FF: Bringin’ SexyBack *pt 18: Jaane Bhi D - Page 8

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Posted: 17 years ago
#71
cant wait to see wht happens next.i think the next episode is gonna b a dhamaka. I cant stop imagining Akash. THat scene was reeely hot.And thanks despite all the tirednes and business u did post. sweet of u.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#72
ooo brill updaet
continue soooon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#73
AWESOME Update!!!!
Loving this FF.
Please continue soon as possible...please update quickly! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74
that was brill
i can't wait...
ooo ranbir jealous...
pls continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#75
Kwel awsome plz plz continue fast fast i reliwanna know what happens next!!!!!! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
dat was a super scene
plzzzzzzzzzzz continue 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#77
thnx u guys! its bin fun writing for u! i'll try to make the next one today 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#78

Recap: RanKan and ShanAyaan (hehe) are going to Ashutosh's party

Chapter 7: Mystery Man
As Ranbir, Kanya, Ayaan and Shanaya got down from the car, Ranbir waited for AS to get further away and grabbed Kanya's hand. She paused and turned back angrily.

K: Kya hai?
R: Tum yahaan kya karne wali ho?
K: Tumse matlab?
R: Mujhse matlab hai, dammit!
K: Agar tum is shaadi ko nahi maante, toh main kyun maanoon?
R: Tum sab ladkiyaan ek jaise hoti! Irritating!
K: You'd be surprised to know ladkiyaan ladko ke baare mein aisi hi sochti!

Ad with that, she turned her back on him and went into the house. Ranbir, helplessly watched her from behind. He kicked his car tire in frustration.

R: I hate girls.

He took a deep breath and walked inside.

Inside the music is pumping loud and everyone is on the dance floor. Ranbir scans the room for Kanya and sees her standing a few feet away, talking to Ashutosh. He walks over to them.

As: Hey Ranbir! Kaise ho yaar?
R: (smiling) Great! This is my wife Kanya.
As: I know. I've just been talking to her. I must say, you're a very lucky guy!

Kanya blushes and Ranbir looks down at her.

R: (thinking) Yeah, I guess I am. No! Ranbir! Snap out of it! You're hate guru!
R: Sure I am! (wraps his arm around Kanya's waist)

Kanya shot him an angry glance quickly.

As: So come on guys, join the party! Mujhe actually jaana hai. Mera aur ek dost aa raha hai.

Kanya and Ranbir make their way to the refreshment table and sit down.

K: Waiter, ek coke milegi?
W: Ji, memsaab
R: Aur mujhe ek shot tequila lunga.

Kanya stares up at him in shock, but that doesn't faze Ranbir. He grabs the shot glass and gulps it down.

R: Ek aur, please
Ashutosh comes and sits down next to them.

As: So guys, kaisi lag rahi hai, party? Are you two having fun?

RK: (strained) Yes

As: Good...hey look, mera dost aa gaya! Hey Armaan! Over here!

As the mystery man descends down the stairs, the disco ball's light falls across his face. It's ARMAAN! From DMG!



Ar: (thinking) Whoa! Who is that hottie? I have to ask her to dance!

He strolled up to Kanya.

Ar: Hey beautiful, wanna dance?

Kanya cast a painful glance at Ranbir.

K: Sure

Armaan grinned and took her hand and pulled her onto the dance floor. As they passed the DJ, Armaan sent him a wink and the DJ grinned and changed the music.

Shaam hai, jaam hai, aur hai nasha
Tan bhi hai, mann bhi hai, pighla huaan
Chhayi hai, rangeeniyaan, phir bhi hai betaabiyaan
Kyun dhadakta hai dil?
Kyun yeh kehta hai dil?
Deewano ko ab tak nahi hai yeh pata
Aaj ki raat, hona hai kya, paana hai kya
Khona hai kya
Aaj ki raat hona hai kya paana hai kya
Khona hai kya

Ranbir glared at Armaan with a powerful intensity. How much he longed to be over there, in his place. And even more! How much he longed for her lips to smile just like that when she danced with him! And how much he wished he could bring her body that close to his.

R: (thinking) Agar mere bas chalta toh main abhi us saale ko jaan se maarta!

With these thoughts in mind, Ranbir grabbed another shot glass and gulped it down.

What happens next?
Does Ranbir get drunk?
Make sure to comment everyone because I just had a brilliant idea on what should happen next, but I need to know what you thought!

Edited by simplyinluv - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#79
d*mn! so short but continue soon
👏 👏 👏 wonderful
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Posted: 17 years ago
#80
arre i was waiting for ages for ur update. u build it up really well.make ranbir burn. he deserves to. kanya b very nasty cmon . thru ur ff i realy miss akashs hate guru days.
Edited by rajkin - 17 years ago

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