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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Priya
How r u???Iam back after a long time..Its really gud to b here again reading all these superb fictions..
I read your update..It was so gud..😛
Adi Niharika se aise questions poochta hai ki jiska ans Wo de nahin pa rahi..Woh janti hai ki Adi uski zindagi mein judta ja raha hai par wo usse khone ke darr se kuch bol nahin pa rahi.
Adi loves Niharika so much ki wo uske honthon se apne liye mohabbat ka izhaar sunna chahta hai..par Niharika apni sister ki wajah se ikraar karne se darti hai..Usko lagta hai jo Anu ke sath hua kahin uske sath na ho jaye.
ADi ko Niharika se aise answer ki ummeed nahin thi isi liye woh toot gaya hai..
Yeh messages n call kiske the????There is some1 who is very close to Adi,Niha n Sagar...
Yeh to next update mein hi pata chalega!!!!
Khair Niharika ki sister Anu koma se bahar aa gayi..Shayad ab woh Adi ko aur uske pyaar ko samajh sake...Sab log Mumbai jaane ke liye ready hain par kya woh sab phir sath hop paayenge???
Adi n Niha donno hi alag alag reasons ki wajah se khush hai par ander se woh bahut dukhi hain ...😭😭😭
Adi n Niharika dono hi ek dusre se kuch kehna chahte the par dono keh nahin paaye..Unki Aankhein hi baat karti rahi..Shayad yehi ek baat do logon ko paas le aati hai..Woh kuch na keh kar bhi sab kuch keh dete hain..
Adi to Niharika ko hi sab taraf dekh raha hai..Thank God!!!Rajveer ne Adi ko bacha liya warna woh to upar jaane ke liye poori trah ready tha...
Par yeh Rajveer kaun hai???Agar Adi Rajeev khandelwal hai to Rajveer woh kaise ho sakta hai??
AAj ka reply maine hindi mein dene ka try kiya hai..Tumhari tarah itna aacha to nahin likh pati but still..😊😊😊
Next update ka pm kar dena pls..
n do update soon
Bye
Edited by suhana_dixit - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
*Wide-eyed*


Good Lord !!! Theres Two !!!! 😆


Hmm That means Double the Treat !!! 😳 Yummy ! 😆


Okay Lmao ... Loved the Update, But Just can't get Rid of the Fact that Adi really Never confessed WHY??? 😡 Not Really Angry, she Wanted to Use the Emoticon ... 🤣

BTW is Rajveer from Niha's Past ?? 😕 Cause i would hate it if he comes Between our Niha and Adi, although I Love him 😳 Can't you bring our Naina for him 😉 That would be Scary, But Cool!! 😛


Anyways, I'm Happy For Niha .. she's Really Happy about her Sister, Isn't she ? 😃 Oh My GOD !!!! 😲 I just had a Shocking thought is Rajveer related to her Sisters Past, and that's why Niha Doesn't believe in Love Because Mayber Rajveer left her Sister 😕 and After that she had an Accident and Went to Coma ?? Hope Not !!


GREAT Update Once Again 👍🏼

Update Soon and

Take Care 🤗

Yasmin
Edited by iqbal-pallavi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi priti how r u ?
thanx god ki finally tumne ud kar diya
okay now abt the ud
fantastic👏
superb👏
too good👏
excellent👏
mindblowing👏
interesting👏
emotional👏
adi niha se kitna pyaar karta hain par niha uske pyaar ko kab samjegi😭
niha ko aisa nahi bolna chahiye tha ki usse koi farak nahi padta adi ko kitni taklif ho rahi hain😕
kahi adi ko kuch hone toh nahi waala na kyunki uske saath kuch na kuch bura hi ho raha hain😕
par sayad ek umeed ki kiran hain "RAJVEER" ko adi ki problem samaj sake aur madad kar sake😊
waise ye kya hua do- do rajeev hmmm sounds interesting main beshari se intezar kar rahi hoon ki aage kya hoga😃
muje aisa lagta hain niha ko bhi adi se pyaar ho gaya tha par sayad vo samaj nahi paa rahi hain😃
main niha ke leye bhi bahut khush hoon kyunki uske behan anu thik ho gayi 😃
atleast niha ki ek problem toh door hui toh sayad ab vo adi par poori tarah concentrate kar
sake...................😊
plzzzz priti jaldi ud karna dear😡
ab mujse wait nahi hoga😕

love ❤️ 🤗
deepa

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Posted: 16 years ago
Haila double role !!!????😛 ye kya chakkar hai??? khair.... Niha ko Adi ke question ka itna rude answer nahi dena chahiye tha naa... bechara already apne sapne se pareshaan....
Yaar tensed to main bhi hoon.....
Kahi Adi aur Niha ki luv story ka end aisa toh nahi hai naa??
Aur ab yeh double role ne aur tensed kar diya hai...
U kno...Adi mar jaata hai and then Rajveer and Niha....
Aree yaar aisa mat karna plzzz....
Adi aur Niha ko separate mat karna....
Laga toh Rajveer ke liye Naina le aao...(Niha ki double role! Ab niha ki twin sis ussko toh pata nahi hai... toh may b Kumbh ke mele mein bichdi hui!😆)
All in all....superb update !
Bas dnt separate Adi and Niha....
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Posted: 16 years ago
yaar confused ud tha😕...
yeh Rajeev kya double role me hain...???
😕
bt ud was too gud...👏
neha kisi baat se pareshan hai sayad tabhi aise bol rahi hai.
par yeh toh zahir si baat hai ki Adi aur Niha ek dushre k liye kuch khaas feel karte hain...!!!😳
by d way main 'manatated' se bilkul agree karti hun...!!!😆 agar Rajveer k liye kisi ko lana hai toh Naina ko lao...!!! niha ki kumbh mele me bichdi hui behen naina... he...he...he...🤣
cont soon 😊
Edited by srojaleen - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
oye kamaal kar diya yaar....kya updt diya hai....

aur last mein ek surprise...tooooo goood
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Posted: 16 years ago
😭😭😭

Originally posted by: pritib0

PART 23.

Aditya'''aditya''.adi dekhta hai ki niharika uska haath abhi bhi thaame hue khadi hui hai''..aur use upar ki taraf chadne ke liye keh rahi hai''''.

ADI-{chaunk kar}-haan''''ye lo ye mahashe to sapna dekh rahe the vo bhi pahaadi pe chad ke😆😆

NIHA-kya haan main kabse tumhe upar aane ke liye keh rahin hoon, aur tum ho ki kuch sun hi nahin rahe ho, aakhir tumhaara dhyaan kahan par hai haan?dekh jaan booj kar pooch rahi hai jab ki pata bhi ahi isse

ADI-nahin woh actually main''''..

NIHA-kya main haan, pehle tum upar aa jao, baaki ki baatein phir karna''..shukar hai ismein to akal hai

Aur phir aditya niharika ka haath thaam kar rassi ki madad se upar ki taraf chad jaata hai'''''..

NIHA-{aditya ko daante hue}-ab batao mujhe ki aakhir tum kiske khayaalon mein khoye hue the haan, ki tumhe meri awaaz tak sunai nahin de rahi thi'''.kabse main tumhe bulaye hi jaa rahi thi magar tum toh pata nahin ki kaunsi si duniya mein gum the''''

ADI-woh main''''bata bata bata...ki tune to luv ka confession karke ...marne ka bhi plan bana liya tha aur hum sab ko darra diya tha....

NIHA-bas bahut ho chuka, agar tumhe kuch ho jaata toh''''

Aditya chaunkar niharika ki taraf dekhta hai'''..aur phir kehta hai''''.

ADI-toh?to uske paas white suit nhn hai...😆😆😆.

NIHA-{gusse se}-toh, toh ka kya matlab haan, tumse toh baat karna hi bekaar hai'''aur itna kehkar niharika wahan se chali jaati hai''''.ye lo koi izzat hi nhn hai

Aditya niharika ko jaate hue dekhta rehta hai, aur phir kuch der tak wahin khada hua niche khaayi ki taraf dekhta hai''''..haaye haye suicide karne ki to nhn soch raha na😭😭

ADI-{in his mind}-yeh kaisa khwaab tha? Aakhir iska matlab kya tha? Ek taraf milne ki khushi thi, toh doosri taraf judai aur woh bhi aisi'''..mujhe toh kuch bhi samajh mein nahin aa raha hai? kahin mere pyaar ka anjaam aisa toh nahin hoga na''''na na adi aise nhn ho sakta....main hun na...aur agar writer ne aisa socha to main uske kaan kheench dungi😉😉😉

Aur yahi sab sochte-sochte aditya bhi niharika ke piche ho leta hai''''..

After few hours''..

baje aditya apne room se bahar aata hai, aur woh hotel ki baalkani mein tahal raha hai, pareshaan sa uske dimaag mein baar-baar bas subah waala incident hi ghooma jaa raha hai, aur woh apne inhi khayaalon mein khoya hua rehta hai, ki tabhie uske kandhe par koi apna haath rakhta hai, woh chaunkar piche ki taraf turn karta hai, toh niharika ko apne saamne khada hua paata hai, woh ek pal ke liye niharika ki taraf dekhta hai phir apni nazrein jhukha leta hai'''''..ye dekh raat ko bhi peecha kar rahi hai mere adi ka.....

NIHA-aditya tum yahan par kya kar rahe ho? Aur woh bhi itni raat ko'''..

ADI-yeh sawaal toh main bhi tumse kar sakta hoon, ki tum yahan par itni raat ko kya kar rahi ho?dekh kitna intelligent hai😳😳😳

NIHA-main toh paani lene ke liye aayi thi, aur haan yeh mere sawaal ka jawaab nahin hua''..

ADI-oh, toh phir kahan hai?

NIHA-kya?

ADI-paani''''.isko to c.i.d mein hona chahiyetha

NIHA-woh toh main jaa rahin hoon na lene'''''

ADI-ok toh jao''''.

NIHA-kya baat hai adi, jabse humlog trekking se waapas aayein hain, main dekh rahin hoon ki tum kuch pareshaan se ho, tum chaho toh mujhe bata sakte ho, shayad main tumhaari kuch madad kar sakun''''..ye lo ye madad karengi..ek to mera adi itna dukhi hai iski wajah se uppar se ye jale pe namak daal rahi hai😭😭

ADI-nahin aisi koi baat nahin hai'''''

NIHA-baat toh hai adi, magar woh alag baat hai ki tum mujhe batana nahin chahte, shayad tum mujhe is layak hi nahin samajhte ki apne dil ki baat keh sako'''

ADI-yeh tum kaisi baat kar rahi ho niharika, tum toh meri sabse achchi dost ho, aur main tumse apne dil ki baat nahin kahunga toh phir kisse kahunga''.nhnnnnnnnnnnnnnn ye main nhn sun saktiiiiii😭😭😭priti mera dil toot gaya😭😭😭

NIHA-toh phir kaho na ki kya baat hai, kya pareshaani hai?

ADI-{ek pal ke liye kuch sochta hai phir kehta hai}-kya main tumse ek sawaal pooch sakta hoon''''.

NIHA-phir sawaal, thik hai poocho''''.

ADI-{looking intensely in niharika's eyes}-agar kabhie mujhe kuch ho jaaye, toh kya tumhe farak padega?dekh kaise bol raha hai...mujhe to bhuttttttttttt farak padega uska pata nhn

NIHA-{chaunkar }-kya? yeh kaisa sawaal hai aditya?aur tumhe kya hone waal hai haan''''.

ADI-batayo na niharika'''''

NIHA-{gusse se}-mere paas tumhaare in bey sir-pair ke sawaalon ka jawaab nahin hain''''..haaye mere adi se itne gusse se baat kar rahi hai😡😡😡

ADI-iska matlab ki agar main kabhie tumse bahut door bhi chala jaoon toh tumhe koi farak nahin padega hai na kyun''''.?mujhe to bhut farak padega.........😭😭😭

NIHA-{irritate hoar gusse se}-haan, bilkul sahi kaha tumne, mujhe ratti bhar bhi farak nahin padne waala hai''''.😡

ADI-mujhe pata tha''''oh my poor baby!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NIHA-{with same attitude}-tumhe toh sab pata hi rehta hai na, toh phir poochte hi kyun ho?

Niharika ki baat sunkar aditya bina kuch kahe hi wahan se chup-chap apne room mein chala jaata hai, aur niharika chup-chap wahin par khadi rehkar aditya ko jaate hue dekhti rehti hai, aur apne mann mein sochti hai''''..haaye mera adi dukhi ho kar chala gaya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

NIHA-{very emotionally with tears in her eyes}-haan mujhe farak nahin padta, bhala mujhe kyun farak padega, tumhaare door jaane se'''''.gandi baccchi

ADI-{pleased with surprise}-"NIHARIKA"'''''..issse har jagha niharika hi dikhaayi deti hai....hey bhagwaan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

, doosri taraf se woh car aditya se takraane hi waali hoti hai, ki tabhie koi aakar achanak se aditya ka haath pakadkar use apni taraf khinchta hai, aur dono ek saath roll karte hue road ke side par jaakar girte hain, aditya chaunkar uski taraf dekhta hai, aur uske muh se yeh naam nikalta hai''''.

"RAJVEER"-(played by Rajeev khandelwal)'''''.ye sabse bada shock tha surprize tha mujhe abhi tak samjh nhn paa rahi hun....bas itna keh sakti hun ki jaldi update karo....i cant wait.....plzzzzzzzzzz zyada time mat lagana.....ab to mujhe adi aur raj dono ka intzaaar hai😳

END OF PART 23.PLZZZ DO COMMENT'''''..

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Wow double part. Aditya n Rajveer. Confusion ka naam sun kar hi pata chal gaya. Glad dat Raj waqt par pohoch kar Adi ko khich liya warna main to chikhne wali thi. But I hope Raj ko kuch na ho. At least kuch parts tak double treat milna chahiye. DOUBLE TREAT WHAT SAY, ADI AND RAJ TOGETHER WILL ROCK THIS FF, HMMM QUITE INTELLIGENT I MUST SAY, YA-YA MAIN NA HI ADI KO KUCH KAR SAKTI HOON, AUR NA HI RAJ KO I LOVE BOTH OF THEM, YA SURE DEAR TUMHE DOUBLE TREAT ZAROOR MILEGA...........BAS AISE HI MERA FF PADHTI RAHO, I AM SURE TUMHE RAJ SE BHI UTAN HI PYAAR HO JAAYEGA JITNA KI ADI SE HAI............

Btw, I'm happy it was all a dream but I'm really tensed abt Adi's dream. I think Raj n Anu can be related (a wired guess.....lol). Anyways, Niharika ko Adi k sawal ka aisa jawab nahi dena chahiye tha. Bechara kitna pareshan tha aise hi aur usne aur bhi dukhi kar diya tha. I KNOW DEAR KABHIE-KABHIE LIFE MEIN AISE-AISE SITUATIONS AUR CIRCUMSTANCES AA JAATE HAIN, JAB HUMAARE HAATH MEIN KUCH BHI NAHIN HOTA HAI, BUT I TOO HOPE KI SAB KUCH JALD HI NORMAL HO JAAYE.........

Anyways, main bahut zyada excited hu age kya hota hai ye janne k liye. Pls try to continue soon n Thnx 4 the PM. MAIN BHI AAGE LIKHNE KE LIYE BAHUT ZYAADA EXCITED HOON, YA DEAR I WILL TRY TO UD ASAP, AND YOU ARE MOST WELCOME..............

THANX A LOT FOR YOUR LOVELY COMMENTS SWEETY.........I AM GLAD...........
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

oye kamaal kar diya yaar....kya updt diya hai....

aur last mein ek surprise...tooooo goood

OYE THANKY YAAR ITNA SONA COMMENT KARNE KE LIYE........
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hello Preeti,
Ud was asusual good but yaar kuch aage bhi badhaoo Niha aur Adi ki story. Abhi tak vahin par atke hue hain dono na jaane aage kab badhenge? Double roal me Rajeev? Vow g8.

ud was nice.
continue soon.

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