hey guys i know yet again we have those three awfull days tht we gotta survive without dmg .i also thought if only we culd recreate the entire calender thing excluding 3days fri,sat n sunday😆 anyways i have thought of giving u guys a short ff which will last only for 3days ...n hence i call it my weekend ff.
i know m not famous at all like most of u great ff writers n nor m i great in putting words together tht wuld make ur heart skip . but still i wanna share this with u "TEMPTATION ISLAND" n as the name suggets is the story abt two extremely gergous ppl who hae been sent on the island for 7days but each has gone for his /own selfish reasons i promsie to give u a happy endingg ........😳
but guys b4 starting i wuld love to know if u guys want me to continue as i dont beleive in forcing my ff on u guys i need atleast 15 replies to start . i am waitinggg anxiouslyy n so r AR to experience their most unexpected days on the island...😳 preety plss dont throw my ff on the 10thpage ðŸ˜
oh ya guys sorry didnt metion b4 ill try n upload pics aswell tht suit a particular scene of my ff
cheers !!!
thanks a lot guys for ur encouragement n support so my ff will have 3-4parts so heres my firsttttttt part
Temptation island...
part 1
thanks a lot for cumming everyone hope to see u guys very soon . hey atul wait where r u going u cannot leave so soon as u r the most important person in our lifes right muskaan said rahul as he pulled atul back from the door . okay guys out with it what do u guys want me to tell u .i have being noticing the entire evening u n ur wifyy dearesttt have been racking your brains to guess this time who willthe lucky couple be n where will is end them arent you.. welll hellll yaaaaaaa wat could we both anyways wanna know otherwise. grow up u guysss its ur daughters naming ceremony party n whole evening u guys wanna know where n who. hehhehhe both rahul n muskaan giggled n also felt a lil embarassed as they both knew instaed of finding sum beautifull names for their lil princes now named aahana tht too courtsey atul all they had being doing was thinking harddd whom atul send this time n wheree??? look aahana your parents r still not over the romantic spree i had send them tooo .... aahana nodded her head as if she understood eachword uncle stul spokee.here muskaan dear hold ur daughter n u both listen to me carefully ... ohh wowww now here cumms the big surprise ... well no my frd rahul here cums n end to ur excitement i am not telling anyone anythinggg as u no the rule noone knows anything b4 my bday party like a yr back u two didnt no wat was gonna happen .rahul n mukaan who had now given up trying exchanged dissapointed looks n decided to let go. fine atul as u say we both will be waiting for ur bday said rahul now thinking to himself "the whole world waits for their own bday n all the bachelors n spinsters wait for ur freeking bday so tht they culd meet their soul mate" . gudboy rahooool now cummon be a nice boy n tomm morning plsss cum to my house gotta select a gud designer suit for my specialday ..yayaya wateverrrrrr ill be there .atul left both muskaan n rahul still racking there brains for the biggg surprise.
while driving back home atul thought tohimself i cannot believe it i still dont have a freeking plan for my bday how culd i furget it .though i shuld appreciate myselff for bringing the 2 most perfect ppl together .they looked sohappy n also not to furget the happiness tht their lil angel has brought into their lifes.ok snap out now n think think atul wat u gonna do thistime last time while watching titanic it struckto u tht u shuld send two ppl on a cruise but now wat u gonna doooo think think .....😕 well hmmmmmmmm i atleast know the girl whom i wanna sent buttt who will be the guyyy n ofcourse i gotta play a stupid game n announce them the winner so tht they dontthink is end them together on purpose .. ridzzz will kill me if she knows i sent her on purpose n now tht this time its gonna be ridzzz i gotta be super carefull while selecting the most perfect guy . atul was still trying very hard to think abt THE perfect location to send THE 2perfect ppl whom he wished culd again turn into THE perfect soul mates.afterall he couldnt break the trend he had set since soomany yrs of playing weired games on his bdays n getting 2perfect ppl together.ok neways still got 5days tothink abt it lets go n hit the bed m toooo tiredd awwwwww.
as atul opened the door he wasnt atllll shocked to see ridzzz looking all mad at him n siting witha killer look as this wanst teh firsttime atul had ditched her for a dinner date . ooooooh soooo atulll dearesttt is here to go with poor me for a crapy dinner.look ridzz m really sorry ok i was abt to leave when rahul n muskaan caught me to know my bady plan. ooooooo bday plan itseems u n ur crap bday planss each yearr i gotta spoil my manicure by chipping my nails in nervousness tht wuld i be the victim of ur stupid it seems "love game" oh crap she will kill me if she nos tht this time its definately her ...now wat r u thinking abt say sumthingggggggggg...... haan haan ok chilll let me freshenup ... ohh atull hunnnnn do u think m lookingg veryy fresh after waiting for u for almost 1,2 ... hmm 2hrs n 15minss ne decent guy wuld make a beautifull girl like me wiattttt. nowlets go n onthe way plsssssss instaed of thinking abt whom u gonna sent n where .. just think abt a decent place we can go nnn eatttttt... atul all nervous now siad to himself dude u better be carefull while selecting a guy for this maniac orelse for the rest of ur life u will be cursed by the poor guy...
ok guyss thts all for now hope u guys like ittt wait for the excitement thts gonna take place in my next partt n i request u all to leave your comment they mean a lot to me preety plssssss reply thanks again😊
promo for part 2 pix included : the day has arrived n everyones getting ready for the party all r really exicted expect ppl who r married 😕 . atul has finally decided wheres he gonna send ridzz n himm whom he feels is gonna be the perfect soulmate .he sgonna send them to wat he calls his TEMPTATION ISLAND
will they both be able to survive n resist the temptations on the island adventure will they both be the perfect soulmates . lets wait n watch 2nd part cumming up reallysoon.
hello everyone its 3am n i culdntsleep atall thinking abt the 2ndpart i did wanna type the entire part but if at this time my parents wake up ill have to spend the nights with the stars outside 😆 so just took the risk of typing a small promo i no i did sound like r confused promo lady 😆.thanks a lottttttttt for all u guys who read n replied tooo .plssssssss let me know wat do u guys think abt the promo 😉 night night everyone its nini time n remember dooooooooooo comment 😳
part 2
hello rahul hi could u plss came to my house .. sure atul y wat happened y r u sounding so upset is everything alright inquired rahul .yes iam absolutely fine i just need ur help for tomm big party actually for tomms big surprise .rahuls eyes widened as he got the signs of knowing abt the big plan b4 anyone else could ...helle hello rahul can u hear me ahem hmm yaa ya atul ill be there ina jiff .saying this rahul hung up the phone ran towards the kitchen said sumthing really fast to muskaan which practically didnt make sence ,kissed aahana took the car keys n sprinted like he had ants up his pants all muskaan culd understand was atul...., call...., surprise, help ... house....byelove u . thts it. knock knock ..... yes plss plss cum in . sir ur frd rahul is wiating downstairs can i send himup .hmm ya suure send him... knock knock yes rahul plss cumin .sooo sup bro now u need my help hunnn 😉 well hell ya this time i need sumones help in selecting the right guy as i cant risk my innocent best frd with any other road romeo who will be jumping to go with her by knowing abt her bank balance...hmmm true atul but how cumthis time u have already decided who r the lucky peeps i mean thts supposed to be decideed onthe spot on ur bday ......... hmmm ur right rahul but i decided to send ridzz as she has been dipressed lately after her mum passed away n even shashank uncle is busy with his hospital being an alone child she has taken a loton herslef as she culdnt share her pian with anyone else except me so thts the reason i wanna give her a break n its high time i see her happy n settled in life now .... hmm thts really thoughtfull of u atul ,so anyways howcan i help.. well rahul listen very carefully this is a very tough job but only u can doit .rahul who was now paying extra attention to each word tht atul uttered suddenly jerked as he herd the name "ARMAAN MALLIK" ..... wattt no ways wat abt himm .rahul i want u to calm down first n listen to me i no he is now seperated frm your family due to your family issues n his ego well hes your cousin n i remember u telling me the otherday tht u want him to join family business once again n your the only guy from the family hes kept in touch with , he sthe perfect bachelor in town with a perfect n clean past n he also belongs to the MALLIKS imean thts huge ....... hmmm so the moral of the story is u want me to get him to the party sumhow ..... well yes i do . n my plan B is if ur rejected i have alraedy personally called him earlier n i also know tht he needs a financer to built his very own hospital for heart patients ..... hmm atul ,well his dad had offered him help so did my dad we r preety much welloff to built several such hospitals but he doenst want ne family help soo.. ... i know evreything rahul well thts the catch he has to cum as he knows its not just a party its kindof a business meeting..... i must say atul u got sum great stuff upstairs in tht body 😆 both gave a hifi toeach other n said together so let is start MISSION AR .
hey atul happy bday hunn i must sayy this time u have yet again shocekd the town buy throwing a pool party said ridzzz who looked absolutely stunning in a white kneelength dress , white styletoes and a purple orchid flower behind her left ear ... she looked absoulutely stunning n was definately a head turner . thanks ridzzyy u look beautifull cummon let me introduce u to sum of my so called frds .they both giggled at each other n started walking towards the pool . he suddely appeared from the pool still wet with water dripping from his hair onto his well tonned muscles n his well built chest .his blue eyes sparkling like saphires ...he took his black bathrobe from the table n till he culd even relax on the chair n sip his first sip of vodka he was mobbed buy all the possible girls at the party .... ok so there he is said atul as he knew tht where the mobb is sumwheere in between we shall find him .ok ridzz now lets go to the bar i need a drink .sure atul lets go ... as they passed by the mob ridzz gave a wierd look hey atul wats with these girls i mean isnt it your bday this whoever person is taking away your limelight 😆 its ok ridzz cummon . they both approached the bar n b4 atul culd order his drink .... excuse me culd i have another glass of vodka n plss with extra ice . ridzz eyes widened as his pressence n his voice has already created quiet an impression on her .she turned atonce to look at thier gaze at met for the first time he had never seen anyone so elegant like her atleast he knew for sure she wanst like the other bunch of girls who had taken undew advantage the theme of the party n cum delibratly in a twopiece to impress him n others .... she culdnt see anything beyond his dazzling eyes as she was so lost in them ....ahem ahem atul interupted breaking the ice between the two it wuld be my pleasure to introduce to u ARMAAN MALLIK ... ridzz gave him a watever kindoff look n a fake yet a nonfake smile as she didnt want him to know tht she had alraedy fallen headover heels for him .he to didnt wanna show her tht he had seen nothing sobeautifull on the face of this earth n so pretened to give her a cold yet not so cold look . happy bday atul ...thanks armaan ,if u wuld excuse me its time for my game wat i call the lucky 2 he giggled n left frm there obviously forcefully dragging ridzzz who just wanted to kill atul at tht very moment to take her away frm him.
attention alll u beautifull girls the moment has arrived where one of u gets to go to wat i call the TEMPTATION ISLAND .all the girls whowere now approacing the dice like a hungry dog runs when he sees a bone ..little did they no tht the lucky girl was already selected . ok so my game is called TRICK OR TREAT i have all kinds of chocolates here n only one of them hass a note init tht says ur the chosen one . so all u girls cum n pick ur fav chocolate n lets see who wins this game. atul wass super talented to know to arrange this game n make ridzyy win as he knew tht ridzz cannot levae her house without a lipgloss , keys ,her mobile n a bar of twix chocolate in her purse .as as per the plan ridz was the firstone to go n select her chocolate. after all the girls had selected her chocolates its was time for everyone to unwarp their treat . all of them were dissappointed when rizdd unknowingly yelled in the hope tht she might be going with him "heyyy itss me" . wow ridzz congratesss said atul ...lil did the poor girl know tht even though she had won her treat she was tricked bigtime by her frd .her gaze searched for his n there he was right in front of her ,his presence yet again made her feel weak in her kness .he gave her a nod tht menat congratess .she just blushed 😳.the moment was yet again broken by atuls announcement..
well all u guys out there so now u know who culd be ur dreamgirl " fools just keep dreaming m not even giving her passport size photo to u" he siad tohimself continuing his announcement so as i was saying my lil angel gets to choose her man .i wuld request all u guys to plss line up .cum here ridzz hunn i am gonna cover ur eye with a blindfold n u gotta go n select ur guy .the guy whom u place ur hand on will be going on u. ridzz who w as now ready with a knife to stab atul whispered in atuls ears " hmm atul if i have to go with sum joker cuse of ur stupid trick ill kill u " oh dear godddd it better be him she said toherself. atul was preety confident tht she had scanned him soo well in tht onemoment near the bar tht even if she was thrown in a dark room with 100ppl she culd still easily spot him . as ridzz starting her atsk her heart kept pounding very hardd .the stake were preeety high either she gets to go with the greek god or she has to suffer with a fool on a island for 7 wholedays .............
thts all for for now guyss plsss dnt forget to leave ur comments .your comments r highly appreciable 😊
have a great weekend n wait for my next n most sizzling part !!!
hey guys thanksssssss a million for all ur beautifull comments here is the new promo for part 3
m not gonna write nething i no m acting smart here but lets see wat u guys have to say .do u think ridzzz has selecte dthe write guy do u think the tent is full of luxories or princess ridzz has to suffer with mr.wrong in a crapy tent !!!!😉
hopefully i shuld be able to update the 3rd paart very soon m a bit unwell😕
cheers !!!
enjoy ur weekend
hello everyone m back with with my 3rd part thanks too all u guyss who have given me soo much appreciation .special thanks to all u ppl who commented n also to all those silent readers who read my ff but were a bit lazy to comment😆ne ways guys as suggested by cat di there will be a change in the format of my ff .n ya how can i forget u er.sheetal thanks a lot for taking somuch interest in my ff n actually spenidng time to comment on the promo.
PART 3.
she felt the first guy n without wasteing a moment she moved ahead .
atul who had his eye closed was praying hard as he knew he had played his part n now it was ridz turn to choose the right guy. cummon ridzz plss dnt let me down i no u will select him .i wish i culd tie a tranparent blindfold .stupid me watiff oh dear god plss
wat on earth was i thinking ..... y the hell did i take this stupid challange i was so helplessy involved in that armaan guy tht i even agreed to take up this crazy challange wat if i dnt hold his hand wat if....... no common ridzz concentarte u cant be wrong u just cant be she siad to herself .
as she moved ahead with shaky feet n butterflies in her stomach ,her heart started pounding faster she culd now feel tht she had already entered his territory .his colonge was already driving her nutss .she went closer n placed her hand on his face , how culd god create a guy with such well defined features she thought to her self , she could feel him breathing on her .... he didnt move an inch... withhis eyes closed he enjoyed the moment .it was like a feather touching his face . ridz caught his hand n blushed yet helplessly.the guy whom she had selected opened her the blindfold n stood besides her giving a look to the world tht shes already belongs to him
yes it was him. ARMAAN MALLIK .
"thank goddddd" atul heved a sigh of relief . ok frddddsss so now tht we no who the two lucky ppl r n where r they gonna go lets get sum business straightened .
ridzzz wasnt ready for this one she was still trembling from his wierd game n now dunno wat she was gonna getinto ...
so here r the rules of this game the winner of this game gets a huge sumof money enough for his 4generations to take achill pill n enjoy .armaans eyes had now widened as he knew wat was he actually going for ....going with rizds was just a added bonus .
atul continued with his announcement the game begins tomm mor . both u guys have to meet me tomm at 8.am on QUEEN ELIZABETH dock where ill be waiting with my private ship n all the necessary things required for u guys to survive on the island . n now the golden rule for anyone of u to be declared as the winner it is necessary tht both of u make sure noone quits ....... if anyone of u quits the pricemoney stays in my bank account n all u get is actually nothing.
i no i can survive but will this delicate darling be able to bare the harshness the bare island has to offer as of now she doenst even nos tht we aint gonna live on a luxorious cruise.giving a i dont think u can do it look to ridz armaan said so now i have two challanges 1st get the prize money n make sure this honey stays with me .
atul looked at ridzz who was no going into the panicky mood .he went close to her n inquired polietly" hunn u think u can do it if u want u can say no " ridz looked at him with a puppyface n b4 she culd say nething atul continued " if u r thinking m gonna tell u to quiet sorry hunn u dnt stand a chance ....n cumon now u can give me those tuff looks while i drive u backhome "....
next morning ridz who hadnt shuther eyes onemoment woke up without the help of a alarm or even a wakeupcall as whole night she had being tossing n turning cursing herself for letting herslef into this mess..headed towards her wadrobe she removed a hugee suitcase as she had to rap up her whole fashion world into a huge luggaebag which she thought wanst even enough for her nightwear ....
the 2guys were waiting anxiously for the girl to arrive. armaan in his black t n white 3forths looked all set for the island adventure.
hey atul dnt u think tht we shuld go chek on her n see if she alraedy chickened out ...
well i no armaan u think shes a delicate darling but just for ur knowledge shes a fighter n wont quit tht easily
hmmm well u mean tht chick who thinks a short pink dress n pomp heel shoes r perefectly fit for a adventorous trip then may be you must be right shes quit a fighter.. armaan giggled as he saw ridz from a distane managing to carry her suitcase sumhow ..
ohh mannnn wats wrong with her siad atul who had already gone half way to help her with the 100tonn luggage.
gudmorning .m sorry u guys had to wait. with a nervous look she saw armaan who was looking even more breathtaking than lastnight .
so i guess i forget to mention one small lil rule ...both armaan n ridzz gave atull a now wat the hell look ... well even though m scared of those looks but still this is my game n the rule is u guys cant carry ur luggage to the island .b4 u guys panic let me mention u can carry just one extra pair of clothes n i give u exactly 15 mins to get the 5 necessary supplies each u think u will require for your journey.
b4 both of them culd utter a word atul said " n ur time starts now"
cheers armaan may be this might be the last time u gonna be sipping ur chilled vodka b4 ur out of the island n u ridzz hunn stop using ur blsuh n ur gloss as u no it wont last for 7days unless out of the 5things u have choosen is ur makeup kit ...
after 2hrs they all reached the location so guys here we r this wuld be your home for the nest 7days.
wow atull this is a beautifulll placee so wheer is our cottage i hope we have a spa ..it wuld be great to get a massage each mor wuld just add more flavour to my vacation on thsi island.
ahem ahem well ridz hunn armaans home is ur home..i mean look armaan is carrying ur home in his backsack.
watttttt. ridzz culdnt imagine in her wildest dream tht she had to survive on a beautifull yet stupid island without anyfacalities n tht tooo in a senseless tent with a stupid .... nono a hawat hawt guy😳 but wat the hell how culd he replace all her luxories she had left behind.
b4 she culd turn back n yell her heart out at atul she saw him biding gud by n yelling from a distance " u two can enjoy building ur home today n i shall be back tomm with yet another surprise......
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thst all for part 3 guys i really hope u like it now theres a lil problem m facing which i wanna share with u people.when i started this ff i thought i wuld make it a weekend specail n end it by monday but m unable to do so as i cant compleet my story in 3-4parts n this hope u dnt mind but this ff will be a bit longer hope u guys dntmind .plss dont furget to leave ur comments ....😊
cheers!!!
hello people
well as the subject line suggests i dnt think there is much i can say ðŸ˜.but still i wanna thank all u guys who read my ff n appreciated my work.most of u no i m in india for my vacation n i was super excited to meet karan n shilpa though m still hoping to meet karan but shilpa leaving dmg hass shattered me .even b4 reaching india in my break journey i came to no shes quiting ðŸ˜ðŸ¤¢ nothing culd have been more awfull n heartbreaking after a 14 hr flight n still 8 more hrss stillll to reach india ....tht was awfulllllllll.i tried continuing with my ff bbut my imaginations just dnt flow the way they use to ....
i apologise to each one of u
tc n love u alll
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