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Posted: 17 years ago
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gr8 part
thnx for the PM
continue soon
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gr8 part too sweet of angie n muski
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Nice part
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gr888 prt... superbbbbbbbbb
thnxx 4 d pm.. update ssoon
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waoh👍🏼 its so cute⭐️ really awesome one😊😛😉 plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank you very much for all the comments.
will surely update it soon.😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi friends,been a long time since i updated the ff.

Though promised for a quick update i didn't do it as I was having my semister exams n then my sister's marriage n now catching up with my college after a leave of 10days.

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A new character to ff but a very well known to us our favourite sapna. Sapna is best friend of riddhima. She studied with her in Medico. Sapna is married to amit,brother of angad.

that's a brief description abt her bt there is more to come.

here's the part hope you liked it.

Part 12

MEDICO for Girls

The first day of college has come to an end. After the hectic class schedule it was their last period of games. It was students wish to either attend it or go to the hostel. Many have decided to stay back and enjoy themselves. Anjali Muskaan and Kripa has also decided to go and play something. Kripa returned before their classes would begin. Anjali and Muskaan didn't ask her anything abt where she went,they felt that she would tell them when she was ready or wanted to.

"so what should we play",muskaan asked looking around at all the things in the gamesroom.

"well,table tennis is taken away,samething with badminton,so only option is Basket ball"anjali replied.

"but i don't know how to play it"muskaan said a little bit disappointed.

"well,i too don't know i know only dribbling but i can't shoot goals,what abt you kripa?"anjali looked sideways to look at kripa.but she was not there she was already on the court dribbling the ball and looking at the basket.they saw her dribbling at a very high speed and making a goal. she jeered in happiness at her shoot being perfect.

"hey,kripa tumhe BB kelna aata hai,hame bataya nahi"anjali asked getting on to the court.

"ha,meri didi ne sikhaya tha mujhe,woh bahut acchi BB player hai,when she was in school she was the captain n boys toh hameesha dang reh jhate the use dekh kar, she was the best"kripa was excited,n words spilled from her mouth like gushing of water in rivers after the rain.

"i miss her"kripa fell on her knees tears forming in her eyes.

Anjali and Muskaan couldn't understand what to do, to make her stop crying they said "hame bhi sikhaoge,hume toh kuch bhi nahi aata"

"aise dribble karte hai kya"muskaan asked trying to dribble the ball but it went sometimes a little more than her height n sometimes sometimes gives her difficulty to catch the ball.

"kya aise goal marte hai"anjali snatching the ball from muskaan shooted it but it didn't even reach close enough to the basket.

A small smile formed on her lips seeing her friends,she wiped her tears n got onto her feet.Moving to the centre of the court "muskaan go n get two balls"she said to muskaan moving towards anjali.muskaan happily walked away to get the balls.

"anjali,ball ko aise pakdo apna ek haath aage iss tarah aur ek peeche iss tarah,pairo ko aise rako ek aage aur ek peeche peeche ka thoda uthavo n raise ur selves n shoot" the ball directly went into the basket. "wow,kripa,mai bhi try karu" anjali asked."ha,yeh lo"kripa gave her the ball "aur ha,ball ko basket mei dalne keliye agar tum centre mei kadi ho tho woh square haina use dekh kar aur agar side mei kadi ho tho basket ko dekh khar shoot karna"kripa instructed to anjali.

"yeh lo kripa mei ball le aayi"muskaan handed over one ball to her.

"dekho muskaan ball kho aise dribble karte hai, concentrate on the ball ok aur zyaada force mat lagaana" she said eyeing to muskaan to do it.

so they ended up having a small basket ball class to which Kripa was the teacher and Anjali and muskaan were the students.

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*knock* *knock*

"come in", Padma said on hearing a knock at her office door.

"oh,sapna tum,aao baitho" padma got up on seeing sapna and directed her to the sofa in the corner in her room.

Sapna : hi mam,kaise hai aap.

Padma : Mai toh acchi hu,tum batao.Kaisa tha aaj ka din,first day as a teacher.

Sapna : accha tha.bahut khushi ka ehsaas hua ,jaha par maine pada tha wahi teacher banna ek accha experience hai mam.

Padma : yeh sun kar accha laga, accomodation sab dekh liya.

Sapna : Yes mam, filhaal toh mai Keerthi mam aur Lovelyji ke saath room share kar rahi.

Padma : koi problem toh nahi hai na.

Sapna : no problem mam.

Padma : waise maine tumhe pehle offer diya toh mana kar diya abh kyun accept kiya.

Sapna : woh mam,pehle mei darti thi yaha aane se, woh riddhima ke saath bitaye gaye pal yaad aate the isliye,and i didn't want those sweet memories to become bitter by rememebering her loss lekin now i have learnt to overcome it,i want to turn those sweet memories into more sweet by staying close to them.

Padma : ( a small smile flickered on her lips) i am proud and happy that you have come here. Aur tumhari family kaisi hai.

Sapna : Sab acche hai mam, Amit bhi yahi shift honi ki dekh raha hai. woh apne bhai angad ke close rehna chaahta hai. angad yaha pe medico mei hi pad raha hai. jabse unke parents guzar gaye hai tabse amit hi apne bhai ko dekh raha hai woh usse bahut pyaar karta hai aur isliye uske paas rehna chaahtha hai mam.

Padma : i understand.(her face was little saddened).

Sapna : (her face too dropped looking at sad face)(she got down to her knees before padma) mam, i need to confess something. (padma looked up at sapna,sapna's eyes filled up with tears)mam,i knew abt her n armaan, he was best friend in college. Amit told me that armaan first saw her somewhere n liked her nwhenever amit used to come to meet me armaan also used to come n it was when riddhima n armaan's friendship grew

.i knew abt it bt never told you bcz i promised her,only if i had told you may be something much better might have happened. i am sorry padma aunty.(she put her face onto padma's lap,tears making her way from her eyes.)

padma caressed her face

Padma : sapna,i need to show u something.will you come with me?

sapna looked at her with her teary eyes,wiping her tears she nodded.

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thankyou.

Edited by ramani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
hii .......
ur ff is nice after reading 7th 8th parts i was crying .......
means riddima died in this ff aaaa...oh god.....
anyways nice parts.......
continue soon.......
take care.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
#59
I just read your FF and in some scenes i was crying😭
you are a great writer👏
cont soon😊
pm me when you cont😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#60

You write it in such a way that

it makes me tear in some scenes
do cont soon? cant wait to read more abt
ridzy and kripa...haha wonder how angad
will take revenge with anji for making atul
bewakoof;)
love
tanu

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