~*KyA dIl NaI kAhA*~ NEW PART! July 11th! - Page 24

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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part neatsha
loved Kripa's thoughts esp. last one " he smells nice" 😳😛
continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
great job natasha..yea hope everyone liked it...i will try to put up a part...my comp will hopefully be fixed tomorrow..so yea!!
keep reading
luv ya all!! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
That was awesome natasha!! 👏 👏 and looking foward to the next part!! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago

Ok everyone, here is the next part....hope ya all like it 😃


Being the girl that she was, Kripa naturally told Alliyah EVERYTHING; from the time Angad approached her to the time he pulled her close. She conveniently left out the part where she thought he smelled awesome, but Alliyah was still found wide-eyed.

"He pulled you close!?" she demanded in a hushed tone.

"Yes! And then the bas***d leans forward so I thought he was going to kiss me!" Kripa shuddered involuntarily. "Then he kinda stared at me weirdly before noticing you guys coming…"

"Whoa," Alliyah whispered. "This is interesting!"

Kripa cast a weary eye at Josh and Prithvi, but was happy to find that they were still discussing their victory.

"I think he's trying to mess with my mind," Kripa spoke her reasoning out loud. "Or maybe he's going to try and make me tell him who he was at the Ball with."

"You have to tell him sooner or later," Alliyah said. "I mean, you can't hide the truth forever."

The next day at lunch, Kripa plopped herself down on the bench beside Josh and Prithvi in the canteen, not really caring for their conversation about girls.

Her thoughts drifted back to Angad. Once more in a week, her eyes wandered back to his table where his big head caught her gaze. She shook her head violently and checked for a fever. Something was definitely wrong with her. Or maybe Kripa has gotten to hate him to such an extent that he was invading her mind more often than usual.

Angad felt someone watching him. Without thinking, he looked across the canteen to the table Kripa sits at. Kripa had been watching him; he could feel it. She seemed to be shaking her head at someone. Angad watching with mild interest as her features held confusion and a little anger.

"She has to find her…" muttered Angad to himself. "She has to find Mystery Girl."

Coming to a decision, he stood up abruptly and made his way towards Kripa.

"Mr.Oberoi would like to see us," he drawled at her. "And I don't know why so don't ask me."

At first she stared at him almost disbelievingly. Then she got up slowly and followed him out of the canteen. This was too perfect! She actually fell for that. When they exited the canteen, Angad grabbed Kripa's hand and pulled her into an empty classroom.

"What the – ?" she protested.

"Shut up," Angad snapped. "I'm here to make a compromise with you."

She stood there, not saying a word and rubbing her wrist where Angad had seized her.

"As you know, from our little row earlier, I am trying to find my date at the Ball," when he paused, Kripa stayed quiet. "I know you are more than capable of finding out who she is. So… whatever you want in return, I'll be happy to give."

Angad waited for her to say something.

"I already told you I can't…" she started, but he cut her off.

"I don't want to hear that. There must be one thing you want that only I can provide…"

He paused again to let Kripa think it over. After a few moments, her eyes finally widened in some enlightenment and she looked him hard in the eye.

"I want you to be nice," she stated firmly.

"Huh?" Angad was a little shocked at her.

"I said I want you to be nice," repeated Kripa, smiling
bitterly. "You have to be a total gentleman to me and a friend to Josh and Prithvi. You have to act respectfully towards the school as a whole and treat them no differently than how you treat your own friends."

Angad laughed. "That's all? I had expected something more challenging or expensive…"

She just placed her hands on her hips and smirked. "If you're not satisfied, I could always arrange something more painful. Like a DATE."


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Kripa was kidding of course. She had only hoped to shut Angad up once and for all.

"As much as you want me, Kripa, I think I'll pass," he said as though this happened everyday.

"Did you actually take me seriously?" she sniggered. "I'd rather go out with the Giant Squid than you!"

"I doubt that," Angad said, laughing with sarcasm. "You can't deny these feelings you have for me!"

Kripa had to hold herself up from laughing tartly. "Oh you think so, do you?"

"Yes I do. I think you want me."

"Not that I'm agreeing, but I don't see you declining!"

"This has gone long enough!" he barked suddenly. "I came here to negotiate, not ask you on a date!"

"Like I'd accept anyway," muttered Kripa under her breath.

"You are getting on my nerves!" Angad said loudly. "Do we have a deal or not?"

"I'll see how you act first and THEN I'll decide if we have a deal or not."

"Since when is it up to you?"

"Since when do you have any choice?" Having said that, Kripa left the room, but not before purposefully bumping into Angad. She had the upper hand and she knew it.


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Angad fumed. He fumed because she was such a stuck-up, know-it-all. He fumed because she was smart enough to achieve the higher position at this point. But most of all, he fumed because he found Kripa's control over the deal a turn-on. Yes, he hated to admit it. And yes, he still hated her guts. But now he saw her in a slightly different light.

Kripa was like a superior to him. No, wait, she was an equal. No one else in their right minds could beat Angad at something and yet Kripa had managed to have some power over him.

And so, the following week, Angad was forced to be extra pleasant to the whole school. In class, he had complimented a very surprised-looking Josh, who had asked him if he was feeling okay afterward. Then on Tuesday, he held the door open for Kripa, Josh and Prithvi, all the while smiling like it was the best day in the world. Oh how he hated doing this. Why couldn't he die right here and now?

"Kill me now, Karthik!" he grunted at him. "I hate this. I really do."

But Karthik did nothing except look at Angad sympathetically.
On Thursday, Angad was receiving admirer cards from the girls. Everyone seemed into him ever since he started being good to them.

"'Angad I have loved you forever. Be mine…'" he read one card aloud in his bedroom. "This 'being nice' thing isn't that bad after all!"

After a very harassed-looking maid had delivered Angad his tenth bouquet of flowers, he finally ended up burning half of his gifts.

"You going to eat those?" asked Karthik, pointing at a box of chocolates from a certain 'Priya Patel'.

"Enjoy," Angad said lazily.

When Saturday came which signaled another Delhi trip, Angad had been asked by seven girls to go with them; he rejected them carefully. At the breakfast before the trip, he threw Hermione a look that said 'I have been nice!' and saw, with confusion, that she was looking daggers at him.

Crap, what have I done this time? He thought with annoyance.


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"He is not supposed to be enjoying this!" Kripa yelled at Alliyah.

"Kripa! Calm down!" she said soothingly.

"Why? The whole reason I made him be nice was so that he would be tormented by it! Not sitting there like the P.I.M.P. of the century!"

"What's a p***?"

"Never mind, Alliyah. It's just that I can't believe that he's getting ADMIRERS!"

"It's not such a big deal, Kripa! Don't let jealousy drive you mad," Alliyah said calmly.

"I AM NOT JEALOUS!"


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Angad watched her give him the evil eye all through breakfast. A part of him was annoyed, but another part was a little frightened. If he really had done something wrong, that meant that his whole act had been a waste. She would not tell him anything about Mystery Girl.

Angad decided to get this straightened out at Delhi, so he and Karthik followed the foursome out of the gates of the bus. Once inside town, Angad cornered Kripa and demanded to know what he had done wrong. Kripa just shook with uncontrollable anger while Josh, Prithvi, Alliyah, and Karthik all stood watching.

"What the hell have I done now?" Angad asked loudly.

Alliyah tried to push Josh and Prithvi out of hearing-range, in fear that they may hear something they weren't supposed to; Kripa's two best friends still had no clue about Angad. But the boys protested and firmly stood their ground.

"WHAT are you doing with all those girls?!" Kripa shot back, unaware of the disturbances.

"Am I not allowed to be liked in our little deal?" Angad fumed, also ignorant.

"No! Our 'little deal' stated that you could not even take advantage of those poor girls!"

"Excuse me?! Who said I was sleeping around with all of them?"

"Knowing you, I wouldn't be surprised!"

"I am NOT!"

"I don't believe you!"

"All the stories and rumors you've heard had to have come from your friends that HATE me, right?"

She stayed silent.

"That's right!" Angad exclaimed. "All those rumors about me having sex with half the school were not true! They came from the mouths of those who have despised me for a long time; do you REALLY think that they'd tell the truth?"

Again, Hermione stayed quiet.

"I thought so!" Angad continued. "Don't ever accuse me of something else without knowing the facts. I did not take advantage of any of your friends. Our deal still stands!"

"The deal does not stand, Angad!" she exclaimed finally. Was she trying to avoid the deal? "You have been rude to me just now! Therefore, it's off!"

Call him desperate, but Angad was not about to give up that easily. He had to find Mystery Girl no matter what he had to do. His next move proved it all.

He grabbed Kripa's waist, pulled her body up to his, and kissed her.



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Next Chapter Teaser:

Angad was enjoying a rather scrumptious lunch when Kripa came bursting through the double doors of the canteen. Every single student turned to stare at her as she literally sprinted towards his table.

Edited by hrithick_luvr - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome parts...but i think in couple of places instead of kripa u have hermione....i think u like harry potter a lot don't u?? lol 😆 😆 😆 pls cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
nice and awsum parts..

can't wait what happens next? u actually have misunderstood kripa by replacing hermine there? I was like, what! then i got all that! 😉 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
oh! Sorry guys a couple of these parts were meant for something else, regarding harry potter, but i changed my mind that i didn't want to use these parts anymore. So, i thought they would go good over here, so we (me and Shereen) try to change as much as we can....sorry if there are a few slips 😳 !!
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Kripa was just about to turn around and leave when Angad grabbed her waist and kissed her. Emotions such as shock and denial overwhelmed her. She lost all sense of time and place. The world revolved only around her and the Prince Charming kissing her. She forgot in whose arms she really was. She forgot that she was supposed to be hating this. All that mattered was the kiss. Kripa never wanted Angad to stop. Angad… Angad… something finally clicked as she realized the extent of who her Prince Charming was. With a pang of disgust, she pulled away sharply and breathed heavily, unsure of how to bite his head off for all this.

He, however, was the one to break the unbearable silence. "The deal is still on!" he said, wiping his mouth and looking sick. "That is, unless you ever want me to do that again!"

With that, Angad grabbed Karthik's forearm and stormed away in a different direction. Kripa was still recovering from her shock when Prithvi significantly coughed, snapping her out of her reverie. She looked up in alarm, and did the best thing that came to mind.

"EWW!" she screamed, wiping her mouth like Angad had done "Ugh! That was the (wipe) most (wipe) SICKINING (wipe) thing he has ever done!(wipe wipe wipe)"

Prithvi looked a little relieved but Josh was still looking like he had just witnessed murder. Alliyah, however, looked a little thoughtful and Kripa could guess that Alliyah thought it was all 'cute'.

"I need to go throw up," Kripa said after a moment of silence. Alliyah followed her to the girls bathroom, away from Josh and Prithvi.

"What was THAT about?" she yelped, making half of the bathroom's occupant's jump.

"I don't know," Kripa said slowly.

"I can't believe he kissed you!" Alliyah said. "It was SO SWEET!"

"What?!" Kripa snapped. "You thought that when the idiot kissed me, it was, of all things, SWEET?"

"How was he?" Alliyah said eagerly, ignoring Kripa's comment.

"Alliyah! I can't believe you're asking me that!"

"Well?"

Kripa was irritated. "It was nice. There, I said it."

"I knew it!" Alliyah giggled an extremely-annoying girlish giggle.

But Kripa got angry with herself instead. "I cannot believe I just said that! No. He was not nice. Not nice at all!" Inside she knew she was lying. Angad did in fact, taste VERY nice; like candy. Moreover, he had seemed to be enjoying it just as much as Kripa.

"Do you like him?" Alliyah asked unexpectedly.

"No," Kripa said honestly. "I just… I don't know… but I definitely did NOT like him kissing me, " Kripa lied.

She thought that Alliyah looked disappointed.

"Angad?" Karthik asked cautiously. Angad looked like he had just swallowed something extremely sour.

Angad did not answer. He was angered beyond words for what he had just done. Knowing he had liked doing it only irritated him even more. Why hadn't Kripa pulled away? Was she THAT shocked? Why hadn't HE pulled away? It wasn't like he liked Kripa. She was too much of a… a… Angad couldn't find the word for her. Nothing seemed fit. But what bothered Angad the most was why he kissed her. He could've slapped her, threatened her, annoyed her, cursed at her, warned her, intimidated her or anything else... but KISSED her?! Where the hell had his common sense gone?

"She's going to get me for this," Angad said to himself. "I don't think she liked that very much and I have a feeling she'll corner me at school or something."

And that's exactly what happened.

Angad was enjoying a rather scrumptious lunch when
Kripa came bursting through the double doors of the canteen. Every single student turned to stare at her as she literally sprinted towards his table. All of the Professors eyes widened and Kripa seemed to sense this because she slowed down considerably. No matter how much Angad angered her, she was still keen on making a good impression on her teachers. Kripa slowed to a semi-run and glared at Angad intensely.

"Run!" Karthik said rather calmly to Angad, who grabbed his school bag and ran without a word towards the exit. Angad did not care that he was losing his composure in front of the whole student body. All he cared about was what Kripa was capable of and not to mention her fists. He would rather take the beating in private than in front of everyone's eyes.

And so the chase began; Kripa was chasing Angad while still trying to keep to the rules, and he kept looking back to see her falling behind. The only sounds heard were those of their scrambling footsteps and a dramatic door slam as Kripa chased Angad out of the canteen. On the second landing the chase was still in progress with Mr. Oberoi's interference as only a slight disturbance.

"WHAT IS GOI --" he roared as Kripa slammed into him while rounding a corner. But before the words fully left the Professor's mouth, Kripa had already apologized repeatedly and stumbled up the stairs where the hem of Angad's jacket had disappeared seconds before.

Angad skirted behind a statue and breathed precious oxygen. Air had never felt this good to him. But Kripa was a few steps behind him, so he forced himself not to breathe or make any sound at all. Kripa's slow and deliberate footsteps sounded on the other side of Angad's hiding place.

"Come out, you coward!" she yelled, her voice echoing into the empty space.

Angad looked desperately at the stairs and decided to make a run for it. He had just stepped onto the first stair when Kripa jumped out of nowhere and threw herself on top of him. Well, kind of; the steepness of the stairs prevented the two to stay put, so they rolled down swiftly. Kripa's scream filled the air accompanied by the soft plump of her and Angad landing on the floor below.

For an onlooker, the scene would have looked erroneous; Angad on top of Kripa with Kripa's arms around his neck for support. Fortunately, no one was present to witness as Angad let out a loud groan of pain and rolled off of his accomplice.

"Hell," was all he managed.

Kripa was lying on the ground next to him, no longer screaming and rubbing a sore spot on her head gingerly. She whimpered a little every now and then, but other than that, everything was quiet. Angad rose to his elbows and looked down at her with raised eyebrows. She opened her mouth to say something, but he cut her off.

"I told you that you wanted me," he smirked.

"You --!" she started angrily.

Angad smirked wider and quickly began to rise again, but she pulled him down painfully and pinned him to the ground. Yes, Kripa pinned Angad down. With amazing strength, she pushed her elbow into his chest and glared.

"Take that back!" she breathed. Anger seeped in every pore of her face, which Angad was able to see clearly because their faces were centimeters apart. If he moved slightly he could have kissed her again. Sadly, he didn't.

"Make me," he breathed back.

Kripa jabbed her elbow once and another groan of pain escaped his lips.

"Take it back!" she demanded once more. But the only response she received was a stubborn shake of Angad's head. So she jabbed him again. This time, he didn't make a sound but stared at her blankly.

This confused Kripa. Why was he just staring at her like that? No emotion whatsoever from Angad was intimidating to the young girl. Angad just stared at her, piercing her brown eyes with his brown ones. She began to lose her train of thought and her vision clouded. A sleepy-like trance came over her, accompanied by several weak flips in the region of her stomach. Her stomach was… fluttering? Kripa stopped breathing and brought her eyes to his lips. They were calling her, drawing her in, teasing and mocking her. But most of all, they were tempting her beyond all recognition. Her brain didn't even have time to protest before she leaned in and brushed her lips against his. But suddenly Angad pushed her off before the kiss could intensify and pinned her down, laughing slightly.

"I told you," he whispered.

Angad leaned in as if to kiss her back, but winked and got off instead. He casually brushed some dirt off his clothes and walked away as if nothing had happened. Kripa continued to lie on the ground and tried to shake off the feeling of hurt that was creeping in because Angad hadn't kissed her.

Turn back… Turn BACK…! TURN BACK TO HER, DAMN IT!

But Angad ignored the voice it his head and walked away. His brain screamed at him to turn around and help Kripa up, but his legs just continued making their way to his car.

Turn baaaack! the voice said persistently.

I will do no such thing! he argued stubbornly.

You know you waaaant toooo!

I do NOT.

She's probably waiting!

When the last thought came to him, he turned around expectantly… to find her gone. He cursed himself for turning around and having a flare of hope of her still being there. His cockiness gone, Angad scowled his way to his car. It was no surprise that Karthik was the first one to come to his side.

"I don't want to talk about it," Angad growled immediately.

"Fine," Karthik replied. "Just don't get worked up because of her."

"I'M NOT WORKED UP BECAUSE OF HER!" Angad yelled, breathing heavily. Karthik only raised a brow.

Both Kripa and Angad went to bed that night with mixed thoughts of each other. Neither was sure of how to act towards one another anymore and neither liked the fact that tomorrow they would have classes together. They would have to interact somehow.

...neither knew that their worries were only a portion of the reality that was about to happen. In about twelve hours, Tuesday would come and things will take a dramatic twist...

Next Chapter-Teaser:

"How adorable," he said sarcastically.
"Oh shut up," Josh said exhaustingly. "Unless you want to relive another punch, I suggest you clear off."

"Jealous, aren't we?" retorted Angad calmly. He granted Kripa a quick glance before smirking at Josh again. "The almighty Boy Idiot didn't get what he wanted. How… sad." His chocolate brown eyes lingered on Kripa again.

i apologize ahead of time if there are any mistakes (lol)...hope you like it!

<3 natasha

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Posted: 19 years ago
that was awesome part natasha
I couldn't stop laughing when Kripa chased Angad.
It was damn funny.
Loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
omggggg natasha/shereen ... 2 master minds ... here ... u guys r doing a fabb job i just caught up..... amazing work .... 😳 keep it up ...
contd soon if u can 😳 jks... take ur time.. 🤗 🤗


take care

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