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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: rituka7

update was simply awesome
each and every bit of it was fabulous
update soon long asap

thank you soooooooo much for your comment, am so happy you liked it 😃😃😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: varshita

update was really awesome yaar. 👏

Raj ne challenge rakha hai Ranveer k saamne fir bhi haar jeet se jyada chinta us ko Pri k saath romance karne ki hai, how sweet yaar.😳
Kya majedaar bet lagagi hai Naina k saath us ne i hope Raj hi jeetega.😉
Ranveer ne to Nayanika ki band hi baja di.😆
Vikas ko mana kar vakai me Pri ne bahut accha kaam kiya hai.😛
update soon.

thank you dear, i am soooooooo happy you liked it
haan raj ko toh sirf apne pri ke saath romance karne ki padi hai 😳😳
tumne sahi socha, jitega toh hamara raj hi na
ranveer sach mein hopeless case hai 😕
and even i am glad ki Vikas aur Pri ki problem solve ho gayi
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Well the FF was extremely gud. I read it all at a stretch having only 1 break. So u can understand how much I liked it. But yes I'm very much eager to know the next. Its so much suspense out here.

Pls UD soon. WE ALL R W8ING EAGERLY.

hello sumaiya, thank you so much for your first comment, i am so happy that you liked my fic 😛 sorry dear i was busy with some work all these days, so couldn't update but will be updating soon
thanks a lot again😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: quietrajpri1623



ok again here i m....and i mnot giving my reasons for not commenting...there r sooooo many...

continuing my work....
update as usual full of actions and was very interesting....😛how do u able to put ur thoughts in words yaar....wo bhi itni beautifully way mein....god...u r just outstanding👏

thank you soooooooo much dear, even i wonder how you write such amazing comments 😛😛
👏...finally rajeev has realised his love for priyanka...yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....😛..wo bhi itna ki apneaap ko hurt karne se bhi nahin picche haata...👏..
haan woh toh hona hi tha, bas dekhna tha kab, i know rajeev is sooo passionate
great...pri and her mom convo was sooooo sooooo what i say just like we talk to our mom....picturised soo real yaar...excellent....somehow i felt pri's mom is right because falling love with rajeev is a controversial work...and apart from that rajeev is too elder than pri not one or two years but 10 years....pyaar umar nahin dekhta but my adarsh don't allow that like pri's mom(beside i dream of rp jodi in real life😃😳 me and my confused adarsh)....
i am glad you understood her mom's perspective, but agar meri mom hoti toh zaroor man leti, afetr all ladka koi aur nehi hamara rajeev hai 😉😉 don't worry jab miya bibi razi tab.....
but anyway i m happy for RP and sad for vikash....raj-pri-kumar part was soo funny and cute....and kunal-iqbal part😆...really wonderful...ek aur dostana....😆
i feel sad for vikas too, i know Kumar is a complete idiot....kunal iqbal ka kya confusion chal raha hai
last part was really socking...😲....chalo pri ki ye teesri baar hai jahan usne rajveer ko unintentionally or may be intensionally RAJEEV SIR kaha....😳...
i knowwww, akhir dil ki baat kab tak chhupega 😳
isse kehte hai emotional overflow....aweeeeeeesum one..rock on sweety always like this....👏....
a biiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiig thank you for you

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: quietrajpri1623




😛ye taaliya ye stars aur ye exciting face sirf aur sirf tumhare liye hai sweety...u are hardcore brilliant writer...from up to bottom..each and every word describes what a talented writer this ff section has got...😛...update was suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuperb not because of only the confession but also u add a ting of spice in the update....everytime i read ur every update...i didn't feel bore...u never write monotonously...that i appreciate very much....and with every update a new freshness and happiness popped in my heart.😛...love u for that..😊😊..this update was faaaaaaaaaaaabulous...

tune itna tarif kiya hai ki mera thank you bhi kam pad jaaye, bas aur bol mat, i am feeling shy😳😳 thank you soooooooo much dear, your praises take me to cloud nine😃
poor pri....she is going through a lot...i love rajeev dialogue when he saw pri entering bus..awwwww...how cute😳...
i knowwww, both in loove and both in pain too
and this malhotra...my god...demanding for a bed scenes in the movie😡....teacher-student relationship and these scenes.😲...thank god rajeev rejected this....👏👏👏....
malhotra is an idiot😡
RP CONFESSION WAS SOOOOOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL...SOOOOOOOOO REAL...every word of their convo make a way to my heart....love the whole scene.....👏....last but not the least U R A OUTSTANDING WRITER , INTERMEDIARY , AND A LOVELY CUPID IN MAKING RP JODI ONE FELT LIKE REAL....

👏

i was very happy bringing Pri and Raj together, it was like a dream come true, chalo real life mein nehi at least fanfic mein hi sahi, hum apna sapne poora kar lete hai
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: quietrajpri1623




ahem ahem ahem....superb,marvelous,awesum,hillarios,passionate,rocking,romantic,and many mores👏...truely love this part..😃..i laughed when rajeev comment about pizza....😆...BOLO MERI JAAN COMMENT WAS SOO CUUUUUUUUTE...😳...Arjun is sooooo much understanding...i love him in every way....truely a great guy in real too....😊...mud scenes....hehehehehe😃...and after that scene what i say really very romantic and passionate one....reel and real life story...god...please don't make them like it was in serial....😕...i have still not overcome with rajveer's death in the serial....i can't be able to bear this in ff.....😕...anyway asusual my standing ovation and a big hug for this great update....🤗

ab main kya bolun, thank u thank u thank u, yes rajeev is very funny and arjun is the ideal friend hai na? kash sach mein yeh dono jungle mein kho jaate in real life, i am sure zaroor kuchh ho jata fir 😉 and don't worry i will never let this story be like LRL, even i am still in shock and sadness for rajbveer's death in the serial, can't think of that torture again 😭

we wil have a happy ending for our dream story, so dont worry
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Posted: 16 years ago
ok guys. first a biiiiiiig sorry for the delay and that's why i have two episodes for you today, back to back!!!!!!
Episode 32: And the winner is..........

Iqbal had discussed with Ranveer and come up with a very difficult task!!! He went up to the board wrote something and with a smug smile said: Now crack this code

HOOTIE AND THE BLOWFISH" - That's the code they were to crack!!!!!!!!!

It was a famous code in the military, used during the Kargil war. The Indian soldiers planning to attack a peak would use this code which was decoded as "BLOW THE FISH AND I'LL PLAY HOOTIE" that meant while one group would distract the enemy with constant false bombarding i.e " play hootie" , another group would attack them from behind or "blow the fish." Ranveer and Iqbal were absolutely sure the actors would never be able to crack it…………….

However, the crowd's reaction surprised them. The actors were jubilant, almost celebrating, Pooja and a couple of other female cadets (who had watched Left right left!!!) were cursing Iqbal loudly….Rajeev wrote something on a paper in less than in a minute and handed it over to a open mouthed Iqbal. Ranveer was confused too while he handed over his answer to Iqbal….most predictably, both had correct answers!!

The 3rd round was over in less than a minute….before Iqbal and Ranveer could come out of their shock, a jumping Arjun had already gone up and written the points for the 3rd round

Ranveer: 10/10 Rajeev: 10/10

Total: 24.5/30 total 24.5/30

Vikas couldn't stop smiling as Rajeev came to meet his co-actors at the end of the 3rd round. Rajeev had a wide smile for Vikas too

Rajeev: yaad hai 'cadet Huda'?

Vikas: bilkul…I can't believe they gave us that code to crack

Rajeev: I know…we have been lucky…that we got this code, that Ranveer doesn't know how to dance….hahahahaha

Ghazal: that's not our fault, we are winning this fair and square

Harshad: wait abhi last round baki hai, abhi toh total tally equal hai

Arjun: haan last round mein kya task doon?

Rajeev whispered something in Arjun's ears that brought a huge grin on his face: great! Ab maza ayega, aapko surely pata hai na?

Rajeev: haan maine usse competition se pehle hi poocha tha

Arjun: that means you always had this plan in mind

Rajeev: of course

4th Round: Arjun: okay guys hum actors ko bahut saare different scenes karne padte hain, kabhi gham ka, kabhi khushi ka toh kabhi romantic scenes, toh ab waisa hi ek scene aap logo ko karke dikhana padega….you'll need to kiss your partner as if acting in a romantic scene

Another loud gasp from the audience. All knew how shy captain Ranveer was with girls!!!! but this time Priyanka was one amongst them to cry in shock…. " achha toh yeh plan tha janab ka!!...tabhi bol raha tha ki aaj kiss karke hi rahega!!! baapre kitna saitan hai Rajeev!!! Thik hai mera bhi challenge hai, main bhi dekhti hoon woh kaise mujhe kiss karta hai" Priyanka thought to herself.

Rajeev called for Priyanka and smiled at her mischievously as if telling her, "dekha maine kahan tha na, aaj sab ke samne kiss le ke rahunga"

Priyanka looked at Rajeev with anger and refused to come down: Do something else, I am not coming

Arjun: oye natak baad mein karna, ab aja, this is our golden chance

Udhar the cadets were all consoling Ranveer: bas one kiss, just shut your eyes and do it

Ranveer: I…I can't do it…and who am I going to kiss?

Pooja: Sir Nayanika aapka partner hai, wohi kar legi

Nayanika: main bilkul nehi kar rahi hoon

Huda: haan Nayanika bilkul nehi karegi

Iqbal: oye yeh hamara izzat ka sawal hai, nehi toh woh log jeet jayenge, please Sir, Nayanika tu dikha de apni himmat...ab ruk main un logo ke liye bhi yeh task thoda difficult karta hoon

Iqbal: hello hello, yeh nehi chalega, Priyanka aap ka real life girlfriend hai, agar aap sachha actor hai toh aap ko koi aur ladki ko kiss karke dikhana padega

Priyanka's eyes flared up with more anger: koi zaroorat nehi, main hi karungi

Rajeev was amused, he wanted to tease Pri a bit more: nehi nehi, koi baat nehi Iqbal, main kisi aur ko kiss kar leta hoon…ahem…Aliya will you come forward please…sorry jaan tumne hi pehle mana kar diya tha (he made a mock sad face at Pri)

Priyanka looked at Rajeev as if she's going to eat them up both, Rajeev enjoyed her jealousy and loved teasing her…Aliya was in a playful mood too, she quickly came down and joined Rajeev

Rajeev kissed her, though a little hesitant but excited about winning the challenge and teasing Pri

Now it was Ranveer's turn…..he hesitated…held Nayanika's hands and let them off, then brought his lips forward, putting his hands to the back…and faltered….then he closed his eyes and made a wild guess at her lips…and banged his head with her instead!!!

FINALLY HE GAVE UP

Ranveer: I can't do it, you win…I can't kiss my cadet for God's sake!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Arjun: so you give up?

Ranveer: yes

Arjun: and you admit your defeat?

Ranveer: yes

Rajeev: and you admit we actors are no less than military men?

Ranveer: totally, hats off to you guys, I can never do what you guys can do!

4th round :

Ranveer: 0/10 rajeev : 10/10

Final: 24.5/40 final : 34.5/40

HURRAYYYYYYYY!!!!! The actors screamed at the top of their voices! They all came down to hug Rajeev, Arjun was dancing balle balle in front of Iqbal, Ghazal and Harshad snatched a drum from one of the cadets and started playing it, Kunal had collected a whistle from somewhere and was blowing it as if his life depended on it!! Vikas congratulated Rajeev too….only Priyanka was fuming with anger!!!

Rajeev got over the initial wave of celebrations and came over to her

Rajeev: kya hua sweetheart (he knew she was angry and why, but he acted all innoconet)

Pri: don't call me sweetheart

Rajeev: array hua kya?

Pri: kuchh nehi, main ja rahi hoon apne room mein

And she walked away with anger.

Before Rajeev could follow her, Cpt Ranveer came and congratulated him: you ae amazing! But I really want to know how you did our tasks, shall we all meet for dinner tonight?

Rajeev: yeah sure, we can all go out for dinner tonight, par filhal toh mujhe abhi bahut zaroori ek kaam hai, so I'll meet you after one hour
Ranveer: oh sure, go ahead, I'll get permission from Brigadier and bring my team of cadets, see you

Rajeev didn't even wait to hear that, he rushed to Priyanka's room, a little scared now if she was too angry….perhaps kuchh zyada hi teasing ho gaya….

He went and knocked on Pri's door.

Pri: who's there

Raj: Saitan Singh

Pri: good name for you, I am not opening the door

R: pleasssssseeeeeeee, tum jab tak darwaza nehi khologe main chillata rahunga aur ab guesthouse ke saare staff yahan pe a chuka hai

Priyanka opened the door and Rajeev pushed her in and locked the door, pinning her against the door.

Rajeev: baapre itna gussa?

Pri: yahan kyon aaye ho? Jao jaake Aliya ko kiss karo na

R: main kya karoon? tumne mana kar diya

P: aur tum lapak pade Aliya ko kiss karne!!! "nehi nehi, koi baat nehi Iqbal, main kisi aur ko kiss kar leta hoon…Aliya will you come forward please" she said angrily mimicking him

R: she was the only kissable one around

P: whaat??

R: I mean apart from you!!!! Dekho tumhari galti hai, maine kahan tha, mujhe kiss karne do, tumne mana kar diya

P: all men are the same, mujhe tumse koi baat nehi karni

Rajeev held her hands to her back with his right hand, and with his left hand held her hair and brought her face closer, almost breathing on her face: Priyanka, I am sorry…you know I love you, that was just to tease you aur haan…….kiss toh main leke rahunga….

He brought his lips close to hers, pri closed her eyes….electric current running though her body…she felt amazed how this man made her feel like this every time he came closer to her….her lips involuntarily opened in anticipation….

Par yeh kya? 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8, seconds passed…Rajeev hadn't kissed her yet…she opened her eyes to see him smiling at her, teasingly….priyanka couldn't take it any more…he certainly knew how to make a woman swoon…this time she held his head and brought his face closer, planting a deep kiss on his lips. He kissed back with passion, as if telling her how much he loves her, how much she means to him….

He carried her to the bed and laid her there…sinking his face in her long hair he whispered: Dekha kahan tha na maine, aaj main tumse kiss lekar rahunga

He said running his finger on pri's face….

Pri said dreamily: tum bahut badmash ho gaye ho

Raj: bas tumhare liye…he bit her ear softly and snuggled closer

Pri turned to him and snaked her hand to the back of his neck…bringing him closer for another kiss….

Tabhi there was a knock on the door…

Both sprang up quickly

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EPISODE 33: The name revealed

Priyanka adjusted her dress and got down from the bed as Rajeev opened the door….forgetting it was priyanka's room they are in….

Ghazal was standing there…she let out a gasp seeing Rajeev: oh I m so sorry, mujhe nehi pata tha aap yahan hai

Rajeev felt embarrassed: nehi nehi bas humlog baate kar rahe the…..haan baate…aur kuchh nehi…bas baate kar rahe the…

Ghazal: haan haan mujhe pata hai aaplog baate hi kar rahe the, bas Priyanka ko pata nehi kaise baate karne se hi neck pe lal lal daag ho jata hai, hai na Pri? She winked at her mischievously!!

Hearing this both blushed deep red, looking down shyly…

Ghazal continued: khair main yeh bolne ayi thi ki capt Ranveer invited us all for dinner, so Priyanka ko bulane ayi thi….okay toh aap log aa jaiye, hum sab bahar intezaar kar rahe hai…aur haan zara jaldi ana please..

Ghazal left. Rajeev came back to Priyanka and kissed her on the cheek: kaam adhura reh gaya

Priyanka: baki lautkar poora karna (she said shyly)

Rajeev looked at her intensely: uske liye tumhe aaj mere room mein rehna padega

Pri: woh toh main waise bhi rahungi, mere boyfriend haat se fisal raha hai, uspe nazar jo rakhna hai

Rajeev: great! Aagar aise results aaye toh I should kiss new girls everyday

Pri: next time you kiss someone else I'll kill you, kabhi sochna bhi nehi!!

They got ready and came out to join the rest of the group. The cadets looked a little sad because their captain had lost but nevertheless, the very prospect of going out with dinner with Ranveer and the actors made them happy. However cadet huda looked really sad, sadder than anyone else!!! Priyanka was wearing a black saree, Aliya was in her red one! Rajeev could't take his eyes off Pri…

Aliya: dekho Rajeev iss baar mere saree pe nazar mat dalnaa

Priyanka looked at her curiously!

Aliya: don't look at me, ask him! Baad mein mujhe pata chala tumhe red saree kisi dusre pe kyon pasand nehi tha…

Priyanka understood it now and smiled at him, he indeed loved her very much.

Rajeev: so where are we going?

Ranveer: a lovely place, chalo na, you'll see

The cars pulled in front of the same restaurant that Rajeev-Aliya, Vikas-Pri had come that day!

Oh nooooooo: the four said!!

Ranveer: kya hua? Jagah achhi nehi lagi?

Rajeev: nehi nehi bahut achhi hai, chale?

All walked in, First Ranveer and his cadets, then Kunal, Harshad and Ghazal, uske peeche peeche Aliya and Vikas and finally Rajeev and Priyanka, holding each other's arms! The manager welcomed them all, frowned a little bit when he saw Aliya and Vikas walking after each other...but got the shock of his life when he saw Rajeev and Priyanka walking in hand in hand!!!!

Manager: hello Rajeev ji

Rajeev: hello Mr.Dubey

Manager: good to see you…par aap dono…aur yeh dono…I mean…last time toh…well I mean….

Rajeev: I know what you mean Mr.Dubey but yes this time and everytime this is our pair

Manager: good good, please take your seat (he said wiping his sweat)

The dinner was a great confusion. Everyone liked different food and the waiter went crazy taking their orders, uspe Nayanika couldn't make up her mind what she wanted to eat!! First she ordered pasta, then seeing Aliya ordering chicken chopsuey she changed her order to that, then she felt like eating Pizza….the waiter went completely crazy

Waiter: mam aap finally kya order kar rahe hai aur ek baar batayenge

Nayanika: wait let me think…seriously, main kya khayoon…..

Everybody was tired with Nayanika's fickle mindedness, finally Huda said: aap uske liye naan aur chhole layiye

Nayanika: righttttt, mujhe yehi khane ka man kar raha hai, par tujhe kaise pata??

Huda: because I think I know you better than perhaps you yourself do

He said it with so much anger that the whole group was surprised

"Whew, yahan pe kuchh zyada hi temper hai," Rajeev said

"okay okay,kisi aur ko kuchh aur order karna hai?' Ranveer said stopping the conversation, shutting Nayanika up who was going to say something to Huda.

The dinner was great fun…the cadets and the actors were comfortable in each other's company…Priyanka was feeding Prachi her favorite food, Pizza. Seeing that Rajeev commented: tum usse fir se pizza khila rahi ho?

Pri: haan kyon?

Raj: yaad nehi hai last time?

Pri: Rajeev! ek pizza se kuchh nehi hoga, tum ne last time usse 3 din se lagatar pizza khilaya tha

Rajeev: hmmm....tab toh tum ma beti hi jano

Pri: of course papaji (she said kissing Prachi)

Ranveer: achha yeh bataiye how did you manage to do our tasks?

Rajeev explained how he could do the tasks

Ranveer: really!!! Wow…no I really I admit, you guys are into serious business!

Rajeev: yes we are, dekha nehi ab kaise kung fu training lena padh raha tha, but true, we can never serve the country as you guys do…but I must admit, military men are amazing dancers!

All laughed out, Ranveer blushed, only pooja spoke out: of course we also have smart dancers…Capt Arun Sharma was such a good dancer that….

pooja couldn't finish her sentence….the response in the crowd was as if something blasphemous had been uttered! While Rajeev and Priyanka gaped hearing that name, the cadets and capt Ranveer let out a cry of shock!!!

Ranveer: I think we should leave now, it's late…

A weird silence fell on the table…Pooja looked extremely guilty, the cadets uncomfortable and Ranveer angry…..

The rest of the dinner was finished quickly, as all the cadets and Ranveer looked extremely uncomfortable. Rajeev nad Pri looked at each other but couldn't dare to ask anything….the rest of the actors were completely clueless, they kept looking at each other…only Aliya looked less surprised but she also kept mum and quickly finished her meal. The mood of the evening seemed to get spoiled with that one comment….people were making useless conversations but the earlier exuberance had vanished

They all came back to the academy.

Rajeev asked Priyanka to go to his room with Prachi and himself waited for capt ranveer. When everybody had left Rajeev went up to capt ranveer: capt can I ask you something?

Capt ranveer looked extremely uncomfortable: yes….

Rajeev: who's capt Arun Sharma and why did you guys react like that?

Capt Ranveer: please mr Khandelwal, I would greatly appreciate if you don't ask me any questions about him, in fact I would suggest you don't ever mention his name in this academy

Rajeev: but….

Capt Ranveer: PLEASE, no more questions, now lets go to our rooms, congratulations on your win again

Without giving Rajeev any more chance to speak, capt ranveer walked away, leaving Rajeev stunned.

When Rajeev came back to his room, Priyanka was putting prachi to sleep, but the little devil refused to sleep, she was too excited to have Priyanka in their room and wanted to play with her.

Priyanka called Rajeev as soon as he entered the room: Rajeev look at this, I have something to show you….she said excitedly

However looking at Rajeev's face she stopped….he looked tensed and glum.

Pri: kya hua Rajeev, kuchh pata chala?

Rajeev: nehi Pri…woh toh kuchh bhi batane ke liye taiyaar nehi….pata nehi mamla kya hai

Pri: thik hai hum kisi aur se pooch lenge….

Rajeev: it's not that easy Pri…dekha nehi sab log kaise behave kar rahe the unka naam shunet hi…uske saath bahut bada koi raaz chhupa hai…and which is dangerous too…yeh hum kahan fansh gaye Priyanka?!

Priyanka came closer to him and hugged him tight, taking his head on her bosom: Rajeev, lets leave it here then, Prachi hamari beti hai, koi zaroorat nehi uska past janna, she will never know anything….

Rajeev: no Priyanka….usse baad mein pata chalega toh woh hume kabhi maaf nehi karegi…hume uske liye itna toh karna hi padega…akhir mamla hai kya?

Priyanka: mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai Rajeev……

Rajeev hugged pri hard: lets hope it's all over soon

There was only one bed and two and half people. Rajeev and Pri obviously wanted to be together, so they put Prachi on one side and snuggled close to each other, however Prachi wanted her share of snuggling too! She wanted to get in between Raj and Pri! Badi muskil se Pri ne usse sulaya, Rajeev kept waiting, watching them both with adoration.

Raj: baapre yeh toh meri ma nikli

P: aur nehi toh kya, she doesn't want to share you with me

Raj: no she doesn't want to share YOU with me

Raj kissed Pri tenderly: and I don't want to share you with anybody

Pri: achha?

Raj: kya achha? Aaj raat bhar sone nehi dunga tumhe

Priyanka blushed listening that: besharam

Raj: I don't care, I love you (he said starting to unbutton Pri's dress)

Pri flipped Rajeev and came on his top: oye kya kar rahe ho?

Rajeev flipped pri back and pinned her arms under him: aapko nehi pata?

Pri : tum kuchh nehi karoge, chup chap so jao prachi ke tarah!!

Rajeev: achha!! aur jungle mein jab tumne shuru kiya tha tab? Aaj koi bahana nehi chalega…nehi toh main jaa raha hoon Aliya ke paas

Pri flipped Rajeev over and came on his top, biting his bare chest she said: aur ek baar kisi dusre ka naam liya toh aur zor se katungi

Rajeev put his arms around her and pressed her to his chest, he kissed her passionately……

And tabhi

"PAPA GODI"

They both jumped out of shock and turned to see Prachi sitting up, wide awake smiling at them adoringly!!!

While Priyanka quickly buttoned her kurta, Rajeev took Prachi in his arms in amazement and joy: Pri suna tumne, Prachi baat kar rahi hai!!!!!! He had tears in his eyes as he kissed her little face madly!

Pri was touched by his tenderness, she smiled.

Raj: tumne sikhaya isse?

Pri: haan….yehi toh tumhe dikhana tha

Raj: oh Pri I love you, I love you so much, thanks a lot…I can't believe this, she is finally speaking

Pri: aur dekhoge? Achha Prachi papa ko bolo "papa I love you"

Prachi: papa i lal yu

Raj: I love you too beta, achha beta ab bolo toh "papa mujhe kissi do"….

Priyanka: nehi pehle woh bolegi "mama I love you", beta bolo toh

Rajeev aur Pri Prachi ko lekar busy ho gaye! Rajeev was acting like a small child himself while priyanka was no less!.......

Something woke up Priyanka early in the morning, she got up to see she was pressed from both sides….Rajeev was sleeping on her one side, his face in buried in her neck, his arms around her waist, hugging her tightly like a child. On the other side, Prachi was sleeping, hugging her tighly in the same way……..

Priyanka smiled….she loved them both!

Priyanka tried to wake Rajeev up but he's too much in sleep! "Poor thing, kal raat ka tiredness abhi tak utra nehi" she said smiling to herself. She planted a kiss on his cheeks softly and turned and kissed a sleeping Prachi and came out quietly from their room.

As she stepped out, she faced Malhotra in the corridor. He smirked at her, giving her a dirty look: Good morning Priyanka ji, raat ko theek se soye na? by the way, yeh Rajeev ji ka room hai na?

Priyanka felt her whole body burning with anger, this man will never change!!!!! He is absolutely shameless

She just cast an angry glance at him and left.

She felt like taking a walk outside, it was a lovely morning. She stepped out into the garden…and then she saw Aliya in the garden, in her sports dress, talking secretively over the phone:

Aliya: Don't worry sir, I told you I'll get to know everything, I'll ask Rajeev today

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A: Yes, Sir I am keeping my eyes on both of them, dono pyar mein hi zyada busy hai

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A: Sir, jaise hi kaam ho jayega main in dono ko hatha dungi

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A: Sir, kisiko kuchh pata nehi chalega, main chup chap kaam kar rahi hoon

"Kisko kya pata nehi chalega Aliya" Aliya turned back and startled seeing Priyanka standing there!

Alaiya: array Priyanka tum, itni subah subah, mausam kitna achha hai na…..tum itni jaldi kaise uth gaye?

Pri: main toh uth gayi hoon, aur bahut der se tumhari baate bhi shun rahi hoon, Rajeev se kya poochna hai tumhe? Tum kisse raste se hathana chahte ho? She said with a stern face, she had listened to the entire conversation and was sure it was something concerning her and Rajeev! She had always found Aliya suspicious and now she had her proof!

Aliya became serious when she heard Pri had heard everything: Achha toh tum yahan chup chup ke mere baate shun rahe the?

Pri: nehi Aliyaji, maine aapko dekha toh aise hi 'hi' bolne ayi thi, par aap toh kuchh aur ki sajish banane mein busy the…

Aliya: are you crazy Priyanka? Main kya sazish karungi? Array main toh Misraji se baate kar rahi thi about our cast and crew, tumhe pata hai na hamare production manager aur assistant production manager thik se kaam nehi kar raha hai, they are too busy with their personal lives, wohi main bol rahi thi ki in dono ko fire karna hai…….

Pri: toh fir Rajeev se kya baat karna hai?

Aliya: oh ho Priyanka, Rajeev is a senior member in this film unit, he handles things well, so I thought of asking him...tum bhi na Priyanka, kya possessive girlfriend bante ja rahi ho…how disgusting! Logo pe ilzam lagane se pehle at least sach toh pata karo!

She left, leaving Priyanka stunned. Indeed, Aliya's words made a lot of sense, but Priyanka was not convinced, somehow she felt Aliya was hiding something and it was something concerning her and Rajeev….. "Jo bhi ho, I have to tell Rajeev about not telling anything to Aliya, Rajeev bhi na, Aliya ko involve karne mein tula hua hai!" she thought to herself. "Maybe she's saying the truth but we need to be careful"

Another part of the academy, the cadets jogging.

Nayanika and Huda were jogging together. Huda was still angry and he was sulking.

Nayanika: achha tu kal se itna ajeeb behave kyon kar raha hai?

Huda looks at Nayanika but says nothing.

N: kya hua ? main tujhse khuchh pooch rahi hoon

Huda: mujhe kuchh nehi bolna iss baare mein

N: bolna toh tujhe padega idiot

Huda: kya bolun main? Tujhe nehi pata main kyon upset hoon? Kal se tu jo kar rahi hai….

N: kya kar rahi hoon main?

Huda: achha woh bhi batana padega? Capt Ranveer ke saath tu jo kar rahi hain, tu usse kiss karne ke liye bhi taiyyar thi?!!!

"Kya baat hai aaj toh chuhe ki volume speaker mode pe hain" Pooja said from behind.

Nayanika: sach mein Pooja iski himmat toh dekh, dungi na ek jhapar…..

"Stop it you guys" Huda said it so loudly that both the girls stopped. His face was red with anger and somehow he looked very odd trying to be an angry man in his petite frame!

Huda: tum logon ko yeh mazak lagta hai na? mujhe nehi lagta…main Nayanika se pyar karta hoon, aur kal jo ho raha tha mujhe bilkul pasand nehi…..tum log…tumlog hamesha mera mazaak udate ho, kabhi socha bhi hai mere dil pe kya beet ta hai….now his angry voice was replaced by a quivering one, his eyes watering up.

Pooja and nAyanika looked at him stunned!

Pooja: baapre yeh kabse itna emotional ho gaya

Iqbal: kya nautanki hai baap! Oye lalloo roley roley, tu toh ladkiyon se bhi badkar hai….

Nayanika: shut up iqbal….huda….i am sorry…I didn't know…I didn't mean to hurt you…I mean you never told me….

Huda: Leave it Nayanika, have you ever taken me seriously…you always insult me

Iqbal: achha natak hai boss

Pooja: shut up Iqbal…oye Huda, tu itne dino se silent mode pe kyon tha? Ishh bechara

Nayanika: Huda I am really sorry if I hurt you, I never meant to insult you…I thought we were friends…but of course I respect you

Pooja: haan tu please ro mat Huda..he bhagwan

Nayanika came and hugged Huda…she was still in a state of shock, she felt the situation was extremely funny but kept a serious face…Huda was indeed serious….

Suddenly, Pooja saw Cpt Ranveer jogging, she dragged nayanika: nayanika, capt ranveer, please jaldi chal, mujhe mafi mangni hai about yesterday

Nayanika: haan toh tu ja naa

Pooja: nehi yaar woh mujhse bahut gussa hai, mujhe darr lag raha hai, please tu chal mere sath, tu rahegi toh woh kuchh nehi bolenge

She just virtually dragged her, tearing him away from Huda! Both the girls went running to Ranveer

Iqbal: woh toh gayi re Huda

Huda looked at Nayanika and let out a sigh of regret.

Priyanka finished her jogging and came back to her room. She took a bath, got ready for the shooting and went to Rajeev's room to see if he's gotten up…the door was half open, as she pushed it open, she saw Rajeev and Aliya talking over coffee! As soon as Aliya saw Priyanka she got up, she forced an artificial smile at Priyanka and said: okay Rajeev, I must go now, see you at the shoot, remember 11 o'clock, you both be ready. Bye

Priyanka closed the door after her and came to Rajeev angrily: who kya kar rahi thi?

Rajeev: kya? Mujhe yaad dilane ayi thi aaj press conference hai

Priyanka: itni subah subah?

Rajeev: haan usse kahi nikalna hai, toh uske pehle mujhse kehkar gayi

Priyanka: phone par bhi toh bata sakti thi na?

Rajeev: haan par what's the problem? Tum itna bhadak kyon rahe ho?

Priyanka: isliye ki I suspect that woman, aur abhi abhi maine garden mein jo suna….(she tells him everything) mujhe nehi pata tha ki who seedha daudkar yahan ayegi!! Nehi toh main hi pehle aa jati, ab toh mujhe poora poora shaq hai...tumne usse kuchh bataya toh nehi?

Rajeev: haan maine usse capt Arun Sharma ke baare mein bataya…..par

Pri: KYAAAAAA?

Raj: tum chilla kyon rahe ho? Humne toh pehle hi baat ki thi ki hum usse batanewale hai….aur fir usne mujhe poochha ki kal unka naam shunte hi humlog upset kyon ho gaye, toh maine usse bata diya….

Pri: Rajeev! Maine tabhi kahan tha tumhe usse involve mat karo, mujhe to pehle se hi saq tha ab poora yakin hai, woh humse information nikalne ki koshish mein hai, aur jaise ki kaam ho jayega hume raste se hatha denge

Raj: priyanka come back to your senses, she is a director not a professional murderer…aur usne toh tumhe bataya ki who unit ke baare mein baate kar rahi thi Misraji ke saath, so what's the problem?

Pri: woh jhooth bhi toh bol sakti hai na? usne toh yeh bhi kahin thi ki woh tumse bhi baat karegi iss baare mein, usne kiya?

Raj: nehi, shayad baad mein karegi, ya fir problem ab solve ho gayi hai, they don't need me………Pri you are being very irrational, bewajah uspe shaq kar rahi ho tum, Aliya is very helpful, dekhna woh hume bahut help karengi, now stop being a possessive girlfriend, I am all yours.

He came forward and hugged her from the back.

Priyanka kept silent. There was no way she could convince Rajeev against Aliya, she needed a solid proof. Till then she just needed to be careful.

And tabhi Aliya came back to Rajeev's room: Rajeev I have got good news for you, I got an appointment with Brigadier Suryakant, we can ask him about arun sharma

Rajeev: wow great, par hum usse poochenge kaise, I mean we should have a reason to ask na?

Aliya: what do you think I didn't think about that? We'll tell him we wanted to use this name in our film but we got objections, so we want to know.

Rajeev: wonderful idea……..lets go then….priyanka

Aliya: actually woh main soch rahi thi ki there's no need for all of us to go, brigadier might think something seeing so many people….. you can come with me….of course only if priyanka has no objections…

Priyanka felt insulted, what is Aliya trying to indicate? That pri is a jealous, possessive woman who doesn't ler her man out? She said angrily: why should I have a problem? You guys go ahead

Rajeev and Aliya went on to meet the brigadier, Priyanka sat in her room, thinking about Aliya. She was indeed a strange woman. What does she want?

Will Rajeev and Aliya be able to crack the mystery behind about Arun Sharma? Watch it in the next episode

next update will be on 12th december, till then, good bye to all

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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap.
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This is the reply for part 32:-
Pehle to mujhe ye shikayat hai ki ud karne k baad koi pm nahi kiya gaya aur vaise bhi i think this is the first ud in this month.😕😕😕
Maine pm bhi kiya tha par koi bhi reply nahi aaya y?😲😲😲
Khair ab mai is baar k update par reply de rahi hoon.
Ranveer aur Iqbal ko bhi nahi pata raha hoga ki humare cadtes aur Captain sir itne smart ho sakte hain 😆😆😆 ki itne asaani se ye code crack kar lenge aur humari LRL team ne ye round bhi win kar liya.👏👏👏
Par maana padega Raj k dimmag ko kya jabardast task diya hai us ne Ranveer n company ko 😉😉😉 kya jabardast task diya hai becahre Ranveer ki to haalat hi kharab ho gayi thi ye dekh kar.😳😳😳
Pehle to vo khud ladkiyon se sharmata hai uper se Nayanika ko kiss karna i must say it was the tuffest task someone has given him yet 😳😳😳. Raj ne ye task apne liye diya tha taaki vo Pri ko kiss kar sake 😛😛😛 par Pri bhi na zid kar k baith gayi ki vo nahi aayegi . Raj bhi na itna tease karte hain kya kisi ko 😭😭😭 us ne Aliya ko bulaya kiss karne aur vo gladly aa bhi gayi aur Raj ne bhi hud kar di kiss kar liya us stupid Aliya ko 😡😡😡.I am happy that Raj won but not much happy that he kissed Aliya. 😔😔😔
Par maana padegaus ko bhi Pri ko mana lena acche se aata hai . Kitne aaram se handel kiya hai us ne Pri ko 😉😉😉 aur Pri jyada der tak naraj nahi reh paayi akhir Raj se 😍😍😍. Raj ne fir chance maara aur Pri ko pyaar karne hi waala tha ☺️ ☺️☺️ki sahi time par Pooja ki galat entry ho gayi 🤔🤔🤔. Poor Raj n Pri embarass hona pada dono ko 😳😳😳. Itna busy ho gaya tha Pri ko manane me ki us ne Ranveer ki baat par dhyan bhi nahi diya 🤪🤪🤪. Jab Pri door nahi khol rahi thi to us ne Pri ko aise warning di ki majboori me Pri ko door kholna hi pada.😃😃😃
good part 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼 update soon.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago

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