sangam ff - part 8 (25/06) and note! pg 2

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hey i decided to start a saagar ganga fanfic!! as dere aint dat many in da forum!!! its my first tym so i may not b good!! n im tryin to use hindi coz it sounds beta buh even my hindi aint dat good!! so dere may be a few mistakes!! buh i wud luv for you to leave ur comments and suggestions!! 😃
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heres part 1! sorry for the mistakess

Saagar: ganga! Tum apne apko kyun aise saaza deriyo (why are you giving yourself this punishment)

Ganga: kyun ki mein majboor hu (because im helpless)

Saagar: kaise majboori??? Kaveri ki vajase?? Bolo ganga kya hai yeh majboori (what helplessness? because of kaveri? speak ganga waht it this helplessness?)

Ganga: ha saagar mein kaveri didi ki vaje se majboor hu!! (yes saagar, because of kaveri i am helpless)

Saagar: to ap is majboori se mita do, is majboori ki vaja se tum hamara pyar mitana chati ho, meri sasson ko mitana chati ho, meri zindagi ko mitana chati ho!! (so get rid of this helplessness, because of this helplessness you want to forget our love, you want to get rid of my breaths, you want to get rid of my life)

Ganga: saagar!!! Yeh kaise baate kare ho!! (saagar! why you talkin like this)

Saagar: sach to kare hoon!! Jo tumne mujhse door jaane ki koshish ki to acha nahin hoga!! Mein mar jaonga tere bine!!! Mar jaonga ganga mar jaoonga!! Tum samaj ni koshish kyun nahin karte!! Mein tumhare bina nahin rahe sakhta!! Tumhare bina rehna to namoomkin hain!! (im telling the truth! you trying to go far away from me is not goin to be good! i'll die without you! ill die ganga ill die! why dont u try to understand! i cant live without you! its impossible to live without you!)

Ganga: saagar yeh tum kya kahe rehe ho?? (saagar, what are you saying?)

Saagar: ha ganga!! Jabse mein kundanpur se vapas aaya aur mujhe laga ke tum mar gaye ho to mera jeena mushkil par gaya tha!! Din bhar tere tasveer dekh kar or yaadon se jee ra tha or raat pe tere sapno dekha karta ta!! Aise jee aara hoon (yes ganga! since i come back from kundanpur and thought that you had died my living became so difficult! all day i would look at your photos and think of you to live and in the night i dreamt of you! i have been livin like this)

Ganga: saagar! Tumne mere baare mein socha!! jab tum kundanpur the gaye hue the, tab mein bhi teri yaadon mein jee re the, yeh soch kar bhi ke tumne muhe dokha diya tha, tab bhi mein tumhari baari mein soch thi ayi!! maa mar gayi aur mein akele ho gayi par tab kaveri didi aur khurana uncle tha jo mujko sambala!! To tum batao kya mein kaveri didi se aisa dokha de sakti hoon??? (saagar! did you think about me! when you went from kundanpur, then even i wa living in your memories, even though i though you had betrayed me, i kept thinking about you! when mum died and i was alone it was kaveri and khurana uncle that looked after me! so you tell me can i betray them like this?)Batao saagar!!! …….. aur jab mein yahan pochi tab bhi mein tumhare khayalo mein khoye hui thi!!! Par hum dono anjaan the ke hum itne kareeb thi or pata ni chala!!! Kismat ne aisa khel khila ke taufan baar ta gaya!! Pehle tum London chale ge, phir jab tum vapas are the tab mujhe pata chale key eh sunny jo kaveri didi ka pyar tha, koi aur nahin par mera pyar saagar tha!! Aur mene socha ke mein yahan se door chali jaongi. Tab tum ne apke ankho ko chuke!! Phir madan se chala aiya aur tumko shak hua ke mein ganga thi! mene phir se door chale jaane ke socha!!! ( tell me saagar!!..... and when i came here evern then i was living in your memories! but both of us were unknown that were this close and we didnt even find out! fate played such a game that the storm kept gettin worse! first you wnet to london, and when you were coming back then i found out that the sunny who kaveri loves, is no one else but my love saagar! and i thought i would leave her! then you lost your eyes! then madan come back and you were suspicious that i was ganga! i decided to go far away from here!!)par khurana uncle ne mujhe rauka!!! Aur phir maine shekher ji ko shaadi kari!! Phir se taufan aiyaa aur uksa murder hua!! Tab maine office join karna decision liya, shekherji ka khatil ko pakar ne!! tab kismat ne phir se khel khilya aur humara dil mein ek dosre ko liye nafrat bhar di!! Aur ab hum yahan khare hai, kash hum is more pe hum nahin the!! (but khurana uncle stopped me! and then i married shekhar! again a storm came and he got murdered! then i made a decision to join the office, to catch shekar's killer! then fate played another game and filled hatred in our hearts for each other!! and now were standing ere, if only we were not at this stage!)

Saagar: ganga tumne itna dookh paya aur abhi dookh pana chati ho!! Kyun mitana chati ho humara pyar ko, kyun mujhse door karna chati ho?? (ganga you got all this pain and you still want more pain! why do u want to forget our love, why do u want to make me far from you?)

i kno this is short but i jus want your opinion on whether or not i should continue!! please leave ur coments and suggestions!! thanks
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do continue. its good 👏

thank you ill try to continue soon 😉

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thanks! 😉

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heres part 2!! fank you for all ur comments! #

Saagar: ganga tumne itna dookh paya aur abhi dookh pana chati ho!! Kyun mitana chati ho humara pyar ko, kyun mujhe door karna chati ho?? (ganga you got all this pain and you still want more pain! why do u want to forget our love, why do want to make me go further away?)

Ganga: kyunki pyar ki bhar aur kuch rishte hota hai jo nibhane par te hai!! Isliye mein tumko bhoolna chati ho meri farz ke liye!! (because apart from love their are other important relationships that have to be abided to! thats why i want to forget my love for my repsonsibilities!)

Saagar: par…………
(but)


Ganga: kya mein tumse kuch pooch sakti hoon? (can i ask you something?)

Saagar: kya??
(what?)

Ganga: tumne achanak meri liye kyun itni nafrat karne lage hue the??? Maine kya kiya the ke tum har moke pe mujhe niche dikhana chati the???
(why did u all of a sudden start hating me this much? what did i do that at every opportunity you tried to make me small?)

Saagar: ganga… mein bhi is saawal ka jawab bhi nai janta!! Shayad isliye kyunki maine soocha ke tum ne mujha dokha diya tha shekhar bhaiya ko shaadi kar ke. (ganga.... even i dont know the answer to this question! maybe because i thought that you betrayed me by marrying shekhar bhaiya!)

Ganga: par tum to aisa inzaam laga re the ke tum ne mujhe jaana nahin tha?? Kya mein tumse khatil lagre thi?? kya tumhe laga ke mein yeh itni gihre hui hoon ke mein yeh sab kar sakti thi??
(but you accused me of such things, that you didn't even know me? do i look like a muderer to you? did u think that i could stoop this low and do all these things?)

Saagar: nahin!! Par meri ankho mein pata banda hua tha balbir or papa se!!! mein kya karoon! Mujhe maaf kardo ganga!! Please!!! Im really sorry ganga!!! Mujhe maaf kardo!! (he folds his hands)
(no! but i had blindfolds on my eyes from balbir and dad!! what could i do? please forgive me ganga! please! il really sorry ganga! please forgive me!!)

Ganga: (crying, puts her hands over his) saagar!! please mein samaj sakti hoon tumhara dard!!! (saagar!! please i can understand you pain)

Saagar: (looks at her) jo samaj sakti ho to kyun mujhe ab bhi sazaa deri ho!! Mujhse door jaa ne koshish, humara pyar mitana yh saaza nahin hain to kya hai????
(if you can understand then why you still punishing me! tryin to get away from me, trying to forget our love if this aint punishment then waht is it?)

Ganga: (crying) mujhe nahin pata!! Par tumne mujhe vaada karna parega???
(i don't know! but you have to promise me?)

Saagar: kaise vaada??
(promise what?)

Ganga: tumhari meri kasam ke tum mujhse bhool ne ki koshish karoge??
(for your and my sake you have to try to forget me?)

Saagar: mein yeh vaada nahin kar sakta!! (i cant promise you this?)

Ganga: kyun nahin??
(why not??)

Saagar: kyunki tumhari meri kasam ke jo me yeh vaada pura karoon to kaveri ko tumne pura sach bataana parega!!
(because for your sake and mine if i fulfil this promise then you have to tell kaveri the truth!)

Ganga: nahin saagar!!! kaveri didi ko humara pyar ki kuch baat nahin pata ho sakti..
(no saagar!! kaveri didi cannot find out anything about our love..)

Saagar: to phir mein tumse bhool hi nahin paonga!!! (and walks off)
(so then i cannot forget you!!)



what will happen next?? will ganga finally give in?? tune in and youll find out

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part 3 is ere!

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Ganga: nahin saagar!!! kaveri didi ko humara pyar ki kuch baat nahin pata ho sakti.. (no saagar! kaveri cannot find out anything about our love)

Saagar: to phir mein tumse bhool hi nahin paonga!!! (and walks off) (then even i cannot forget you)

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Ganga: (crying and thinking) ab mein kya karo?? Mujhse yahan se door ja na parega!!! (what do i do now? i am goin to have to go far from here!!)

Ganga: (goes to her room and packs some clothes she is then leaving from the front door)

She opens the door and is about to step outside/

Saagar: kahan ja rahi ho?? (where are you goin?)

Ganga: tumse door, is ghar se door?? Ap mujhse bardash nahin hoga!!! (far from you, far from this house! i cannot tolerate this anymore!)

Saagar: aur gudiya?? Uska kya?? Unhe shekher bhaiya to khoya hai, kya uski maa bhi chunlogi?? (and gudiya? what about her? she has lot shekhar, are you goin to take he rmother aswell?)

Ganga is crying!

Saagar: tum to ho ek shaksh jo voh kitni kareeb hai!! Voh tumse maa samaj ti hai aur tum use chor kar ja rahe ho (you are one person who she is so close to! she thinks of you as her mother and you are going to leave her)

Ganga: (crying) to main kya karo saagar?? tumhare vaje se to main jaari hoon! Mein tumse door nahin jee sakti par mein kaveri didi ko dukh bhi nahin pocha ni chati (so what do i do saagar? i am going because of you! i cannot live far from you but i also cannot let kaveri didi get hurt)

Saagar: kaveri ko to bhulo!! Yeh ghar ka kya hoga jo tum gayi?? Tumko yahan rehna parega ganga!! Nahin to mein tumhara peeche ayonga aur jaroor tumse vapas laonga!! Yeh ghar ko tumhari zarorat hai ganga please nah jao!! Tum jaogi to yeh ghar toot jaayega!! (fortget kavero! what will happen to this house if you go?? you have to stay her ganga! otherwise i will come after you and definately bring you back! this house needs you ganga, please dont go! if you go this hosue will fall apart!)

Ganga still crying moves back n turns around!! She sees saagar!!! saagar takes her bag and walks her back to her room!!! He tucks her into bed!!

Saagar: tum ne jo phir se jaane ki koshish kari to tumhe mere mohot ki kabaar mile ge!! Aur yeh sach hai!! Tumhare bheegar mera jeena sach much muskhil ho jayenga!!! (if you try to go again you will get the news of my death! and this is the truth! without me living would be difficult!)

Ganga: please saagar aise baate mat karo!!! (please saagar dont talk like this)

Saagar: kyun?? Ap hui meri fikaar?? (why? now you care about me?)

Ganga: saagar!!! yeh tum kya kahe rahe ho!! Mein tumse pyar karti hoon, humara pyar sach tha, obviously mein tumhari fikaar karongi!! (saagar! waht are you saying! i love oyu, our love was true, obviously im going to care about you!)

Saagar: to itni zid kyun karahe ho?? Kyun mujhe humara pyaar ne ek naam deno mein rukh ri ho! Kyun mujhe tumhara maang sindoor se bhar ne nahin de ri ho?? Kyun mujhe dooniya se humhara pyaar iqraar karne nahin de ri ho?? (then why are you being so stubborn? why are you stopping me giving our love a name! why wont u let me put sindoor in your maang?? wahy are you not lettin me acknowlege our love to the world??)

Ganga: kyunki duniya mujhe tumari bhabhi samaj ti hai aur tum mera devar!! Kisi ko nahin pata ke humne pyaar kiya hai!! (because the world thinks of me as your sister in law and you my brother-in-law! noone knows that we have loved each other!!)

Saagar: to hum kahe sakte hai?? Kundanpur vaalo humko premi samaje te hai! Me tum aur gudiya va par jaa sakte hai!! Aur humari choti si duniya bana sakte hai? (so we can tell them? the people of kundapur think of us as lovers! me you and gudiya can go over there! and we can create a small little world for ourselves??)

Ganga looked at him with awe)

Ganga: tum kabhi haar nahin manoge kya?? (you are never going to admit defeat are you??)

Saagar: nahin!!! (no!!)

Ganga: par didi ka kya hoga? Shobhd bhaiya ka kya hoga?? Aur rahul mehra??? (but whats going to happen to shanta? waht about shubodh? and rahul mehra??))

thats part 3!! what did ganga mean by that?? has she started fallin in love with rahul mehra?? please leave your comments and i will continue soon~!

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part 4 is up!!

Ganga: tum kabhi haar nahin manoge kya?? (you are never going to accept defeat are you?)

Saagar: nahin!!! (no)

Ganga: par didi ka kya hoga? Shobhd bhaiya ka kya hoga?? Aur rahul mehra??? (but whats going to happen to shanta? whats going to happen to shubodh bhaiya? and rahul mehra?)

Saagar stood still hearing his name!! he had tears in his eyes!! N so much anger in his eyes!!

Saagar: rahul mehra ka kya?? Voh kaun hai humare bich mein ane vaala!!! (waht about rahul mehra? who is he to come between us?)

Ganga: voh bhi mera dost hai?? Voh bhi gudiya se karib hai?? (hes also my friend? he is also close to gudiya?)

Saagar couldn't take it no more!! His eyes were crying n he storms out the room!!


Ganga: (crying) mujhe maaf kardo saagar!! mujhe mr mehra ka naam lena para, isliye ke tum mujhe bhool pao or kaveri didi se shaadi kar sako!! Ab to tumhe lagta hai ke mein use bhi pyar karti hoon!! Im sorry saagar mujhse yeh jhoot bolna para!! Mujhe maaf kardo!! (forgive me saagar! i had to say mr mehras name, so that you could forget me and marry kaveri! now you must be thinking that i also lover him! im sorry saagar i had to say this lie! forgive me!)

In saagar's room

Saagar: ganga mr mehra ki bare mein kyun itni fikaar kar rahi hain!! Kahin to…. Nahin ganga use pyar nahin kar sakte! Abhi abhi to usne kaha ke voh mujhse pyar karti hai!! Par to maine office mein kya dekha ta jab rahul mehra ne usne ghir ne se bachaya!! Aur phir voh ganga se milne hospital aur gaar aya tha or phoool bhi laya tha!! (Saagar had tears in his eyes!! He didn't no what to think no more!!) (why was ganga thinking about mr mehra this much! maybe.... noo ganga cannot love him!! jus now she told me that she loved me! but then waht did i see in the office wen rahul mehra stopped ganga from falling! and then he came to see ganga in the hospital and he also brought flowers!)


The next day!! At breakfast!!

Kanchanji: damadji (to shobhd) mujhe sabzi zaraa paas karna?? (shubodh pass me the vegetables?? (aint sure if thats the correct translation haha)

Subodh: jee kanchanji (and hands it over) (yes kanchanji)

Kanchanji: are jhanvi nahin dekha dari hai?? (are jhanvi cant be seen?)

Shanta: voh subhe subhe Mandir chali gay thi! Abhi une aana chaiye!! (she left early this morning to go to the mandir! she should be coming now!!)

Saagar: (looks worried n thinks) ganga itni der tak kahan hai?? Kahin une bhag ni koshish na kari ho? Na voh mujhe aise dokha nahin de sakti!! (where is ganga for this long? has se tried to run away again? noo she cannot betray me like this!)

Kanchanji: are saagar kahan khoye hue ho??? (are saagar, where are you lost?)

Saagar: kahan nahin! Mein kuch kaam ni baare mein soch ra tha!! (nowhere! i was jus thinking about work!!)

Shanta: are haa mr mehra aya tha kal jab tum aur jhanvi Mandir gaye the!! Usne kuch files aape the aur uspe jhanvi ki sign ki zaroorat hain!! (oh yes, mr mehra came yesterday when you and jhanvi went to the mandir! he gave some file which needed jhanvis sign!)

Saagar: (fuming with anger) haan mein voh files jhanvi se dedonga! Kahan hai voh files?? yes i will give those files to jhnavi! where are those files??)

Shanta: maine jhanvi se files deh chuki hoon!! Shayad voh Mandir ja kar voh files vapas dene ja chuki ho?? (i have already gave this files to jhanvi! maybe after going to the mandir she has gone to give those files back??)

Saagar: (fuming with anger, wipes his mouth and throws the towel on the table) ap mein nikhalta hoon!! Mujhe office mein bot kaam hain!! (and walks off) (ill be leaving now!! i have so much work in the office!)

Kanchanji: (thinking) are use achanak kya hua!! Jhanvi aur rahul mehra ka naam sunte?? Ram ji bhala kare!! Mujhe pata karna hoga ke kya chakar hai!! (wah happened to him all of a sudden! hearing jhanvi and rahul mehras name? ramji bhala kare! i need to find out whats going on!)

In mr mehra's office

Mr mehra: (on the phone) jee ha mein poch jaonga, humari meeting mein abhi 2 ghante baki hai!!! Maa ap chinta mat karo mein subhe tak ghar poch jaonga Mumbai se vaapas aa ke!! Je maa mein aab chalta hoon!! (yess, i will reach there, our meeting is sitll after 2 hours! mother dont worry i will reach home in the eveenin after going to mumbai! okay mum ill leave now!!)

Knock on the door!

Mr mehra: jee come in! (looks up) arre ms bhatiya!! Ab aap kaise hai?? Apni tabiyet kaisi hai?? Aap theek to hai?? (fussing over her) (yes, come in! aree ms bhatiya! how are you now? hows your health? are you okay?

Ganga: jee haan mein theek hoon or tabiyet bhi tikh hai!! Mein tumhe yeh files vaapas aane aiyee thi!! (and hands over the files) (yes im okay and my health is also good! i came to give these files back to you!)

Mr mehra: ohh thank you ms bhatiya!! Mujhe yeh files aaj ki meeting ke liye chaata tha pur tumne taqleef qui li!! Mein tumhare ghar aane valaa tha, yeh files lene ke liye!! (oh thank you ms bhatiya! i needed these files for todays meeting, but why did you take the trouble! i was going to come to your house, to pick up these files!!)

Ganga: its no problem mr mehra!! Mein mandir ke liye nikar gay thi to socha ke files bhi aapko de du!! its no problem mr mehra! i went out to go to the mandir to thought that i would gie thses files to you!!)

Mr mehra: thanks! Aap kuch lengi?? Tea, coffee, thanda?? (thanks!! will you take something? tea, coffee, cold drink??)

Ganga: nahin mr mehra ab mujhe chalna chaiye!! Thank you ke aapne taqleef li yeh files ghar pochane tak! (no mr mehra i need to go now! thank oyu that you took the toruble to get these files to my house!)

Mr mehra: arre yeh koi taqleef nahin thi!! mujhe tumhare liye kuch karne mein koi taqleef nahin parte!! (oh that was no trouble! to do anything for you does not trouble me!!)

thats it for now!! what did mr mehra mean by taht? how does gnaga respond? wahts saagar going to do?? keep readin!! n please leave you comments 😉



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part 5!

RECAP!

Ganga: nahin mr mehra ab mujhe chalna chaiye!! Thank you ke aapne taqleef li yeh files ghar pochane tak! (no mr mehra i should go now! thank you that you took the trouble to get the files to my house!)

Mr mehra: arre yeh koi taqleef nahin thi!! mujhe tumhare liye kuch karne mein koi taqleef nahin parte!! (oh thats no trouble! to do anything for you does not trouble me!! )

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Ganga: sorry! Aap ne kya kaha?? (sorry! what did you say???)

Mr mehra: kuch nahin!! (nothing)

Ganga: (smiles) okay mr mehra ab mein chalti hoon! (okay mr mehra im going now!)

While at the bhatiya office!!

Saagar: (to the receptionist) kya ms bhatiya yahan aayi thi?? (has ms bhatiya come here?)

Receptionist: nahin to!! (no!)

Saagar: thanks

He walks off n goes to his cabin

Saagr: (thinking) ganga kahan chali gay hai?? Mein uska phone try karta hoon!! (where has ganga gone? ill try her phone!)

He picks up his phone and tries dialing!

On the other side ganga sees saagar calling!!

Saagar: (to himself) ganga phone uthao!! Kahan ho tum (ganga pick up the phone!! where are you?)

Ganga ignores the call! Saagar tries again!!

Saagar: (to himself) phone uthao!! (pick up the phone!)

Ganga ignores it again!

Saagar: lagta hain ke voh phone nahin uthaiye gi! Mujhe usko dhoondna parega!! Kahan ho sakti hai voh?? (it look like she wont pick up the phone! i will have to go and look for her! where can she be??)

On the other side Ganga goes to the mandir

Ganga: bhagwan tumko meri madad karni paregi!! Yeh saagar mujhko bhoola ne mein teyar (ready) nahin hain!! (God, you have to help me! saagar is not rady to forget me!~)

Meanwhile saagar had found her and was listening to her!!

Ganga: (continues) mein aisi majboori mein hoon ke mein saagar se to bhool hi nahin paonge, par kaveri didi ke liye mujhe koshish karni paregi!! Bhagwan mein kya karoon? Mein yahan se door bhi nahin jaa sakti kyunki saagar uski jaan le lenga jo mein chali gay!! To mein kya karoon!!! (She falls down in front of the idol crying) (im in this helplessness that i cannot forget saagar but for kaveri i have to try! God what do i do? i cannot even go far from here because saagar will take his life if i go! so waht do i do!!)

Saagar: (thinking) to kal sab natak tha, voh mujhe pyar karti hain sirf mujhe!! (out loud) mujhse shaadi karlo ganga!! ([thinking]so everything yesterday was a drama, she loves me only me!! [out loud] marry me ganga!)

Ganga gets up shocked!!

Saagar: ha ganga! Yeh hi ek raasta bacha hain!! Agar humne shaadi karli to hum ne ek dosre koi bhoolne ki koshish bhi nahin karne parega, hum kush hoge aur hum humara pyar se ek naam de sakte hain (yes ganga! this is the only way left! if you marry me then we do not have to try to forget each other, we will be happy and we can give our love a name!)

Ganga: nahin saagar!! hum shayad kush honge par kaveri didi ka kya!! Aur phir bhi mein rahul mehra se pyar karne lagi hoon!! (no saagar! we may be happy but waht about kaveri! and also i have started to love mr mehra!)

Saagar: (shocked) ab to yeh natak bandh karo!! Maine soon liye tumhari saari baate aur mein yeh jaanta hoon ke tum mujhse pyar karti ho! (atleast stop this drama now! i have listened to everything you said and i know that you love me!)

Ganga: (crying) nahin saagar tumne meri poori baate nahin sooni!! Kyunki tumne yeh nahin soona ke maine rahul mehra se shaadi karne ka faisla liya hai!!
(no saagr you didnt listen to everything i said! because you did not hear that i have decided to marry rahul mehra!!

Saagar: (shocked) kya???? (what??)

that part 5! will ganga marry mr mehra? what will saagar do? will they ever get together?? please leave your comments and now i will only update the fanfic when i have enough comments! its demotivating when so many people read the work and i go to all that trouble but they dont even comment on the work!! 😭

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hey! deres been 100 views n onli 9 comments! please do leave your comments! even if its criticisms please leave comments! 😉 i feel lyk noone is appreciating the work as noone even bothers to leave there opinions!

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part 6

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Ganga: nahin saagar!! hum shayad kush honge par kaveri didi ka kya!! Aur phir bhi mein rahul mehra se pyar karne lagi hoon!! (no saagar!! we may be happy buh awaht about kaveri? and also i have started to love mr mehra!!)

Saagar: (shocked) ab to yeh natak bandh karo!! Maine soon liye tumhari saari baate aur mein yeh jaanta hoon ke tum mujhse pyar karti ho! (atleast stop this drama now! i heard everything you just said and i know that you love me!)

Ganga: (crying) nahin saagar tumne meri poori baate nahin sooni!! Kyunki tumne yeh nahin soona ke maine rahul mehra se shaadi karne ka faisla liya hai!! (no saagr u didnt hear everything i said!) because you didnt hear that i have decided to marry rahul mehra!!)

Saagar: (shocked) kya????
(what??)

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Ganga: hai ye hi ek raaste bacha hai ke tum kaveri didi se shaadi kar sako or mein rahul mehra se!!! ab to tumhe yakeen hoga na ke mein tumse pyar nahin karti!! (yes this is the only way left that you can marry kaveri and i marry rahul mehra!! now oyu must belie
ve that i dont love you!!)

Saagar: karlo uske shaadi par yeh yaad rakhna ke tumne yeh shaadi karo ya na karo mein kaveri se shaadi nahin karonga, kyunki mein uske nahin tumse pyar karta hoon!! Aur ha tumne jo mr mehra ki saath shaadi kari to tumne meri mohot ki kabhar mile gi!! (and walks off) (marry him, but remmber this that whether or not you marry i will not marry kaveri, because i dont love her i lover you! and yes if you marry mr mehra you will get the news of my death!)

Ganga: (crying, turns back to the idol) ab mein kya karoon bhagwan! Haar rasta saagar band karta aara hain!! Mujhe khurana uncle se baat karne paregi!! (now what do i do!! every road, saagar is closing! i need to speak to khurana uncle!)

Ganga dials khurana uncle's number on her phone!!

Ganga: hello??? (hello??)

Khurana uncle: hello, ganga tum kaise ho?? Sab theek to hai na?? (hello, ganga how are oyu? is everything okay??)

Ganga: jee ha, khurana uncle mujhe tumse kuch zaroorat baat karni hai!! (yesss, khurana uncle i need to speak to you about something important!)

Khurana uncle: kya baat hai beta?? Itna pareshaan kyun lagri ho?? (whats the matter child?? wahy do you seem so worried??)

Ganga: uncle kya mein tumko mil kar bata sakti hoon? (uncle can i meet you aand talk to you??)

Khurana uncle: jee haan abh tum kahan ho?? ( yes, where are you now??)

Ganga: mein mandir mein hoon! (i am in the temple!)

Khurana uncle: okay tum vahan mera intazaar karo mein thori der mein poch ta hoon! (okay you wait for me there, ill be dere in a little while!)

Ganga: jee!! Bye!! (okay, bye!!!)

Khurana uncle: bye beta!

Ganga: bhagwan please mujhe takaat do ke mein is taufan se lad (fight) paoo (god, please give me the strength so i can fight this storm)

She sits there in the mandir crying until she waits for khurana uncle

Khurana uncle arrives!! He sees her sitting there next to the idol! He goes up to her and puts her hand on her shoulder!!

Khurana uncle: beta?? (child???)

Ganga: uncle! (uncle!!)

Khurana uncle: kya baat hai?? Kyun roh ri ho?? (whats the matter? why are you crying??)

Ganga: uncle sab ghalat ho ra hai! (uncle, everything is going wrong!)

Khurana uncle: kya matlab? (what do you mean??)

Ganga: saagar mujhse shaadi karna chata hai?? (saagar wants to marry me??)

Khurana uncle: (shocked) kya?? (waht??)

Ganga: hai, accident ki baad usko meri liye pyar vaapas lot kar aya hai!! Aur mein har (every) taq majboor hoon!! Mujhe nahin pata ke mein kya karoon?? (after the accident his love for me has returned! and he has made me helpless in every way! i dont know waht i should do?)

Khurana uncle: mujhe bhi nahin pata beta?? (eveen i dont no waht you shoudl do??)

Someone else is also standing there!!

……..: us se shaadi karlo! (marry him!)

dun dun dun!!!!! who is this person who is telling ganga to marry saagar? isit kaveri, or could it be a house member, or rahul mehra?? keep readin to find out!! please do leave comments!!😉

Edited by bubblez91 - 17 years ago

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