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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!

Adi toh Niharika ko ek pati ki tarah daat raha hai!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Aur ush admi ko lagta hai ke inki nayi nayi shaadi huyi hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Adi bhi kuch kam nahi hai kehta hai ke abhi abhi huyi hai!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Niharika toh shock ho jaati hai har baat se!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›

Adi kehta hai ab ek pyaari si muskaan do darling!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Niharika toh usse ghoor kar dekh rahi hai!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑

Adi toh usse flirt kar raha hai aur kehta hai ke usse uske gusse par bhi pyaar aata hai aur gusse mein woh aur bhi zyada khubsoorat lagne lagti hai!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Adi is so naughty!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Woh aadmi toh Adi ki tareef karta hai aur kehta hai ki woh prarthna karega ke dono hamesha aise hi saath rahe aur khush rahe!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›How nice!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Adi is again teasing her!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†He said ke Niharika bina kahe uske mann ki baat jaan leti hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Niharika said ke woh nahi samjhegi toh kaun samjhega and calls him janu!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣Ab toh Adi gaya!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

I loved Adi's dialogue ke ab ish janu ki jaan khatre mein padhne waali hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Adi bhaagta hai aur Niharika uske peeche peeche usse marti huye!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†This is too funny!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Pooja kehti hai kahi woh phir se jungle mein gum toh nahi ho gaye!!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Sab dekhke sochne lag gaye ke woh bhaag kyun rahe hai!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†But only Kiran noticed ke kya ho raha tha aur kaha tum sab duffers ke duffers hi rahoge!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Adi kehta hai bacche ki jaan logi kya toh Niharika kehti hai aaj yeh bhi karegi!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Niharika ne jo purse maari Adi ko woh Pooja ko lag gayi!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

P.T.Usha and Khali..................hilarious!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Sab jab puchte hai tab Niharika bata nahi paati hai!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊

Adi is teasing Niharika aur bechari bata hi nahi paati hai ke kya tha!!!!!!

Ab sab Adi ke saath milkar Niharika ko tease kar rahe hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Adi jaane se pehle Niharika ki taraf halke se muskuraya!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Bechara Adi!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Ek toh itne bags utha nahi paa raha tha upar se sab has rahe thhe uspe!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Niharika Adi ki madad karne aa gayi!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› So sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Shahrukh ka dialogue bola Om Shanti Om ka Niharika ne!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Niharika usse Mr.Malhotra bulati hai toh Adi bhi usse Mrs.Malhotra bulata hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳How naughty!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Chalo kam se kam ish baar Niharika hasi toh!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Nihal and Kiran are so romantic and they are going to get engaged on Valentine's day!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Pooja Raahil ko unromantic kehti hai toh woh uske dil mein jo hai uski tareef karta hi rehta hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊

Pooja uthke chali gayi toh kaha ki usse beech beech mein ish tarah ke daure padhte rehte hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣

Niharika Adi se naraz nahi hai aur yahan chance pakar Nihal aur Kiran ek dusre mein khoye huye hai!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Yeh Avni Shergill kaun hai??😊 😊 😊


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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!THANX A LOT SWEETY

Adi toh Niharika ko ek pati ki tarah daat raha hai!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳HAAN SO TOH HAI,AAKHIR AAGE JAAKAR USE YAHI TOH KARNA HI HAI KYUN

Aur ush admi ko lagta hai ke inki nayi nayi shaadi huyi hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊HAAN,HAHAHA

Adi bhi kuch kam nahi hai kehta hai ke abhi abhi huyi hai!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†HAAN, SACH MEIN ADI IS REALLY NAUGHTY, BUT CUTE.

Niharika toh shock ho jaati hai har baat se!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›HAAN ZOR KA JHATKA ZOR SE HAHAHA

Adi kehta hai ab ek pyaari si muskaan do darling!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›Niharika toh usse ghoor kar dekh rahi hai!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 JAB ITNE PYAAR SE MAANG RAHA THA TOH DE DENI CHAHYIYE THI KYUN.

Adi toh usse flirt kar raha hai aur kehta hai ke usse uske gusse par bhi pyaar aata hai aur gusse mein woh aur bhi zyada khubsoorat lagne lagti hai!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ HAAN ABSOLUTELY CORRECT.

Adi is so naughty!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†YES HE IS SWEETY.THAT MAKES HIM A SWEET HEART NA.

Woh aadmi toh Adi ki tareef karta hai aur kehta hai ki woh prarthna karega ke dono hamesha aise hi saath rahe aur khush rahe!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›How nice!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊MERI BHI YAHI DUA HAI.

Adi is again teasing her!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†He said ke Niharika bina kahe uske mann ki baat jaan leti hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†YA PYAAR HO TOH AISA, WAAH KYA PYAAR HAI.

Niharika said ke woh nahi samjhegi toh kaun samjhega and calls him janu!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣Ab toh Adi gaya!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣WOH BHI EK HI SHORT MEIN.

I loved Adi's dialogue ke ab ish janu ki jaan khatre mein padhne waali hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣EVEN ME TOO.

Adi bhaagta hai aur Niharika uske peeche peeche usse marti huye!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†This is too funny!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣YES IT IS HAHAHA.

Pooja kehti hai kahi woh phir se jungle mein gum toh nahi ho gaye!!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣POOJA THODI SI CRACK HAI NA.HAHAHAHA.

Sab dekhke sochne lag gaye ke woh bhaag kyun rahe hai!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†But only Kiran noticed ke kya ho raha tha aur kaha tum sab duffers ke duffers hi rahoge!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†ABSOLUTELY RIGHT.

Adi kehta hai bacche ki jaan logi kya toh Niharika kehti hai aaj yeh bhi karegi!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 HAAN HAHAHAHA.

Niharika ne jo purse maari Adi ko woh Pooja ko lag gayi!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†AUR KYA LAGI HAHAHAHA

P.T.Usha and Khali..................hilarious!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣HAHAHAHAHA.

Sab jab puchte hai tab Niharika bata nahi paati hai!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊HAAN.

Adi is teasing Niharika aur bechari bata hi nahi paati hai ke kya tha!!!!!! BOLTI BANDH.

Ab sab Adi ke saath milkar Niharika ko tease kar rahe hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†YA AB YEH MAUKA BAAR-BAAR THODE HI NA MILTA HAI KYUN.

Adi jaane se pehle Niharika ki taraf halke se muskuraya!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳HMMM JUST WOW.

Bechara Adi!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Ek toh itne bags utha nahi paa raha tha upar se sab has rahe thhe uspe!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”YA THAT'S REALLY SAD.

Niharika Adi ki madad karne aa gayi!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› So sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊VERY SWEET.

Shahrukh ka dialogue bola Om Shanti Om ka Niharika ne!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊HAAN.

Niharika usse Mr.Malhotra bulati hai toh Adi bhi usse Mrs.Malhotra bulata hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳How naughty!!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰YA HAHAHAH.

Chalo kam se kam ish baar Niharika hasi toh!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊SAHI KAHA.

Nihal and Kiran are so romantic and they are going to get engaged on Valentine's day!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 YES THEY ARE.

Pooja Raahil ko unromantic kehti hai toh woh uske dil mein jo hai uski tareef karta hi rehta hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊HAAN.

Pooja uthke chali gayi toh kaha ki usse beech beech mein ish tarah ke daure padhte rehte hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣 🀣 🀣 🀣YA VERY FUNNY HAHAHAHA.

Niharika Adi se naraz nahi hai aur yahan chance pakar Nihal aur Kiran ek dusre mein khoye huye hai!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳HAAN.

Yeh Avni Shergill kaun hai??😊 😊 😊NEXT PART MEIN PATA CHALEGA DEAR.


WITH LOTS OF LOVE, PRITI.
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Posted: 16 years ago

PART 18

KIR-(smile karte hue)-avni, tum yahan, what a pleasant surprise………..

AVNI-(smile karte hue)-pleasant surprise toh mere liye hai, tum yahan par kya kar rahi ho kiran?

KIR-main, toh yahan par mere college ki taraf se, tour par aayi hoon…………aur tum?

AVNI-main bhi yahan par apne friends ke saath chill out karne ke liye aayi hoon.

KIR-wow!that's gr8, tum khadi kyun ho, have a seat………….

AVNI-thanx…………by the way, who is this handsome guy?

KIR-(smile karte hue)-he is nihal……………

NIH-(shaking hands with avni)-hii, aur inka hone waala husband bhi…………..

AVNI-(smile karte hue)-halo!nice to meet u nihal, wow kiran toh tu finally shaadi kar rahi hai haan, congratulations.

KIR-haan,lekin shaadi hum log, Mumbai jaakar karenge, philhaal yahan par engagement kar rahein hain.

AVNI-(apni khushi zaahir karte hue)-wow!waise bahut sahi jagah chuni hai, tum dono engaged hone ke liye, I must say that………toh, kab hai engagement?

AVNI-what?yaani ki valentines day ke din, kya baat hai yaar,isse achchi toh aur koi baat ho hi nahin sakti, aur isse haseen aur khubsoorat din nahin ho sakta hai, do dilon ke Milan ka……………hmmm………….toh mujhe invitation milegi ya nahin…………

KIR-ofcourse avni, yeh bhi koi poochne waali baat hai,ur most welcome sweety…………….

AVNI-well, agar tum invite nahin bhi karti, toh bhi main zaroor aati…………….hahahaha……………..

NIH-are bhai, koi is bande par bhi toh zara sa dhyan do……………tum ladkiyon bas ek hi prob. Hai, koi saheli mil gayi toh, phir bas usse hi chattar-pattar karne mein jut jaati hain, aas-paas ki toh koi khair-khabar hi nahin rehti hai………

KIR-ab itne saalo baad mili hai, toh obviously dher saari chattar pattar toh hona lazmi hi hai, kyun avni.

AVNI-(smile karte hue)-haan,bilkul sahi kaha tumne kiran.

NIH-ok baba tum dodo araam se dher saari chattar pattar karo, main toh chala…………..

KIR-chala matlab……………?

NIH-chala matlab chala, aur kya……………

KIR-haan mujhe pata hai, magar kahan………….?

NIH-oh God kiran, tum bhi na sawaal bahut karti ho………….

KIR-ab main nahin karungi, toh aur kaun karegi, haan……………

AVNI-bilkul sahi kaha tumne…………….

NIH-bas isi ki kami baaki reh gayi thi………………….

KIR & AVNI-(ek saath hanste hue)-hahahahahaha…………………..

NIH-are baba, thoda sa bahar jaa raha hoon………………aur kahan jayunga……………ab jaane ki ijaazat hai?

KIR-(smile karte hue)-haan……………….

NIH-(to himself)-kaash yahan par adi hota, toh indono ki bolti bandh kar deta……………..

Aur itna sochkar nihal wahan se chala jaata hai

KIR-kya baat hai, avni , kuch hua hai kya?

AVNI-tujhe kaise pata chala……………

KIR-oh!common avni, main teri dost hoon, tere mann ka haal, toh main teri aankhon se hi padh kar samajh sakti hoon…………………

AVNI-kuch khaas nahin hua hai yaar, bas aaj subah se hi mera mood thoda sa off hai bas…………….

KIR-magar kyun………….?

AVNI-sab kuch us ladke ki wajah se hua hai…………..

KIR-kaun sa ladka………………..?aur hua kya hai…………….?

AVNI-actually mujhe yeh kehna chahyiye ki, mera mood undono ki wajah se kharaab hua hai………

KIR-kaun dono…………?abhi toh sirf ek ladka tha naa…………..tu mujhe saaf-saaf batayegi ki mamla kya hai?

AVNI-mamla yeh hai ki………………………

Cut to aditya and niharika, jo ki car mein samaan rakhwaakar wapas aa rahein hain…………….

ADI-waise main tumhe ek baat ki daad doonga…………….

NIHA-kis baat ki………………?

ADI-tumne us nakchadi aur ghamandi ladki ki bahut hi achchi tarah se khabar le hai,ab kam se kam dobara, woh tumhara saamna karne se pehle ek baar toh zaroor sochegi……………

NIHA-ek baar nahin sau baar……………

Cut to the restaurant…………….

KIR-what……………..?

AVNI-lekin maine bhi kasam khaayi hai, ki main bhi undono ko chodungi nahin……………unhe ab tak is baat ka andaaza bhi nahin hai, ki avni shergill, kis bala ka naam hai…………….un dono ne mujhse panga liya hai………………mujhse………………….

Cut to aditya and niharika………….

ADI-waise ab tak toh us nakchadi ki akal thikaane par aa gayi hogi kyun………….?

NIHA-haan, warna hum dono kis liye hain………………hahahaha………….

ADI-(smile karte hue)-haan, so toh hai, ab tak toh use is baat ka andaaza ho hi gaya hoga, ki usne hum dono se ulajh lekar kitni badi galti ki hai……………kyun?

NIHA-obviously,but I wish ki phir se mujhe us ladki ki shakal na dekhni pade…………..aur waise bhi main use bhul chuki hoon……………..lekin lagta hai ki tumhe uski bahut yaad sata rahi hai…………….kyun?

ADI-(in a flirtatious manner)-hmmm………….zyaada nahin bas thodi-thodi, kyun tumhe jalan ho rahi hai kya?

NIHA-bhala mujhe kyun jalan hogi………….it's ur life tum chahe job hi karo, jiske bare mein bhi socho,mujhe koi farak nahin padta hai………………….

Yeh kehkar niharika aage ki taraf jaane lagti hai, ki aditya uska haath pakad leta hai,yeh dekhkar niharika gusse se aditya ki taraf turn karti hai,niharika ki ankhon mein jahan gussa aur jalan saaf-saaf nazar aa rahi hai, wahin doosri taraf aditya ki nazrein shararat aur pyaar se bhari hui hain,dono ek doosre ki taraf dekhen jaa rahein hain,aur aditya halke se muskuraate hue niharika ke kareeb aata hai, aur usse dheere se kehta hai…

ADI-(in a whispering sound)-tumhe farak padta hai………………..

Aur itna kehkar aditya sharat bhare andaz se muskuraate hue,aage ki taraf bhad jaata hai, aur niharika apni palkein niche jhukha leti hai,woh aditya ki taraf turn karke use dekhti hai,aur halke se muskuraati hai, aur phir woh bhi aage bhad jaati hai…………………

Cut to the restaurant……………..

KIR-ab chal chod bhi undono ko,jaane de, jo ho gaya-so ho gaya, ab bhul bhi jaa us baat ko,apna mood thik kar,aur waise bhi Kashmir in khubsoorat aur haseen vadiyon mein bhi koi udaas ho sakta hai bhala……………

AVNI-thik hai sirf tere liye main apna mood kharaab nahin karungi, unke baare mein sochkar, lekin agar woh dono phir se mere saamne aaye na, toh I promise ki I will not leave them,rather I would kill them, phir chahe is ke liye mujhe phansi hi kyun na ho jaaye………………

KIR-achcha meri maa ab bas kar…………..tu na ekdum nahin badli, bilkul waise ki waise hi hai…………….

AVNI-(with arrogance and full of attitude)-haan, aur humesha aisi hi rahungi,kisi ke bhi liye nahin badlungi……………

KIR-aur agar teri zindagi mein koi aisa aa jaaye jo ki tujhe poori tarah se badalne mein majboor karde toh…………..

AVNI-(muh banate hue)-never, kabhie nahin…………

KIR-kyun……………?

AVNI-(with attitude)-kyunki aisa koi shaqs hai hi nahin, is poori duniya mein jo ki mujhe badal sake…………..

Cut to aditya and niharika………..

ADI-(smile karte hue)-main hoon na……………..

NIHA-mujhe pata hai, magar phir bhi itni saari tyayaariyan hum ek din mein poori kaise karenge?

ADI-tum itna tension kyun leh rahi ho, sab kuch ek dum sahi waqt par ho jaayega , so just chill yaar, aur tension ko goli maar………aur zyaada socho mat, bas in khubsoorat palon ko jee bhar ke jeeyo……………ekdum bindaas hokar, jaise ki main jeer raha hoon…………

NIHA-(smile karte hue,aur softly)-ek baat poochon tumse?

ADI-(smile karte hue)-ek kyun, dus poochon, ab itne pyaar se poochogi, toh bhala main inkaar kaise kar sakta hoon…………

NIHA-(smile karte hue)-tum zindagi ko bahut khul ke jeete ho na, bilkul be fikar hokar, aur kitni aasaani se apne dil ki baat ko keh dete ho, bina hichkichate hue,tumhe dekhkar aisa lagta hai ki jaise yeh zindagi tumhare liye ek khubsoorat khwab ki tarah hai, jise ki tum jii bhar kar jee lena chahate ho, ek aisa safar jo ki tumhare nazariye se sirf aur sirf khushiyon ki saugat se bhari hui hai………….hain na……………

Niharika ki baaton ko sunkar aditya use ek pal ke liye ek tak dekhta hi rehta hai……….aur phir kuch der baad kehta hai…………

ADI-(smile karte hue)-mujhe nahin pata tha, ki tum philosopher bhi ho, waise tumne jo bhi kaha, bilkul sahi kaha, main isiliye itna khush rehta hoon, kyunki, maine apni zindagi khud chuni hai, khud ko zindagi ke hawale nahin choda hai,balki mera toh yeh manna hai ki, insaan apni kismet aur apni khushiyon ka faisla khud karta hai, aur yeh uspar hi nirbhar hota hai ki woh kise chunta hai………………………mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki kuch zyaada hi ho gaya hai……………niharika tumhare chakkar mein na main bhi ghanchakkar ho jaunga…………………………

NIHA-tumhari dictionary mein serious naam ka koi word hai bhi ya nahin………………..

ADI-(ek minute sochkar)-hmmm………..nahin…………….aur nahin kabhie hoga……………….

NIHA-ab chalein……………

ADI-chal hi toh raha hoon,ab kya marathon ki race lagaun………….

Cut to the restaurant

AVNI-ok kiran, now I have to leave, see u soon, at ur engagement…………….

KIR-ya, ab agli mulaqaat valentines day ke din hogi…………see u too………………bye and take care……………….

AVNI-bye……………………

Aur itna kehkar avni jaise hi bahar nikalti hai, ki doosri taraf se aditya aur niharika restaurant ke andar entry lete hain……..

KIR-hey………..tum dono aa gaye…………agar thodi aur jaldi aate, toh aur bhi achcha hota……………

ADI-kyun achcha hota……………..?

KIR-kyunki…………………

Magar isse pehle ki kiran apni baat ko poori kar paati ki……….sagar, nihal, pooja aur rahil…………..wahan par aate hain……………….aur phir sab log kuch hi der mein lunch karke wahan se hotel ki taraf ravana ho jaate hain…………………sham ho chuki hai, aur sab log apne-apne room mein araam farma rahein hain……………..

In niharika's room, jahan par niharika baithi hui hai, aur ek kitaab padh rahi hai, ki tabhie uska mobile ring hota hai…......aur niharika apna mobile search karne lagti hai,aur use apna mobile uske purse ke andar milta hai,magar isse pehle ki niharika call ko receive kar paati ki phone cut ho jaata hai, aur woh apna mobile apne purse se nikaalne lagti hai ki tabhie use apne purse mein ek chota sa gift milta hai, aur woh us gift ko nikaal kar dekhti hai, aur apne mann mein sochti hai…….

NIHA-(to herself)-yeh kya hai…………?yeh toh koi tohfa lag raha hai,magar yeh mere bag mein kaise aaya…………..?

Itna sochkar niharika, us gift ke rapper ko dheere-dheere kholti hai, aur use uske andar ek lamba sa box milta hai, woh halke se us box ko open karti hai, aur uske andar use ek sone ki payal milti hai…………niharika us payal ko apne haathon mein leti hai……….aur ektak use niharti rehti hai…………….

NIHA-payal, woh bhi sirf ek, doosra kahan hai…………..?ismein toh nahin hai………….yeh kya hai……………?

Niharika dekhti hai ki us box ke cover ke niche ek chit hai, woh use nikaalti hai…………..aur kholkar padhne lagti hai…………..

NIHA-(chit ko padhte hue)-yeh aapke liye……………magar iske doosre jode ke liye aapko thoda sa intezaar aur karna padega,………..aapka secret admirer…………………….yeh kaun hai………?jo bhi hai, bahut ajeeb hai……………….aur itna kehkar niharika, us gift ko wapas apne purse mein rakh leti hai…….aur dobara se apni novel mein ghus jaati hai…………..magar uska saara dhyan us payal par hi laga rehta hai………………..aur woh baar-baar us payal ko bahar nikaalti hai, aur andar rakhti hai,aur apne mann mein sochti rehti hai……………

NIHA-(payal ke saath-saath us chit ko bhi dekhte hue)-secret admirer, aakhir yeh hai kaun,aur ise kaise pata chala ki mujhe payal bahut pasand hai,kaun ho sakta hai yeh secret admirer…………..?kaise pata lagaun………?kaise………?

Yehi sab sochte-sochte, niharika so jaati hai…………………

Cut to aditya, jo ki hotel ke verandah mein kisi se mobile par baat kar raha hota hai, aur kuch der baad, apne room ki taraf ravana ho jaata hai, woh apne room mein enter karta hai, aur light on karta hai, tabhie uska pair ek lifafe ke upar padta hai, woh niche jhukkar us lifafe ko uthata hai, magar uske upar kisi ka bhi naam nahin likha rehta hai, bas upar ki taraf confidential likha hua rehta hai, aditya us lifafe ko dheere-dheere kholta hai, toh uske andar use ek khat milta hai, woh us chitti ko nikaal kar padhne lagta hai , aur jaise-jaise aditya us khat padhta jaata hai, uske chehre ke expressions badalte rehte hain, jahan woh kuch der pehle tak khush rehta hai, achanak uski saari khushi aur chamak uske chehre se dheere-dheere gayab ho jaati hai, aur woh gehri soch mein doob jaata hai, aur apne bed par baith jaata hai, kuch der baad woh us khat ko lifafe mein wapas rakh deta hai, aur us lifafe ko apni kitaab mein rakh deta hai, lekin baar-baar uska dhyan us khat ke likhe hue aksharon par hi jaa raha hota hai,yahi sab sochte-sochte, use neend aa jaati hai, aur woh so jaata hai………………….

Next morning…………..

sab log nihal aur kiran ki engagement ki tyayaariyon mein jute hue hain,kyunki next din valentines day hai, aur saath hi mein dono ki sagai bhi, doosri taraf hotel ke management ki taraf se bhi valentines day ki dher saari tyayaariyan zoro-shoro se chal rahin hain, hotel ka saara mahoal khushnuma sa ho gaya hai, aur saare hi log kaafi excited hain, charon taraf khushiyan aur dher saari hulchul ho rahi hai, magar aditya aur niharika ke chehre par khushi se zyaada tension aur pareshaani saaf nazar aa rahi hai, halaki dono hi tyayaariyon mein haath bata rahein hain, magar phir bhi, unka dhyan kahin aur hi hai, jahan niharika ke dimaag mein us payal ko lekar tension chal rahi hai, wahin doosri taraf aditya ke dimaag mein us khat ko lekar, dono hi apni-apni soch mein khoye hue hain, aur alag-alag apni pareshaani se jujh rahein hain, upar se dono kisi se kuch keh bhi nahin paa rahein hain, so alag, bas dono andar hi andar apni pareshaaniyon se lad rahein hain, aur isi beech saari tyayaariyan bhi poori ho jaati hain, aur sab log lunch karne ke liye hotel ke restaurant ki taraf ravana hote hain……..

next scene in the restaurant………………

jahan par sab log lunch kar rahein hain,ki tabhie pooja bolti hai……………….

POO-aaj sab log itne chup-chup, kyun hai, koi kuch bol kyun nahin raha hai, lagta hai ki jaise mano aaj na bolne ki kasam khaayi hai sabne, ya phir kahin aaj maun divas toh nahin celebrate kiya jaa raha hai, ab koi kuch bolega bhi ya nahin, ya phir aaj sirf main hi bolti rahungi……………..

RS-jab tum kisi ko bolne ka mauka, dogi, tab na koi kuch bolega, bas tab se boli hi jaa rahi ho, boli hi jaa rahi ho, are yaar kam se kam thoda sa semicolon toh lagau apne sentence mein………………….

Rahil ki baat sunkar sab log hansne lagte hain, magar aditya aur niharika, unsab ke saath hote hue bhi nahin the, muskuraa toh rahein the, magar khul kar nahin, kuch der baad sab log lunch finish karke bahar tahalne ke liye nikalte hain, kiran aur nihal ek saath, pooja aur rahil ek saath, aur sagar apne room mein rest karne ke liye chala jaata hai, bas aditya aur niharika hi restaurant mein akele baithe hue rehte hain, woh bhi ek dum chup-chap,niharika ki saari soch us payal aur uske bhejne waale secret admirer par lagi hui hai, aur use is baat ka zara sa bhi dhyan nahin hai ki, aditya uski taraf dekh raha hai, uski aankhon mein dher saare sawaal ghoom rahein hain,achanak se aditya wahi safed lifafa apni jeb se nikaalta hai, aur niharika ke saamne rakh deta hai, yeh dekhkar niharika chaunk kar aditya ki taraf dekhti hai, aur aditya use ishaare se us lifafe ko kholkar padhne ko kehta hai, pehle toh niharika kuch samajh nahin paati hai, lekin jab uski nazar us lifafe par padti hai, tab use sab kuch samajh mein aa jaata hai, aur woh fauran us lifafe ko kholti hai, aur usmein rakhi hui chitti ko padhne lagti hai……………aur padhte-padhte uski aankhen bhar aati hain, aur woh restaurant se rote-rote bahar nikal jaati hai, yeh dekhkar aditya bhi fauran uthkar niharika ke piche jaata hai,niharika bhaagte-bhaagte hotel ke bahar lawn mein pahunchti hai, aur wahin par niche zameen par apne ghutne tek kar zor-zor se rone lagti hai, tabhie aditya niharika ke shoulder par haath rakhta hai, aur niharika turn hokar uski taraf dekhti hai, aditya use dheere se haath pakad kar uthata hai, aur niharika ke chehre ko apne haathon mein lekar, uske aansoon ko halke haathon se ponchta hai, aur niharika uski taraf dekhne lagti hai, aditya niharika ko le jaakar lawn mein rakhe hue bench par baithata hai, aur uski taraf dekhne lagta hai, aur usse dheere se poochta hai…………………………………………

ADI-(in a soft and slow voice)-kya hua?aakhir baat kya hai?shayad ab tum mujhe batana chaho?

NIHA-(in a very emotional tone)-haan,aaj main tumhe sab kuch batadungi,anu, meri choti bahan,jiske liye zindagi zindadili ka naam thi,ek behad khushmijaz ladki, jo zindagi ke har ek pal ko ek khubsoorat khawb ki tarah jeeti thi,ek behad chulbuli aur pyaari si masoom ladki,jise khud bhi khush rehna achcha lagta tha, aur saath hi mein doosro ko bhi khush rakhna,zindagi ki hare k khushi uske kadmon mein thi, uske hare k pal mein shaamil thi, lekin…………………….sirf tab tak jab tak use mohabbat nahin hui thi…………………is shabd ke ehsaas ne usse uski zindagi ki saari khushiyan cheen li…………………ya phir yun kahun ki uski zindagi hi cheen li…………………….is mohabbat ne hi aaj use zindagi aur maut ke beech laakar chod diya hai……………nafrat hai mujhe is shabd se, aur usse bhi zyaada iske ehsaas se, aur us shaqs se jiski wajah se aaj anu ki yeh haalat hai……………………

ADI-(in a serious tone)-anu ko hua kya hai?

NIHA-(rote hue)-she is in coma………………..

ADI-(shocked)-what………………

Aur ek pal ke liye sab kuch shant ho jaata hai……………..

ADI-(inquisitively)-aur woh shaqs kaun hai,jiski wajah se anu………

NIHA-(full of hatred in her eyes)-usiko toh dhoond rahin hoon………….

Aur itna kehne ke baad niharika phir se rone lagti hai, aur yeh dekhkar aditya, bhi bahut emotional ho jaata hai,woh niharika ke haathon ke upar apna haath rakhkar use samhaalne ki koshish karta hai,niharika aditya ki taraf dekhti hai, aur usse lipatkar rone lagti hai, aditya niharika ke sir par apna haath rakhkar use chup karane ki koshish karta hai…………..aur usse kehta hai…………………

ADI-don't worry sab kuch thik ho jaayega, main hoon na tumhare saath,main sab kuch thik kar doonga…………………sab kuch………

Aur background mein yeh song play hota hai…………………….

bebasi, dard ka aalam……………

tum mujhe dedo apne gham………….

Bebasi, dard ka aalam……………

Tum mujhe dedo apne gham………….

Khamoshiyaan bhi do…………..

Tanhaayian bhi do…………..

Bechainiyaan bhi dedo, dedo naa……………..

Aditya niharika ke aansoon ko halke haathon se ponchta hai, aur niharika aditya ke kandhe par apna sir rakhti hai…………

Bheegi palkon se chura lunga nami……………….

Rehne doonga na kahin koi kami………………………

Tumko daaman na bhigone doonga………………

Ab kabhie tumko na rone doonga…………………

Uljhane, gham ki parchaayi……………………..

Dedo mujhe apni tanhaayi………………..

Gumnaamiyaan bhi do…………………..

Naakaamiyan bhi do………………….

Viraaniyan bhi dedo,dedo naa………………….

Aditya dekhta hai ki niharika uske kandhe par apna sir rakhkar so chuki hai, woh dheere se bina awaaz kiye, niharika ko apni bahon mein uthakar, uske room mein lejaata hai, aur use bed par letakar uske upar blanket udha deta hai,aur phir niharika ke sirhaane baithkar uske maathe par apna haath rakhkar use sehlaane lagta hai, aur bade hi pyaar se uski taraf dekhta hai……………………..

Tere hoton pe saja doonga hansi…………..

Teri raahon mein bicha doonga khushi…………….

Tum mujhe apna maanti ho agar………………………

Yun khafa hoke na jhukao nazar……………………..

Mushkilen,apni majboori………………….

Dedo mujhe saari benoori……………

Pareshaaniyaan bhi do………………..

Hairaaniyaan bhi do……………………

Nigebaaniyaan bhi dedo, dedo naa……………

Bebasi, dard ka aalaam……………

Tum mujhe dedo apne gham…………..

Khaamoshiyaan bhi do……………….

Tanhaayiaan bhi do………………..

Bechainiyaan bhi dedo,dedo naa………………..

Aur kuch der baad aditya, uthne lagta hai ki tabhie woh dekhta hai ki,niharika ne uska haath kas ke thaam kar rakha hua hai, yeh dekhkar aditya dobara niharika ke kareeb aata hai, aur dheere-dheere, halke se, apna haath uske haath se chudata hai,aur uske maathe par halke se kiss karke, wahan se chala jaata hai…………………..

END OF PART 18,PLZZZZZZZ DO COMMENT.

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Priti
Great update and a long one too. it seems that u r compensating for the days on which u didn't write. So finally u have disclosed that what the problem is with Niharika. It was sad to read that. And I suppose that a new problem is waiting for Aditya and Niharika in the form of Avni Shergil. I m eagerly waitimg for the next part yaar. I hope I will get to read it very soon. Keep up the good work.
With Lots of Wishes
Shree
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Priti
After a long time...πŸ˜›
Update was outstanding reallyπŸ‘..U r expert in writing emotional stuff..So Avni is the same gal who had a fight with Niharika n Adi..πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ..Niha is jealous of dat girl..This is definetely love ....πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰Who is dis secret admirer of Niha???I thought its Adi....n wat was written in dat letter?????So fianlly u disclosed the truth behind Niha's sadness.Somehow i feel that Sagar is responsible for it..Niha's sis is in coma!!!!!!!!!...πŸ˜•
But Adi is really supporting her ..May b he Loves Niha...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Do update soonπŸ˜›
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Posted: 16 years ago
hiya sis howz u...? wat a lovely update.. aur woh bhi itna lamba...

oh to avni woh ladki hai jiska niha aur adi se jhagda hota hai.... but uss ladki ka attitude to dekho.. bolti hai ki agar saamne aa gaye tho unko zinda nahi chodungi... how rude😑😑😑... but she does'nt know them.. woh tho avni ki ek min mein band baja dengeπŸ˜†.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†..
ab yeh MR Admirer kaun hai???? kya yeh adi hi hai??

so ab samajh aaya ki niha ki problem kya hai.. how sad!! kitna bura hua uski behen ke saath😭😭😭.. i just hate that person.😑... zara pata tho chale ki woh insaan kaun hai jisne anu ki zindagi bigaad di.. i will killl him...😑😑

but i am happy ki niha ne adi ke saath apne feelings share kiye... uske kandhe par sar rakhkar hi so rahi thi... haii😳.😳😳..... aur adi usse apni baahoon mein utha kar kamre mein leke jaata hai....... howwww sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeettttt😳😳....
aur haan ek aur baat.. U ARE A WONDERFUL WRITER... DIALOGUES WERE JUST AWESOOOOMMMMMMEEEEπŸ‘
i wish ke sab jaldi se thik ho jaaye........
lots of love
ritu😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi priti sis,h r u?

after a long time,
realy super update n little bit emotional 2,but its 2 gud,


Aarthi
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Posted: 16 years ago
too good
awesome
update soon long asap...........
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow kya ud tha yaaar mazaaaa aa gaya....aur ye kya vo mall waaali ladki pakki mehmaan ban gai???obviously humne to nhn invite kiya tha kyunki hum kisi ko adi aur niha ke beech nhn dekhna chahte......ye sab tera kiya dhra hai.....koi baaaat nhn theek bhi tu hi karegi nhn to main tujhe theek kar doongi.........ab iss kamini ladki ko adi se pyar hoga....haaaae raaaaam...aur ye mr.admirer agar adi ho to teri sehat ke liye accha hoga......aur ye anu ka ab kya chakar hai.?????????i hope vo ladka adi na ho.....kyunki agar galti se bhi hua to tujhe mujhse koi nhn bcha sakta.......chal ab bhut dhamkiyaaaan ho gai.....ud bhut bhut bhut acccha tha......and thnx d ud itne busy hone ke baawjood bhi......ud sooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi!!! Priti!!😊
Hope u are fine dear...
What a mind blowing update....absolutely brilliant as usual....πŸ‘πŸ‘
Oh loved every part of it...The way Adi teased Niharika......the way he consoled her after she read the
the letter😳😳....beautiful dear....great job done...πŸ‘πŸΌ
It's really painful to know about Niharika's sister...eagerly waiting to know the whole story behind it...
Now who is that secret admirer??? hmmmm ....quite an amount of suspense hidden there.
Fabulous dear....πŸ‘
take care...
Continue soon...
love
Riya😊

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