Amanat..(Rajeev n Amna)*updatd prt7 pg 7*

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heena mehta

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Posted: 17 years ago

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very nice intro and very nice part 👏
plz continue soon

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Samina

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

amazing part
it was really funny
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kashish

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Posted: 17 years ago

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hey really nice part.........wonderful starting 👏 ....love the family relation for both of family.......i love sujal's character......khud kehta kyun nahi ki woh ladki dhundhega apne liye 😉 .......aur kashish jise her waqt mazak hi pasand hai 😆 .....i hope sujal ke pyaar ko woh mazak na bana de.......i hope they both meet really fast so we can progress on story.......ple ple continue......i cant wait to read more.....thanks for this wonderful part.......great writer.. 👏 ...

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kashish

Edited by goodkashish - 17 years ago

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Javeria

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Posted: 17 years ago

#14

Thanx for ur comment guyz...i'll post da next part tonight Inshallah!! 😳

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Javeria

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Posted: 17 years ago

#15

Thanx for ur appreciation logon 😆 so here is da next part.!!

Yahan per Kavya apne college pauhanchta hai ...aur Anjali aur Kashish bhi enter hote hain ...
Kashish : chalo Anjali mein apni class mein chalti hun...ok
Anjali : ok dii...
Kashish wahan se chali jaati hai...
Kavya n his group starts following Anjali..
Kavya to his friend : aray dekho dekho hamare college ki sab se khubsarat larki aa gayi hahahah
Anjali was boiling in anger...
Kavya : aray aray..gussa to dekho...
Anjali : Kavya will u please shut uppp...
Kavya : uff yeh gussa....
Anjali : Sir....
Kavya foran chup ho jata hai ...
Professor : kya hua Anjali aap ko..??
Anjali : Sir yeh Kavya keh raha hai .. k hamare takluu professor ki biwi barii sexyy hai ...pata nahi kaisay kerli us maal ne is budhay se shadii...
Professor : KYAAAA...??
Anjali : aur sir baaqi jo inhun ne kaha ..woh mein bata nahi sakhti....
Professor : Kavya immediately aap principal k room mein aaiyeh..
Kavya : per sir mein to...
Professor : Kavya shut uppp....come immediately to principal's office...right now!!
Anjali winks at Kavya..
Anjali : kavya tumne sunna nahi sir ne kya kaha...
Kavya : yes sir!! (while leaving from there...Kavya whisperz to Anjali ...): tumhe to mein dekh lunga ...
Anjali : yeah yeah..!! mujhay baad mein dekhna ..i know em damn beautiful...pehlay apnay Principal ko to dekh lo...woh tumhari raah tak rahe hain .... hahaha

yeh to hui Kavyanjali ki kahanii ab dekhtay hain hamara Sujal kahan hainn....
we see a guy..standing in front ov de mirror n murmuring sumthing....
Guy : oh God em soo coooll....hey bhagwan..mein tera kaisay shuker ada kerun...tune mujhay itna acha banaya hai ...
suddenly Sujal enters his cabin...
Sujal : yeh kya ho raha hai yahan per..??
Guy : kuch nahi ...bas bhagwan ka shukriya ada ker raha tha ..
Sujal : ohh is liyeh kyunki us ne mujhay tera dost banaya..??
Guy : nahi wo to mere bichlay janam k papon ki saza hai ...jo us ne tujhay mera dost banaya...
Sujal : han mera bhi kuch yahi khayal hai tumhare baare mein ...waisay kis liyeh shuker guzaar ho bhagwan k tum?
Guy : abay us ne mujhay itna handsome jo banaya hai...
Sujal burst out laughing...
Sujal : Akshat...tu ne kabhi khush fehmi naam ka word sunna haaii...?
yeah guyz da other guy is Akshat...
Akshat..: haan sunna hai kyun..??
SUjal : nahi bas yahi soch raha tha..tera naam Akshat kis ne rakha...tumhara naam to KHUSHFEHMI hona chhaiyeh tha...
Akshat : ha ha ha very funny...chalo ab kaam ki baat kero...
Sujal : ohh haan ...woh Mehta Group of industries ki files mere cabin mein bhej dena...us mein kuch correction kerni hai ..
Akshat : aur kuchh...?
Sujal : nahi filhal to kuch nahi ..acha Akshat aaj mein zara jaldi ghar chala jaunga...so tum plz sab sambhal lena yahan
Akshat : dont worryy man...
Sujal : chalo abhi Sneha ka phone aata hi hoga...
(Sneha ka naam sunte hi Akshat k dimagh ki ghanti(bell) bajne lagti hai heheh)
Akshat to himself: aaj taq sirf naam hi sunna hai..naam sunte hi yeh haal ho jata hai ...jis din darshan ho gaye us din to...
Sujal : kahan kho gaye...
Akshat : kahiinn nahi ...
suddenly Sujal's cell started ringing
Sujal : helloo....jii...ab kya ho gaya..?? ok ok mein ata hunn...
Akshat : kya hua ..
Sujal : huh yeh Kavya...
Akshat : not again...!!

Precap : Sujal n Kashish's first meeting..!!

waiting for ur comments guyz...hope u'll like this part...

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swetha10

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Posted: 17 years ago

#16

WOW lovely part 👏 I liked Akshat's entry.... 😉 😉 😉 Kavya n Anjali r too cute... 😛 Really excited abt the next part...kashish n sujal's meeting...OMG thts gr8...Plzz continue soon 😊

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#17

iman yaar lovely...both the parts were awesome..i liked it very much..keep up the good work going... really cooll... 👏 do continue soon..me waiting for sujal,kashish's meeting eagerly.... 😊 😛 😃

Edited by sun_423 - 17 years ago

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zaira

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Posted: 17 years ago

#18

interesting conecept and the cast is really good !!!!!!!!.......i like how u started the story 😉....veena kou bahu chahie ...aur sujal shaddie say dur bhagta hai 😆!!!!!....ek bhai larkio se dur rehta hai tio duhra unkey piche jata hai 😆 😛 😆!!!!!! kavya kie yeah adaat kabhie nahie chaegie..sneha ko tang karna 😛!!!!!!!!!!.........kavyaji anjalie sey bache key rehna kyun key wo dushri larkio ki tarha nahie hay, ok 😛!!!!!!..........akshat hilarious has always 😆.....sujal is lucky too have a friend like him 😉!!!!.....looking forward for sujal n kashish meeting at the principal office!!!!!!!!!!!!!!............continue soon plzzzzzzzzzz............keep it up!!!!!!!!!!

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kashish

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Posted: 17 years ago

#19

beautiful part.........very funny with kavya and anjali meeting.....i was so laughing through readings......i am waiting for sujal and kashish to meet...cant wait for the next part.......ple ple continue......thanks.

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kashish