. 149

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#731

Hi Dear

How r u???

I really sometimes wonder how u manage 6 fictions at the same time...n u give beautiful updates for each..Hats off to u yaar👏👏👏

Coming to this update..It was truely terrific..😛😛😛

Vardaan knows dat Kajal loves him only n she is a bit hesitant to accept this simple thing.He wanted Kajal to confess her feelings to him..But she was avoiding him..Her heart was betraying her ...😊😊😊

But Sanya came at such a point where Vardaan was abt to kiss Kajal..

Vardaan was embarrased n Sanya was teasing him...

Now that game part..It was awsome...😛😛

Kajal ne apne mann ki baat keh di par game mein...Vardaan to usme bhi khush tha...😛😛😛

Sanya ne bhi Vardaan ko uska manchaha dare diya..Kajal was too shocked at dis ...Vardaan bhi kam nahin hai..Wo ek waitress ke pass chala gaya bcoz usko pata hai ki agar Kajal usse pyaar kati hai to usko bahut zyaada jealousy hogi..😉😉😉 ...Bulls eye..Uska nishana ek dum sahi laga hai...Kajal was fuming to see him with dat waitress...😆😆😆

Wat will Kajal do now...?

Bye

Do update soon

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362035

Suspended

Posted: 16 years ago

#732

hiiiiiiiiii vertika the ud was as usual awesooooooome..........
superb.........
excellent.........
fantastic............
too good.................
rocking.....................
fantabulous........
do cont.soon........

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#733

that was great

let see what Kaajal do next

plz continue soon

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#734

Originally posted by: arpita25
I loved their first meeting scene yaar kitne maze se Kajal ne kaha ki tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?
Haan abhi us ko kya pata ki kal ko us k saath hi attach hogi vo. 😛 😛 😛

Chalo jaao yahan se varna boss aa jaayenge to problem hogi tum ko. Vo to maana hi nahi chahti thi ki Vardaan boss hai company ka. Bechara Vardaan karta bhi kya? Aakhir us ko bulana pada peon ko saabit karne k liye ki vo hai kaun?
Soch lo abhi se Kajal kuch bolne nahi deti us ko apne saamne aage kya karegi? 😆 😆 😆

Ye Mugdha ki frnd Anu ki shaadi Arjun se ho rahi hai good yaar.

thanks dear 😊 😊 😊

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#735

Originally posted by: nihatri
so sweet

thanx 😊 😊 😊

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#736

Originally posted by: arpita25
Vardaan ne jab Kajal ko peon k through inform kiya tab jaa k maani madam.
maan hi gayi itna kya kam hai? 😆 😆 😆
😆
Ab dekho ye Vardaan jee interview kam romance jyada karte najar aa rahein hain na? Pata nahi aise boss ho to employee ka kya hoga?
Accha hai na, boss aisa hoga to time kaise kut jaayega pata hi nahi chalega na? 😛 😛 😛

Chalo ek baat acchi hue ki Kajal ki jo ear ring kho gayi thi vo aakhir pehna hi di Vardaan ne apne haathon se us ko. Par maje ki baat ye hai ki Vardaan ne sab kuch bina naraj hue kiya, vow a nice change.
abhi se haal aisa hai, aage kya karega? 😳 😳 😳

thanks dear 😉 😉 😉

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago

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375400

Hibernated

Posted: 16 years ago

#737

hi vartika how r u?
ud was fantastic
superb
mindblowing
too good
loved all the scenes
vardaan was very naughty
kajal know his intentions
sanaya is enjoying the game
waiting for the next part

love
deepa

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#738

superb updt yaar.....

loved it....vk wer fantastic....

ab toh kajal gayi yaa kahein ki vardaan gaya....itni pi jo li hai...ab sambhalna toh use hi padega na....

updt soon

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varshita

@varshita

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#739

Superb update yaar.
Is ko padhte time mai imagine kar rahi thi jaise sab kuch meri aakhon k saamne hi ho raha hai. I loved the way u expressed the emotions of Vardaan n Kajal. Kajal apne aap ko rokne ki poori koshish kar rahi hai jab ki us ka man maanane ko ready nahi hai. Yahan Vardaan koi bhi kasar nahi chodta hai us k saath flirt karne me.
I love the way u used Truth n Dare game in favour of Vardaan. Jaane anjaane me aisa bahut kuch keh gayi vo aur ho gaya shayad jis se hum sab ko ye to pata hi chal gaya ki kitna pyaar karti hai Kajal Vardaan se aur jab kiss karne vaala dare diya Sanya ne to mujhe kitne kushi hue mai bata nahi sakti tujhe.
Lag raha tha ki Sanya jaise vardaan k dimaag ko read kar rahi hai. Par Kajal ka mana karna aur Vardaan ka waitress ko kiss karne vaala scene bahut cute tha. Kajal madam gusse me drink kar to rahi hain na but dekhna hai is ka response kya hota hai?
Par sab se buri baat hai ki ab ye fic before Dec update nahi hoga. Congrats 4 completeing 100 pages but yaar jaldi se un theeno ko khatam kar k in ko ud kar dena pls..

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#740

jay mata di...... 😃

so sorry yaar...last week hospitalised thi...isiliye comments karte hue late ho gayi...!!! 🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢 🤢

by d way...maine toh pahle hi poocha tha ki...tu koi spl tonoc leti hai kya...??? varna itne sare fics ko itni achhi tarah se kaise handle karti hai tu...!!! mujh se toh mere char bachhe hi sambhale nahin jate...aur tu toh 6 bachhe sambhal rahi hai...!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

AWESOME work again dear......👏 👏 👏

vardan ka dimag sach me kabil-e-tarif hai. use pata chal hi gaya ki kajal bhi us se pyar karti hai...par confess karne se darti hai...yeh toh natural hai yaar...!!! bichari abhi tak confused hai...!!! par is kabab me haddi sanya ko bhi abhi tapak na tha...!!! vardan ne agar kiss kar liya hota...toh kajal aur us k bich ki jo choti si confusion hai voh dur ho jati...na...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

lekin sanya sudhar gayi hai...yeh achha hai...!!! baht cheda us ne vardaan ko...!!! bichara toh properly romance kar hi nahin paya...par us k liye bhi sanya ne us ki taang khinch li muft me...!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

game party...gr88888...!!! truth toh bol hi diya kajal ne...!!! par sanya ne vardaan ko dare karne k liye sahi option diya...!!! aur vardaan ne bhi dil aur dimag dono se kaam liya aur ja kar ek waitress ko kiss kar diya...!!! ab toh kajal ka dil bhi jalega aur dimag bhi...!!! mujhe vardaan aur kajal k bich ek long kiss scene dikhai de rahi hai...next moment par...!!! 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉

bas vertika maate se yahi req hai ki voh kam se kam isi saal is fic ko cont karen...!!!😕 😕 😕 😕 😕 😕

Edited by Lion_Priya - 16 years ago