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Posted: 16 years ago

Reply for part 33:-

This was the excellent part.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Raj n Pri really embarassed in front of Ghazal ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ n i just love her dial when she said that haan Pri ko baatein karte karte hi gale me laal nishaan ho jaate hain ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†. Raj bechara proof de raha tha ki us ne kuch nahi kiya vo bus baatein kar rahe the par kisi kaam nahi aaya vo proof ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰. Raj n Pri left for the party and she wore again a saari in black to make Raj more mesmerized ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜.๐Ÿ˜ Aliya again wore the same saari, kya us k paas aur nahi hai kuch pehnane ko ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก? Uper se Raj ko bol rahi thi ki najar mat lagana us ki saari par. ๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜”
Poor resturant waala pehle Pri n Vikas aur Raj n Aliya ko dekh chuka tha par ab sab ulta pulta ho gaya tha to dar hi gaya vo ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›. Ye Huda Nayankia se naraj ho gaya Ranveer ki wajah se nice accha hua ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š. Ranveer ki bhi Raj ne khala di ye keh kar ki he dances so well ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰. Nayanika kitni confuse rehti hai decide nahi kar paati ki khana kya hai us ko ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†? Arun Sharma ka jikr aate hi sab chup kyoun ho gaye aur Ranveer kyoun shaant ho gaya๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•? Ho na ho maamla bahut serious hai aur jab Raj ne Ranveer se poochne ki koshish ki to bhi us ne nahi bataya kuch. ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•Mamla bahut andar tak gadbad hai i am shure now.๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Pri Raj ko kuch dikhane waali thi par dikha nahi paayi kyounki Raj bahut pareshaan tha ๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”๐Ÿค”. Pri ne vakai me Raj ko bahut support kiya ki vo hai us k saath ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ. Prachi bhi na mauke ka fayda utha rahi thi ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰, Pri k paas rehna chahti thi aur sona to bilkul nahi chahti thi . Poor Raj wait karta raha ki kab Prachi so jaaye aur vo apni Pri ko pyaar kare ๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’.๐Ÿ˜’ Prachi bhi galat time par uth gayi apne mom dad ko disturb karne.Par phir vo uth kar baith gayi aur papa godi boli in do words ne Raj ki duniya hi hila di aur poori raat apni beti ko pyaar karta raha ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š. Subah uth kar Pri ne dekha ki baap beti dono us ko kas k pakad k soye hue hain really both love Pri a lot. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Subah subah pata nahi kahan se ye Malhotra mil gaya mood kharab karne k liye. ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก Kitna had darje ka gira hua aur ghatiya insaan hai ye ๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคข. Kitne ghatiya baat boli us ne Pri ko๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ. Ye kaun tha jis se Aliya phone par baat kar rahi thi ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•? Mujhe bhi us par shak hai ki ho na ho vo mili hue hai is sab me . Pri ko aur Raj ko dono ko us ne ek kahani samjha di na;๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก pata nahi Raj kyoun us par itna bharosa kar raha hai ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก. Ek baat ye bhi hai ki agar us ko kisi important kaam se jaana hi tha to BS k paas jaa kar meeting arrange kara kar kyoun aayi aur vo Pri ko kyoun nahi le jaana chahti thi is me.๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•
Huda ne aakhir bata diya Nayanika ko ki vo pyaar karta hai us se ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ. I like so funny attitude of Iqbal in that.๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ Ab jab Pooja sorry bolne jaayegi Ranveer ko to kya vo maaf karega asaani se us ko?๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•
update soon.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi Dear.. welcome back ...Updates were mindblowing,terrific,outstanding n awsome...๐Ÿ‘So the winners were Actors with Rajeev leading dem..It was a clear n a fair win..If Iqbal had seen LRL episodes den dis wont have happened..The code was really easy for Rajeev.. The last challenge was just too much..Capt Ranvir was really shy n he was kissing in a real wierd way๐Ÿ˜†.
Even Rajeev is very shy but nowadays he is extra bold here n dat too infront of all.He kissed Aliya instead n now dis was a shock ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ.
How he loves teasing Pri but dats wat i like abt him๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰.
He really knows how to swoon women๐Ÿ˜ณ....
Pooja is really gud in teasing ..this was too gud
Ghazal: haan haan mujhe pata hai aaplog baate hi kar rahe the, bas Priyanka ko pata nehi kaise baate karne se hi neck pe lal lal daag ho jata hai, hai na Pri? She winked at her mischievously!!
n both Rajeev n Pri were blushing like hell๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ.
Saree scene was cool.But this time Naina was in a different color n Raj was adoring her in dat too.
They went for dinner in the same restaurant.gosh๐Ÿ˜† n why was dat manager sweating????????funny.
Why is Nayanika so confused????
Who is this Captainn Arun????????????n why Capt Ranveer n Cadets were all shocked hearing his name..There is some deep secret behind all dis.
Raj n Pri were in the same room to spent some time 2gether ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ but Prachi didn't let them do anything ha ha.
But that scene was emotional where she calls Rajeev "papa"....
Dat malhotra is a real cheap man๐Ÿ˜ก n Aliya is too very suspicious ...who was she talking to?????
n i think pri is right abt her coz women intuition is better dan men..Why is Rajeev not believing Pri...May b he thinks dat its all bcoz Pri is jealous of Aliya....
Lets see wat happens next??????????
Do update soon๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by suhana_dixit - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey awesome part dear....two parts at once wow ...rajeev is getting naughtier day by day ah...i just love the way he teases pri...and prachi is such a lovely little devil yaar....she doesn't let her mama papa to romance๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†..naughty gal just like her papa....

The competition was fun to read...yayyy rajeev won finally๐Ÿฅณ.....and why does rajeev trust aliya so much ..even i feel aliya is upto something...rajeev should be careful..he shouldn't trust her so much..

Hey please more of RP scenes plz plz


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Posted: 16 years ago
It was indeed a good one. I'm very glad that the actors won. But I'm really tensed abt this Aliya. Hope this mystery gets over soon. Will b W8ing eagerly For 12 Dec.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: george eliot

EPISODE 27: BACK FROM JUNGLE :(
Suddenly a thought strikes Rajeev and he became serious, looking at priyanka he says: pri did we rush through things?

P: why are u asking such a question

R: nehi Pri this was so sudden, things happened so fast, I didn't evet know if u were ready and I '''.(he sounded guilty, realizing the import of the things)

P: looked at him adoringly, he cared for her so much: tumne koi zabardasti thodi kiya? I was equally partner in this (she said shyly)

R: fir bhi Pri''..this shouldn't have happened like this'''u know what I mean''..we didn't take any protection'.if something happens''..

He was too concerned

P: ok ok chill, don't worry, I'll take measures'..

R: par kaise? We have already done it'''..

P: offffho, tum fikr karna bandh karoge? I'll take a precautionary pill once I get back'ab yeh discussion bandh kare?

R: tum keh rahi ho toh thik hai....

P: now smile baba, come on dont look so glum, finally we are together

R: I hope nothing comes between us anymore (he thought to himself as he hugged priyanka with a sigh)

The unit had called up the forest ranger early in the morning

FR: kuchh connection ho raha hai unlogo se?

Aliya: naa, we haven't heard from them since last evening, please Sir hume jaldi unhe dhoondhne nikal na chahiye

FR: ok, we don't want many people, just 2 or three of you come with me

Aliya: I'll go

Vikas: me too

Arjun: main bhi jayoonga

The jeep set off to the restricted areas of the jungle.

Rajeev and Priyanka were walking hand in hand when they heard voices calling out their name'soon they met the search party

FR: ufffffff finally aaplog mile'.I told you repeatedly, be careful of the restricted areas, fir bhi aaplog bhatak gaaye

Both looked down like errant students

Rajeev: humlogo ko pata bhi nehi chala kab yahan aa gaye

FR: come on Mr.Khandelwal, couldn't you see the sign boards that said restricted area? Anyway, I am glad you guys are safe

They all sat in the jeep. Vikas was looking at Priyanka intensely, trying to find visible signs of what have happened all night'Pri and Arjun exchanged glances, Arjun noticed the look on Pri's face and smiled, he knew whatever has happened, seeing Arjun smile made Priyanka blush again, she knew he had understood'.Priyanka looked at Rajeev and smiled shyly, Rajeev looked at her dreamily'.

However, their dreaminess vanished as soon as they reached the shooting camp.

Though some people came and asked them if they are all right, most of the people gave them a very weird look and smiled. Pri went on to change, Rajeev went on to check on Prachi.

Pri had just changed her clothes when Vikas came to her

Vikas: so?

P: kya?

Vikas: raat kaisi rahi?

P: baapre it was so bad, we were completely lost, raatbhar hum rasta dhoondhte rahe'.

Vikas: (smiling sarcastically) kyon jhooth bol rahi hai, bol na Rajeev ke saath kya kiya?

P: kya matlab hai tera? Humlog kho gaye the....

Vikas: zyada bholi mat ban, maza aya uske saath?

P: Vikaaaaaaas

Vikas: nehi bol na, mujhe ab koi fark nehi padta, was he good?

Priyanka hated the way he asked her that question, she thought it's time to put her foot down. She came face to face to him. Staring at him with a stern look she spoke up: Vikas, before you start making any more comments that you'll be sorry for let me tell you something. Rajeev and I love each other and that's official. Now I don't want anybody, and that includes you too, to talk about our private life, now is that clear?

Vikas' face looked like a deflated balloon as he saw Priyanka walking out.

Rajeev was reading his script, when he heard two spot boys talking:

SB 1: aapko kya lagta hai Priyanka aur Rajeev ji raat bhar jungle mein'.kuchh hua hoga?

SB2: aur nehi toh kya, raat bhar kya taare gin rahe the dono?

SB1: lekin meine toh suna tha Priyanka ji ke saath Vikas sir ka kuchh hai''.

SB2: haan yaar mujhe bhi yehi pata tha, achanak yeh Rajeev sir kahan se entry mar diya

SB1: shayad woh log sach mein kho gaye the

Sb 2: array rehne de rehne de, yeh heroine type bhi na, kabhi iske saath toh kabhi uske saath, achha mouka mila, Rajeev ji jo fansha liya' tu dekhna Rajeev aur Priyanka ji ke beech mein ab chakkar chalega'.raat ka nasha abhi'

They both sing dirtily'

SB1: bechara vikas sir, achanak girlfriend haat se fisal gayiii

Rajeev felt like punching those two guys but thought it's best to ignore them, after all he didn't want him n pri to be the laughing stock of the unit'so this is what they think: Priyanka was steady with Vikas and suddenly she has slept with Rajeev! These people had no idea about the depth of their relationship, their love, their passion''..perhaps it was all Rajeev's fault, they had behaved like strangers in front of everyone'.and now when they are in relationship suddenly, people are finding it hard to accept'

And tabhi the production manager came up to Rajeev and said: congratulations Rajeev, not everybody gets so lucky to spend a night with a beautiful lady in the jungle'and it's even better if it's somebody else's chick, huh? He he he he'(he chuckled)

Rajeev got up and left in front of the stunned man.

Uhar Kunal and Arjun had gathered around Pri

Kunal: bol na Priya, kya hua jungle mein

P: array kya hoga? Bas hum kho gaye the

Arjun: bol hi daal, humse kya chhupana

Tabhi Harshad enters: are you all right Priyanka? Did u get to eat something? Raatbhar bhookhi rahi kya?

K: hush hush'come to the point, tell us what happened

P: array fir wohi sawal? Kya hoga? Hum rasta dhoondhte rahe aur fir thak kar baith gaye'aur

All: aur??????????????

P: aur kuchh nehi'bas (she blushed deep red)

Harshad: come on guys, don't ask her personal questions

Tabhi Ghazal came to see Priyanka and spotted a red mark on her neck which she had hidden with her dupatta.

G: priya, tere neck pe kya hua?

Arjun was standing there, smiling at her, he decides to play a lil mischief, he came up innocently and said: haan Priya yeh tere neck pe kaisa daag hai?

Before Priyanka could hide it all were looking at it

Ghazal: oh my God (she suddenly screamed and then shut up, she had understood!!)

Kunal: ahem'.ab pata chala

H: kya baat hai, koi batao mujhe

Ghazal: ahem

H: arrey hua kya?

K: well jab koi bahut passionately kiss karta hai

G: toh'.toh'.toh'. aisa kuchh daag ho jaata hai'(Ghazal finally blurted it out)

H: oh achha, ab samjha, array yeh dekh aur ek

All this while pri felt like sinking in the ground, tabhi Harshad pointed out another red mark at the back of her neck'and soon the whole group teased her to death, finally pri gave up: okay okay guys, shut up, okay here I confess: Rajeev n I are in love

All clap loudly, "PARTY PARTY" they all screamed.

Vikas heard the claps and screams from a distance. He felt bad, not so much for losing pri than for not being a part of the celebration'he was pri's best friend, he should have rejoiced in her happiness'he thought sadly

Kunal: wooooooooow this is just like the story, lets go and congratulate him

Arjun: yes lets go

Harshad: ahem'you guys go ahead, I mean it's their personal lives'I am not so informal with him

Ghazal: yeah, u guys go ahead, I am not coming either

Arjun: ab tujhe kya hua?

Ghazal: Malhotra Sir is waiting for me, he has something important to discuss

And she left

Kunal: yeh Malhotra ki kuchh zyada hi kareeb ho rahi hai na?

Arjun: haan dal mein kuchh kala hai, anyway chal hum chate hai

Aliya comes up to Rajeev with a cup of coffee: the reporters are asking for an interview

Ra: nooooooooooooooo

A: ok, ok, main na bol dungi, par kyon?

R: i am in no mood for an interview

A: well whatever happened yesterday calls for an interview, and celebration

Not again, Rajeev thought irritatedly: what for?

A: come on, ab official announcement kar hi do

R: Aliya please hum dono ke beech mein kuchh nehi tha, it was just an accident that we got lost

A: really? Aur Priyanka jo wahan declare kar rahi hai about ur r'ship

R felt angry'.didn't she know what ppl were thinking in the unit? they cud have waited for some days instead of declaring there was really something between them and confirming their gossips''..

Tabhi Arjun and Kunal came to congratulate Rajeev

Arjun: hey man congratulations

K: this is just like the story, we are so happy

R: guys please, there is nothing, please don't make up gossips

A: array we know everything, don't tense, Priyanka told us everything

K: please guys, I told you, Priyanka must have just teased you, there is nothing between us, now u guys don't start cooking up stories.

They were about to tease him but something in his voice told them he was serious'they left, confused at Rajeev's behaviour, Arjun went off to report to Priyanka, things didn't seem all rosy to him.

Tabhi Malhotra came over to Rajeev, he had a very suggestive smile on his face which he didn't like.

Malhotra: so?

Rajeev: yes?

Malhotra: hope you had a good time, he winked at him dirtily

Rajeev felt anger rising in his head but he chose to ignore this horrible man.

Rajeev: I don't understand what you mean Mr. Malhotra, the jungle wasn't the most comfortable place on earth

Malhotra: come on man, zyada bhole mat bano, mujhe mat sikhao tumdono ne raat bhar kya kiya hai'.come on man, tumhe ishiliye intimate scene se problem tha'.tum apna kismat kisike saath share nehi karna chahte''..by the way she is very hot huh'.

Rajeev looked at him sternly, he tried his best to control his anger: Mr Malhotra I would prefer if you stop this conversation right now. It was just an accident that we got lost, nothing else happened.

Malhotra nudged him with his elbow: oye hoye, aapko toh bura lag gaya, come on, saaf dikh raha hai raatbhar kya kiya tum dono ne'ab yeh heroines hote hi aise hai, maine toh suna tha Vikas ke saath iska chakkar chal raha hai, ab aap ke saath raat bitake ayi, not bad haan'.these women can do anything for their profession'kabhi mere saath bhi uska setting''..

"Shut up Mr.Malhotra" Rajeev thundered and walked away. He was fuming and came and sat on a chair, he felt like killing that horrible man'he hated coming back, he wished he could stay back at the jungle, what a contrast to the lovely time spent there'people are disgusting, he was worried about Pri'how bad wud she feel if she heard these things'she shouldn't know, not at all'and tabhi he saw Priyanka standing by his side

Rajeev looked up to see the strangest expression on Priyanka's face: it was a mixture of hurt, disgust, anger, pain and dissolutionment'.he had no idea why she looked like that and looked back at her confused....

P: wonderful, thanks a lot (Priyanka's eyes were glowing and het voice thick with sarcasm)

R: what? For what? Why do u look so angry? ( Rajeev was extremely confused)

P: I see a man talking such bad things about me and u are doing nothing

R: whaat'.what do you want me to do? I did ask him to shut up'(he was still confused what he should be doing and why Priyanka was so upset)

P: yes what else can you do? Hai na? tumhe toh kuchh nehi jata'after all you denied our relationship'

R: wait a minute, that's a different issue and I need to talk to you about that but lets settle this one first'why are you upset about me regarding Malhotra? What am I supposed to do? I did protest'.

P: by just running away from him? Wonderful Mr.Khandelwal!!!

R: toh aur kya karu'that ugly man wouldn't stop'

P: If I were a guy and any guy dared to say anything about my girl, I would have punched him hard in the face

R: whaaat?????? Are you crazy????? You want me to punch my producer? And make a scene here? Pri please grow up'.this is not film'

P: stop calling me Pri, you have no guts to stand for the person you love

R: Pri real life can't be as dramatic as you think'I can't believe you can be this immature

P: oh yeah, this is my immaturity isn't it? To expect that you will stand for me, people are calling me sluts and you are just running away from them'.(Priyanka chocked on her words, she felt her eyes welling up)

Suddenly Rajeev go very angry, he had had enough tension from the morning and now Priyanka bhi? Why is she acting all immature? He felt his temper rising:
I am sorry Ms.Bassi if I have disappointed you but let me tell you I am no superman as you might think of me'perhaps you expect me to be real life hero like Captain Rajveer but I am Rajeev Khandelwal, a very ordinary man who can't possibly be so melodramatic to punch his producer

P looked at him intensely, the anger in her eyes was replaced with sadness: yes Rajeev, perhaps I expected too much from you, when you are not even ready to acknowledge our relationship in public'

With that she left, leaving Rajeev more remorseful

Rajeev regretted saying those words, he has hurt her again, inspite of taking the vow that he will never see another tear in her eye, he has hurt her again'.rajeev felt his eyes burning, he got up to look for her, he can't lose her with another stupid act

Priyanka went to the van and was crying silently. Rajeev's words had pierced her heart, she couldn't believe when Arjun came and told her that Rajeev had denied their relationship, she had no idea why he would do that'and then Malhotra'perhaps she over reacted too'but isn't that what every girl dreams of, of a man who will punish any man that speaks ill of her'. The jungle night felt like a dream'she hated coming back, she wished she could stay back at the jungle, what a contrast to the lovely time spent there'

Tabhi Rajeev entered: Pri suno

P: mujhe kuchh nehi sunna, please leave Mr Khandelwal

R: Pri suno toh''..

P: please Rajeev go away

Rajeev came forward to her and hugged her tight'Pri tried to push him away: "leave me or I'll call the whole unit" she cried'.but Rajeev refused to loosen his grip, he just buried his face in pri's hair, uttering "sorry"'she tried hurting Rajeev, pushing him with all might but finally gave up as Rajeev held her more tightly'she collapsed in his arms and cried silently'Rajeev kissed her hair and then held up her face, looking into her eyes he said: I am sorry

P was still crying, unable to stop

Rajeev kissed her hands and kneeled down in front of her, then he embraced her waist and rested his head on her belly

R: I am really sorry dear, really sorry for hurting you' 'it was just that people were saying bad things since morning'. i love you sweety

P (was still angry): And u can't do anything when people say bad things about me?!! All you do is deny our love in front of everybody!!!!!!! Look at me I like a fool declared it in front of all that we are in love!!! Huh! How stupid can I get'you just wanted to sleep with me for a night, that's it, nothing else'it was all false'you don't love me'.she couldn't complete her sentence as fresh bouts of tears came oozing out'..

R: Pri look at me

P looked unwillingly

R: look properly, do I look like a bas***d?

P was shocked at his use of this term'

R: is this all the trust u have for me? How could u think I don't love u and I had just exploited u??????how could u think that pri?

P: tumne fir deny kyon kiya?

R: because ppl aren't saying nice things about us pri, you heard it yourself, because they didn't know the depth of our love and they think we have just physically fallen for each other

P: how cud they????

R: well, we behaved like strangers, nobody had any inkling about what was going on in our minds, everybody linked u with Vikas and suddenly we get lost in the jungle and come back and declare our love????????? Will people ever think of it as anything except lust?

P kept silent

R came closer and kissed her forehead I can't bear ppl talking about my love in demeaning terms, we'll surely declare our love, but ppl should know the depth of it

P : and how r u going to do that?

R: well we'll take it slow and ppl will gradually see we are coming closer, then it'll be easy for them to accept

P: do u know u r equally supid?

R: why?????

P: u think ppl are going to stop gossiping just because u will deny things?

R: well'.

P: and they'll believe u that we spent a whole night together n nothing happened just because you say so? Rajeev, the more you deny, the more gossips spread

R: but'

P: and then just to prove your point, u'll start keeping distance from me, n there will be misunderstandings again'.just like the serial story, it's happening again''.the gossips, the distancing'.dekha jungle se wapas aate hi hamare beech problems suru!!!! ( priyanka panicked)

R: pri suno toh'.

P: I have had enough of the serial story happening in my life'well it was good till the point we fell in love, but not anymore'

R: ok stop stop, nothing is going to happen between us, it's not the serial story, it's our lives Priyanka, our real lives..... okay fine, lets break the link between real and reel lives now, but first decide whether you want a hero like captain Rajveer or you are happy with your ordinary Rajeev khandelwal?

P: I love my Rajeev khandelwal, but what? What are u going to do?

R: first punch that stupid malhotra and then you'll see, come with me

He held her hand and pulled her out of the van'..



sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much happened in this update....miiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiindblowing update...RP convo๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰..sooo bold and beautiful...๐Ÿ˜ณ...aweeeeeesum one...middle part was soo socking...my god...how can people think like that or woh bhi sirf pri ke baare mein hi...๐Ÿคข๐Ÿ˜•...bad bad world..vikas too...right now he was acting like huda..i had really hate huda at the time bhargav had made entry in the academy....those days sent a fearful sensation in my heart like hell๐Ÿ˜•...leave it....people never understands that taali ek haath se nahin bajti...stupid people and pervert malhotra.๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก...for once i was hatting rk for not saying anything in defence of his girl...๐Ÿ˜ฒ...anyways pri and her naughty friends๐Ÿ˜ณ...they are too much...last part was soooooooooooooooooo much emotional and romantic....i love rk gestures๐Ÿ˜ณ...really passionate and romantic....๐Ÿ˜ณ....of whole i love this part...it was heavenly update....u r a star rated talent....๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: george eliot

EPISODE 28: IT'S OFFICIAL !
He held her hand and pulled her out of the van'..

Pri: ruko Rajeev, kahan ja rahe ho? tum sach mein Malhotra ko marne ja rahe ho kya?

R: aur nehi toh kya, nehi toh tumhe yakeen nehi ayega na ki main tumse kitna pyar karta hoon

P: ok baba, sorry, please aisa mat karo, ruk jao (she pulled his hand hard) pleaseeeeeeee

R looks at Pri: toh fir bolo kabhi mere pyar pe sak nehi karogi

P: nehi karungi, bola na sorry, ab ruko, pleaseeeeeee

R: thik hai Malhotra aaj banch gaya par doosra kam toh pura kar loon

P: aur kya kaam hai?

R: chalo toh sahi...let me create a new story different from the serial's

He held her hand and pulled her in the middle of everybody, then he called out loudly: excuse me everybody, can I have your attention

All turned to them

Rajeev: I have decided it's time to declare that we are going around, and it had been going on for quite some time, we went to the jungle intentionally because we wanted to spend some quality time alone, we just wanted to share our happiness with you, hope nobody will have a problem seeing us together now'thanks for not disturbing us last night'..and he turned and kissed pri on her cheek, amidst loud cheers n claps.

Priyanka was in shock, she couldn't believe Rajeev could do such a thing!! She was feeling shy in public but she was happy too, she felt bad for saying the hard words to Rajeev, he did love her''..

They didn't really care what people thought now, having declared their love to the rest of the world gave them a sense of content'nothing can separate them again, nothing'.

The day went on in shooting, it was their last day here, so people were busy wrapping up things. Priyanka was a little worried about her mom, and God forbid Vikas, he had avoided her company since the time she shouted at him'. "I hope he'll understand" Priyanka thought with a sigh.

In the middle of the shoot Kumar, Rajeev's spot boy, came jumping up to Priyanka

Kumar: Priyanka ji congratulations

P: thank you Kumar

R: mujhe toh pehle se hi pata tha Rajeev sir aap se pyar karta hai

P: achha?

R: haan usne jab mujhe aapka engagement ring dekhne ke liye bheja tha tabhi mujhe laga tha daal mein kuchh kala hai'

P: engagement ring dekhne bheja tha?? Kaunsa engagement ring? Kab?

Tabhi Rajeev comes to the spot with Prachi: Kumaaaaaaaar, tum bahut zyada bolte ho, jao dekho mera shot ready hai ki nehi

Kumar left

P: (laughing) yeh kya bol raha tha

R: ahem'chhodo na, pagal hai woh, dekho main kisse laya hoon

Priyanka takes Prachi in her arms, she hugged her tightly and kissed her loudly: my baby (she said lovingly as she rocked her in her arms)

R: ek kiss papa ko bhi milega?

P: Rajeev!!! Set pet oh at least kuchh sharam karo!

Prachi started pulling Priyanka's nose and laughed aloud

R: kyon Prachi mummy pasand ayi?

Prachi pata nehi kya samjhi, she sqealed out in joy in priyanka's lap

P: yeh na sab samajhti hai, badmash (she said adoringly as she tickled her belly)

R: aur nehi toh kya, aur sabse zyada apne papa ko samajhti hai'.chal Prachi tere mummy ab hamare paas booked hai, aur koi nehi le sakta usse

P: Prachi ke mummy hamesha Prachi ke liye booked thi, lekin can't guarantee that about Prachi's papa

R: achha? Prachi ke papa tumhe kahin jaane de tab na

P: oho...kya kar lega woh?

R: zor ka ek punch marega to any man who dares to come near you'ruko abhi marke dikhata hoon Malhotra ko

P: ok baba, thik hai, thik hai, ab fir se shuru mat ho jana

In the meanwhile Prachi's attention was directed to the bright red buttons of Priyanka's kurta, she started tugging at them delightfully

P: array beta ruko ruko, buttons ko chhor do, Rajeev ek min pakro isko, isse pehle ki mere saare buttons khul jaye

R takes Prachi from Pri's lap: oye bachha aja, aur buttons chhod, woh kaam apne papa ke liye hi chhod de (and he winked at Pri)

Pri: Rajeeeeeeeeeeeeev, besharam, jaaaaao yahan se

Vikas noticed it all from a distance

When they were shooting the mud scenes and getting lost in the jungle scenes, both couldn't help laughing in between the scenes, remembering how it had been in real life too! Aliya had to retake the scenes 20 times!!!

Aliya: cut cut cut, guys I understand tum dono ka aaj khushi ka din hai, par please concentrate on your scenes, hasna bandh karo

Arjun: kya baat hai, tumlog itna haas kyon rahe ho? Jungle mein sachmooch aisa kuchh hua kya?

Pri glared at Arjun and then turning to Aliya she said: sorry sorry, aage se serious shooting, okay ready

Aliya retakes the scene again and tabhi it's Rajeev's turn to burst out laughing

Aliya: offfffffffffffffffff again?!!!!!!! Tum dono ko na main....aur ek baar haasi toh aaj dinbhar mud pe pade rehna hoga, that'll be ur punishment!!

Rajeev: I don't mind as long as u r with me (he whispered to Pri)

Now it was time for the intimate scenes'..

As you know, in the shooting of intimate scenes, the crew is kept minimal, so not everyone gets to watch the scenes'Aliya cleared most of the unit away except a few

Arjun was regretting: hume bhi dekhna hai

Ghazal: haan hume bhi dekhna hai yeh dono kya karte hai

Kunal: khud pe kaboo rakhna Pri, sachmooch kuchh karna shuru mat kar dena

Priyanka: shut up u guys, am shooting a scene, not doing anything'..

Ghazal: haan woh toh hume pata hai, par fir bhi agar control nehi hotaaaa'..

Arjun: ek kaam karte hai, we'll take Aliya's mike and scream from here, CONTROL, CONTROL

Priyanka: tum logo ki toh main''.ruko baad mein dikhati hoon

They start shooting the scenes''..Malhotra insisted to supervise'Rajeev felt uncomfortable doing the scenes in front of him'.though the scenes weren't that bold, Rajeev felt he was staring at every bit of bare skin that could be seen of Priyanka'..

Rajeev was so uncomfortable and conscious in a kissing scene that it had to be retaken'.Rajeev was kissing Priyanka as if his lips were touching a hot cup'he was conscious that Malhotra was watching them closely'..it was the worst scene ever shot!!!!

Aliya: yaar yeh tum dono bhi na!!!!!!!!!! real life lovers ho aur on screen kissing mein itna uncomfortable?

Raj: ahem'Aliya we are trying, isse zyada mujhse nehi hoga'.

Tabhi they heard Arjun's voice on the mike: CONTROL CONTROL!!!

Raj and Pri turned to Aliya with an incredible look!! He's seriously doing that???????????? Stop him for god's sake!!!!

The other people in the unit were giggling too'..disgusting!

Rajeev angrily looked at Pri: dekha? tumhara idea tha na ki we declare our love, ab sambhalo!

Pri was smiling too: achha? aur, agar unhe pata nehi hota toh these smiles would have been different, samjhe Mr. buddhuram? Aur tum aise weirdly mujhe kiss kyon kar rahe ho? Thik se karo aur khatam karo scene ko

Raj was angry at Pri for teasing him: achha? tumhe proper kiss chahiye? Fir yeh lo

In anger he kissed her strongly, this time there was no hesitation, the scene was okayed!!!

It was time to wrap up their shooting in the jungle'

On their way back in the bus all were in happy mood, Rajeev and Pri sat together, holding each other's hands, with Prachi by their side

Vikas sat alone, he had not said a word to Priyanka, and has remained mostly aloof from the rest of the gang

Arjun, Kunal and Harshad were together, seeing Priyanka whispering something to Rajeev's ears Kunal smiled: they look so cute together, hai na?

Arjun: haan, they are perfect

Harshad: pata nehi, par I think they are a little filmy, I mean aise, in public'

Arjun: kyon tujhe koi problem hai?

Harshad: arey nehi, mujhe kya prob hai? After all it's their personal life

Arjun: yeh tera naya nara kya hai? Personal life ka

Harshad: my funda of life guys, I like to keep the professional and the personal apart from each other'.

Their conversation was broken by a peal of laughter from Ghazal. They turned around at Ghazal, sitting with Malhotra, laughing aloud at something he had said

Kunal: Ghazal is getting quite close to Malhotra, huh?

Arjun: I don't like that guy

Then they looked at each other and said: after all PERSONAL LIFE hai

Ghazal's laughter attracted raj and pri's attention too

P: yeh ghazal malhotra ke saath kya kar rahi hai?

R: hmm'maine bhi dekha she is getting quite close

P: hume usse batana chahiye what kind of a guy he is

R: she might not believe u pri n might misunderstand u'don't worry she is a sensible girl, she'll soon understand herself

P: I hope so'(she said with a sigh)'I hope everybody understands things soon'(she said looking at vikas)

R noticed that: really pri, I wish vikas was as understanding as Aliya

P: Aliya?? Kyon?

R: look at her, she proposed to me and yet when she came to know about us she acted so maturedly''

P: Aliya had proposed to you????????????????????????

R: haan, didn't I tell u? oh I must have forgotten'.

P: but she was absolutely cool about us'I mean she was not excited or anything but she didn't look she was hurt or something (p thought aloud, confused)

R: that's what I am saying, she's so mature

P: but that's absurd Rajeev'.if u love someone'.are u sure she was serious about you?

R: of course she was, but she's very mature

Priyanka kept silent, somehow she found it a little strange, Aliya didn't react like a woman in love, not at all, was it her maturedness or was there something else?

Suddenly she remembered: Rajeev where's that piece of paper?

Rajeev had forgotten about it, he quickly brought it out: oh god, we completely forgot about it, lets see what's written

Dono paper ko dekhte hai aur dekhke hairan ho jaate hai!!!

Scribbled on the paper were the words capt Arun Sharma

R: yeh kaun hai?

P: is he the same capt sharma that the galaxy shop owner's son had mentioned?

R: you are right, the name he had mentioned was captain Sharma, perhaps he's Prachi's dad, we need to find more information about him the moment we reach the academy

P: and we need to be careful, the whole affair seems to be so mysterious'.

R: yes no need to tell this to anybody, except perhaps Aliya

P: why Aliya?

R: array it's better to have another person in the team, after all she knows everything about the case

Priyanka didn't say anything, somehow she had started getting a strange feeling about Aliya and wasn't very sure if they should include her, but Rajeev seemed to have a lot of trust in her'..she didn't want to appear as a possessive girlfriend that would keep all girls away from her man'so she kept silent



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CHAPTER 29: RESTLESS NIGHT
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They reached the academy. It was already evening, Prachi had fallen asleep so Rajeev went off to his room first. As everybody was proceeding to their respective rooms, Malhotra called Ghazal for an important discussion, they both went away to malhotra's room.

Arjun: in dono ke beech mein chal kya raha hai

Pri: hume usse warn karna chahiye

Kunal: kis baare mein?

Pri: about Malhotra...do u know what an obnoxious man he is?

She told them what he had said about raj n her

Arjun: iski toh main'sala'mujhe pata nehi tha itna gira huya hai woh

Pri: mujhe toh Ghazal ki badi chinta ho rahi hai....

Tabhi Rajeev called her out: Priyanka can you come over for a minute? Prachi ko khilana hai, bada badmashi kar rahi hai

Pri: haan aa rahi hoon par Prachi so gayi thi na? Uth gayi hai?

Rajeev: haan jaldi ayo

Arjun: ja ja tera woh' tera intezaar kar raha hai, hum bhi chalte hai

Pri: ofho Arjun, Prachi zaroor sata rahi hogi, tu bhi na, chal bye

Arjun: arrey hume sab pata hai, yeh sab bahana hai tujhe paas bulane ki, tu jaldi ja

Prikanka looked at Arjun with mock anger and went towards Rajeev's room.

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In another part of the academy.A voice was talking over phone.

VOICE1: Sir, back from jungle

VOICE2: Good, did they proceed any further?

VOICE1: pata nehi Sir, kuchh hoga toh mujhe zaroor pata chalega

VOICE2: don't be so confident, keep an eye on them

VOICE1: (smiling) Sir, I am telling you, I will get to know everything.

VOICE2: alright alpha, keep me reported.

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Priyanka enters Rajeev's room. The room was dark and the moment she entered she was pulled in and the door was shut. Before she could react Rajeev had his hand on her mouth: shhhhhhhhhhhh

Pri: mmmmm'Rajeev kya hai yeh?

R: kuchh nehi, I love you. Said Rajeev pinning her against the wall

Pri: array Prachi kahan hai, aur yeh lights kyon off karke rakha hai tumne? On karo

R: Prachi so rahi hai aur dark mein hi romance zyada achha hota hai

Pri: toh usse khilana'?.

R: woh toh ek bahana tha, main kabse wait kar raha tha ki tum apni room mein jayogi aur main jhat se aa jayoonga tumhare paas, par tum toh Arjun aur Kunal ke saath kya sab discuss kiye ja rahi thi, kiye ja rahi thi, toh mujhe yeh bahana banana pada'

Pri: toh tumne sach mein jhooth bola??????of ho Rajeev tum na! Arjun thik hi keh raha tha'.

R: shhhhhhh'.no more talking, bas ab just romance

He kissed her softly on her forehead: do you know how much I love you?

P: uhun, nehi toh

Rajeev kissed her right cheek: ab?

P: nope

Rajeev kissed her left cheek: ab pata chala?

P: nehi'.

Rajeev kissed her lips: ab? Ya fir aur batau?

Priyanka looked at him and smiled.

R: I love you, I really do

P: I love you too

R: kya? Sunai nehi diya, zara zor se batao

P: I love youuuuuuu

R: still i can't hear you

P: ab aur zor chillaungi toh prachi uth jayegi samjhe?

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Two other voices were talking on phone again.

Voice 1: Sir, we need to hurry up, time's just flowing

Voice 2: Calm down just keep a watch, kisiko sak toh nehi hua na

Voice1: Nehi Sir, am perfectly safe

Voice2: okay, keep yourself low profile and just keep an eye on them.In the meantime you do your own work, did you find anything?

Voice1: no Sir'not yet

Voice2: Toh jao abhi, search jari rakho

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CUT to Harshad:
Harshad put the phone down, he couldn't believe what he had just heard'how could they do it to him? He should have never trusted her'.she has promised him even bigger things but he can't trust her anymore'..he had to find a way
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CUT TO RP:
Rajeev was kissing her neck softly, Priyanka shivered a little'goosebumps came on her body everytime he even came close to her'.the moon was still on in its full glory, moonlight streamed through the window in the dark room'.they both came closer to the window, almost bathing in the moonlight'

Rajeev: Pri chalo bahar chalte hai

Pri: itne raat ko? Kahan?

Rajeev: kahi bhi, lets go out, chalo lets go out in the garden.

They both walked towards the garden, indeed it was a beautiful night, they came and sat on the grass, Rajeev was about to lay his head on pri's lap but she stopped him

Pri: Raj yahan nehi please'academy se koi dekh lega toh, after all it's a military academy, disciplined'

Rajeev: achha baba thik hai, nehi rakhna mujhe tumhare godh mein sar. Rajeev was sulking like a child

Pri ruffled his hair with both her hands: tum na bilkul bachha ho'aur claim karte ho ki main immature hun

R: aur nehi toh kya, apne girlfriend se thik se romance bhi nehi kar sakta, kya zaleem duniya hai

Pri: tumhara hi idea tha ki hum bahar aaye

R: oho toh tumhe room mein romance chahiye tha? Toh chalo abhi, dikhata hoon romance kisse kehte hai

Pri: no. ab chupchap baitho, no badmashi, bas baate karo, nehi toh gana gao

Rajeev: main aur gana?

Pri: kyon kitna achha toh gaa rahe the, yaad hai who Jaipur trip? Hahahahaha

Rajeev: array haan, kya karoon bachho ne gher liya tha

Pri: kitna cutely ga rahe the tum: twinkle twinkle little star, how I wonder HOW you are'hahahahaha

Rajeev: oye haaso mat, tum toh copy cat ho, mera dekhke tumne bhi toh nursery rhyme gaya

Priyanka: sach, that trip was so good na?

Rajeev: shooting khatam hote hi tumhe Jaipur le jayoonga, mummy se milane, ruko mummy ko abhi batata hoon

P: Rajeev raat ke 12 baj rahe hai, tumhare mummy sochenge tum pagal ho gaye ho

R: hmmm''tumne apne mummy ko bataya?

Pri kept silent

R: Pri, kuchh problem hai? Kya hua?

P: kuchh nehi'.pata nehi mummy ko Vikas kyon itna pasand hai'usse lagta hai hum dono misfit hai'but I am sure woh maan jayegi

R: hmmm'..ab samjha'don't worry, main apne sasu ma ko jaroor pata lunga ( he winked naughtily)

P laughed at rajeev's antics; seriously with this man around she can never be upset

R: aur nehi toh kya, SRK nehi RK toh sahi, dulhaniya zaroor le jayoonga'

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CUT TO GHAZAL:

Ghazal stormed off to her room in anger and disbelief!!! How could Malhotra throw such a proposal to her? What does he think of her? How did he think she would do such a thing? Her career was at stake now'she had let off the other offer because Malhotra had convinced her to stay for the film'and now everything suddenly looked very dark for her'.

Vikas was restless. He had to so something about it. He couldn't rest in peace otherwise. He felt his head would burst out, he couldn't sleep''.he grabbed his flashlight and walked out towards the garden.

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CUT TO ANOTHER PART OF THE ACADEMY:

Cadet Nayanika! What are you doing here after lights out?

Nayanika startled to turn and saw Capt. Ranveer looking at her. She is caught red handed in the hall, no way to escape. The rest of the gang must be safe, she let out a silent prayer.

Nayanika: woh main'..nothing Sir

Ranveer: what do you mean by nothing?

Nayanika: Sir'actually'no'.I mean'.

Ranveer: Think think, think of an excuse

Nayanika: Sir, actually Pooja is not well, so I was going to call the doctor

Ranveer: hmmm, what happened to cadet Pooja?

Nayanika: oh'you know'gynaecological problems'

Ranveer: ok ok'.(captain Ranveer blushed) alright back to your room cadet

Nayanika smiled to herself, thank God she was let off easily. Their

plan for the night was waiting.

Nayanika: thank you sir, waise Sir aap itne raat gaye?

Ranveer: I have some work cadet

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CUT TO RP IN GARDEN:

Suddenly, Rajeev's eyes narrowed as he saw something in the library building; it was the closest building to the garden and was pitch dark as the lights were out, but Rajeev saw flashlights on the 3rd floor'

Rajeev: pri tumne dekha? Koi wahan hai

Pri: kahan? Mujhe toh kuchh dikhai nehi de raha hai

R: ruko, abhi dekh payogi'. And before he could complete his sentence flashlights went on again

P: array haan, koi wahan hai, shayad koi book dhoondh raha ho

R: itne raat gaye? Library bandh hone ke baad? Mujhe toh kuchh gadbad lagta hai pri

P: chalo hum yahan se chalte hai, mujhe kuchh thik nehi lag raha hai

R: ruko na, chalo jaake dekhte hai

P: bilkul nehi, ab bada hero banne chale tum, pata nehi kaun kya matlab se wahan ghusa hai, yahan se chalo Rajeev, we'll report it tomorrow morning, ab chalo, prachi bhi akeli hai.

She virtually dragged him back to the guesthouse.

P: Rajeev we need to be careful, this academy is very mysterious

R: hmmm, the military have a lot of secrets aur ab prachi ke case ke saath ek military personnel na naam jud gaya hai'pata nehi akhir mamla kya hai

P: jo bhi ho we need to be careful, chalo ab so jao, main bhi chalti hun

R: tum mere room mein so jayo na

P: oye, no badmashi, jao ab

R: kisi ko pata nehi chalega, please chalo, I really don't want to let you go'

P: nooooo, jao ab, issh log kya sochenge, jao so jao, bye

And tabhi they saw a figure walking towards the guesthouse, it was Vikas coming from outside, holding a flashlight.

Raj-pri: tum abhi? Itne raat gaye?

V: kyon? Tumlog bhi toh abhi itne raat gaye....the lovers night out i guess.

R: tum kahan se aa rahe ho? Aur yeh flashlight?

V: main bahar gaya tha'.lekin aap aisa sawal kyon pooch rahe hai? Main jahan bhi jayoon aapse matlab? Please mind your own business

And he walked away to his room

R: pri did you see? It's almost 1 am in the morning and vikas is coming from outside, with a FLASHLIGHT???????????????

P: gaya hoga kahi, raat ko nikalne ke liye flashlight chahiye na?

R: pri it is a moonlit night outside, you don't need a flashlight unless for a specific purpose

P: toh fir'..tumhe lagta hai woh Vikas hi tha library mein?........par kyon?

R: pata nehi Pri'.yahan pe sab kuchh andhera hain'..koi aur bhi ho sakta hai'..lekin fir who itne raat gaye'..mera dimaag kaam nehi kar raha hai, chalo so jaate hai goodnight'.


THIS PART WAS WORTH READING....FULL OF MISTRIES,ROMANCE,GOOD DIALOGUES,SUSPICION....CAN'T THINK OF ANYTHING MORE ONLY IN A UPDATE...EVERYTHING A FF WRITER SHOULD KEEP IN HIS MIND TO MAKE HIS/HER FF MORE INTERESTING ...EVERYONE IS SUSPICIOUS๐Ÿ˜ฒ EXCEPT OUR LOVE BIRDS๐Ÿ˜ณ....ALEKH COMMENT WAS SOOOOOOO HILARIOUS.....๐Ÿ˜†....OUR REAL RN WERE AWEEEEEEEEEEEEEESUM REMINDED ME OF 3RD EPISODE OF LRL WHERE RK WAS IN RED TSHIRT AND NAINA WAS IN THE CORRIDER HAD COME TO TAKE HIS BRO'S PHOTO...๐Ÿ˜›CUT TO CUT CONVOS WERE SUUUUUUUUPERB....REALLY A MIIIIIIINDBLOWING PART....TOTALLY PERFECT...LOVE IT.....ALL CREDIT GOES TO U....๐Ÿ‘
Edited by quietrajpri1623 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey nice parts.๐Ÿ˜Š

Hurray Raj finally won the competition ๐Ÿ‘ that is diiferent thing that he kissed Aliya instead of Pri but what can he do when she denied.

Pri ka gussa baap re baap but he knows how to handel his angry Pri.๐Ÿ˜‰

Pata nahi kahan se Ghazal aa gayi aur dono kitne embarras hue na Ghazal k saamne๐Ÿ˜ณ. Pri ne Prachi ko mom n dad bolna sikhaya ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ. Raj kitna khush hua papa sun kar Prachi k muh se.๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Ye Aliya aur Arun Sharama ka kya chakkar hai?๐Ÿ˜• Arun Sharma ka naam sunte hi sab chup aur Aliya kis se baat kar rahi thi phone par ๐Ÿ˜ฒ? I hope kahin na kahin bahut bada Raj chipa hai is sab k peeche.
update soon.
Edited by varshita - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hiii dear,


Update is just fabulous.Raj n Pri rocks.luv all the teasing n romance but do something about that Aliya...๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก she is a mistry women.what she trying to do๐Ÿ˜•
hope that she don't create any misunderstanding between RP.
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Posted: 16 years ago
GUYS I NEED AN INFORMATION, what is Rajeev's brother's name who is also an Army officer? pleassssssssssseeeeeee let me know, i need his name ๐Ÿ˜›
end term is going on, but look at me, padhai ke beech beech mein I am writing updates ๐Ÿ˜‰ i think i am addicted to writing this fic so even if you guys hate my fic, i'll keep on writing ๐Ÿ˜†
ok i should go and study now, all replies and updates after 12th december, ๐Ÿ˜ญ
till then byeeeeeeeeeeeee
miss u allโค๏ธ๐Ÿค—

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