Love in the Time of Orkut - Pt 6 - Pg 16 - Page 8

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Posted: 17 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: loveabletwinz

aahhhhh...i luved every moment of it aahana...briliantly written chicka....i love the way the story flows...well put...ahaha...i sooo agree with the K-soaps part...but what to do..ekta has made some UNFORGETTABLE couples..pheww...if it wasnt for them , none of us would writing or reading such wonderful FF's...well done aahana....:]



ya i know Kekta has made some gr8 couples

she is good at her work but needs to change big time 😕

y is it she makes only sappy shows 4 moms aunts n grannies

even we deserve something 😉

n thx a lot guys 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: loveabletwinz

and yes...uve got two new fans here...Annet & Janet...and we're twinz...love reading ur FF :]



thx janet n annet gr8 2 have u both aboard always wonderful to have new friends 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: luv_pavi

👏 awesummm bothh r reallyy worriedd aboutt BFZ plzz get dem soonn 😆 😆 😆 butt reallyy it wazzz superbb 😃



thx pari 😊

ya its so pathetic isnt it abt men we cant live with em cant live without em 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: stylishgal

hey aahana..
fabulous part..
sorry i took so long to read..
the FF is great..
its something most of us as youngsters of today can relate to.. keep up da gud work..

i wanted to request u to plzz start updating ehsaas just like ur updating DCH.. thanx 😊




thx simi 😊

hey c'mon u know me now well pls no apologies what matters is u read 😃

i m so happy all u guys feel tht way abt the FF😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#75
Chapter 3: Oh! Brother, Life Sucks!!!

Pratik had already gone thru what he defined as the initial stages of 'The Love Zone' and was a superior compared to his sis n her best friend

For Karisma thou only his 2nd steady girlfriend was
Like the 5th girl in his life while he was only 18.

He had previously been in a fling, another serious relationship that had ended on a bad note & a heartbreak as well thou not in the same order

The heartbreak was first when as a 16 year old he had proposed to one of the girls in their complex named Juhi, who had turned it down as she didn't want her studies to be affected & remained friends with him however.

The 2nd was a short lived crush on a girl in his school named Ritu, the 3rd worth a bit mentioning was Riya - the first ever girl he dated only to go separate ways after 2 weeks as her parents didn't approve. This was the short fling that he would often boast of as well only to tease his sis.

He would say atleast I went on a date but no one even dares asks u for the fear you may take his eye out if he does so.

Neha' temper was well known amongst her friends n thou Jessica was not similar to neha in her things but both being Taureans had a few similarities as well.

She too was tempered thou not as much as neha, both were stubborn a quality that is often associated with Taureans as a trademark, practical & head strong making guys intimidated to even ask em out.

If someone even had the slightest thought of doing so they somehow would visualize themselves being slapped in the answer, so no one even dared.

So while neha & jessica' luck ran out with the love life owing to their reputations proceeding them Pratik was traveling on new horizons.

After No. 3 had left he had met Deepika a girl in the same classes he attended in his batch.

After a few weeks of friendship n hanging out with the same group the 2 began dating & were soon a couple

Thinking about their future not knowing they were only meant to walk a few steps together to later grow into separate ways.

They had been together for 2 years after which they separated cause of an ugly break-up only caused by 1 of the most sought after & widely spread social networking websites –The immensely popular site among youths - Orkut (directly or indirectly).

Next chapter: Social Network, Personal Plights
Edited by aahana86 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
amazing fantabulous!
i so agree abt taurians yaa they r like that!
and intersting love life pratik! 😆
cont soon
miss perfect! 😉
u deserve it not i iam far from there!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#77
👏 amazingggg butt yaarrr feelingg bad for pratickh 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
#78
plzz add some more conversation..plzz...lol..newa..nice part
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Posted: 17 years ago
#79
aww...poor patrick 😉 😆
as 4 neha..lol..nw dats da kind f gal i lyk...bt wt 2 do abt da dating business...lol..i dnt care cz when my hitz enter he'd sweep his neha off her feet 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#80
Fabulous
👏 👏 👏
Waiting for both of them together
Also are you gonna add new Characters?

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