Pretend u dont see her! ght pt 9 pg 13

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This is my first atempt at writing a fanfiction i hope u like it!

Pretend u dont see her is a story of a girl {gauri} who works as a realtor {person who sells apatments houses etc} in Manhattan in a prestigeous company called Parker and Parker! But one day the womans who apartment she is selleing is killed by the person who pretends to buy the apartment and she is the only person who can recognise the killer! But however the killer escapes and now her life is in danger! Hence she is forced to shift to another city alltogether with a new id and lofe under the witness protection program ! her life becomes hell as she tries to live with a new name and life threats! But in this up and down she meet her prince charming and falls in love and together they support each other and he helps he in every way!

Intro of characters!

Lacey Farell!{Gauri hiten tejwani!}

a simple beautiful girl who is a realtor ! but dosent know what life has in store for her! Her life becomes hell after her client is mudered!

Tom Lynch!{hiten tejwwani}

A successfull rj wiith looks to kill for ! girls go gaga over him! but one girl lacey swept him off his feet!

If u like it ill continue with the rest of the characters!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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im da 1stttttt...n i hav never seen dat concept b4..ts intro s unique 4 GHT ffs😳..so luking forward 2 reading t yaar..Kanan do post da 1st part soon😳
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may be i should not continue!
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sunu . wht rubbish ju r talking. ju won't continue. if ju wo'nt na I will cme behind ju wid danda... 4 sure

man it's amzaing FF.

I luved it.

ek damn new idea..

plz plz plz continue yaar..

I will b waiting 4 ur nxt part plz contiune


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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: kanan_26

may be i should not continue!
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aww...Kanan sweety y all da tears?😳ts awsomešŸ‘..du continue darling..n dnt wrry u'll hav loadz f fans n no tm..2day s a slow day n IF na...no1 s around..wait till 2moro n see f im wrong😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Intro of others!

Rick Parker!{Manoj bhora}

total flirt is involved with may girls and has a bad habbit of drugs! is the son of the owner of parker and parker and is a spoilt brat!

Robert Parker{ram kapoor}

is a total ruthless man and money means everything to him! he owns parker and parker and is a complete casanova with a temper like no other!

Isabelle Waring!{smriti irani}

Ex wife of famous business tycoon and hotel owner jimmy landi! has been remarried and was into the showbusiness ! lst her daughter in and accident four month back and now is convinced it was not an accisent but a muder!

Jimy Landi!{ronit roy}

Is a famous business man and hotel owner! ex husband of issabele and loved his daughter very much! a school droput but now very successfull! is fed up of hearing that his daughters accident was a muder from issabele!

Tim powers!{sahil of kyunki}

superattendent at abuilding and ows lacey a payback!

Steve D'souza!{rohit roy}

is a faithfull agent of jimmy landi ! is about his daughters age and a great support!

thats it for the time being will introduce new characters as the story progresses!

d i continue??

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey darling plz do cont plzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: kanan_26

may be i should not continue!
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Hey, please don't be disheartened and do continue!
Your idea seems really innovative, very original, I will be a regular reader.😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow..nw dats sm grt selection f characters as da supporting 1s.i can easily imagine them n these characters.. 😳
keep on postin Kanan 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OK i thank all my readers!

Prolouge!
Lacey was shocked seeing the site in ront of her!

Isabelle was lying there half dead struggling for her life . She had been shot in the head !

Lacey not knowing what to do wt beside her!

As she sat beside her issabelle held her hand and told her

" this ...... s .........heathers journal.......... promise me ull give ......t .....to ........her father.........do....aa......read..............it .....urself...prom...ise...m........e.........take......it"

as she said those words she was gone she left for her heavenly abode! and Lacey was there all shocked with heathers{issabelles and jimmys daughter} journal in one hand and issables blood in the other!

it was a terrifying nightmare!!!

Edited by kanan_26 - 17 years ago

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