Love in the Time of Orkut - Pt 6 - Pg 16 - Page 6

Originally posted by: aahana86

Love in the Time of Orkut.

Neha Kotak: a young fun loving girl just about like you and me,

she' all of 22 & has still to find the love of her life yet, a girl with simple hopes n dreams.

She has her share of follies as she does her sensibilities,

not rash however with a temper, not rude but always the one to speak her mind

not impulsive but does know what she wants

not a loner however doesn't like to be lost in crowds.

She is all this & much more as she will soon discover

as she meets Rishabh the love of her life.

Rishabh Mehra: a young dashing guy with a smile to brighten up the dullest atmosphere,

with patience to hear out the woes of his friends.

with a heart that is kind n gentle to all those who exist in it.

He too is looking for true love & hasn't as of yet found it, but will soon discover in Neha.

Jessica Kadam: Neha' Neighbor n Best Friend since childhood,

both have always talked about their dreams n hopes along with everything

under the sun, that young girls do.

Consequently both are also born in the same month separated only by a day in between

Jessica took the lead & was born on the 25^th of April,Plzz make it 24th coz it's ma b'day ok make 24th for Heer then..😳

Neha arrived a day later on the 27^th in the world, to accompany her soon to be best friend.

Aakash Rao: Rishabh' closest friend & aide in times of emergency & crisis

unlike Neha & Jessica Rishabh & Aakash are not neighbors

they attended the same school & college together

they have stuck to each other thru thick & thin.

Pg 1: introduction

part 1: Birthday Woes:Pg 5

Next : Part 2 :What The Hell, Single At 22

just loving it..wow👏 finally iqbal and pallavi..wow😳

hey aahana..i missed ur previous ffs but i'm just loving this one..its completely different frm the other ffs i've read 😆 thanks for bringing harshad as gauri's bro...i could just see the picture in my mind...a lovable bro-sis relation... 😳

waiting for hittu...palke bichaye..... 😍

hey great ff Aahana. And what a starcast. It looks Like SRK(Hiten), Kajol(Gauri), Hrithik(Iqbal,)and Pallavi(Aishwarya )all r in onoe movie. Although i like the Tv actors more than the filmstars, i have quoted their example just to show the star power of ur ff.It's simply great. And they are backed by a wonderful characterization. Loved Neha and Prateek and just waiting for Hiten, Iqbal and Pallavi to enter. I know i will not be able to forget this ff. Please continue soon yaar 👏

Originally posted by: nihalfan

just loving it..wow👏 finally iqbal and pallavi..wow😳

thx Nihalfan 😊

Originally posted by: Nishttha

hey aahana..i missed ur previous ffs but i'm just loving this one..its completely different frm the other ffs i've read 😆 thanks for bringing harshad as gauri's bro...i could just see the picture in my mind...a lovable bro-sis relation... 😳

waiting for hittu...palke bichaye..... 😍

hey nisstha
thx 4 readin my ff n commentin on it
m glad u liked harshad' part as gauri' bro
glad u liked d bro sis bond so much cause this FF will have a lot of it 😃

Originally posted by: Yug-Deepika

hey great ff Aahana. And what a starcast. It looks Like SRK(Hiten), Kajol(Gauri), Hrithik(Iqbal,)and Pallavi(Aishwarya )all r in onoe movie. Although i like the Tv actors more than the filmstars, i have quoted their example just to show the star power of ur ff.It's simply great. And they are backed by a wonderful characterization. Loved Neha and Prateek and just waiting for Hiten, Iqbal and Pallavi to enter. I know i will not be able to forget this ff. Please continue soon yaar 👏

gaurav now i know ur so modest but i really m glad u liked my FF n took out time 4 it as u very well know i love ur works

glad u guys like the selection i made for the parts was kinda nervous cause i ts kinda hard too handle multiple couples

u will have to wait a bit more 4 hitu n iqu but hey pallavi has already entered she is jessica

glad u feel tht way abt my ff will try my best 😃

Chapter 2: What the Hell, Single at 22

The day had been tremendously hot as summer had just gone from bad to worse & had been taking quite a toll on the people.

NJ preferred a nice walk after their dinner rather than sit home n watch K- shows

as after a point they all had seemed so very boring, people dying & coming back from death, unusual plastic surgeries, replacement signs, immortal characters & a list of kids that would even confuse their on-screen parents as well as the kids as all looked alike were too much for the 2,

Cause anyhow their mom' updated em so didn't matter as much, both however loved to watch their favourite show F.R.I.E.N.D.S

Besides some good romantic n comedy shows, both were huge ardent Harry Potter Fans & watched all the parts released so far so many times that they had actually summarized the whole collection with the dialogues.

As they walked again in their premises on the grounds of their complex, once again the topic of their future sprang into action.

J: I loved the bag Pratik gifted u, yeh wohi bag hai Na Jo humne parso mall main dekhi thi?

N: ha usne humme dekha tha and he bought it for me as a gift

J: how sweet mera bada bhai hai aur tera chhota par phir bhi dekh mera bhai kabhi bhi meri gift meri pasand ki nahi laata naam mera hota hai aur use khud karta hai like parso jo I- pod usne mujhe diya

N: par I-pod toh tu bhi use kar sakti hai na phir?

J: ha par usne bahna bana liya

N: kaisa bahna?

J: bola tere vacation hai abhi toh tab tak mujhe de pls job par jaate hue I will listen to music on the way. Aur le Gaya besharam

Both had a nice laugh on that comment n then J asked N d same thing as N had asked P as to how was he there? And she gave him the same answer that he was with his girlfriend Karisma, both took a deep breath & looked up t the sky above sitting quietly 4 a few moments before they once again began their talks , discussions, debates about their lives.


Pratik was younger to Neha so obviously was he to Jessica it seemed so miserable to both to be older n yet not have a boyfriend even once forget love while Pratik younger to em had already taken to the greener pastures in the dating grounds overtaking em.


It seemed sometimes the two felt older beyond their age as compared to em Pratik who was younger was completely ahead in this area where the 2 lagged behind seriously.

N: jess kya phir tu wohi sooch rahi hai?

J: hmmm aur kya karoo yaar kya hum itne bhure hai ki we haven't even had 1 boyfriend so far seriously it's so annoying sometimes 2 be single

N: tell me about it aur us par yeh nalayak Pratik kehta hai main buddhi ho rahi hu sometimes even I have nightmares gees this is really pathetic

J: ya I know

N: oh well but atleast we can be happy about the fact that we have no tensions tht r so frustrating, u no what if mom dad find out? What if they don't approve? Keeping up with your BF' demands besides atleast so what if we haven't found our so called Mr. right atleast we didn't bump into Mr. Wrong

J: ya thts true but still it would have been great to just have someone or else I think mom n dad would just marry me off to a boy of their choice n I'll go thru life without ever having dated even once

N: ya I know mom n dad been so behind me as well they wanna start looking 4 a boy ASAP they have been bugging me now 4 a week

J: u 2?

N: why is it happening with ur folks 2?

J: are you kidding me mom even out my profile on Shaadi.com even without telling me I just found out & man did I ever have a huge fight with her

N: oh my god what r u serious?

J: of course man do u think I m kidding here it's my life at stake here

N: oh god I m thankful atleast my maa cant operate a PC or else I would have had a profile by now 2 ….. Gees jess what's happening with our life?

J: I wish I knew 2

N: damn another lonely birthday another year n here we are still alone, single & virgins that have never even kissed even at 22, what the hell!! Damn life sucks!!!

J: ya it does, big time.

Next Chapter: Oh! Brother, Life Sucks!!!

omg..m loving..it..but plzz..write..long..i love reading..it..lol 😆 ..n plzz..enter our heer..plz...fankx..for sharing..it..lovin d part.. 😳

amazing amazing fantabulous!
i agree about the k soaps part!
i am eagerly waitig for hitens entry!
keep up the good work!
ud soon !
u rock miss perfect writer! 👏 👏 👏

aahana..ts jst so cute..dts da exact thn i felt..😳

lol..neha n jessica seems a lot lyk me..i can totally relate 2 them..watching friends,,harry potter,single @22(lol im nt even 20 yet..bt anywa😆)neha even has a kiddie bratty bro js lyk me😆

i mean dis tm t seems so realastic..hw ur parents thnk..specially moms n future planning f da mariage😆n da pc using thngy abt naha's mom..i jst luved every moment f t..do continue yaar..lol..im still giggling while typing this😆

keep t up gal👏👏👏