waiting for ur update.....
one suggestion:thoda action hota ff me to accha hota...i mean its as its abt miltary acadamy..to thoda action hona chaheye na..
any ways its just a suggestion.....
bye
love
ashu ๐ณ
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hiiiiiiii late as always i know kya kaun main toh comment nahin kar paah rahi thi but thoda waqt milla socha kar dun hope u will like it
hahahahaha JANU hmmmm ye word sunke kisko hassi naa aaye? ๐
arre sheery mang leti naa ki raj aur naina ek ho jaye shayd bhagwan tumhari sache dil se mangi huii ye baat puri kar dete ๐ ๐ณ
jab raj jaane lagta hai tab naina kehti ke main abhi aati hun naina wahan bath ke kya raj ko mang rahi thi ke baad main aayi ๐ ๐ ๐
kya baat hai naina ko excuse mil gaya aate huee bhi same excuse tha jaate huee bhi same ๐
naina i will eagerly b waiting for that day when alu will know that raj is back i want to see his reaction he would b more than shocked and happy cant wait for it ๐ ๐
hahhaa jab maine promo main padha tha tab bhi bahut hassi aayi thi aur ab bhi god naina ka chehra dekhne layak tha ๐
i love sherry trying her best ke raj aur naina jitna ek saath rahe utna achha hai but bechari kya jane woh donon ek saath hi ja rahe hain as mr. and mrs. kapoor ๐
good going raj naina ne tujhe thode din tang kiya naa ab tu iski trang kheech ye bolke ke sherry tum mere saath chali jana agar train miss ho gayi to ๐
absolutely MISSION ACOMPLISHED for u too both ๐ณ
liked the scene where raj said that use achha nahin laga jab naina usse baat nahin kar rahi thi glad ab janab khulke kuchh toh bolne laggaye hain ๐ณ ๐ณ ๐ณ
definately ye jaanne ke baad sherry is shocked that raj killed naveen but i am sure puri kahani janne ke baad she will think that raj also loved naina hopefully it would b helpfull in some way ๐ ๐ ๐
OKH so they reached in khandala welll will b eagerly waiting to know wahan kya kya hone wala hai ๐ณ loved the update as alwaysssssss hope u liked my comment willb waiting for tomorrow to read ur update ๐
hii riya...
to tumne comment de hi diya๐๐tum nahin sudhrogi,yaar exam hai to padhai karo par nahin madam ko meri koi baat ka asar nahin hoga.๐
hmm sherry ne raj ko jaanu kaha ๐๐bechaara raj naina k aage sarama raha tha๐ณsherry kya maange yaar RN ko pray karana chahiye na ek dusare l liye aur naina ,ne to pehale hi raj ko maag liya hai๐๐naina ka excuse accha tha na ๐๐kya pagal bana rahe hai dono sab ko ๐๐
alu ko raj k baare main pata chalega aur bahot maza bhi aayega bas tum thoda sa wait kar lo yeh sab bahot jaladi hoga๐๐aur alu ka reaction bhi tum tab dekh lena.sherry to bechaari kuch janati hi nahin hai RN k baare main jab pata chalega to dekho kya karegi๐
hmm raj bhi ab naina ko pareshaan kar raha haia chalo accha hai janaab kuch to karate hai๐๐ab to kuch kuch bolane bhi laga hai๐๐aur rahi sherry aur hooda ki baat to dekho sherry ko kya pata chalata hai RN k baare main.aur khandala main RN ka thoda bahot to romance hoga ,par jayada nahin.๐๐thanx 4 comment.n all the best jaanu๐๐
lots of love
sana๐
part 45
sherry yeh sunkar puri tarah shock ho jaati hai.
sherry:hooda tumhe pata hai tum kya bol rahe ho,R.................
sherry RK bolate bolate ruk jaati hai.
sherry:rajveer ne mara tha naveen ko,tumhe kaise pata?
hooda kuch nahin bolata.sherry usake paas jakar bolati hai.
sherry:batao na kya hua tha k use ..
hooda:are neelu aana apnaa qaidi kaha hai.
sherry dekhati hai k neelu saamne khadi hai.
sherry:ohhh neelu tum kab aayi,kya hua sab thik hai na.
neelu:nahin yaar kuch thik nahin hai.woh aalekh woh bahot bura hai.
hooda:chal accha hua tujhe der se hi sahi sach to pata chal gaya.
sherry hooda ko marati hai.
sherry:shut up.......
hooda:oye maine kya kiya,yaar sherry tu marati bahot hai mujhe,tujhe main hi mila hoo kya marane k liye.
tabhi aalekh waha aata hai.
aalekh:ha tu hi to hai jo sabse bada namoona hai,tujhe to marana hi chahiye.maar sherry isako apun tere saath hai.
sherry:tum mere saath nahin neelu k saath raho,dekho woh tumse bahot naraaz hai.
aalekh neelu ko dekhta hai jo k muh fula k bethi hai.
aalekh:ab tereko kya ho gaya.aise kyun bethi hai?
neelu:kuch nahin hua hai.
aalekh:to aise muh kyun fulawa hai.
neelu aalekh ki taraf gusse se dekhati hai.
sherry:are ab thoda sa pyaar se bologe to maan jayegi woh,kyun hooda.
hooda:ha sahi hai,meri mummy ji bhi yahi kaheti hai pyaar se bolo to dunia jeet sakate ho.
aalekh:ha tu jaise bahot kuch jeet gaya hai,ek ladaki to aaj tak pata nahin saka.
sherry:hahahaha.............
hooda:ha ha has le sherry,mere tute hua dil par tu bhi has le.
sherry:are nahin,dekhana tumhe ek din bahot acchi ladaki milegi.
aalekh:ha aur isse milkar hi woh rone lag jayegi k mujhe yahi milana tha.
sherry:hahaha......bas aalekh ab tum hooda ko chodo.
hooda:ha aur teri neelu ko mana warana tujhe rona pad sakata hai.
aalekh neelu k paas jakar bethata hai.
aalekh:woh...chal ab chod na kay ku khali peeli naraaz ho rahi hai.
neelu:aalekh khaali peeli naraaz nahin hoo main.
aalekh:accha to tu khali nahin puri naraaz hai.hahaha....dekh accha joke mara ne apun ne.
neelu:nahin bahot bura tha,dekho mujhe hasi bhi nahin aayi.
aalekh:accha to bol tere ko khush karane k liye apun kya kare..
hooda:qaidi dance karega woh bhi train k upar chad kar.kyun qaidi?
aalekh:yeda hai kya,apun koi pagal nahin hai jo ladaki k liye train par chad jaaye.
neelu:kya kaha tumne???????
aur neelu waha se gusse main chali jaati hai.
aalekh:are ruk apun to aisej bol raha tha.
hooda zor zor se hasane lag jaata hai.
hooda:hahaha...bahot accha hua,ab tu reh pareshaan woh nahin manne wali.
aalekh:sale tereko apun nahin chodega.
aalekh hooda ko marane aata hai.
sherry:are aalekh isako baad main maarana pehale neelu k paas jao.
aalekh:thik hai saale aaj tu bach gaya par tu KMA chal waha batata hoo tujhe.
hooda:abe chal bada aaya hooda ko batane wala,abhi jaa apnai neelu k paas.
aalekh waha se jata hai aur sherry hooda ko dekh kar bahot hasati hai.
next scene
IN THE EVENING
raj khanadala k hotel k bahar car rokata hai.
raj:so cadet singh aa gaye hum khandala ab chale andar.
naina:kaun cadet singh.?
raj:naina kya bol rahi ho?
naina:mera naam naina kapoor hai ok mr. kapoor.
raj naina ko dekhkar hasata hai.
raj:tumhaari acting phir se suru ho gayi.
naina:ha ha ha....sir ab yaha to mera naam yahi hai na.
raj:kaun sir?mera naam to rahul kapoor hai.
naina:ohh ha main to bhul hi gayi thi rahul.
raj aur naina dono hasate hai.
raj:chale.
naina:ek min
raj:kya?
naina raj ko apnaa haath deti hai.aur raj naina ki taraf dekhta hai.aur uska haath apne haath main leta hai.
naina:hmmm ab lag rahe hai na hum,mr.& mrs.kapoor.
raj aur naina ek dusare ka haath thaame hotel main enter karate hai.raj manager k paas jata hai.
raj:hi my name is rahul kapoor hum ......
M:ohhh yes welcome sir chaliye mem aapka hi wait kar rahi hai.
raj aur naina dono manager k saath jaate hai.
M:mem aap jinaka wait kar rahi thi woh log aa gaye hai.
raj aur naina dono office main jaate hai jaha mrs.khanna unko milati hai.
M K:aa gaye tum dono.
naina M.K k paas jaati hai aur unko hug karati hai.
naina:ohh aunty pata hai maine aapko bahot miss kiya.kaisi hai aap,aur aap humse milane yaha aayi,kab aayi aap.
raj:naina ek saath kitane sawaal karogi.
raj M.K k paas jata hai.
raj:kaisi ho aap?
M.K:main bilkul thik hoo,aur tum plzz naina ko sawaal karane do beti hai woh meri.
raj:accha main aapka kuch nahin lagata,aunty?
M.K:are nahin rahul tum bhi mere bete ho.
naina:ha par mere baad ,kyun aunty sahi kaha na maine.accha aapko pata hai rahul mujhe yaha lekar nahin aa rahe the.
M.K:KYA....rahul yeh main kyaa sun rahi hoo.???
raj naina ki taraf dekhta hai aur naina aunty k peeche khadi use dekhkar muskura rahi hai.
raj:woh aunty...kuch kaam tha to main mana kar raha tha.
M.K:rahul apne pyaar se jayada kya zaruri kaam ho sakata hai.
raj:ha yeh baat to hai mere liye naina se zaruri aur koi baat nahin hai.
raj ki yeh baat sunkar naina usaki taraf pyaar se dekhati hai.
M.K:accha ab tum dono thak gaye hoge.jakar rest karo aur ha raat ka dinner hum saath karege .
naina:jee aunty,waise thank u so much.
M.K:ab yeh kis baat k liye.
naina:aap hamare liye mumbai se khandala aayi.is liye.
M.K:tum dono mere liye baccho jaise ho aur kya ek maa apne baccho se milane nahin aa sakati kya?
raj:bilkul aunty,hum aapke bacche hi to hai.
M.K:accha tum log manager k saath apne room main jao aur aaram karo .hum raat ko dinner par milate hai.
raj aur naina dono room main aate hai.
M:sir aapko kuch chahiye?
raj:jee nahin thank u.
manager chala jata hai aur raj darwaza bandh karata hai.
raj:naina kya zarurat thi neache aunty ko yeh bolane ki k main yaha aane se mana kar raha tha.
naina hasane lag jaati hai.
raj:ab hasana bandh karogi.
naina:kyun accha hua na unhone aapko daata,ab koi to chahiye na meri side se jo aapko daate.
raj:naina ..........
naina:ok ok sorry sir par maine yeh sab jaan bhujhkar kiya b/c maine dekha hai har wife apne husband ki burai karati hai.
so maine socha aapki bhi kar du.
raj:kya????
naina raj k aage sarama jaati hai aur ..
naina:kuch nahin bas ......accha main fresh ho k aati hoo.
naina chali jaati hai aur ,raj naina ki baat par muskurata hai.
next scene
sherry hooda se abhi bhi raj aur naina k baare main hi puch rahi hai.
sherry:accha hooda ab batao rajveer ne sach main naveen ko maraa tha,aur tum yeh baat kaise janate ho?
hooda:ha sherry,yeh baat sab janate hai
sherry:naina bhi...
hooda:ha naina bhi ,par naina ko jab yeh baat pata chali to usane woh kiya jo koi soch bhi nahin sakata.
sherry:aisa kya kiya naina ne?
hooda kuch nahin kaheta.
sherry:bolo na aisa kya kiya tha naina ne.
HUM BATATE HAI......
sherry dekhati hai k abhi unke saamane khada hai.
sherry:sir aap,woh hum to bas.......
abhi:it's ok sherry,humne aap dono ki baat sun lee hai.
sherry:...................
abhi jakar sherry k saamane wali seat par bethata hai.aur sherry aur hooda saamane ki taraf bethe hai.
abhi:naina k liye naveen sabkuch tha woh usi k qaatil ko dudhane k liye KMA aayi thi,aur usaki help raj ne ki.woh humesha usake saath tha,
har mod par usane naina ko bachaaya,par jab naveen ki maut ki sacchai raj ne naina ko batayi to unhone woh kiya jo raj ne kya kisi ne bhi
nahin socha tha.
sherry:kya kiya naina ne.???
abhi:unhone raj par goli chala dee.
sherry:WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTT????
sherry hooda ki taraf dekhati hai.
sherry:naina ne raj ko .........nahin...main nahin manati....yeh sab.
hooda:sach hai yeh sherry.
sherry:par naina to unse pyaar karati thi,woh unpar kaise goli chala sakati thi.
abhi:ha par saath hi woh naveen se bhi pyaar karati thi,aur naina ko DR,mishra ki
baato ne behaka diya tha.unhe us waqt jo sahi laga woh unhone kar diya.
teeno kuch der k liye khamosh ho jaate hai.
sherry:phir kya hua?
hooda:raj sir ko goli lagi thi par phoolan ko unki zara si bhi parwaah nahin thi.woh unse baat tak nahin karana chahti thi.
par sir naina ki baat ka biklul bhi bura nahin manaya,unhone koi shikayat nahin ki naina se,yaha tak k jab BC ne sir se
pucha k un par goli kisane chalaayi to sir ne naina ka naam tak nahin liya.
sherry:par kyun?unhone kyun nahin bataya.
abhi:yeh baat koi nahin janata,hum jab KMA main aaye tab hume bhi naina aur raj ko dekh kar laga k un dono main kuch pro hai,
humne raj se pucha bhi tha par usane kuch nahin bataya.
sherry(in her mind):RK kab karata hai apne dil ki baat,kisi se.
abhi:hume naina ne khudh bataya k raj ne naveen ko maara tha,us waqt hume bhi bahot gussa aaya tha par humne jab raj ki side se socha to paaya k
usane jo bhi kiya apne dost k liye kiya tha,woh use gaddar ki tarah saza paate hua nahin dekh sakata tha.
sherry:aur naina.......
abhi:naina ko apni galati ka ahsaas ho gaya tha.k unhone kitani badi bhul ki thi raj ko galat samajh k.sab thik ho gaya tha,
hum bahot khush the.par waqt ko humari khushi manzur nahin thi.ek haadasa hua aur raj hum sab se dur ho gaya.aur yeh sab jisaki wajah se hua hum usako...
abhi bolate bolate ruk jaata hai aur sherry samajh jaati hai k woh lala ki baat kar raha hai,abhi waha se chala jaata hai.
sherry ko rone ka dil karata hai par woh apne aasoo ko rok leti hai.hooda usake paas aata hai.
hooda:oye kudiye,chal ab tu rona mat.
sherry:nahin to main kaha ro rahi hoo.
hooda:sir tujhse naraaz nahin hai,unki baat ka bura mat lagaana.
sherry:nahin hooda woh sahi hai sabkuch khoya hai sab ne tumne apne teacher ko abhi sir ne apne dost ko,aur naina ne apne pyaar ko.
hooda:sherry tu bilkul sahi hai,hum to phir bhi khush hai apni zindagi main par naina,us bechaari ko dekh kar bura lagata hai,abhi to
usane jeena suru kiya tha.
sherry:rajveer k saath kya hua tha?i mean court main kya hua tha?
hooda:tum kaise janati ho k sir par court case chala tha?
sherry ko raj ne conl.shakti k baare main bataya tha k kaise use unke murder main fasaya gaya tha.
sherry:woh...mujhe pooja ne bataya tha.unke baare main.
hooda:ha sir par case chala tha aur us din court main kuch aisa hua tha k jo hum main se kisi ne nahin socha tha.
sherry:kya hua tha?
hooda:capt.salve ne court main kaha k sir ne jo kuch bhi kiya naveen ko begunaah saabit karane k liye kiya,
unko red box chahiye tha usi k liye unhone conl.shakti ka khoon kar diya.kyunki......kyunki woh naina se pyaar karate the.
sherry:KYAAAA???
hooda:unhone naina k liye unka murder kiya tha,yeh baat court main saabit ho gayi thi.
sherry:rajveer ne kuch kaha nahin is baat par.
hooda:nahin kuch nahin kaha bas naina ki side dekha aur kuch bhi nahin kaha.
sherry:aur naina usane unse kuch pucha nahin?
hooda:nahin,sir se kuch puchati isse pehale hi unka accident ho gaya aur woh......
sherry hooda ki baat sunkar kya kahe kuch samjh nahin paati,use kuch samajh nahin aata.woh apne hi khayaalo main hai.
sherry(in her mind):kya RK naina se sach main pyaar karata tha usane jo bhi kiya naina k liye kiya tha ya sirf naveen k liye,aur woh court main.
chup kyun raha,naina ne us par goli chalaayi par phir bhi usane use bachaa liya,kya rishta hai RK aur naina k beach.RK naina ki parwaah karata hai,
kahin sach main woh naina se pyaar to nahin karata,kya main sahi soch rahi hoo.kya naina hi woh ladaki hai jisako RK pyaar karata hai................
end of part 45
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