FF: Bringin’ SexyBack *pt 18: Jaane Bhi D

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rajkin

@rajkin

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#61

omg u make us wait .but we dont mind. kyunki sabr ka phal bahut meetha hota hai. anyway how many comments is ur this time dep on.

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Karishma

@simplyinluv

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Posted: 17 years ago

#62

Hi rajkin! I dont have a comment count frm now on. if sumone likes my story, they will comment on it if not they won't its up to them.

Ew Naina! Not chunnu! ewewewew 🤢

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Nisha

@desaigirl101

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#63

Please update soon!
I really really really really loved loved loved loved it!
So....Please continue soon as soon as possible!!!

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Karishma

@simplyinluv

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Posted: 17 years ago

#64

Thank u guys soooooo much for reading my fan fiction! U guys r the best! I'll try to get the next update in soon!!! 😊

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rajkin

@rajkin

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#65

oh thanks so much. That means we will get to read ur story as soon as u r
free to post it. hey thats great.

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Karishma

@simplyinluv

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#66

ya im prety busy but i'll try to finish it up tonight

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Sandeep

@Multani90

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#67

I love it! Just love the fierce kiss that she gave him! Awesome, please continue soon! Need more bad boy sexy!

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Karishma

@simplyinluv

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Posted: 17 years ago

#68

Oh, don't worry! There is quite a hott scene coming up! as soon as i finish the update 🥱

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rajkin

@rajkin

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#69

so sweet of you. very thoughtful of u .just cant wait any longer.u work so hard for us.

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Karishma

@simplyinluv

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Posted: 17 years ago

#70

Sorry it took so long for me to post the next update, I've been really busy and tired with all the stuff I'm doing lately. But it's here!

Chapter 6: Party ki Tayyari

RanKan's bedroom:

Ranbir is getting ready and Kanya comes out wearing this:

R: (thinking)Whoa! Hey sexy!
R: Kanya, yeh tum party par pehnewali ho?
K: Haan, achhi hai na?
R: Achhi toh hai, par tum kuch aur pehnoge?
K: Kyun?
R: Kyunki aisi hot cheez ko kisi ki nazar lage, yeh main nahi chahta.

Kanya (who is facing the other way) blushes, but puts on a mad expression and swerves around.

K: No.
R: No?
K: Main is shaadi ko nahi maanti hoon. Iska matlab main tumhare baat nahi maanni padegi. I can do whatever I want.
R: Oh yeah?

He walks over to the closet and ruffles through the clothes and pulls out a small sharaab ki bottle.

K: (gasps) Yeh tumhare paas kaise?
R: Tumhe kyun bataaoon? Meri marzi hai!

He opens and takes a gulp of it. Kanya is looking at him in horror. He puts it down and fixes his eyes on her lustfully. He starts walking towards her. Kanya gets a little startled and takes a couple steps back.

K: Yeh tum k-kya kar r-rahe ho Ranbirrr?

He says nothing and keeps walking toward her. He backs her up against a wall and puts one of his arms across the wall. Kanya is literally trembling now. He puts another. Kanya closes her eyes tightly, waiting for what she thought was coming. Ranbir tucked her hair behind one ear, came close in to her and whispered "Tumhe jo pehna hai, pehn lo. Main neeche living room mein tumara intezaar kar raha hoon."

He pulled back and walked out of the room, leaving Kanya confused and embarrassed.

*^ Downstairs ^*
Kanya comes down wearing dress and Shanaya (who is also coming to the party with Ayaan) is speechless.

S: (thinking) Yeh Kanya toh mujhse zyaada achhi dress kaise pehni hai? Yeh dress maine khud Manish Malhotra se design karvayi hoon! Mujhe kuch karna padega.

S: (sobbing) Ayaaaaaaaaan!

Ayaan arrives looking irritated.

A: Ab kya hai Shanaya? Maine bola na, uss dress mein tum bilkul moti nahi lag rahi ho!
S: Woh toh mujhe pata hai Ayaan! I always look fabulous! Par woh Kanya, Kanyaaaaaaa-
A: Shut up! Kanya kya?
S: Mujhseachhidresspehenrahihai! Ahhhhaaaaaahahaaaa!
A: Grrrrr....Shut up, shut up, shut up!
S: How meeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaan!

Kanya is standing there and watching all this and smirking. She doesn't know Ranbir has come up behind her, enjoying watching her laugh. Meanwhile, Ayaan - irritated with Shanaya to the limit - decides to adopt a new tactic.

A: (slipping his arm around her) Shanaya darling, Kanya tumse achhi dress pehen rahi hai toh kya hua? Tumhari natural khoobsurti usse bahut zyaada hai.

Ayaan shoots Kanya an apologetic glance and Shanaya begins to stop sobbing. Ranbir says "Woh kitni childish hai na?" in Kanya's ear behind her. Kanya jumps because she didn't know he was there. She whirls around to see him and he is wearing this:

She is completely breathless, but Ranbir just smirks and leads them all out to the car.

What will happen at the party?
Will Kanya make Ranbir jealous?

Edited by simplyinluv - 17 years ago