Pretend u dont see her! ght pt 9 pg 13 - Page 3

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princessunara thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Kanan da next set f characters r also superb 👏 n da special thn i lyk s having reshmi as her sis cz i always thot dats wt they were more suited 4..n aww...i jst luv our pyari lil bhumi.. 😳
bt pls pls keep mah baby lacy away 4m dat monster 😳
waiting 4 da entry f ou hitz 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazin kanan 👏
the storyline is innovative i m gonna look forward 2 d next part eagerly
m a sucker 4 suspense n thrillers 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART TWO

As Lacey drove down the busy streets of manhattan she came across the Beacon theater. As she tresspassed it she vivdly remembered her father. He was a great musicienne in the ocestera that used to play at the theater. Oh how much she had loved him but she thought her love was not sufficient because she had lost her father 2 years back in a plane crash! How much she missed him. More than her mother she was close to her dad! Because he gave her a way of life . He was there for her in her ups and downs . BUT now he was gone never to come back again!

So engrossed in her thaught she did not realize when she had reached kates house! She could see the lights on of the house indicating that they were waiting for her! The garden was looking next to heaven as the moonlight kissed the flowers and the trees! It was mesmorizing!

As she rang the door bell Lacey heard the footsteps of a little child. Yes they were the foot steps of her niece bonnie!

As bonnie opened the door Laceys eyes filled with tears! Her bonnie was her life! As bonnie saw her she gave her a lovable embrace never to leave her again! She loved her aunt lacey very very much!

Kate: Lacey nice to have u over come on darling!

Lacey: kate how r u?? after soo long! Wheres mom? and jim!

Kate: well moms busy with alex in the drawingroom shes waiting for u to introduse him to u!

Lacey: alex who???

Kate : oh well ull know! come on in!

As lacey entered she was wished by her brother inlaw! Lacey was not very fond of jim and was allways against the idea of kate marrying him but well the love for kate was clearly seen in his eyes and together they made a perfect couple with a beautiful child! Who was she to complaint!

Jim: how r u lacey! its nice to have u over ! Come ill introduce u to alex ur mothers friend i mean boy friend!

Lacey was disguisted by the comment ! How could he speak of his mother in law like that! Well yes mom had given her a hint over the phone as to who alex was and that she was very fond of him! She was able to share all her sorrows with him! Lacey was happy for her mother because she had found true love for the second time! She thought will she be able to find love even once!{ Well lacey hes on his way really really soon}

As she accompanied jim to the drawing room she relished the smell of the food her sis had prapared!

As they enterded alex got up and greeted her!

Alex: oh lacey finally i have got to se u ! UR mother speaks well of u ! that i just had to meet u!

Lacey : its a pleasure alex!

Alex: the pleasures all mine!

Alex sure did know how to treat a woman!

Mona: Lacey my child how r u??

Lacey: mom im fine u dont worry!

saying this she gave her mon a hug and a kiss!

Kate : dinners served!

After a really nice dinner it was time for lacey to leave!

She bid everyone good bye and even tucked bonnie to bed! She was so happy to meet her family! But little was she to know waht was goin to happen in the next days!

As dawn broke she knew she had a busy day ahead

She had to meet Citrus Cadwell!

He was meeting her at isabeles apartment building at sharp 11:30!

So she got ready in her business suit and got into a cab to reach her destination!

As she reached the building she wa attented to by her friend and the building super attendent tim powers!

Tim: Lacey r u scheduled to meet mr citrus cadwell at 11:30!

Lacey:yes, why?

Tim: Hes been waiting fo u since 11:15!

lacey was shocked as to find him so early ! she could spot him in a grey business suit looking at his watch!

well Lacey did not know how he would react to her !

What would he do!???????????????

Preview: Whats Citrus's reaction?? How will the encounter be with the man because of whom her life will change forever!😉

PS : im editing some part as too get tom into the picture as soon as possible! Hiten will enter in a few episodes time!

Dont worry about citruss that much k!

😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks for the ud 😳

what a sweet family 😃

well, still citrus will remain a matter worry 😉


ud soon dost
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Posted: 17 years ago
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gud wrk yaar 👏 n specially thanx 4 dat reassuarance @da very end 😆
waiting 4 hitz's entry 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wonderful concept Kanan... I like the characters and their introductions.... Starting with mystery you are taking it into romance, sentiments right? Great.... I love all the character actors you have roped in... Because everyone are my likings too 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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way 2 go girl 👏

one of the most amazin ff's i ve read so far 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowww creat work kanan plzz cond soon cann't wait 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey i havee jst read the intro and it's awesome. I will defo read the rest of the story. Please continue and neversay that again that u r not going to cont.It's totally a diffrent type 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I with all sincearity thank allmy readers !

Part 3

Lacey slowly approached citrus cadwell! Not knowing waht was in store for her!

Looking at the man in front of her she was terrified and a bit nervous! He had long hair that was neatly set into a ponytail! A subtle of beard and blue eyes!

As she approaced him he stood up and looked at her!

Citrus: Miss Lacey Farell?? is that you??? Well from what i hear from rick i think you are more beautifull than what he described! Its a pleasure to meet you!

And he put his hand forwasd to shake hands with her!

{citrus dont flirt with her or else tom will kill you!😆😉}

Lacey: {shaking hands with him} Pleasure! But im really very sorry i kept u waiting so long!

Citrus: not at all mam not at all i seem to be goin early everywhere today! my fault! dumb old me!

Lacey was shocked! from his appearence he seemed to be very strict and dangerous but he seemed to be making a joke of waiting that long for her!

Lacey: Let me show u the aprtment!

Citrus : after you!

Lacey was sure he was an appropriate guy for the apartment! He looked classy and deemure! and not to forget he was a rich lawyer!

As they entered the apartment with laceys key it felt as if they enterd the most beautiful house on the earth!

Olden type furniture , pale colous french interior! the works!

Citrus: what a lovely apartment ! I would sure like to have this one!

Lacey was happy with the comment! But she had to find issabelle warring in the house! Where was she!

At last after a task of finding her in the house she found her in the study! The study was not as tidy as it used to be ! There were papers all over and issabele was reading them ! Pen in one hand and silent tears flowing through the eyes!

As she approache lacey leaving citrus in the dining room she could see that issabele was crying!

Lacey: issabele! are u allright!

Issabele: Lacey go away i dont want to talk right now!

Lacey : but i have bought a buyer who wants to see the apartment!

Issabele: i dont think i want to sell this apartment any more!

just go!

Lacey: what? but....

Issabele: i said leave!

With a mount of anger she left the study!

Citrus: she dosent want to sell it any more!!!

it seems he had heard everything!

Lacey: thats not it! its just that this is her daughters apartment so shes just a bit emotional so ..... but u dont worry ill let u know her wish later but for now i think we should leave!

The meeting with citrus cadwell was over and now they went their own ways!

Lacey after a hectic day went back home! She was really angry with issabele! if she had not to sell the apartment why had she hired her??

But lacey had enough for the day! Handling rick in the office for one and meeting citrus cadwell for the other! what apersonality! looked dangerous but was ver classey in behaviour!

Lacey decided to have a quick shower and prepare herself a meal!

The bubble bath felt relaxing!

As she was preparing a meal for herself he phone began to ring! Issabele warrings number was flashing on it! but lacey decided to let go of it! she let the ansering machine take the message!

Issabele: Lacey seems u not at home! I would like to genuinely appologise for waht happened today but i have found heathers journal and there was something in their that has convinced me that heather was mudered! plz get back to me! how about a brunch tommorow at my place plz lacey plz!

Lacey thought that this was one og her stories as well! how many had she heard over the week os so!

The next morning lacey woke up and got dressed ! She had not decided to go to issabeles hous but something in her told her to atleast pay her a visit!

So that day after taking a half day of work she decided to pay a visit to issabele!

She rang the bell a couple of times but there was no respone! Sensing that something was wrong she took out the key that issabele had given her!

As she netered the house she was shocked to see citrus cadwell right there!

He had a knife in one hand thaat was soaked with blood! Luckely he had his back to her !

She ran ! Hearing her he too folowed but she was too quick!

She hid into a closet and he had lost her! Sensing that something might go wrong he left the apartment with the gun in the leather bag that he had stolen from issabele !

Seeing him go she enterd issabeles room!

Lacey was shocked seeing the site in ront of her!

Isabelle was lying there half dead struggling for her life . She had been shot in the head !

Lacey not knowing what to do wt beside her!

As she sat beside her issabelle held her hand and told her

" this ...... s .........heathers journal.......... promise me ull give ......t .....to ........her father.........do....aa......read..............it .....urself...prom...ise...m........e.........take......it"

as she said those words she was gone she left for her heavenly abode! and Lacey was there all shocked with heathers{issabelles and jimmys daughter} journal in one hand and issables blood in the other!

it was a terrifying nightmare!!!

A little while later lacey was sitting in issabeles house! rick paker by her side!

The FBI agent Mr Knowels was interogating her!

Knowels: Miss lacey plz tell us in detail what happened here!

As lacey narrated her story she was terrified ! She could not bare it any more she wanted to go home!

Seeing her in this state Rick asked Knowels if he could send her home!

Knowels: Mr Parker i am aware of her state right now ! Yes u may do so but we have talk to her tomorrow!

Rick: that would be ok i guess!

As this conversation was taking place between the two men lacey looked around to find people clicking photographs of the place finding evidence! This so pleasant house had become a crime seen! She felt her hand were sticky!

Then she remembered that she had held issabeles hand full of blood and had taken her jouranl away! and put it in her brief case! where was her briefcase!

Yes she remembered it was in the closet!

She had to get the briefcase out and no one would hold it excepyt her!

Lacey: can i just go plz!

Rick: yes ill get u home safely!

He made her stand up and they started to move out! On the way out she had to take the briefcase with hearthers jounal in it !

She approaced the closet annd took her brifcase out! seeing the blood on it she was terrified! it sliped of her hand!

Rick attempted to pic it up but she was quick as lighting! she took it ubruptly from him and just walked out!

Seeing this site Knowells grew suspicious!

As they went down they saw the media gathered there! cliking photograhs!

with grat difficulty she managed to get out and reached safely home!

As she reached home she shuffed her briefcase under the couch! not to see it again!

She quickly wased of her hands and in order to calm her self took a quick bath!

What had she done wrong in her life! That now her life was in gr8 danger ! She had witmessed a muder and it was a very bad thing! Moreover she had trampled with the evidence by taking the journal which was a crime! just to keep a promise to a dying woman!

HER LIFE WAS TURNING INTO HELL!

Preview: Lacey is questioned! jimmy landy comes into the picture! can tom help lacey! all this and much more!

stay tuned!

Inspector Knowels!{ bhanu uday singh!}

the tough cop!

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