Mi FiRsT FaN_fIc-----YaDeIn...plzz read

hey guys dis is mi 1st fan-fic here goes...

the characters : Ejaz khan: arjun

Iqbal khan: Angad

Neha Bamb: Kripa

Ashka Goradia: Kumud

note: kumud lives across frum kripa.

The beginnin:

It was a dark nd eerie nite. Kumud was sitting in her bed,eyes closed,nd thinkin of all the summers her nd her best friend Kripa spent together. This was another of those summers.....They spent everyday together either makin brownies or juss sittin in sun. Then Angad came in the picture,Kripa's one nd only. He was a nice guy nd very sweet......

It was 2am, Kumud sat in her bed, now eyes open, as the phone rang.....realizing that noone was goin to pick it up she reaches for the reciver

Ku: hello?

Kr: hello Kumud?

Ku: Kripa? tum soyee nahin?

Kr: he's dead kumud.....he's gone!!

Ku: Wat? who's dead? who's gone?

Kr:Angad!!

hope u guys liked it tell me if u want to continue.....

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suspense great starting ejaz is so sexy
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Ku: who's dead whos gone?
Kr: Angad!!
Ku: (her heart fell)wat u mean he's dead?
Kr: woh ghar jaa raha that aur uske car ka accident hogaya!!
Ku: omg....main abhi ayee

Kumud jumps out of her bed grabs her jacket nd runs towards the stairs.she hears a voice frum behind,she cudn't exactly make out the words....kumud tuns around to see her mother....Mrs. Kusum Kapoor

KK: kahan jaa rahee ho
Ku: mom...woh Kripa-
KK: Kripa ke ghar itni raat ko??
Ku: mom plsss woh margaya
KK: Kaun margaya??
Ku: Angad MOM Angad....
There was silence for awhile....

KK: chalo main bhi aati hoon
Ku: no mom....I'll manage
Kusum, Kumuds mom, had a habit of buddin in her daughters life. She wanted to kno wat Kumud was doin 24/7
Kumud didn't like it.....buh like a gud daughter she never sed nethin

Kumud walks across the street to Kripa's house...the door was left open.
Kripa's house. It was like Kumud house.Maya,Kripa's mom was more loose bout her daughter....she didn't stay on Kripa's case like Kumuds mom did.Kripa's dad...God knew where he was...
kumud walks in.........

Ku: Kripa.....Kripa
Kripa, sitti on the kitchen table, gets up nd runs towards Kumud..

Ku: Kripa....aab bas bhi kar...rone se woh vapis tho nahin ajeyga na?

Kr: Paata hain mujhe....lekin kya karoon..bohat pyaar karti thi use na!

Ku:haan jaanti hoon main....
Kumud remebers wen her nd Kripa firs met Angad...He was nice but very quiet...she remebered wen Her.Angad,nd Kripa went to the beach one summer day nd the pic she took of Kripa nd Angad.....the picture she cud never 4get
That pic.....Angad head on Kripa's shoulder, Kripa hands around Angads neck....both smilin......both in love.....

hey is really angad die or is sonething....?

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good suspense going on...continue soon and plz make it longer 👏

It was the day after Angad's death.Everythin luked gloomy nd Quiet....mybe it was cuz of Angads absense,KUMUD THOUGHT,or mayb it was juss another day

9:00 kusum opens kumuds room door

Kk:kumud neeche akar khana khalo
ku: Mann nahin hain mom...woh Kripa..
kk:Kripa dukhee hai tho tum kya bukhee rahogi
ku: mom aaap samag kyon nahun rahee
kk: kya samju main...kai Kripa ki wajah se meri beti bukhi rahe
Ku: mom plssss


Kumud suddenly felt tlike the whole world was against her.....Why was Angads death buggin her sooo much....she gets off her bed

Ku: main kripa ke ghar jaa rahee hoon
Kk: haanhaan jaoo....woh hi tho tumhara ghar hain na..ye tho tumhara ghar hai hi nahin...

After a bit of silence kusum leaves.Kumud gets ready nd goes downstairs. Her mom, her dad, Abhay, nd her brother aryan were sittin on the table eatin breakfast.

Ku: bye dad, bye Aryan, bye.....mom
Ab: kahan jaa rahee ho beta
Ku: kr-
Kk: kripa ke ghar.....aur kahan jayegi ye....
Ku: mom.

with a frustrated face she leaves her house nd walks across to kripa's
Maya, Kripa's mom was leavin to go sumwhere.Kumud sed hi to her nd went inside to comfort kripa

Ku: kripa...(kripa turns round)...phir se ro rahee ho!
Kr: kumud...(she says it witha stern face)
Ku: wut...wut happened..
Kr:(still serious)aaj yahan police ayee thi...
Ku: WAT?!?!?! kyon?

Kr: They sed....Angad ka accident nahin hua tha.......kisne usse mara tha.....

Kumud has no words to say.........there was silence 4 many minutes b4 Kripa sed

Kr: I realli miss him Kumud

Ku: I kno u do....i kno

Kumud, again, started thinkin of Angads nd Kripa's pic....the 1 she had tooken at the beach.....

Ku: everythin will be okay.....I'm here.........

to b continued.....