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thanks.its just coming😊

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okkk guys.here is first part

PART 1


shruti n biji were walking along the roadside holding the shoppers in hand.they were living at a beautiful hill station.n their house was beautifully build at the peak of a hill.

biji- ek toh tumharey dada jaan ko najaaney kya soojhi k pahaar k ooper ja kar ghar bana diya.

shruti was also tired but she was still feeling good for the whether was so cool.cool breeze was flying her hairs away n she was walking inhaling the sweet frangrance of flowers which were planted at the edges of road.

shruti- thhak toh mein bhi gayi hoon.yeh gaari ko bhi aaj hi kharaab hona tha.lekin yahan rehne ka maza bhi bohat aata hai.shor se durr beautiful environment aur yahan ka mosam toh kitna acha hai.

biji- tumharey dada jaan ko bhi yahan ka mosam bohat pasand tha.tum toh bilkul unn pe hi gayi ho.

shruti- acha.isliye aap mujhe itna pyaar karti hein.

she said with mischevious smile.biji glared at her.she laughed.then biji said after a while,

biji- lao.yeh shopper mujhe de do.tum thhak gayi ho naa.

shruti- nahi biji its ok.

biji- arey de do naa.mein utha lon gi.

shruti- aap toh utha len gi lekin phir aap ko kon uthayey ga.

she again joked.

biji- acha.mein tumhein itni bhoori lagti hoon.beta mein abhi bhi iss kabil hoon k khud ko bhi sambhaal sakti hoon aur tumhein bhi.

shruti- i know biji.mein toh mazaak kar rahi thi.aur yeh samaan mein utha lon gi.waisey bhi ghar aaney wala hi hai.

then after walking a while,they reached home.jia was sitting there in front of heater.she was not well so she did not go with them to the market.

shruti- ab tumhari tabiyat kaisi hai?

shruti asked her,sitting next to her in front of heater.

jia- haan.ab theek hoon.

shruti- bohat thand hai aaj.

shruti said while rubbing her hands against each other to warm them.then after a while she got up.

shruti- mein khana bana leti hoon.

jia- haan chalo.

shruti- arey tum betho.tumhari tabiyat theek nahi hai.mein kar lon gi.

jia- nahi.mein theek hoon ab.phir mujhe konsa akeley kaam karna hai.tumhari help kar deti hoon.

then they both went to kitchen,prepared their dinner n then three of them had dinner together.

they just finished dinner n was sitting there in lounge,when suddenly electricity was gone n all around became dark.shruti just hold biji s hand tightly in horror n fear.

biji- kuch nahi hua hai.darro mat.

biji patted her hand.jia went to find candle.there was UPS in house but she needs candle to turn it on because nothing could be seen in whole dark.she did not find candle so she called,

jia- biji mujhe candle nahi mil rahi hai.kahan rakh di.

biji tried to get up to go n find candle but shruti stopped her,

shruti- nahi biji.yahin merey paas hi rahiyey.

biji- arey beta.candle le kar aati hoon naa.

shruti- nahi.please mat jayey.

she said in scary voice.

biji- okk baba nahi jati.tum kyun itna darr rahi ho.kuch nahi hua hai.

biji patted her head.n just then elecricity was back again.the lights turned on.shruti took a deep breath to calm herself.jia also came back.she gave water to shruti.

shruti was always mostly scared by dark.there was also an incident related to this.actually five years ago when her father died by heart attack.she was standing there besides her dieing father s bed,holding his hand.only she was there with her father then.her mom was no more n bro was in US.then suddenly elecricity was gone but it was also back in just a moment.n when it was back,she saw her father s lifeless eyes.he was gone far far away in just that one moment.from then she was living with her grandmother n from then she was scared from dark n lonliness etc.

biji- kya ho jata hai tumhein beta.aisey nahi darrtey hein.light bas jati hai aur phir wapis bhi aa jati hai.iss mein darrney wali kya baat hai.

shruti- mujhe nahi pata biji.chaliyey soney chaltey hein.

she was disturbed now.she needed to sleep.so biji took her to the room then.she was not used to sleep alone.biji have to sleep with her with room s lights on so that she does not became scared.


next day,she was sitting there in lounge watching tv when biji came out from inside the room.

biji- ryan(shruti s bro)ka phone nahi aaya.

shruti- nahi.

shruti said dryly n then again started to look at tv screen.she never liked to talk about her brother.when their father died,he came from US after all the ending rituals of their dad were finished.n he told that he was not getting leave from his job.for him,his job n career was more important than his father.he was always like that,never cared about his family n her little sister after the death of their parents.shruti was really offended with him now.biji also did not said anything again because she knew shruti does not like to talk about this.

in afternoon,biji n jia went to take some household things from market.car was still not repaired.jia was fine now so she went with biji.they were suppossed to came back before evening.because shruti could not live alone at evening or night.but it was getting dark now n biji n jia were still not here.shruti was being worried n scared now.she went inside the room n closed the door n all windows.she was praying for their come back.then suddenly snow fall started.now shruti became more worried,why were they not coming back,are they fine?she was scared when she heard some horron in the porch.she wondered because biji n jia did not go into the car.so who was this in car.she even became more scared but when she saw biji n jia outside from window,then she became relaxed n came out in lounge quickly,

shruti- kahan reh gayey thay aap log.shaam tak aa jane ka kaha tha.itni derr kyun kar di.

then suddenly she noticed biji was walking numbly.

shruti- kya hua?biji aap theek hein naa?

jia- arey kya batayen.raastey mein yeh baraf baari shuroo ho gayi,biji ka paon slip ho gaya.

shruti- what?zyada chot toh nahi aayi naa.kahan lagi hai.

she asked worriedly,sitting near to biji.

biji- arey nahi.zyada nahi lagi hai.woh toh shukar hai humein yeh larka mil gaya raastey mein,hamein yahan takk le aaya gaari mein.

shruti- woh toh theek hai lekin yahan gaari kyun park kar raha hai?

jia- arey.itefaaq se unhe rehne k liye koi jaga chahiye thi.woh ab yahan outhouse mein paying guest bann kar rehney wale hein.

jia told her.she was shocked,

shruti- what?yahan...??

biji- haan.woh yahan outhouse mein rahey ga.

shruti- what r u saying biji??

biji- kyun?kya hua?

shruti- arey aap janti hein nahi woh kon hai,kahan se aaya hai.aisey kaisey kisi ajnabi ko apne ghar mein rakh sakte hein.

biji- arey beta.kuch chehrey dekhtey hi samaj mein aa jata hai k unn pe bharosa kiya ja sakta hai.

shruti- ohh biji.yeh sab sirf kehne ki batein hein.aap bhi...

biji- arey woh aa gaya.

shruti looked at door n there he was standing at the door.he was jerking the snow fallen on his hair.then he looked up.he saw the beautiful girl standing near biji,so he said smiling,

akaash- hi.

he was saying to shruti,but instead of replying,she turned n went to the kitchen.

ATTITUDE......akaash thought in mind n smiled.

biji- akaash beta.aao naa ander.

biji got up to take him inside.

akaash- arey nahi aap bethiyey.aap k paon mein chot aayi hai naa.

he came inside.biji sat down n he also sat there with biji.

shruti went to kitchen.jia was arranging for the dinner there

shruti- yeh biji bhi pata nahi kise utha kar le aayen hein.

jia- acha hai naa.ab wohi yahan aa jaya karen ge.waisey toh yahan koi aata hi nahi hai.

shruti- kya acha hai.kuch jaantey ho tum log uss k barey mein,kon hai,kya karta hai.

jia- haan jaantey hein naa.unho ne bataya k unn ki family canada shift kar chuki hai aur woh yahan law college mein parhtey hein.holidays mein hostel ki building repair karne k liye sab ko hostel chorna para.aur inn k paas rehne ki koi jaga nahi hai ab.toh biji ne unn ko yahan aa kar rehne k liye keh diya.iss mein kya ghalat hai.

shruti was irritated now.

shruti- kuch ghalat nahi hai.ab chalo table pe khana laga den.

jia- haan chalo.


there,akaash said to biji,

akaash- mein outhouse mein chalon phir.

biji- arey beta.khana kha kar jana ab.bas khana tayaar hai.

n then after a while,they all were sitting on the dinning.

biji- kaisa hai khana beta?

akaash- delicious.

biji- shruti ne banaya hai.

akaash looked at her smiling.this time she smiled back.

biji- iss ko khana banane aur plantation ka bohat shoq hai.mein toh iss ko kehti hoon k tum thora aur parh lo,yeh sab toh baad mein hota rahey ga.aur apne bhai k paas US bhi nahi jati hai.mein toh kehti hoon k issey bahar nikalna chahiye,duniya dekhni chahiye lekin yeh sunti hi nahi hai.

shruti was being irritated now.why biji was telling her whole life history to HIM.what he has to do with it.n akaash was fondly listening to biji.

akaash- yeah aap theek keh rahi hein.aap ko really bahar ki duniya ka experience hona chahiye.

he said first sentence to biji n second to shruti.shruti had to smile but she was being irritated in mind.

yeh janaab bhi kuch kum nahi hein.biji ki tarah hi hai. yun mujhe mashvarey de raha hai jaise mujhe saalon se jaanta hai.......she was thinking in mind.




okkkkk guys thats it for now.more in next part.please do comment how is it.
Edited by cool_adeena - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Lovely i loved it
now i am really getting addicted to ur fanfic 😃
wating for next part 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sona.b

Lovely i loved it
now i am really getting addicted to ur fanfic 😃
wating for next part 😳

thanks😛😛😛

i ll just continue😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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here s the next part


PART 2


After the dinner,akaash got up to go to the outhouse. biji asked to come with him but he stopped her,

akaash- no its really ok.aap ko ab araam karna chahiye. i ll go myself.

biji- theek hai beta.

akaash- ok good night then.

akaash went to the outhouse then.

after a while shruti n biji were also in room to sleep. shruti always used to shut all windows before sleeping even if whether is fine.she went to close the windows. when she went to the window facing the outhouse,she saw akaash standing in the balcony of outhouse.akaash lost in some thoughts looked there.he also noticed shruti in the window looking at him.for a moment their glances co-incide with each other.then shruti closed the window n fixed the heavy curtains on them.then she went back to the bed n sat on bed where biji was already sitting.

shruti- logon ko toh bilkul darr nahi lagta hai.

biji- kis ki baat kar rahi ho?

shruti- woh aap ka mr. paying guest aadhi raat ko balcony mein khara hai.

biji- oho.toh kya hua agar balcony mein khara hai toh. ussey koi kha toh nahi jaayey ga.sab tumhari tarah darpok nahi hotey hein.kabhi kabhi toh tum mujhe bohat preshaan kar deti ho,mein soch soch kar preshan hoti hoon k merey baad tumhara kya ho ga.

shruti- oho biji.aap yeh typical bhooron wali batein merey saath mat kiya karen.aap mujhe chor kar kahin nahi jayen gi.

biji- jaana toh sab ko hi hota hai naa beta.

shruti- biji please.

shruti used to became worried at these type of talks.so she stopped biji.

biji- acha baba.hum koi aur baat kartey hein.

shruti- mein toh aap k paying guest ki baat kar rahi thi,aap hi baat ko kahan se kahan le gayi.

biji- uss mr. paying guest ka koi naam bhi hai.

shruti- haan haan jo bhi naam hai.

biji- jo bhi nahi bohat pyaara naam hai uss ka...akaash.

shruti- aap toh uss ki zyada hi fan ho gayi hein.

biji- woh hai hi bohat pyara bacha.uss ki aankhon mein mujhe ek sachayi nazar aati hai.

biji said so shruti rememberred his shining grey eyes. biji was right,there was really something sweet in his eyes worth rememberring.

biji- kya sochne lagi ab?

shruti- kuch nahi biji.

biji- chalo ab so jao.warna subah phir derr tak soti raho gi.

shruti- ok.

then they both went to sleep.

akaash also went inside the room.there,he take out his diary from his shoulder bag.n sat there on writing table n started writing in diary.he was writing...

Aaj mujhe yahan rehney k liye jagah mil gayi.but i m confused.pata nahi mujhe yahan aana chahiyey tha ya nahi.lekin mujhe yahan rehney k liye koi separate jagah nahi mili.isiliye ab mujhe yahin rehna parey ga.m sure yahan mujh par koi shakk nahi karey ga.iss baar mein apna maqsad poora kar k hi rahon ga chahey kuch bhi ho jayey.yeh log bohat achey hein aur isiliye mein soch raha hoon k mujhe yahan nahi aana chahiyey tha.mein kisi ko bhi hurt karna nahi chahta hoon khaas kar k itney achey logon ko.agar mujhe koi separate house mil jata toh bohat acha hota lekin ab toh yahin rehna parey ga aur iss baar mein apna kaam khatam kiye bina peechey nahi haton ga.i hope everything goes well.

n then he stopped writing.he remained sitting there for a while,lost in some thoughts.then he got up from the table,went to his shoulder bag again n this time the thing he take out from the bag was a gun.he remained looking at the gun in his hand.

akaash- mein ussey kisi bhi keemat par zinda nahi choron ga.

he was saying n all the sweetness on his face n innocence in his eyes were vanished.now there was only bitterness on his face n flames in his eyes.then after a while he put the gun in the bed side table drawer n locked it.n then he laid down on the bed,staring at the ceiling.



Next morning,after breakfast shruti came out in the garden n started watering the plants.just then she heard his voice just besides her.

akaash- hi.

shruti- ohh hi.

akaash was looking quiet fresh.his hair was still wet after taking a bath.n his coolness n sweetness were back.no one can say a boy looking so sweet n cool could say anything like what he said last night with so much bitterness n hatred.

akaash- lovely plants.seems like u really take care of them.

shruti- yeah.i love plants.

akaash- wow.lovely roses.can i take one.

shruti- well.mujhe toh lagta hai k phool plants par lagey hue zyada ache lagtey hein.

akaash- really.lekin mujhe toh jo cheez pasand aati hai mera dil chahta hai k ussey saari duniya se chura kar apne paas rakh lon.

shruti smiled,n then said

shruti- ok but just one.

akaash- thank u.

he separated a beautiful flower from the plant n then giving it to shruti,he said

akaash- here it is.take it.

shruti looked at him with a questioning look.so he said,

akaash- i think this flower is pretty but not more than u.

shruti- hmm....flirting?

akaash- flirting aur mein.never.i m serious...actually this is for the new friendship.

shruti- n what makes u think we are friends?

akaash- well if we are not then lets be....i can be a really great friend.

he said extending his hand towards her.shruti looked at him for a moment n then she shake hand with him smiling.

akaash- ab yeh bhi le lo.

he again presented the flower to her.she took it smiling.

akaash- waisey tumne....i mean aap ne...

shruti- tumne is fine.

akaash- see my charm is working.

akaash said mischeiviously in answer.shruti was about to say something when biji came there.

biji- kya batein ho rahi hein subah subah?

akaash- kuch nahi.bas mein inn se...i mean iss se poochney wala tha k mujhe sight seeing par kon le kar jayey ga.mein ne yeh jagah dekhi nahi naa pehley.

he stopped for a moment n then said,

akaash- waisey hum dono ki dosti bhi ho gayi.

biji- acha.yeh toh bohat achi baat hai.toh tum apni dost ko hi le jao naa saath ghoomney k liye.

akaash- good idea.

shruti- arey toh biji phir aap aur jia bhi chaliyey naa saath.

jia also came there.

jia- arey shruti biji k paon mein kal hi chot aayi hai.woh zyada nahi chal sakti.aur mujhe bhi unn ka khyaal rakhney k liye rukna parey ga naa.tum jao naa akaash ke saath.

shruti- mein...

biji- haan haan beta jao naa.waisey bhi tum kahin aati jaati nahi ho.

biji said to her.then said to akaash,

biji- tum iss ko saath le kar jao lekin shaam se pehley pehley wapis aa jana warna kahin iss pagal larki ko kuch ho gaya naa toh...

akaash- arey lekin aisa kya ho jata hai shaam ko?

biji- arey nahi beta.shaam ko kuch alag nahi hota.lekin yeh shruti andherey se bohat darrti hai.

akaash- lekin andherey mein darrney wali kya baat hai.

biji- bas yeh aisi hi hai.

jia asked for something to biji so biji n jia went inside for some work.

akaash- scared of me?

shruti turned to him,

shruti- why would i be scared of YOU?

akaash- toh phir merey saath akeley kyun nahi jaana chahti.

shruti- woh mein...actually mein akeley bore nahi hona chahti.

akaash- yeah?

shruti- haan...mein tayaar ho kar aati hoon.

shruti went inside smiling.while akaash looked at her also smiling.



okk this is it for now.do tell how is it 😊
Edited by cool_adeena - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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cool adeena nice part
i am really enjoying ur Fanfic
once agin thanksss for lovely Fanfic
😃 😳
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Originally posted by: sona.b

cool adeena nice part
i am really enjoying ur Fanfic
once agin thanksss for lovely Fanfic
😃 😳

thanks so much yaar.u regularly comment on my writing.u r really a sweet heart😳i ll continue soon.thanks again😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwwww 😊 hyeee adeena i love reading and all ur FAnfic are just awosome i truely enjoy it ..how well u put all ur imagination into words 😳
one thing is for sure if this LS forum is closed i am gonna miss this forum and also ur FanFic 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank u sooooooo much sona.

n u ll not have to miss my fanfic.here is a fanfiction section present on IF.its on top of main page.we can write fanfic on our favourite serial or favourite characters there even if forum is closed.so dont worry about that.just keep giving me your love n i ll keep writing until i m here.

thank u so much once again n i ll continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Be prepared for some cute AS moments in next part. actually i wud like to give a promo.

Promo...akaash n shruti have come to site seeing.they both are happy n enjoying,roaming about differnt beautiful places.then akaash takes her to chairlift. shruti does not wanna ride on chairlift.she is scared but akaash insists n they went to take a ride on it.as it is started,shruti looked down n became scared n hold akaash s arm with both her hands.akaash looks at her...they both are looking at each other.(this does not seems like ONLY growing friendship.have they started being attracted towards each other)

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