FF|kismat ki khel*PART 24*p43 1/11 - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
#41
salma that was a brilliant update...
the detail was good i can jus imagine all the scenes...
pls continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
tanx for ya comments... i'll be delaying ma ff's for a week or so as i got soo much cwk mounted up ..bare wid me ..tanx ..salz...x
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
great update salma
plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
PROMO FOR PART 5!!!<<<<<---------

The three settle down.

naina: kanya ..yeh hain mera 2nd cousin jolly...doh saal baari hain mujhse paar hain ek jigri dost ki thara.!

kanya: oh hi..

j: umm hi..naina mujhe yahaan kyun?

n: haan..kya hain nah ..kanya jolly yahaan america se aayi hain aur usse rehne ka problem hain. koi jaaga naahin milra usse.. aur yeh kaam karthi hain ..saaree kaam laptop se karthi hain..

k: tho jolly thum yahaan rehjao .. bohod jaaga hain!

n: haan yaahin soch raheen thi ..meh tho haar waqt yaahan aana hi sakthi socha yeh hi thumhaare dek baal hi karegi..

j: saach ..meh yaahan rehsak tha hoon,..?

k: haan! aaj se bi mera jigri dost !

naina visited once in a while ..kanya and jolly became the best of friends ..kanya told all her problems to jollly who sympathied her and wanted to her her all the way..

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dats ol for now guys.....
next update in da weekends:D
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
Aussum promo..rilli wonderful...thnx 4 d PM... plzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
Awesome update
and interesting promo
i luv ur ff 👏 👏 👏
im sry i havent realli been reading it
but now surely will
plz cont soon! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
I just read through all the parts from the beginning.It's too good.Your story telling skills are getting better and better.The mother-son bonding(Kanya and her son)has been portrayed so well.That little boy and his friend are so smart and cute.Kanya's past is pathetic.Ranbir 😡 😡 😡.Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
recap:
h: haan di aapke liye jaunga aur maan laga ke parunga! aap apni kayal rakna aur baby ka bhi..

((((((((((that was the last time she saw her family))))))))))))))))


<<PART 5>>

kanya stayed in her house naina moved in with her for a few weeks and soon was told by her parents to go home.

nearly every night she cried her heart out. but naina consoled her all the way and was getting worried for her day by day.

the only thing that made kanya happy was harrys calls from england..

her house was big but empty..naina found 3 lodgers who would stay and pay..and so naina decided that they will pay kanya and naina will do the shopping.

it was soon coming closer to the time when naina would have to go home as she is so behind on her studies ...even tho there were lodgers in the house naina didnt have the heart to leave kanya with these strangers...

naina calls some ...who turns up the next day on kanyas door step..

kanya opened the door.

girl: hi,,

k: aap kaun?

girl: woh..naina yahaan hain kya?

naina comes over ..

n: jolly ..aana andaar!

The three settle down.

naina: kanya ..yeh hain mera 2nd cousin jolly...doh saal baari hain mujhse paar hain ek jigri dost ki thara.!

kanya: oh hi..

j: umm hi..naina mujhe yahaan kyun?

n: haan..kya hain nah ..kanya jolly yahaan america se aayi hain aur usse rehne ka problem hain. koi jaaga naahin milra usse.. aur yeh kaam karthi hain ..saaree kaam laptop se karthi hain..

k: tho jolly thum yahaan rehjao .. bohod jaaga hain!

n: haan yaahin soch raheen thi ..meh tho haar waqt yaahan aana hi sakthi socha yeh hi thumhaare dek baal hi karegi..

j: saach ..meh yaahan rehsak tha hoon,..?

k: haan! aaj se bi mera jigri dost !

naina visited once in a while ..kanya and jolly became the best of friends ..kanya told all her problems to jollly who sympathied her and wanted to help her all the way..

soon a boy is born in the local hospital of mumbai..

for the first time in ages kanya smiles...she finally feels like she can live.

( kanya spent most of her pregnancy studying..jollly forced her too saying that her life is still long!)

kanya thought that 9 months was worth the pain..!

jolly named the baby..(rahil godbole coz kanya didnt want her son to know anything about his father plus she didnt know ranbirs surname)

wen rahil was 2 naina and ayush got married and went away to live in delhi..

soon life could not be anybetter for kanya..her rahil was 6 and she gave him everything he wanted ...

as soon as rahil started school kanya started work as a rectionist ..jolly later on moved to delhi too as she found a great job there.

different lodgers pass by at kanyas house one extremely nice named sonia.

((((((((((((((((((((((flash back ends))))))))))))))))))))))))))

kanya tells rahil all this but no in that much detail.

kanya: pathahi naahin chaala ke itna waqt gaayah aur aab thu baara hoga yah hain.

rahil: mom...aap...aap papa se aabhi hi pyaar karthe hon?

kanya crys..

k: he's my first and..and last

rahil soon goes to bed reviewing everything that he'd been told.

days pass and kanya doesnt mention it again.

simmi and rahil spend ages researching and reviwing the situation.

they find lots of info on ranbir

simmi: yaar dekh .. tera.. i mean yeh ranbir jo bhi hain...baara hain!

rahil: obviously ..he's 35 i think..

simmi: eh nikumme samaj nah..woh baara hain..rich! woh RANBIR NANDA hain..

rahil: whisper it mom ne sun liya tho garbar hoja...kya? r..r..ranbir nanda>??

simmi put her hand over a shocking rahils mouth..

simmi: chup be saale! ranbir nanda ..tera baap hain? dek na yeh foto milthi hain woh aadmi se jo tunne sonia aunty ki party meh dika?

rahil: haan simmi woh hi hain..ranbir nanda...mere pa

simmi cuts him off..

simmi: great ..aab humme address chahiye!

rahil: haan haan!

simmi: wow!

rahil: kya beh?

simmi: tumhaare dad chain of hotels ki malik hain..wah!

rahil: haan..simmi..mujhe kuch karna hoga..meh mere mom ko saari kushiyan lotta nah chatha hoon!

simmi: haan plan karna hoga..meh sochthi hoon..

rahil: kya hain nah mom neh dad ko kaha "you will fall for me" so..

simmi: IDEA!

rahil: kya..? bol na!

simmi: we need both to meet !

rahil: paar kese?

simmi: wo mujpe chor doh! tumhaare doh aunties hain nah naina aur jolly!

rahil: tho..?

simmi: woh dono kahaan rahthe hain?

rahil: woh delhi meh ?

simmi: aur ranbir nanda kahaan reh tha hain?

rahil: umm ek minute..........................haan delhi meh.....oooh simmi i got it! we need to move to delhi..

simmi: haan paar...tora mushkil hoga!

rahil : naahin kyunke mom naina aur jolly aunty ke baath naahin dalthi!

rahil and simmi...call jolly and tell her their plan and she too agree's wantin to make her friends life better.

few days pass ........jolly calls up kanya

j: kanya...meh tere liye kuch paaya hoon!

k: kya?

j: job!

k: job? mathlam..

j: yaahan delhi meh ek aachi si job tere liye mila!

k: tho meh tho mere job se kush hoon..

jolly thinks: yeh ladki bee nah!

j: woh kya hain rahil ne jo course usne chunna yahaan miltha hain aur mumbai meh waahi course naahin karthe..

k: kya jolly..yahaan tho milleh ga

j: naahin kanya ..yeh baath rahil bhi jaantha hain ke jo course wo karna chahtha hain usse milega naahin waha..aur meh naahin chathi ke rahil ko koi aur course karna paare issi liye.

k: haan saach kehraheen hain..meh mere babby ko udaas naahin dekna chahtha! woh kare ga woh course paar yeh ghar..

j: haan tera ghar aat mehne se ek family hain jo kirai pe lehna chathe hain ..

k: haan teek hain...paar yeh kaam?

j: kanya! bohod chinta karthi hain..sunh .yeh kaam hain manager ki PA ki kaam...bohod baari paisa milti hain..

k: wow PA ..loved to do that! ...aur paiso se mujhe koi mathlam naahin sirf mere baby jo chahe woh usse mille..!.paar

rahil:: offo mom maan jao naah..itna fikar kyun karthi hon?

k: okay baby ..! fine...saab ready rak na jolly! aur haan oon renties ko bolna yaahan next week aajayeh ..hum aara hain hain kuch dinn baad.!

kanya put the phone and was surprised to see rahil dancing up and down..

k: hai! mera betta itna kush!

rahil: well obviously .. i get to leave this dump! and i really wanna do that course..

k: kesa course hain ye?

rahil: woh.. ((thinking)) shit! didnt think about school!

k: rahil..

rahil: mom.. woh phsychology something..

k: aare wah! anyway .. aab meh kaam pe jaakar resignation kar heen hoon.. thu ghar rehna ..bahar jaana maath okay.!

rahil: yes mom.

days past and everything was sorted

rahil in his room with simmi.

rahil: simmi jaanti naahin kyun paar bohod daar lag rah haan hain.. wat if it doesnt go to plan..

simmi: offo baba! ek number ka daarpok.!

rahil: simmi!

simmi: okay...well jolly aunty hain nah tere saath woh saab sambal leh gi aur haan tunne naina aunty ko batha yah kya yeh plan ke baare me?

rahil: haan jab mom kaam paar resignation kar neh gayeh the thab .. aunty bohod pareshaan thi pehle paar unne socha bohod peer samja ke mom dad ke binna puure kush naahin hosak the!.

simmi: saach.. tho aab darne ki koi zaroorath naahin..but i am gonna miss u!

rahil: so am i simmi.. tere binna brain hi naahin chaltha.!

simmi: paar tu tere mom ke kushi liye kara haan hain meh tujse bohod proud hoon..

rahil: aur thu aayeh gi naah delhi mujhe dekne ke liye..

simmi: ofcourse! aur haan phone karna ! meh jaana chahthi hoon ke kya hora haan hain.. plan kese chaal ra haan hain!

rahil: haan ..

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((((( in delhi ... jollys place))))))))

at the door step..

j: aahhr! tum logg aagayeh kanya rahil mere baby!

she give him a big hug and the trio settle in.

rahil: wow aunty yeh jaaga kitna sundaar hain!

j: haan ..

k: jolly thank you for everything i really appreciate it...

rahil : oh god mom please don't go all emotinal!

jolly: haan haan jab bhi dekho emotional ho jaathi hain!

k: aab shuru hogayeh mujhe taang karne ke liye.!

j: ..okay baba.. haan rahil tera woh course nah next week shuru hotta hain aur kaya tera interview koi malika maam ke saath hain kaal.. nanda hotel meh.

rahil at a massive smirk on his face just like his dad.

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((((((( jolly and kanya at nanda's hotel))))))

jolly and kanya await for them to be called in

soon malika's PA came and told kanya to come in.

k: jolly aana mere saath!

j: kanya.. tu jaa naah tera job interview hain mera naahin !

k: paar..

j: chup ho jaa aur jaa!

kanya follows the PA and enters a room. The PA stands behind a women not ol but not young she wore a brown colour saare but loved professional.

kanya herself was a nerves reck she stood there near the door way looking at the pleasant lady

the lady looked up and down kanya and smiled.

kanya: umm.. namastey ma'am.

lady: kanya ho naah? me malika nanda..yaahan beto .

kanya sits patiently in front of malika who is in deep thoughts

malika thinking::: wow yeh ladki kaamal hain..kitni khoobsurat..kitni professional dikthi hain shirt aur skirt me..sanscaari ke saath bohod izzat waali lagthi hain.. isse tho meh rakoon gi..massoom jesi hain...haan yeh hi mere ranbir ki PA hogi!





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dats ol for now guys.....
i want loads of comment as dis update took me long
ranbir will be in on part 6 !! soon!! till den COMMENT!
salz.......x
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
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Awesome update yaar
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Posted: 17 years ago
#50
Omg AWSOME plz plz plz plz plz continue fast this is getting very interesting!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊

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