Kismat.(Part 6 updated page 10)

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I came with a new idea of a FF.So here it is.

Chapter One:

A girl was walking sadly suddenly someone shouted.

Boy:Ridhima Ridhima wait.

The girl did not reply and started to cry.The boy runned towards her and stopped her.

Boy:Ridhima plz listen to me.

Ridhima:Armaan what I had to listen I have listened that now please leave me alone.

Armaan:Plz Ridhima plz beleive me I just wanted to help her.

Ridhima:Armaan plz leave me alone.

She went away crying from there.

Armaan:Fell on his knees in the rain.

Ridhima entered her house and went running towards her room.She was crying.

Ridhima:Armaan why did you do this to me???Didn't you love me????(crying)

She opened her cupboard andtook out a photo of Armaan.

Ridhima:Armaan why...???

She threw it in the dustbin and stopped crying.She tried to sleep but she could not.

Next morning.

Ting Tong.

Ridhima opened the door.

Ridhima:Armaan.

She was about to close the door when Armaan stopped her.

Armaan:Ridhima plz listen to me.

Ridhima:Armaan plz go away from here plz.

Armaan was silent for some seconds.

Armaan:Ok Ridhima you want me to go okay.I'm going to london tonight so goodbye.

He went away from there litterly crying.

Ridhima started crying.Then she went outside and shouted.

Ridhima:Armaan....

But Armaan had already went away.

AFTER FIVE YEARS.

In a hospital:

Nurse:Good morning Ma'am.

Woman:Good morning.

She entered in her cabin and sat down.She looked at a photo and she literally had tears in her eyes.Suddenly someone entered.

Nurse:Ma'am the doctor of London will be here on monday.

Woman:Ok.

Someone entered.

Woman:Ridhima beta.How are you???

Ridhima:Mom you here when did you arrive youtold me you are coming tomorrow???

Padma:I wanted to give you a surprise.

They hugged and then they sat down..

Ridhima:How was your trip to chicago???

Padma:Wonderful.It was great.

Knock Knock.

Ridhima:Come in.

Nurse:Ma'am you have to do the surgery of Mrs.Kapoor.

Ridhima:Ok I'll just come you go.

The nurse went.

Ridhima:Mom you go home and rest we will talk later at home.

Padma:Ok beta.

Ridhima:Here are the keys.Bye.

Padma:Bye.

Padma went away and Ridhima went to the operation theatre.

Ridhima:Nurse make preparationes I'll just come.

Ridhima went to the mandir that was in the hospital and prayed when suddenly she remembered something.

~~Flashback~~

Ridhima was praying:

Ridhima:God this is my first surgery plz make it go well.

Armaan:Ridhima you should have confidence to let the operation to go well.Best of Luck.

Ridhima:Thanks Armaan.

~~End of Flashback~~

Ridhima then went sadly to the operation theatre.After an hour she came out happy because the operation was succesful.

She went back to her cabin when suddenly someone entered.

Woman:Hi Ridhima.

Ridhima:Hi Sapna.

Sapna:Here's my wedding card. You have to come and bring Aunty also.

Ridhima:How do you know that mom is here???

Sapna:Your mom called my mom to call us for dinner tomorrow.

Ridhima:Ok.We'll come.

Sapna:Ok.I have to go now bye.

Ridhima:Bye.

She kept the wedding card in her bag and went to her house.

In her house:

Ridhima:Hello mom.

Padma:Hello Ridhima.

Ridhima:Why are you in the kitchen???

Padma:I'm making your favourite curry chawal.

Ridhima:Thankyou mom.

Ridhima went to her room and changed her clothes.

In the hall:

Padma:Ridhima have you met somebody here or you like someone???

Ridhima:Mom plz don't start.

Padma:Ridhima plz think about your life for once.

Ridhima:Plz mom.

They ate food.They went to the room and started talking.

Ridhima:Did you enjoy???

Padma:Yes very much and I have bought something for you.

Ridhima:Ok.Mom Sapna has invited us to her marriage it's on sunday.

Padma:So we'll have to buy clothes tomorrow.

Ridhima:Ok.

They talked for some time and then they went to sleep.

Next morning they woke up late.

Ridhima woke up and went to have her bath.When Ridhima comes out and sees her mother still sleeping.

Ridhima:Mom wake up.Wake up.

Padma get's up and goes to the bathroom till the time Ridhima goes into the kitchen and makes coffee.

Padma came out.

Ridhima:Here.

Ridhima gives her the coffee.

Pre-cap:Ridhima is shocked when she sees ..............To know who it is keep reading.

Plz comment.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Its really well written! 👏

Do continue soon n do PM me! 😳
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awesome yaar...very well written...do continue soon...and dont 4get to pm me 😃
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oo very nce nce start wud luv 2 read mre
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Very nice start! Do continue soon and Pm me!
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hey..very adorable n nice start...i wuld luvvv to know wht happpensss nexttt!!!!
please update soon n please pm me !
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just awwsome please continue it soon
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wow!!
nyc ff..
i really like de story line...
continue soon.. 😳
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jus caught wid ur ff.. itz gr88 amzng n simply superb!!!!!!!!!!! luvd d title... d leap was gr888...... i'm sure itz armaan... i luvd d way u described it... plzz contd soon.. waitng 4 d nxt prt.. plzz pm nxt tym u update plzz 😊 😊 😊
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hey,i jst read ur FF...its amazin....especially d story goes well enough with d title...continue soon.....pm me if poss..
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