Tera Mera Rishta-AR Part 16 Pg.80 | 11/30/08 - Page 11

Originally posted by: perfectpiscean

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*~*Marisha*~*

I'm happy to know you liked the part...thanks a lot for appreciating the way I write..but if it tends to get a bit annoying at times--then please do tell me!😉

hi anita 😃

i have been a silent readent of ur ff but noe i was compelled to comment....its just amazing....cont sooon...

luv,
shivani

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hi anita 😃

i have been a silent readent of ur ff but noe i was compelled to comment....its just amazing....cont sooon...

luv,
shivani

Hi Shivani! Aww..thanks a lot for taking your time out and commmenting on my FF..Im happy I am able to keep you interested in it...Your comment made my day😳..thanks a lot!😉

PART 6

I'm back with another update…I updated much faster than the last update...I hope you all enjoy it..and I want to thank each and every person who has taken their valuable time out to comment on this FF…I really really appreaciate it! Reading all the sweet comments—makes my day!

The bright rays of the sun peeked in through the windows and flash on Riddhima's and Anjali's faces. All indications of morning were present- outside, the birds were chirping melodiously and the sun was shining brightly. Riddhima and Anjali stirred a little being in deep sleep, but immediately woke up remembering that today was an important day. Today was Anjali's big day and there was a lot of work to be done at home. Anjali and Atul both had been given an off from Sanjeevani for a couple of days due to their wedding and Riddhima was to join after the wedding.

On the other side, Armaan stirred in his bed as the bright rays of sun landed on his face. He immediately grabbed the blanket and covered his face with it to avoid the intense brightness. Keerti opened the door and came in to wake her son up to go to the hospital.

"Beta, utto…kaam pe nahin jana ha kya?" Keerti said as she shook him to wake him up.

"Maa…thori der aur sone do naa..please," Armaan pleadingly requested his mother.

"Nahin beta, wake up," Keerti said. "Hospital mein vaise hi Anjali aur Atul nahi arre thori dino tak unki shaadi ke vajas se…tho tumhare aana zaroori hai." Keerti told her son as she ran her fingers through his hair.

Armaan grumbled, but understood what his mother was trying to say. There should never be a shortage of doctors at the hospital.

"Aur aaj sirf half-day kaam karna hai, to jaldi se uttho aur kaam pe jao…mein bhi hospital ke liye nikal ne vaali hoon," Keerti said as she slapped his face lightly and left the room.

Armaan quickly got up, took a shower, and changed into a black collared shirt with jeans. He went downstairs to his room, and grabbed some coffee, and locked the house seeing that his mom left already. He sat in his car and drove to Sanjeevani.

It was a normal day of work. Rahul, Muskaan, and Armaan were busy with the duties that Dr. Keerti had assigned them. Everyone in Saanjevani knew that Keerti was Armaan's mother, however, Keerti and Armaan both valued keeping their personal and professional life separate. Rahul and Muskaan were both busy in the general ward checking patients while Armaan was making his rounds in the children ward. When the clock hit five, their duties were over and they all went home to get ready for the wedding.

On the other side, preparations were going on in full swing. Shashank and Padma were each busy with their work while Nani was instructing the decorators to do their job correctly and fast. The mandap was decorated beautifully. Anjali had just come home with Riddhima after getting their hair and make-up done from a beauty salon. Anjali went to her room to get dressed and Riddhima followed her to help her out. Almost everything was done, decorations were thoroughly set and the arrangements had been done accordingly.

The clock finally struck 7. Guests started pouring into the Gupta residence.

On the other side, Armaan got ready and wore a white male kurta pyjama with a light green stole around his neck. Atul and Rahul were both at Armaan's house as well. Atul wore an off-white colored sherwani with a maroon stole around his neck while Rahul wore a crme colored kurta pyjama with a white stole. Keerti walked passed Armaan's room door and saw the three mingling with each other in deep conversation. She smiled and thought to herself, "Shayad Atul ko advice de rahe honge…khud shaadi nahin ki, aur advice de rahen hain Atul ko…" She closed her eyes and prayed silently, "Kash mere Armaan ki shaadi bhi ho jaye jaldi se." She was about to enter Armaan's room to tell him that it's time to go, however she realized that she forgot her purse in her room, and she ran to go get it.

Keerti was right. Armaan and Rahul were indeed giving advice to Atul and making him feel more relaxed.

"Champ, I told you already…You have to be calm…ok?"Armaan said as he combed his hair.

"Haan haan, I know." Atul responded. "Lekin phir bhi zaara sa nervous hoon," replied Atul.

"It's normal," replied both Armaan and Rahul.

"Angie ko dekh khe behosh mat ho jana," Armaan said teasingly.

"Kya yaar…Hamesha mera mazaak bana tha phir tha hai," Atul said annoyingly. "Jab tujhe pyaar ho ga na…tab tumhara bhi yehi haal ho ga," Atul concluded.

"I agree with Atul," Rahul said. "Armaan, tujhe abhi pyaar huwa nahin hai, is liye tu aisi batein kar raha hai…jab hoga tab hum dekhen ge," Rahul finished off saying. Rahul, although hasn't fallen in love yet completely, is attracted to Muskaan and truly believes that there is a thing called 'love' present in this world.

Armaan chuckled to himself. "To kya tujhe huwa hai Rahul?" Rahul didn't know how to respond back to Armaan. "N..Nahin lekin mein pyaar mein vishwaas kar ta hoon," Rahul said.

"Champ aur Rahul, tum log shayad kuch bhool rahe ho…mein pyaar ke jhanjhal mein nahi pas ne wala teri tara Atul," Armaan said. Right after he said that, images of Riddhima flashed in front of him, but he quickly shook them off.

"Haan haan…dekhen ge…jab pas gaya na, tab tujhe meri baatein yaad ayengi," said Atul.

Rahul and Atul both high-fived each other and glanced toward Armaan. Armaan just shook his head while contemplating on whether he is attracted to Riddhima or is it something more. Can Atul and Rahul be right? he thought in his mind.

Just then Keerti knocked on their door and told them to hurry up. "Jaldi karo, nikal na nahi hai kya," Keerti said.

Atul jumped up from the bed. "Haan haan chalein."

Rahul and Armaan laughed as they left his room looking at Atul's impatience at getting married.

"Thora patience rak Champ," Armaan said as he chuckled.

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"Barat wale agaye hain," Riddhima exclaimed as she peeked through the window of her room. She looked at Anjali who blushed as she sat infront of the mirror, hearing that they have come. Anjali looked absolutely stunning today, not that she never did, but there was a certain glow on her face today. She wore a maroon colored bridal lengha and was adorned with a beautiful gold necklace and earrings along with maroon chudiyaan.

"Aaj bohot sharma rahi haan Di," Riddhima said as she put her hands on Anjali's shoulder and looked at the mirror.

"Ridzi!"

"Aur haan Anjali tere chehre par ek alag si hi chamak nazar arahi hai," Muskaan added on with a smile on her face. Anjali blushed and lowered her eyes.

"Mujhe to lagta hai keh yeh chamak sirf uptan ki wajas se aayi hai," Riddhima jokingly stated.

Anjali looked up immediately. "Ridzi…tum meri behen ho kar meri mazaak bana rahi ho," Anjali said irritatingly.

"Sorry sorry Di…main to aise hi bol rahi thi…yeh chamak appke chehre par sirf uptan ki wajas se nahi par Atul aur iske pyaar ki vajas se ayi hain," she said smilingly.

Anjali blushed.

"Arre Di, mere samne to maat sharmayen aap," Riddhima teasingly said. "Atul ke samne sharma na aap," she concluded.

Muskaan and Riddhima chuckled.

"Ridzi, tu bhi na…" Anjali said as she shook her head.

"Acha Di, mein aur Muskaan neeche jakaar ate hainn…Dekhti hoon keh Atul, oops mera jijajee… ka swaagat kaise ho raha hai," Riddhima said as she closed the door to the room and fled downstairs with Muskaan where Atul was being welcomed by Padma and Shashank.

Riddhima ran to her parents and stood by them as Padma did Atul's aarti and put a tikka on his forehead. Muskaan stood near Riddhima. Riddhima happened to glance toward Armaan who was standing next to Atul smiling looking at her. Riddhima smiled back as a friendly gesture but something was hidden in her smile. "Agar in ladke wale ko aaj maine taang nahi kiya, to mera naam Riddhima nahin hai," she thought to herself as she raised her eyebrows. After all, her one and only sister was getting married. Kuch to masti ho ni chayihe , she thought as she smirked with that smile.

Armaan was lost in his thoughts once again. He couldn't help but admiring how beautiful and innocent Riddhima looked in the light green, elegant sari (shown below).



The ladke wale were greeted into Shashanks house with flowers being thrown at them by Riddhima and the ladki wale. Atul entered the house smilingly while Armaan, Rahul, Keerti and the rest of the baratees followed him in.

There was still some time left before the shaadi to commence and for Atul and Anjali to take their saat pheres. Atul, Armaan, and Rahul stood with one another and engaged in conversation, however, Armaan's eyes were searching endlessly for something else.

Suddenly, Armaan spots Riddhima walking towards them and a smile emerges in his face. Wow, look at her..she looks so gorgeous in that sari…aisa lagta hai asmaan se koi pari aayi hai zameen par…he thought. Why am I going ga-ga over her??

"Hey guys," Riddhima said.

"Hey Riddhima," they each responded.

"R-R-Riddhima, tum bohot khoobsurat lag rahi ho is sari mein ," Armaan managed to utter.

Rahul and Atul both agreed with Armaan.

Riddhima smiled and looked down as she blushed. "Thanks," she responded. "Tum log bhi bohot handsome lag rahe ho," she said as she smiled, deepening her dimples.

Armaan, being his conceited self, said "Thanks, main to hamesha se handsome hoon."

Rahul and Atul chuckled at Armaan's cockyness. They thanked Riddhima.


Riddhima suddenly remembered her purpose for coming there as she glanced at Muskaan waiting for her at the bench inside the house.

"Arre, tum log idhaar khare ho kar kya kar le ho."Riddhima said. "Abhi shaadi hone main zaara sa time hain, to tum log aake baith jao." she concluded flashing her wide smile once again.

Armaan fell for her smile once again. He couldn't say no to her.

"Haan haan, chalo Rahul aur Atul," Armaan said.

In the mean time, Shashank called Atul and Atul went to him after excusing himself.

Riddhima led the way to the bench which had a white cloth over it. She asked the waiter to bring cold drinks.

"Arre, zara in ke liye kuch thanda le kar ao…in khi khatar dani karna hamara kaam hai, aakhir yeh ladke wale hain," she said instructing the waiter.

"Aap log baithe," Riddhima said as she flashed her smile once again.

"Hey Muskaan," they said as they sat down on the bench. Right when they sat down, they heard a big noise. They realized that they sat down on something as they heard laughter erupting from all the girls that stood around them. Muskaan couldn't stop laughing as well as Riddhima. Armaan and Rahul immediately jumped off from the bench in utter embarrassment. They picked the cloth up to see lots of papad there. They sat on papad—hence the crunchy and loud noise when they sat down. They were embarrassed, but they realized that this was all a chaal from the girls side. Riddhima and Muskaan still were laughing uncontrollably. Armaan was lost in Riddhima. He stared at her laughing—haste hue bhi kitni khoobbsurat lagti hai…sigh…He immediately came out of his thoughts as Rahul tugged at his arm.

Rahul came towards Armaan and whispered in his ear, "Yaar, these girls got us with their plan…aab hume bhi to kuch kerna chahiye," he said. Armaan looked towards Rahul and nodded-as in affirming that they were going to get even with the girls.

"Kya hua," Riddhima said in between bursts of laughter.

Armaan and Rahul glanced at Muskaan and Riddhima with a grin on their faces.

"To yeh tum loge ki chaal thi," Armaan asked questionly.

"Hmmm…yes you can call this a chaal," said Riddhima as she raised her eyebrows and smiled sort of wickedly.

Armaan and Rahul rolled their eyes at Riddhima and Muskaan.

"Arre, itna gussa ara hai tum logon ko…calm down guys…chill," said Muskaan.

"Yeh lo," she said as she saw the waiter bringing cold drinks. "Thanda phi lo and apne gusse ko control kar lo isko phi ke," Riddhima said as she handed Armaan and Rahul a cold drink each.

"Lo, phi lo," said Riddhima as she saw them staring at the glass filled with the cold drink intensely.

Armaan thought in his mind kuch to garbar hai as he grabbed the glass in his hand. Rahul grabbed it also, but also felt the same way Armaan was—he knew something was wrong somewhere.

"Arre tum log drink kyun nahi phi rahe ho," Riddhima asked. "Acha, mujhe pata baat kya hai," she said. "Tum logon ko lagta hai humne drink ke saat kuch garbar ki hai," she said sounding sad.

Armaan heard the sadness in her voice and decided to speak up. "Nahi Nahi, aisi baat nahin hai…"

"Aisi hi baat hai…hum idhar aap khi khaatir dari kar le hain…aur aap log humpe shaak," Riddhima said.

"Nahin…aisi baat nahin hai…aap kya sirf hume cold drink philayen gi...khud nahin phiyengi kya??" Rahul said. "Agar aap log nahin drink karenge to hume bhi bura lage ga na?" Armaan went along with what Rahul said.

Armaan grabbed them each a glass of cold drink from the waiter's tray.The waiter had stood there since Riddhima called him, amused with the way the conversation was going.

Riddhima and Muskaan took the cold drink with a smile on their face and took a sip or more from their glasses.

Armaan and Rahul took a sigh of relief. Since Riddhima and Muskaan drank out of their glasses without worry, they believed that is was safe for them to do the same.

Armaan and Rahul just started drinking the cold drink when on an impulse, they spat it out immediately. Riddhima, Muskaan, and the other girls burst out in a riot of laughter looking at Armaan and Rahul's astonished faces. The girls had mixed in a huge amount of salt into their cold drinks.

Armaan and Rahul brought their faces up and looked at each other. They couldn't believe that the girls had tricked them once again. The girls had kept the normal glasses of cold drink on one side of the tray while the two "contaminated" ones where on the other side.

Armaan and Rahul both turned their furious faces away from each other and focused them on the two girls who were laughing uncontrollably.

"Aaa-apko.." Riddhima started laughing again and couldn't complete her sentence. She finally got a hold on herself. "Aapko hamari khatir dari kaisi lagi?" she said looking at their furious faces.

Armaan tried to control his anger. "Is ko tum khaatir dari kehti ho?"

"Haan, of course…like a good host, I offered you a seat and a cold drink," she replied straight forwadly as she laughed from the inside. "Chalo girls," she said and departed.

Rahul and Armaan watched the girls leave.

"Armaan yaar, we have to do something about this…this is not done…now we have to get even with the girls," said Rahul furiously.

"Calm down…we will get even with the girls," Armaan responded. "Bohot haasi are hi thi na inko, aab hum inko dikhaenge ke hum kya kar sakte hain," Armaan said confidently with a smile on his face. "We will surely get our revenge from the girls."

"Inko hum dikhayege keh inka palla kis ladkon se para hai…hum bhi kisi se kum nahin hai," said Armaan with his wicked smile.

Armaan and Rahul both looked at each other and smiled. They were going to get the girls good.



Will they be successful in getting revenge from the girls…or is love going to kick in its way?


Hope you all enjoyed it. I know the papad scene was stolen from Hum Aapke Hai Koun..but I hope you all liked the way I wrote it…and another thing…If anyone has any suggestions for the next part regarding the revenge or anything—please please feel free to pm me and I will try to include it! I haven't thought about the revenge yet..but if anyone has ideas-feel free to tell me!

hey luved it tha way RM teased AR lolz😆 hella funny n Armman waz so cute wen he went 4 Ridzy's innocent lukz😳 lolz😆 so sweet i wonder wat AR r gonna do 2 RM😉 cnt wait plz cont soon thnx 4 tha PM n tha update!👏

❤️twinkle!

that was utterly hilarious. 🤣 i am still laughing. by the way loved ridz dress. 😳 😳 can't wait for next chapter. have to read armaan's revenge. would be fun. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon. thnc for the pm. i appreciate it 😃

oh wowwwwwww..amazing update...
lets c wat boys will do now...
cont soon & thxx alott 4 da pm..

dat was an amznngg n hilarious prtttt luvd ridz's dress... waitngg 4 d boyz turn.... thnxx 4 d pm.. update soonn 😊
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