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Samina

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Posted: 17 years ago

#11

great start
hope its armaan who ridz sees
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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

omg
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Aakriti Mehta

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Posted: 17 years ago

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awesome story... i am soo keen to read the next part of ur story... please do continue and please do pm when u have updated!

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Posted: 17 years ago

#14

hey nice ff
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doo continuee soonnn
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aanchal

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Posted: 17 years ago

#15

Thankyou all for your replies.Here's the next chapter and plz comment.

Chapter two.

Padma:So where do we go today???

Ridhima:Wherever you want.

Padma:So let us go to the nearest mall.

Ridhima:Ok.

They get ready and go to the mall.Ridhima bumps into someone.

Ridhima:I'm so sorry.

Girl:It's ok....Ridhima you here???

Ridhima:Muskaan.

Ridhima and Muskaan hug.

Muskaan:How are you???

Ridhima:I'm fine and you???

Muskaan:I'm also fine.

Suddenly Muskaan's mobile rings.

Mukaan sees the number.

Muskaan:Ridhima I have to go now.I'll call you later.

Ridhima:Ok bye.

Ridhima and Padma continue their shopping and after some time they go to eat lunch.

In the restaurant:

Padma:Who is Muskaan???

Ridhima:She's a friend of mine.When I was a intern I met her in the hospital she was also a intern.

Padma:Ok.

Suddenly Ridhima's mobile rings.

Ridhima:Hello?

Nurse:Dr.Ridhima there's an urgent case plz come fast.

Ridhima:Ok I'm coming right now.

Ridhima keeps the phone.

Ridhima:Mom I have to go to the hospital there's an urgent case.

Padma:Ok I'll go home.

Ridhima goes to the hospital and Padma goes to the house.

In the house:

Tring tring...

Padma picks up the phone.

Pamda:Hello???

Muskaan:Hello is Ridhima there???

Padma:No beta I am her mom.

Muskaan:Oh namaste Aunty ji.

Padma:Namaste beta.Any message for her???

Muskaan:Just tell her to call me.

Padma:Ok beta bye.

Muskaan:Bye auntyji.

In the hospital:

Ridhima enters her cabin after the surgery.

Ridhima takes her mobile and calls her mother.

Ridhima:Hello mom???

Padma:Hello Ridhima when will you come???

Ridhima:In 15 minuites.

Padma:Ok but be fast because next on sony max is your favourite picture Love 86.

Ridhima gets silent and then after some seconds.

Ridhima:Mom I don't like love films now.

Padma:But...

Ridhima:Mom I have to see some papers I'll call you later.

Padma:Ok bye.

Ridhima:Bye.

Ridhima remembers something.

~~Flashback~~

Armaan and Ridhima were at Armaan's house.

Armaan:Ridhima come your favourite picture is on TV.

Ridhima came running and fell on the sofa on Armaan.They were staring at eachother.

~~End of Flashback~~

Ridhima literally starts crying and then after some minuites she stops.Then she goes to her house.

In the house:

Ridhima makes coffee and gives the cup to her mother.

Padma:Ridhima come with us to America now there's no need to live here alone.You can join any hospital over there.

Ridhima:Mama plz I don't want to go over there.

Padma:But why???

Ridhima:Because I like this hospital and I want to live here.

They talk for a while and then they eat dinner.Then they go to sleep.

Next morning Ridhima leaves for the hospital early morning.

In the hospital:

Ridhima:Nurse has the doctor from London arrived???

Nurse:Yes he's waiting for you in your cabin.

Ridhima:Ok.

She enters her cabin and gets shocked.

Ridhima:Armaan you.

Sorry no pre-cap.