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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pinka_anshu

hi george
i am PRIYANKA [pinka] a new reader of this fic
its really an amazing fic
hello Priyanka, first a biiiiiiiiiiiiig thanks for reading my fic and appreciating it. I am a great fan of your Raj-Naina video mixes on youtube, you have done a brilliant job there, am so glad i have you here 😃😃
main kal he read ki pahli baar aur mujhe itni achi lagi ki main 35 episodes ek hi baar mein pad liye mujhmein intejt hua hi nahin ki koi ni baki kal pad lungi
i really this fic
thank you soooo much for liking it. you have made my day😳
yaar read to maine puri ker hi li hai per you know its take time to write every thought of your on each episodes and will give my comment on all episodes as really want to do that
i am so happy that you have decided to make so much effort for this fic! commenting on 35 episodes is not an easy job! you are really wonderful, take ur time dear, i'll wait for your comments 😃😃 no hurry!
sachi kahun to main likhne ki kanjus specilly typing kerne mein to bhut jyda[ ye sun ker koi yakin nahin krega i am programmer😆]
wow u are a programmer! that's amazing! i know, we are all lazy to type, wish u had a voice interactive typing prog!
islye main apne reply deti rahungi
but for time being i am giving you my comment on 4 episodes
aur baki episodes ki bich bich mein ati rahegi with all current episodes
thank u again, will eagerly wait for ur comments😃😃
ohk bhut bate ho gayi ab asli kaam
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Episode 1:

'First episode was really cute as well as very drama type [don't mind]

hmmmm seems like i have got a serious reader here who doesn't like nautanki 😆 i really like your observation😆 true! it is 'very drama type' well life mein kuchh drama ho toh hi achha lagta hai na? what say?😉😉 of course i didn't mind!😃😃😃
I really like t the way you started the fic with light note' have this fic have the different genre but still starting point really need some potential... aur is pahle episode mein vo tha specially when his mom say you can leave shooting but shooing cant leave you that's realy a cute line
thank you dear, yes i think i was most sure about the first episode than the rest of the fic!😆😆

And when she told him about the incident of phone it was cute ' though I didn't like the way he was telling how he feeling bad about serial becoz I know its just a fic and taking only RK's personality as RK character but still RK personality is never like talking about his own self .. Its juts

Hope I didn't hurt you

Otherwise the fic is really good

hmmmmm good observation! true yaar, i never thought of rK'S character that way!😕😕 but as u have rightly pointed out even the 'real' RK here is again a character 😆😆
arrey u dnt have to apologise every time! u are free to comment whatever u like, i dnt get hurt yaar 😆😆

Episode2

I really like this part actually every bit of it... there was no dramtic situation... I don't know about pri and vikas but rumors' say they were together it's the same you showed them like al together a rumors about friends or may mote than friends [ god knows the reality and same way you showed it]

hahahaha, so the dramatic point again! u really hate drama i can see😆 perhaps an overdose of the Kekta serials i guess😉😉
m happy u liked pri vikas' interaction...yes even i am confused what they are actually😕😕
I also like the way you portray a fan feeling like the girls said naina achi lagti hai per RAJVEER sir k sath that was like real fan of lrl say as usually people like to watch lead pair together also the way you showed how the vikas giving show off just like the rum ours were about him was really good
yes that's true! we all want to see the reel life jodis in the real life too! it's like a dream come true😳😳😳 i am sure if we had met them, we would have said the same thing too😆😆
In this whole update there was no drama [I mean unreal or dramatic way portraying] but yet cute and sweet update
thank u dear😃😃😃

Episode 3 arjun house

Good episode , funnier totally I like the way you portray them , and also the way you show how initially harshad was liltle nervous with girls[ as he said in his interview though no one can say he was after seeing his new show]

thank u again! yes i really wonder how our shy harshad played a prem juneja😆😆
I like the way priyanka say "RAJVEER sir mera" it's remind me of naina dlg in lrl "aap mere RAJVEER sir se shadi nahin ker sakti"

That was the big blasting episode similar was this line it's like a blunder if would have of her place usk baad mere bolne ki himmat Na hoti

i knowwww, that was like on eof the best dialogues! ritu ki shakl dekhne layak hui thi😆

Episode 4 prachi

I like that sweet girl and also the way you portray her nothing much just her sweetness at that is what really meaning of kid and the way you shoed her and EK relationship its beautiful specially when she gesture him to taking her to on his lap its really cit

prachi is cuteness of a child personified. now after writing this fic for quite some time i am so attached to her that i feel like she is my daughter😆😆😆
And when she said papa its really amazing and specially she was not saying just by seeing him there with her in orphanage but becoz she can recognize him in any way and she knows the person in poster is her father... this the special thing
yes it's indeed special, that's why RK got emotional

He dance with her was so cute and singing its was really cute also remind me of some interview of RK I can't remember but I think in monsoon special he sing like the same "tara araa " type'lol

i am happy u liked his dance with prachi, yes he is a terrible singer😆😆😆

Khair the thing is you RK personality character is really great here that mean the update is great

thank you dear

Hope fully main jyada faltu nahin likh rahi aur bore nahin ker rahi jyada galat Na likh rahi hun

no baba! you are free to write whatever u feel like! i never feel bad😃😃😃 par haan tujhe dramabazi pasand nehi hai yeh toh main jan gayi, mujhe toh ab dar lag raha hai yaar😆😆 matlab mere fic mein toh drama bhi bahut hai 😆😆😆 i have tried to write a masaledaar fic, not so much of strict reality, ishiliye please take the drama with a chill pill😉😉😉 after all who says real life is not drama, "truth is stranger than fiction" hai ki nehi?😆😆😆
plz tu upadte ker de i am waiting
yes will update now...........thanks a lot again for reading it😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
A merry christmas to everyone!!!!!!!!!
EPISODE 36: Fooling n revelations
In the academy:

Pooja was sulking and fretting in the canteen.

Nayanika: bahut go gaya Pooja ab toh muh fulana bandh kar

Pooja: tune dekha na kaise unhone mujhe danta

Nayanika: haan dekha maine, mujhe bhi toh unhone danta tha usdin, raat ko nikalne ke liye

Pooja: i said sorry na, fir bhi...

Nayanika: I know…par chhod, woh hai hi aise

Pooja: tu unka tarafdari karna bandh kar

Nayanika: arrey maine kya kahan?

Pooja: oye ek baat sach sach bata, tujhe wo achha lagta hai na?

N: pagal ho gayi hai tu pooja? Woh teacher hai hamare

Pooja: o ho, toh kya hua? Rajveer sir bhi toh naina ki teacher the?

Na: ab yeh rajveer sir kaun hai?

Pooja: he bhagwan, yahan pe kis cheez ka shooting ho raha hai woh bhi tujhe pata nehi???? Tujhe sach mein pyar ho gaya hai

Tujhko hui na khabar,

Chori chori chhup chhup kar

Kab pyar ki pehli nazar

Le gai le gai......

pooja started singing in her high pitch voice!

People in the canteen started laughing, huda came and joined them.

Huda: kya baat hai, kisse pyar hua hai tujhe pooja?

Pooja: mujhe nehi…Nay..

Nayanika made a stern face at pooja and signalled her not to say anything, even in joke. She still can't get over the shock of Huda's previous emotional outburst, she was scared of another!

Huda: kya hua? Tu ruk kyon gayi?

Pooja: wo main…I mean…haan Naina ko ishq hua…

Huda: kaun Naina? You mean Nayanika? Kisse ishq hua? Capt ranveer se na?

Huda was again becoming emotional

Pooja: array nehi baba, Naina, Naina, Left RIGHT LEFT serial ki Naina…usko ishq hua capt Rajveer se

Huda: mujhe pata hai, tu mujhe ullu bana rahi hai na? Naina and Rajveer huh? You mean Nayanika aur Ranveer

Pooja: sala serial toh kabhi dekhega nehi, tujhe kaise pata chalega? Arrey usi ka toh shooting chal raha hai, ja na, jaake pooch le kisi se bhi

Nayanika: of ho you guys, bandh karo yeh drama, chalo kal ke test ke liye padhte hai

Pooja: haaaaaaai, kash main bhi film mein kaam karti, yahan sadi hui test na dena padhta

"apoon ko role mila filim mein" Iqbal came in declaring it proudly.

All: really???????????

Pooja: sach Ikku? Bata na kaise mila tujhe role?

Iqbal: bas apun ka thobra pasand aa gaya unlogo ko

Nayanika: Iqbaal

Iqbal: kya? Tu aise kyun dekh rehli hai?

Nayanika: tune kuchh kiya toh nehi film mein role pane ke liye?

Iqbal looked very uncomfortable: array apoon kya karega? Bataya maine…

N: Iqbal jhooth mat bol, saaf dikh raha hai tere chehre se ki tu kuchh chhupa raha hai

Iqbal: arrey role mila hai isme tu itna jal kyon rahi hai?

Nayanika: Iqbal bata kaise tujhe role mila, nehi toh main abhi jaake brigadier ko bata deti hoon kit u film mein participate kar raha hai

They all started questioning Iqbal, finally he gave in: okay, okay, ….haan bas apoon ne un logon ko capt Arun Sharma ke baare mein bata diya

There was a loud gasp from the rest three.

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Raj and Pri

As they entered the outskirts of Nawgaon, it started raining again. Priyanka was feeling cold so Rajeev stopped the bike and they went inside a small restaurant. There were a couple of people who recognized Rajeev and circled him for his autograph. However, since it was only a few people, it wasn't a problem! Rajeev ordered tea and pakora for both of them.

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R: dekha akhir tumhe pakore khila hi diya

"You are a sweetheart" Priyanka said pulling his cheeks.

Tabhi Priyanka's cell rings. She picked up her phone and signalled Rajeev to quieten down, it was her mom!
Pri: haan ma bolo
Pri's mom: aaj maine TV pe Rajeev Khandelwal ka interview dekha
Now the speakers in Priyanka's phone were loud. Rajeev could hear Pri's mom's voice.
So he commented from behind which only Pri could hear: toh sasuma, kaisa laga aapko aapna honewala damad
Pri: (to Rajeev) chuup....(to her mom) haan ma...achha dekha tumne...toh...
Pri's mom: tumlog apna relationship officially declare kar rahe ho aur mujhe bataya bhi nehi?
Pri:.....................
Pri's mom: kya hua? kuchh bol
Pri: ma woh aapko Rajeev se problem tha na...ishiliye mujhe laga...
Rajeev was making faces at Priyanka while she was talking and Priyanka usse chup karne ke liye ishara kar rahi thi...when Rajeev heard this he made a rondu face.😭 Priyanka ko wo expression dekh kar bahut hassi ayi aur woh hass padi!
Pri's mom: Pinki! main tujhse important baat kar rahi hoon aur tu has rahi hai?
Pri: nehi ma woh main bata rahi thi ki aapko aitraaz tha na hamare rishte se ishiliye maine aapko nehi bataya
Pri's mom: achha ishiliye mujhe TV se janna padh raha hai...Pri tu itna bada decision kaise akele le sakta hai...aur Vikas pe kya beet raha hoga
Rajeev whispered from behind: auntyji mere baare mein bhi toh sochiye, Pri nehi mili toh main mar hi jayoonga
Pri hushed Rajeev and made an angry face at him: nehi ma...I mean...ma main usse pyar karti hoon
Pri's mom: sun beta tu abhi bachhi hai, tujhe soch samajhkar decision lena hai
Rajeev whispering from behind: bachhi hai! aunty aapko pata bhi hai Pri ne kya kya kiya hai mere saath...woh toh jungle mein...
Pri quickly placed her hand over his mouth and said: ma please...main ab badi ho gayi hoon, apne decisions khud le sakti hoon
Pri's mom: Pinki ! beta am talking about your good...beta tune uske saath koi...
Rajeev commenting: haan aunty, sab kuchh ho gaya hai...aapki beti toh gayi hath se
Pri started beating Rajeev and said on phone: ma please yahan abhi yeh sab baate mat kijiye
Poor Pri! ek taraf Rajeev non stop comment deta ja raha tha aur doosre taraf she had to handle her angry mom! bechari ki dhyaan poori bhatki hui thi!
Pri's mom: kyon na karoon! tu industry mein nayee ayi hai, kucch bhi nehi janti...main janti hoon in actors ko achhe tarah se...abhi kuchh din pehle hi toh Amna ke saath uska full fledged romance chal raha tha, aur abhi tu aa gayi! kahin usne tujhe exploit karke...dekh liya na film industry ke kaale swarup uss malhotra mein
rajeev commenting: exploit toh main roz karta hoon...aise..(he hugged Pri and kissed her shoulder)
pri: (to rajeev, whispering): kya kar rahe ho chhodo...(to her mom): ma please kahan wo malhotra aur kahan rajeev, aur ma main abhi yeh sab baate discuss nehi kar sakti, mujhe shoot ke liye der ho rahi hai, main phone rakhti hoon, bye
rajeev: bye sasooma
Priyanka disconnected the phone and turned to Rajeev and started beating him up. Rajeev was laughing. Pri: tum kitna shaitan ho Rajeev , aaj toh marwa hi diya tha tumne
rajeev: arrey maine bhi toh baat kiya apne sasooma se
p: tum meri ma ko nehi jante, ek baar bigad gayi na toh ho gaya tumhara damaad banna!
rajeev: damaad toh main unki banke rahunga...chahe uske liye uske beti ko kyon na bhagana pade! arrey hum bhi rajput hai
priyanka laughed aloud
Tabhi she saw a man looking at them from the other table. The man's face was covered by a newspaper, but Priyanka was sure he was actually staring at them from its covers. She tried to ignore it first.

P: achha yeh batao, us din SBS mein tum mujhe ek gana dedicate karnewale the, finally who hua nehi, lekin tum kaunsa gana soch ke rakhe the?

R: array kiya toh dedicate

P: kahan?

Rajeev: array wohi gana toh tha---koi ladki hai jab woh hasti hai

P: array who toh mera favorite rain song hai

R: ab main kya karun agar mera gana tumhara favorite song hai! Dekha isshe kehte hai poore 36 gun milna

They both laughed aloud. Priyanka's eyes were again caught by the man. He was definitely staring at them.

P: Rajeev, suno koi humpe nazar rakh raha hai

R: kahan? He started to turn back when Priyanka stopped him

P: oh ho tum ghumo mat, hamare peechhe hi hai wo, suno tum jaake bike start karo, main jhat se yahan se nikal jayoongi aur hum bhag jayenge

R: okay, par tumhare pakode

P: pakode baad mein hoga, abhi chalo toh

Rajeev gets up quietly and goes outside, Priyanka kept sitting, as if looking at her phone very busily.

Rajeev started his bike and gave Priyanka a call, Priyanka jhat se uthkar jaane lagti hai….tabhi the man put down his newspaper and came on her way and banged into her!

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Aliya was looking for Rajeev and Priyanka. She asked a number of people in the unit, somebody told her they had gone out in a bike. Aliya stomped her foot

Aliya: subah subah kahan nikal gaye dono…ab main boss ko kya kahungi, mujhe uspe har waqt nazar rakhna tha…

Suddenly, an idea struck her. Prachi must be inside his room, and the room must be open….Rajeev ke room ka talashi lene ka isse achha mauka aur kahan milega. She crept out quietly to Rajeev's room.

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Nayanika: tu hum sabko marwage ga kya?

Iqbal: wo log kisiko nehi batayenge

Pooja: tujhe kaise pata?

Iqbal: dekh ke toh aisa hi laga ki dono dar gaye hai

Nayanika: hume capt Ranveer ko inform karna chahiye

Huda: nehi, we shouldn't tell this to anybody. Aur tu hamesha Capt Ranveer ko involve karna bandh kar, we can handle this ourselves

Pooja: haan yaar, kya daant padi mujhko, main nehi jayoongi unke pass ab Iqbal ko toh kachha chaba jayenge shayad…shayad BS ko bhi complain kar de…tab toh Iqbal academy se bahar…oh my god…

Nayanika: nehi main ja rahi hoon capt sir ko batane! this is a serious matter

huda and Iqbal held her from both sides: please yaar kya kar rahi hai, tu ab sab ko marwagegi kya?
iqbal: dekh Nayanika, please mat bol unhe, guarantee kuchh nehi hoga
Nayanika:thik hai, jo tumlog thik samjho, I am not responsible for anything that happens. i am going to study
nayanika left.
huda: yeh hamesha capt sir ke paas kyon bhagti hai...dekh maine kahan tha na, zaroor kuchh hai
He starts sobbing again.
pooja: oh ho Huda, please ab rona bandh kar, chal library mein chalte hai

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Priyanka fell down on the floor. The man picked her up, said sorry put something in her hands and left.

Priyanka stood stunned, rubbing her forehead. It was surely an intentional push! It was the same old man she had met in the restaurant who had given her a chit which had Arun Sharma's name written on it! Priyanka looked down at her fist and saw the man had put another piece of paper in her hand this time too! Something inside priyanka told her it might not to safe to read it there. She went to the toilet.

Pri opened the piece of paper there. It was written:

I have something very important to tell you about the little child you have. I am waiting outside this restaurant in a red car, number MR BW4327. Please follow me secretly.

Aliya pushed Rajeev's door a bit. It seemed locked. She took our her hairpin and started fiddling with the lock and tabhi peeche se ek awaz aya.

"Wahan kya kar rahi hai Aliya ji' it was Arjun's voice. Aliya stepped back in shock, hiding her pin.

A: wo main Rajeev ko dhoondh rahi thi

Arjun: achha? aapko pata nei woh bahar gaye hai? Maine toh abhi abhi aapko ek spotboy se yehi sawal poochte huye suna

A: wo actually main Prachi ko dekhne ayi thi

Arjun: Prachi mere paas hai, magar mujhe toh laga aap darwaza kholne ki koshish kar rahe hai

A: tum bhi na Arjun, what nonsense! Ok see you at the shoot.

She quickly ran away from that place, dropping her hairpin in hurry.

Arjun picked it when she left and smiled.

Who's that man? what is Aliya upto? see in the next update!

that's all for today, i pushed back the surprise revelations for the next update, kept this update light and in holiday mood 😃

happy hols to all, love yaaaaaaaaa😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
really very nice ud
i totally loved the convo. between pri's mom , pri and wispring rajeev
and ye aliya ki to
i'll kill her agar usne rk anur pri ko koi bhi nuksan pahochaya.
but defenately i assure u
ur fic rox
mindblowing yaar
keep it up👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
Gr8 part. Luved the teasing of Raj while Priyanka's phone convo. I really hope they get su valuable clues this tym. And yes, Arjun bhi sehi waqt pe aya. Warna that Aliya.....😡 W8ing 4 the revelation. PLS UD SOON.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Ranveer ne Pooja ko bahut daanta aur woh muh fulake baithi hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊

Nayanika usse samjhane gayi toh Pooja Nayanika ko tarafdari karna bandh karno ko bol rahi hai!!!! Bhalayi ka toh zamana hi nahi raha!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Pooja pucch rahi hai Nayanika ko Ranveer accha lagta hai yaa kya!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊And then she is comparing them to Rajveer and Naina!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Nayanika bol rahi hai Rajveer sir kaun hai!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕Pooja is right ke waha kis cheez ki shooting chal rahi hai Nayanika ko pata bhi hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒

Pooja's song was very nice and funny!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆

Pooja toh Huda ko batane hi jaa rahi thi ke accha huya Nayanika ne rok liya warna Huda ke aasuon ki ek aur baadh aa jata!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Pooja tried to cover up by saying Naina!!!😊 😊 😊 😊But Huda guessed it that Rajveer aur Naina matlab Ranveer aur Nayanika!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆

Iqbal ko film mein role mil gaya toh sab uske peeche hai ke kaise mil gaya!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕And Nayanika smelt a rat at once!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Finally Iqbal had to admit ke usne Capt. Arun Sharma ke baare mein bata diya!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Rajeev ne sahi kaha ke akhir usne Priyanka ko pakora khilla hi diya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Priyanka said he is a sweetheart pulling his cheeks!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳That he is for sure!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Rajeev is too much!!!!😛 😛 😛Peeche se pucch raha hai ke sasuma kaisa laga aapko aapka honewala damad!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Yeh Priyanka ki mom bhi naa!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Woh Rajeev se itna chidti kyun hai??😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

Itna accha ladka unhe kaha milega apni beti ke liye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Rajeev yaha rondu shakal bana raha hai aur Priyanka ko hasi aa rahi hai aur woh has padi!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣Bechari usko phir uske mom se daant padi!!!

Yeh Priyanka ki mom ka Vikas ka raag ab tak bandh nahi huya!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Arre Vikas ko chhokar woh Priyanka ki khushi ke baare mein kyun nahi sochti!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Rajeev ne peeche se kaha ke Pri nahi mili toh woh mar jayega!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaiiii!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Rajeev kitna shaitaan hai!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Kya kya bol raha hai ke Priyanka ne uske saath kya kiya jungle mein!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆Accha huya Priyanka ne usse chup kara diya!!! 😊 😊 😊

Priyanka ki mom pooch rahi hai kahi usne Rajeev ke saath toh Rajeev bol raha hai sab kuch ho gaya hai aapki beti toh gayi haath se!!!!😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

He is just too much!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊It was really very funny!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Priyanka ne sahi kiya she started beating him!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆He deserves it!!!!

Rajeev bahut naughty hota jaa raha hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Ek baar bhi nahi socha ke Priyanka ki mom sun leti ush ki baat tab kya hota!!!!

Bechari Priyanka!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Woh Rajeev ko sambhale yaa apni mom ko!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕Rajeev toh non stop comment de raha hai ish taraf!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Aamna ko exploit nahi kiya Rajeev ne!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Aamna ne ush ko use kiya tha!!!

Rajeev bhi bol raha hai ke exploit toh woh roz karta hai aise and he hugged Priyanka and kissed her shoulder!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaaiiii!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Priyanka ki maa bhi naa!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Rajeev ko ush Malhotra se compare kar rahi hai!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Kahan woh Malhotra aur kahan Rajeev!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Rajeev kya dialogue mara ke damad toh woh banke rahega chahe uske liye unki beti ko bhagana hi kyun na pade!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼I loved this!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

After all woh bhi Rajput hai!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Prithviraj Chauhan ne bhi toh Sayogita ko bhaga ke le gaya tha!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Accha toh ush din Rajeev yehi gaana dedicate karne wala tha!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Kya baat hai!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

He is right ke isse hi kehte hai poore 36 gunn milna!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏After all they are just made for each other!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Yeh admi kaun hai jo unpe nazar rakh raha hai??😕 😕 😕 😕Priyanka ne accha plan banaya bhaagne ka!!!! 😊 😊 😊

Magar yeh admi bhi aake usse takrata hai!!!!

Aliya ko Rajeev aur Priyanka pe har waqt nazar rakhna tha magar woh dono toh subah subah nikal gaye!!!

Magar iske dimaag mein shaitani ideas turant aa jate hai aur usne Rajeev ke room ki talashi lene ka plan banaya!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Nayanika ko jaise hi sach pata chala woh toh jaake Ranveer ko batana chahti hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Just like Naina!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊Magar sab ne usse rok liya!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Pooja is right ke dono mein kuch toh hai and she is enjoying it!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Yeh Huda phir rone lag gaya!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

That man handed something to Priyanka and it is the same man jisne usse chit diya tha pehle bhi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Priyanka is very smart jo usne woh chit waha nahi balki toilet jaake padha!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Ismein bola hai ki woh car ka peecha kare!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕Rajeev bahar wait kar raha hoga Priyanka ka!!!!🥱 🥱 🥱 🥱
Aliya Rajeev ke kamre ka darwaza hairpin se kholne ki koshish kar rahi thi magar Arjun ne bhi usse khoob pakda!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Good for him!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Accha huya Prachi Arjun ke paas thi warna yeh Aliya pata nahi uske saath kya karti!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

I hope Rajeev and Priyanka do not run into any danger and solve this mystery!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Update was really cool.

N thanx for the pm.Just pray ki mujhe wo pehla jaisa net connection mil jaye..den i can also give long comments like b4 ..Abhi to writing dis much is only possible..
Bye
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another fabulous part ..........just gr8 update,

waiting for mistry to reveal..................i know it's short replay but tooo busy for long one sooooooo.........plzzzzzzz bear with it. ! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
mindblown updte...keep it up...njyd the sasuma...RN cnvo😆😆😆...raj is damn naughti....so i gues pri gnna sit in the red car n go...raj ko plzz lekar saath main jana
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Thank you dear😊
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Originally posted by: KRIZZY

really very nice ud

i totally loved the convo. between pri's mom , pri and wispring rajeev
and ye aliya ki to
i'll kill her agar usne rk anur pri ko koi bhi nuksan pahochaya.
but defenately i assure u
ur fic rox
mindblowing yaar
keep it up👍🏼

Thank you dear

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