jab we met(rm)The End-Page-18-RM confess,epilogue! - Page 11

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Posted: 17 years ago
wow pragz dear now wat to say u just made me speechless u r amazing 👏
loved ARs fighting a lot
and RM again bumped wow great 😆
hmm arman is very naughty he pulled the chair poor rahul
and rahuls shock comming to know about AR is wonderful
just loved the way u wrote amazing
RMs fighting is mindblowing
omg pragz now wat should i say u r just amazing writer loved it a lot
now i cant wait pls update it supersoon
p.s: i know i gave short comment but wat to do u made me speechles
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Prags

Sorry for commenting so late hun
It was an awesome part
I loved the way the story is moving
Loved AR and RM fights
the naughtyness,the cuteness,and the fun
Great work sweetie
Plz cont soon
and PM me if u can
Love
Hina
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: urmila_17

wow pragz dear now wat to say u just made me speechless u r amazing 👏
loved ARs fighting a lot
and RM again bumped wow great 😆
hmm arman is very naughty he pulled the chair poor rahul
and rahuls shock comming to know about AR is wonderful
just loved the way u wrote amazing
RMs fighting is mindblowing
omg pragz now wat should i say u r just amazing writer loved it a lot
now i cant wait pls update it supersoon
p.s: i know i gave short comment but wat to do u made me speechles

no urmi di it wasnt a short comment....u hve made me speechless....ur comments really touched my heart😳......

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: hinanaziri

Hey Prags

Sorry for commenting so late hun
It was an awesome part
I loved the way the story is moving
Loved AR and RM fights
the naughtyness,the cuteness,and the fun
Great work sweetie
Plz cont soon
and PM me if u can
Love
Hina

itz ohk grannyhinu😆...thnx fr d comments...will surely tell!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
awww pragati very nice yaar 👏
par mujhe pm nahi mila 😭
Pragzie thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanx yogsti and shelly

yogzsti i dint pm anyone...dis dis wen i update i will 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
your both parts are wery cute. i really enjoyed reading them. 👏
do continue whenever u are free
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sony_123

your both parts are wery cute. i really enjoyed reading them. 👏
do continue whenever u are free

thnx..continuing ryt now😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

hey guys first of all...i am soo sorry fr d delay..but hey here it is

before starting i wud like to tell you dat this part is dedicated to ashu for making dis gawjus signy:(thnx a ton ashu!!!!luv ya)

recap-rahul and armi almost fight....rahul and muskaan fight ....again(yeh yeh i noe,...big suprise😆)AA share a cute moment...RM cum to noe about AR....

rahul-so...umm how did u guys get together??

armi-well....simple...we fell in love

rahul-oh gawddd....i mean how did u guys fall in love....temme..i wanna noe about ur relationship

armi-oh...um...first our relationship was a love-hate one...den eventually it turned into serious love

ridzy was blushing

at-haan ab khali love hai maar yeh log abhi bhi ladte hain

an-yeh

muski-arrey...tum logonne kabhi suna nahiin kya??ladne se aur bhi pyaar bharta hai

AA-ohh tu yeh baat hai

ridz-di.....and she leaves

armi-oyyee hoyyee

rahul was amused with their 'love story'

muski was just leaving and so was rahul suddenly muski tripped and she was falling down when rahul caught her.....they both got lost into each other's eye.......

rahul realized how beautiful muskaan....how intense her eyes were..muskaan wanted to stay like this forever....holding his neck and softly beathing in his deo..

atul,armaan and anjali were looking at each other...atul stood up and went to them...

atul-kuch to hua hai...kuch hogaya hai..do char din se lagta hai essa...

rahul cums out of his trance....and in a state of shock drops muski..

now muski is really really angry..she gets ups and picks up her slippers and hit him..

ra-ow..ow..ow...enough ow...ow ow....now...

muski stops hitting.....-gey se graya na ...mein tujhe gira doongi sabki nazroon se

ra-oyye jada apna mu mat khol

muski-tu karega kya haan??

ra-woh mein soch lunga

mu-mein tera intezaar nahiin karne wali

ra-tu mat karna

mu-hmmmm....

ra-hmmm..(immitating her)

and they both leave in opposite directions

the other interns laugh

an-seriously..woh log edam tumlogon ke jaise hain..she said pointing at AR.....

at-nahiin woh log hamare jaise hain..pehle se hi ek dusre se pyaar karte hain

an-*rolls her eyes*......and gives a funny smile

at-haasi toh phasi

anjali luks at him very weirdly and leaves

at-ruk ja o anjali......and runs after her😃

AR laugh

armi-jaan do u think rahul muskaan bhi pyaar mein padenge??

ridz-lagta to hai

armi smiles holds her hand and dey also go out

armi was just walking down the corridor and he saw rahul...he went to him

armi-ehem ehem

rahul-kya??

ar-tumhe kya hua??why are you so lost??when dr.armaan is her have no fear(ohk i noe u guys are cursing me fr using the same lines...bt hey i am nt creative enough😃)

ra-you are here dats the fear😆(i dun noe weder dat line makes sense or not)

armi-ohh...cum off it....temme d problem..

ra-nutn...

armi-fine..temme wen u feel like it...and goes

rahul-uff mujhe hi nahiin pataa toh mein tumhe kaise bataaon??but i noe ki the problem is related to MUSKAAN!!!!

muski was lost to...wondering why d hell did she feel weird when she was in rahul's arm??why??

AA:

they both were in the elevator....suddenly the elevator stopped...and d lights started blinking...anjali's dropped her file and screamed

ATTTULLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!

atul was by her side in a second

at-kya hua anjali??

an-mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai

at-kuch nahiin hoga anjali..and holds her hands and sqeezes it tight!!

anjali is now not dat scared as atul is with her

atul picks up the emergency phone and says-hello...mein dr.atul bol rahaan hoon mein aur dr,anjali lift mein phaas gaye hain level 1 or level 2 ke beech mein...

operator-hume kuch waqt dejiye sir

atul-sure

an-what happened??

at-they just need sum time

an went and hugged atul and said:thanx fr everythng..

atul blushes....

an-errm...breaks off...

atul smiles...anjali smiles back

the lights come back...and the lift starts uo again and leave dem on level 3...

at-see maine kahaan na sab theek hojayega

an-hmm...her pager rings......she leaves..

atul blushes and smile and leave!!

dats it fr now.....adios!!

luv ya,

pragz!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
Awww...it was sucha cuteee part Pragz!! 😳 😳 But I hav 1 comment..I really wished u had used another scene of AA..cuz dis 1 was already aired. 😳 But dats ok..I enjoyed RM 2 the most!! 😃 😉 Update sooon & moree..dis was sucha short part!!

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