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Posted: 17 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: firdous

prerna and sonia..the first part was awesome...waiting for more 😊 😊 😊

hey afreen

thanks alot will pm u def next time

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Posted: 17 years ago
#92
oye hoyye,
sorry for the late comment,so here take ur energy drink that tastes to me very well...........oh god my heart was pounding very fast i wanted to read more of it though i know that all the good things end somewhr but it was awesome darlings,btw thanks for the pm...........i luved it plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont asap
luv ya
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Edited by magicgirlankita - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#93
hey ankita
thanks for ur energy booster 😉 😆
but believe me ull feel like killing me when u come to know the freeeze point of our 2nd part just writing it
half done rest is remaining
will post soon once sonia okays it
u know the part 1 credit completely goes to sonia
n promo to me 😆
will update fast yaar
once its over
will update may be by tues or thurs but even im excited abt this part n the next 😆
coz theres a shock n surprise 😉
ull have to wait till then
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Posted: 17 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

hey ankita
thanks for ur energy booster 😉 😆
but believe me ull feel like killing me when u come to know the freeeze point of our 2nd part just writing it
half done rest is remaining
will post soon once sonia okays it
u know the part 1 credit completely goes to sonia
n promo to me 😆
will update fast yaar
once its over
will update may be by tues or thurs but even im excited abt this part n the next 😆
coz theres a shock n surprise 😉
ull have to wait till then

alright any thing for u and the update

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Posted: 17 years ago
#95
wow sonia & prerna
amazing parts
waiting for surprise
plz contnue soon.........
thanx for pm
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Posted: 17 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: cute_unknown_fr

wow sonia & prerna
amazing parts
waiting for surprise
plz contnue soon.........
thanx for pm

hey yogitha,,,,

thanks soo much,,,

we will cont sooon,,,,,

and its alright,,,

thanks again....

Sonia

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Posted: 17 years ago
#97
ok sonia waiting for u r part
Edited by cute_unknown_fr - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: cute_unknown_fr

ok sonia di waiting for u r part

OMG yogitha

plllzzz don't call me di....

i have no one call me that...no one ever has called me tht...lol... and anyways i bet ur older than me....

but thanks... prerna is a bit busy so we will update when she is free... and me well i am sick n dying...lol... not literally... hehe

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Posted: 17 years ago
#99

Part – 2

The results were displayed on the TV screens of thousands of viewers, some of whom were happy and excited while some were sad and annoyed. Mixed emotions were portrayed by people all over. Luck had favored those 20 ones who had really put in their hard efforts and were determined to win. Well not yet because these 20 were to undergo a special test in a 2-month program which would determine their real skills n potentials. The hardest test of endurance ever put forward in any field. Time would reveal who was really capable of becoming a professional doctor in this challenging field.

Now lets move on and see what are the feelings of those aspirants who have been selected for this 2-month program.

Gupta house, London:

Riddhima Gupta was the apple of her father's eye being the only daughter, after his wife's death, Shashank, Dr. Shashank Gupta, an SMC pass out, loved his daughter very much n cared a lot about her. He couldn't see transparent pearls dropping out of her eyes but mind you Riddhima is not like those spoilt, pampered rich brats; she is very sweet, sensitive n caring but does not accept any crap from anyone. She's the no-nonsense-attitude girl. I guess it's enough about her. Lets see what's going on in her house.

As soon as she entered her house, her father welcomed her with a cake for being selected as an intern at SMC. Ridhhima retorted back, "But dad, I have the 2-month program to get through n…" cutting through "beta, I'm sure you'll get through it. Be positive as you always say." "Thanks dad. Love you!"

After some time,

"Papa mujhe aashirwaad dijiye ki main is test mein safal hun. I have to leave now. Bye dad." "All the best beta. Mera aur tumhari maa ka aashirwaad humesha tumhare saath hai. Apna khayal rakhna. Bye beta."

Malik mansion, Australia:

As he entered, Armaan thought that at least today someone would congratulate him or wish him luck but it was the same he had left some hours ago. No one bothered about what was going around. Dad – gone for a business meet n mom – ya mom (sarcastically) for her kitty parties or social gatherings. Well well well why was he bothered about them. Malik mansion – a place where everyone lived as a guest not as a family, so no one would celebrate your success buddy thought a dejected Armaan and quickly packed his bag n left for SMC.

Chadda household, South Africa:

As Muskaan entered her house, she dropped the shopping bags (ya ya shopping freak you see) at the sight in front of her. She thought she had entered the wrong house coz this was definitely not hers…… decorated lavishly with lights, flowers, tents, music n what not. When she turned to leave, she heard someone call out her name.

"Muskaan, oye muski putar! Beta jinda rai! Aaj tune humara naam roshan kar ditta hai. Dil khush ho gaya putar." "Mummyji, papaji yeh sab kya hai? Kahin aap log meri shaadi toh nahi kara rahe hai naa bina notice ke?" "Nahi putar yeh to tere SMC mein internship ke liye hai…" "Kya? Itni baddi party? Aur waise bhi mujhe intern banne mein ek aur test ki doori hai." "Beta tu who bhi paas kar degi, yeh le mithai kha aur who kya kehte hai jee chill shill kar" "Mummyji chill shill nahi just take a chill pill mom" "haan haan wahi"

This had to happen, thought Muskan. Her parents were typical NRPs …… Non-reliable Punjabis sighed Muskaan. Whatever be the reason to celebrate she still loved them n they loved her too. She quickly got ready to leave for Mumbai.

Welcome to JJG, New York:

Before u probe in questions regarding JJG, let me tell you its nothing but Joshi Jungle Ghar coz Atul's house was more like a jungle rather than a house due to the inmates being tini-mini plants with whom Atul chatted day n night. People felt his behavior weird but his cuteness and goody goody yet cool attitude had won many hearts.

As Atul entered, his plants swayed n danced on his arrival as they were aware that he would definitely succeed; that's what Atul said but did they really sway n dance everyone wondered.

But lets not disturb them n move on to the Mehra's.

Mehra bungalow, Canada:

The moment Anjali Mehra entered her big bungalow, Mr. Mehra, her father asked her only one thing, "Kaam ho gaya hai ya main kuch karon???" This was the only thing she hated in her father – power; her father always wanted to get things done for her by his power, influenced everyone n got his things done by hook or by crook.

But Anjali, sweetly called as Angie, was a strong girl n knew that it would not be easy for her to oppose her father n do things on her own without his help. She wanted to become someone on her own, without anyone's help… on her own. She was this independent n self reliable girl who would not accept anything from anyone owing to her identity of being "The Mr. Mehra's" daughter. She wanted people to recognize her as Anjali, not as Mr. Mehra's daughter.

She sighed n thought, "Dad wont change! So its better not to argue with him." And said, "Papa its alright with me. Its getting late n I'm leaving. Bye papa. Take care."

Saying so she headed towards her room.

Grewal home, New Zealand:

Rahul entered his house with a beam of happiness on his face but there was no one to share with. Rahul's smile disappeared n turned into a frown the moment he saw his father in that condition. He went to him n said, "Papa aaj main bahut khush hoon kyonki main aapka … mera matlab hum dono ka sapna pura karne jaa raha hoon. Mujhe SMC ke 2-month program ke liye select kar liya gaya hai aur mujhe yakeen hai ki aapke duaon se main ya bhi paas kar longa aur Sanjeevani hospital ka intern banunga aur phir ek kamyab doctor bankar aapko jaldi thik kardunga. Bas aap mujhe aashirwad deejiye ki main kamyab hun. He bends down n touches his father's feet who was sitting on a wheelchair n then leaves for Mumbai, the city of dreams, as said by many.

A week later:

As u have met with these to-be interns, now let me take u to the SMC campus…

We can see a very big open ground, guarded by a big gate having many security guards at its entrance. Inside it has a huge garden at the entrance, indeed a very beautiful one with all kinds of flowers n plants, which also serves as a botanical garden for the research purposes in Sanjeevani Research Center.

This big campus contained SMC, SRC, Sanjeevani hospital n many other small buildings.

This campus had every thing in it, all kinds of recreation facilities were available for the welfare of students n staff of college n also for the doctors n staff of hospital.

As we move further, we see that the auditorium is decorated as though its someone's wedding that is taking place… hey hey hey… wedding in SMC??? No its not a wedding but not at all less than one. Its been decorated for the welcome party thrown by the Sanjeevani institute for their to-be interns.

8:00pm, Sanjeevani Auditorium:

As soon as Anjali enters the hall, she sees a boy talking to the plants close to the balcony. She finds this behavior of his very weird. She goes to him to speak to him coz she has never seen a sample like him in her entire life. She calls out for him, "Excuse me!" n when he turns she's completely smitten by him. She was for the first time, in her life till now, bowled over by someone. She had seen many like him or rather many boys more handsome than him but there was something in him that attracted her. She was not only bowled over by his looks but also the child-like innocence in him. She came out of her trance when he had asked her, "Yes??? Any problem Miss…" cutting him through n forwarding her hand, "Anjali…" thinking for a moment, "just Anjali(more to herself rather to him)" "Oh hi Anjali! I'm Atul Joshi from New York. I'm here for the two month program n u?" "Oh that's great! Even I'm here for the same…"her heart was beating fast. She thought, great nahi maha great! Thanks a lot Bhagwanji! Her thoughts were interrupted by Atul, who said "Hey Angie, chale the party is about to start…" seeing her startled expression, he continued "I hope u don't mind…" cutting through she said "No, not at all. In fact that's my nick name n I love being addressed as Angie" "So I think we can really get along very well. What do u think angie?" "Ya, even I think so… hey lets see whose that there?" she said pointing towards two people who were totally engrossed in talking that as though they weren't aware of the surroundings, it seemed.

The moment Muskan had seen him, she felt a strange feeling in her as though she had known this person since ages. She walked forward n put her hand forward in her usual bubbly manner saying, "Hi I'm Muskan chadda from South Africa. Waise toh paida Punjab main huyi par pali badi hoon S.A. mein. Aur tum?" "Jee????" "Areey yaar tujhse apna sirf naam hi toh puch rahi hoon tere saath rishta nahi jood rahi…" n she burst out laughing. (well here Muskan laughs pretty decently n not like our serial one) Seeing her laugh so heartily, Rahul started to smile from within, a smile which did not come on his face since long n now seeing her smile he felt contended n happy. Realising her last few words, he came out of his trace n told her "Jee nahi, aisi koi bath nahi hai. Mera naam Rahul hai aur main New Zealand sey hoon."

As their small conversation was going on we see that two people, quite young n good-looking were walking completely drowned in their thoughts, oblivious to the surroundings n suddenly they both crash each other n the girl who was holding a glass of water, trips n straight away falls in his strong arms. She couldn't help but stared into his eyes n the same goes for him. It gave them a feeling that they knew each other for long n a sense of familiarity crept in each other's thoughts. For him, she was the most beautiful girl he had ever met n he was falling head over heals on her, it was surely more than attraction… it was love … did love at first sight exist? Ok wait he was going too far for sure he thought n his thoughts were disturbed by the water from the glass (which she was holding) which fell on both of them bringing them out of their lala land.

While staring at her the only word, which escaped from his mouth, was 'beautiful'. When she heard that, she flared with anger. She hated flirts n now this is it. For a moment she thought that this one man was different from others. He was so charming n handsome n his exotic persona made her weak but no she thought, "all men r the same!!!!" That's what she thought. "What? … what did u just say?" "Mar gaya tu toh Armaan. Dekh kaise dekh rahi hai… bilkul Jhansi ki rani ki tarah… kuch toh bol…" thought Armaan but to quickly cover up he said, "Exactly beautiful tumne meri itni mehengi aur beautiful dress kharab kar di aur upar se mujhe yani Armaan ko attitude de rahi ho! Samajhthi kya ho apne aap ko? Ek toh maine tumhe girne se bachaya aur tum "T" se "Thanks" aur "S" se "Sorry" kehne ke bajai mujhse ulajh rahi ho… sharam nahi aati tumhe?" "What kya kaha tumne? Main tumhe attitude de rahi hoon aur main tumse jaan mooch ke takrayi? Main kya tumhe bewakoof dikhti hoon jo main…" cutting her through, Armaan said, "Who tum ho isliye khud hi keh rahi ho. Kisi ke chehre par thodi na likha hota hai ki who bewakoof hai aur waise bhi tumne kahawat toh suni hogi naa 'Appearances can often be deceptive'… oh I'm sorry tumhe angrezi toh aati nahi hogi naa isliye kaho toh iska hindi mein ucchar karon kya?" before he could continue she interrupted "Tumse toh bath karna bekar hai aur sorry ka s toh kya thanks ka t bhi nahi kahungi. Huh" n she stormed off, when she again bumped into Muskan.

"Oh I'm sorry Miss…???"

"Oye thand rakh yaar itna gussa kyon ho rahi thi us bande par?"

"who actually…" before she could complete, Muskaan once again but in n said "waise main Muskan chadda hoon South Africa se aur tum?" "Main Riddhima Gupta hoon, London se."

By this time, all the other 4 had gathered there.

"Hi, main Anjali hoon Canada se" "Aur main Atul New York se" "Main Rahul hoon New Zealand se"

All this while, Armaan had kept staring at her. He couldn't remove his eyes off her. She surely had something which attracted him towards her n he had admitted the fact to himself. Muskan had noticed this when she had seen him so she thought of directly asking him "Hey mister! Apni dilruba ke khayalon mein baad mein khoye rehna, pehle apna intro toh de." Armaan felt embarrassed for being caught red handed but since he was Armaan Malik so he quickly changed the topic. "Hey beautiful kya bakwas kar rahi ho! Pyar aur haar Armaan ke dictionary mein nahi hai. Waise bhi main sirf yeh sooch raha tha ki India mein kitni khubsurat ladkiyan hai(winking at Riddhima). Haina atul!!!!!" At this ridz got real angry n said "India mein kitni khubsurat ladkiyan hai… shuru ho gayi flirting Mr. Flirt ki." Well Armaan being Armaan didn't miss this n retorted back, (getting close to her) "Kuch jalne ki boo aa rahi hai. Oh I see tum jal rahi ho. Par tum kyon jal rahi ho? Haan main samajh saktha hoon par main kya karon main sirf khubsurat cheezon ko dekhtha hoon aur tum toh… well ab main ismein kya kar saktha hoon par tumhare paas toh tumhara attitude hai naa who tumhe zindagi bhar saath dega par main nahi samjhi Miss Attitude. Bye, take care." n Armaan left a fuming Riddhima there while everyone was busy talking.

Soon there was an announcement, which caught their attention.

"Hello everybody! Now its time for our special guests to arrive n light up the party. So here's a big surprise for everybody. I hope u enjoy the surprise n the party."

A big screeching sound of a vehicle was heard n everyone turned their heads towards the source of the sound when the lights went off n only one spot light was being focused at the entrance. Suddenly, the sight what Muskan saw she fell unconscious in Rahul's arms n Rahul was shocked to see her like that n … … …

Precap: the big surprise is unveiled n also their 2-month program is revealed. What kind of test they have to undergo in those two months will be unveiled soon.

Ah ah ah ah ah not so soon. To know whats the surprise n why Muskaan fell unconscious stay tuned for the next part.

Note from Prerna: I know this part was long delayed but I couldn't help it. Shilpa's exit news came as a shock so couldn't write for long n then I was busy with my results n going through various colleges lists for graduation so I'm really sorry (I hold my ears for the delay)

Hope this is pretty long to compensate the delay n hope u all like it. Please leave in ur earnest comments n also criticize if u don't like anything in it.

Note from Sonia: Hey everyone sooo sorry for late update like Prerna said as you kno I have beeen veeeryyyy sick…mu cough doesn't seem to disappear…I hope you all enjoyed it….

Please Comment!!

And I promise next part is gonna be HOT!!

Ahhh am fainting just thinking bout it…

Lol….

Love Sonia and Prerna

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey guys
part 2 is updated
waiting for ur sincere n earnest comments
silent readers plz comment
love
prerna

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