AR FF: Fervour- part 12 - 11/5

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@-Facetious-

Sparkler

Posted: 17 years ago

#51

hey natasha,

totally loved it yaar....
Ridz prank got me rolling 🤣 ......lol...imagine her with those heavy make-up n big glasses... 🤓.. 😆

the piano scene was very sweet.....i wud say more original.... 😳 ........gr8 part... 👏

waiting for the nxt....as Armaan is coming over summer... 😉 u wud have definately planned some action.. 😆

thanx for the pm...

luv,
shivani

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Zainab

@Veiledbeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#52

😆 😆 Hes staying over fr the summer!! OYA!! That's totally gonna rock 😆 😆

Can't wait for more!

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Jia

@jia..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#53

wo wow wow Honey wat can i say????? sorry for not commenting on part3 before, just read it now. Read both in one go!!! I must say ur too good !!!

reading the convo specially with Ridz and her thoughts OMGGG 😆 love the way ur penning this down!!! And Lol 😆 😆 😆 Armaan staying there now!!! She actually had this dupptta on her head!!! 😆 😆 😆 Brilliant. Will be waiting for moreee.

Thanku so very very much for the pm.

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lakshmi

@meow23

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Posted: 17 years ago

#54

omg.. dat was a super rockng prt..... d plan failed of atul n co... rahul didn't turn up soo sweet of him.... n intor of armaan.. omg ridz was soo funny behavng lik a typical pnju gurl.... d piano classes wer soo funny... n d bst prt he stayng at der place...... can't believe 1 meetng ridz recognised his colonge.... gud gurl..... thnxx 4 dis super update.. contd soonn 😊 😊 😊

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Heli

@Arlover1

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#55

awesome loved it
thanks
awesome part
plz continue soon
❤️Heli

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swetha10

@swetha10

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Posted: 17 years ago

#56

Fantastic update 👏
enjoyed the convo specially with Ridz and her thoughts And Lol Armaan staying there now😉 She actually had this dupptta on her head!!!thts hilarious 😆 Looking forward for more...PLzz continue asap 😊

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..Mira..

@..Mira..

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Posted: 17 years ago

#57

Haha omg that was such an amazing part! Armaan staying over at ridz place? now thats gonna be interesting!
Can't wait for the next part. Thank you sooo much for the pm.
~Mira 😳

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astha

@Asthuox

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#58

OMG! That was all WOW!! Girl.
You Hold that writers Touch...

Love ridhima's toughts and the Lil Breathtakin Moments ...

He wanted to learn.😉 AWWW 😆😆 ... Shall i Come to teach 😍.

... Read all parts in one go. 😳

Him Stayin round. Women Update fast Please!!! 😆

Loving This FF 😳 +& Thanx fo the Pm

Love You 🤗

Asthu/pinky 😆

Edited by pink_09 - 17 years ago

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KAT

@Catwoman

Sparkler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#59

OK sorry for not commenting engrossed in the office ...then i downloaded the ff in word!! ...wow 👏 👏 👏 ....

LOl i remember my piano lessons...hehe! Must say loving Armaan using every trick in the book...lol i guess rahul will be apprearing soon 😉

Love Kat 😳

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Natasha

@Ladoo645

Dazzler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: sweet-niz
natasha i luv readin ur ff its soo enjoyable to read luved dis pat lks lke ridz plan didnt go excatly to plan loool it was soo much fun readin it luvin it already wud luv to read mre asap

updte sooon plzzzz
thx 4 da pm
luv niz x

😆 Glad u liked the outcome of this 😃, will continue soon.