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Posted: 16 years ago
very nice!! loved it all together!!
update soon :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome update..superb..

yipee they finally confessed their love in public🥳🥳🥳..that was so funny of rajeev to declare that they had purposely done everything and then thanking them all for not disturbing them😆

Prachi is such a sweetheart...she is damn cute man and rajeev is very naughty ...and ya aliya seems to be hiding something...i hope vikas comes out of this very soon....i feel sad for him.

ghazal and malhotra ...what's cooking between them??
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Posted: 16 years ago
woooaaah...
it was a wonderful update.... but i wanted him to punch tht malhotra donkey..... he deserved it completely.....
the scene wid prachi-pri-raj was so funny..... loved the most....
nd the intimate scenes too were so funny... gr8 goin dear...
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hello!!!!dear!!!!
Wow !!!!what an update...loved bit of it...
Prachi is so cute....
Loved the convo between Pri,Aalekh,Gazal,Kunal and Harshad....
Ok!!!Raj is so naughty....
Mujhe yeh Aliya kuch gadbad lagti hai....
Fantastic....
Take care.
Continue soon.
love
Riya.
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Posted: 16 years ago
It was really mindblowing update darling.👍🏼.👍🏼.👍🏼
So it's official now👏👏👏 , sab ko pata hai ab ki thay are in love now g8 yaar..

Pri aur Raj ek doosre k saath kitne comfortable hain na😉😉😉.Par mera cutie pie Rajeev itna naughty hai 😛😛😛ye baat to mujhe pata bhi nahi thi na😲😲😲. Achanak us ka haath pakad kar sab k saamne kehna ki v r in such a relation now is a daring act na.😎😎😎

Sab k sab ab Pri aur Raj ko tease karna start kar rahe hain 😳😳😳dheere dheere Kunal, Harshad, Ghazal aur Arjun ye charo mil kar Raj aur Pri ki situation ka maza lete hain so funny😆😆😆. Jab in logon ne Aliya ka mike le kar control control chillaya tha that scene was so funny and cute as well🤪🤪🤪. Raj kitni jaldi irritate hota hai na kabhi kabhi har tarah ki situation ka maza lena chahiye na.😉😉😉

Lekin ek baat ye bhi kaafi acchi rahi ki chahe kitne gusse me aaya par fir us ne Pri ko kitna acche se kiss kiya na☺️☺️☺️, is me Pri ka bhi kamaal tha jo us ne kaha ki itna wiredly kyoun kiss kar rahe the tab🤣 🤣🤣Raj ko josh aa gaya aur passion se kiss kiya fir us ne☺️☺️.☺️Mud scene me bhi un dono ko itni hassi aa rahi thi ki 😍😍s😍hoot karna hi mushkil ho gaya tha 😡😡par jab finally Aliya ne punishment k naam se daraya😆😆😆 tab dono ne kahin jaa kar properly dono ne shoot poora kiya.😉😉😉

Than the best thing in this update was Prachi, Pri and Raj😛😛😛. Jab Prachi ko Raj ne Naina ki god me diya how much happy she was there. I really liked the way u expressed a child's way towards her mom🤗🤗.🤗 Raj bhi kam naughty nahi hai Prachi ka bahana tha aur Pri ki leg pulling me us ne koi kasar nahi chodi☺️☺️☺️pehle kiss mujhe kab milega 😉😉😉, phir beta ye mom kaise hai😳😳😳, phir mai tumhari mom ko kahin jaane nahi doonga tab na😛😛😛 and the best was button dilao ki vo rehne do beta ye sab kaam papa k liye ☺️chod do☺️☺️.☺️He is so naughty and Pri was really shy there.☺️☺️

Ye Ghazal ko samajh kya aata hai Malhotra me?😕😕😕 He is just too irritating, intimate scenes me kya jaroorat thi us ko vahan hone ki kitna odd feel kar raha tha na Raj wahan🤢🤢🤢, phir Ghazal bhi kuch jyada hi close ho rahi thi us ki😔😔😔. Pri aur Raj aur baaki k gang ka chaukana obvious hi tha. Ye Harshad kya personal personal ki rat lageya karta hai😒😒😒? Bada aaya .🤔🤔🤔
Ye Arun Sharam se Prachi ka case kaise link hai?😕😕😕
update soon.
Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: george eliot

Episode 10:

That night after dinner. Everybody says goodnight and proceeds to return to their room.

Rajeev: Priyanka ruko, can I talk to you for a moment

Priyanka: Abhi? All right,. By the way Prachi ne khana kha liya? I heard about the commotion today..

Rajeev felt touched. It was nice to see somebody from the unit concerned about his daughter, otherwise he felt guilty that he had forcibly imposed the kid on a unit which is on serious business. A beautiful smile spreads on his face: 'Haan maine Prachi ko khila diya, usse daal chawal toh nehi khani, lekin pizza bahut pasand hai, toh maine usse pizza khila diya!!!!!!!!!!

Priyanka: (thinking) Pizza khila diya? Bas? Woh khana nehi khayegi toh roz usse pizza khilata rahega?!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anyway it's his problem, unki beti hai, woh jaane, main kyon pareshan ho rahi hoon, main kuchh nehi bolungi'

(aloud): oh good, okay ab bataiyen aapko kya baat karna hai

Rajeev: tum aaj mere room mein kucch bolne ayee thi fir abruptly bhag bhi gayee, kyon?

Priyanka: (thinking) oh god fir se wohi incident!😳 (aloud) nehi nehi nothing important! Main bas aapko sorry bolne ayee thi lekin shayad aap log busy the toh main galat waqt pe a gayee toh, I mean…….

Rajeev: busy tha? Galat waqt? Tum kya bol rahi ho Priyanka? Hum toh Prachi ko sula rahe the

Priyanka: haan haan wohi, dekha maine kahan na ki mujhe laga ki aaplog busy ho aur ishiliye darwaza kholne mein itni der lag gayee….matlab Prachi so rahi thi ishiliye….

Rajeev: darwaza kholne mein der ho gayee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Maine toh Prachi ko bed par rakh ke hi khol diya tha……………oh God Priyanka!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Tum kucch aise-waise toh nehi soch rahi ho?????????!!!!!!!! He bhagwan!! Arrey trust me there was nothing happening between me and Aaliya! (laughing out loudly) hohoho tabhi main sochu tum aise bhag kyon gayee! U r really………ohohoho😆😆

Priyanka: (thinking) Priyanka Bassi, lag rahi ho na complete idiot?😡!! Kya zaroorat thi yeh sab bolne ki, ab bhago yahan se, jaldiiiiiiiiiiii😳

(aloud: trying to laugh) "no no, I was just joking! Anyway I just wanted to say sorry for being rude to you in bus, okay I have to go now," Priyanka runs away from that place before she commits any more faux paus!!!

The training begins

The sound of the bugle wakes them up all.

"Arrey yaar yeh bugle bandh karo koi, hume bhi morning drill ke liye jana hai kya?," a sleepy Vikas complains.

After a while Arjun, Kunal and Harshad all start knocking on his door…. "Chal Aaliya mata ka bulawa aya hai" "Subah subah kya shooting hoga yaar" "Thik se sone bhi nehi degi kya?": there were collective grumblings from all of them

The whole team gathers at the training grounds along with the institute's real cadres for morning drill.

Aliya: Guys I want you all to experience the real feel of morning drills so that you can bring that better in your acting

Vikas: (whispering) iske liye subah subah uthane ki kya zaroorat thi, hum video dekh lete

Arjun: yeh shooting bhari padne wala hai hamare liye

Kunal: arrey guys problem kya hai, bas khada hokar dekhna toh hai, chal dekh lete hai na

Udhar Priyanka tries to talk to Gazal: Tu kuchh dino se pareshan hai, kuchh problem hai kya, abhi tak mujhse naraz hai kya?

Gazal: nehi toh, kuchh problem nehi hai

Priyanka doesn't ask her any more questions.

On the other end, Rajeev observes the cadets as if he's Rajveer Singh Shekhawat!

The cadets finish their morning drill. Really, they go through such tough regimes, some of the exercises need one to be extremely fit, becoming a soldier is not an easy job at all!


Aliya steps forward and calls upon all the actors: Apne dekha kaise yeh log apna morning drill kar rahe the, hum issi mein se kuchh drills film mein include karnewale hain and I want u guys to practice them , lets try the rock climbing drill now, Subedar Khan will help you out.

Rajeev: let me go and talk to some officers here, we might get some information about conducting real army classes for the film

Aaliya: Thanks Rajeev, you are really dedicated to your work

Subedar Khan: Sabhi apne kamar pe rassi bandh lijiye aur samne joh tila hai uspe charne ki koshish kijiye.

Vikas: mar gaye yaar, band bajwa diya

They all try to climb the rock. It was a really steep one and needless to say they were doing a pretty awful job! Some of the real cadets stood there, watching them and they were all laughing!!!

Aliya: I can't believe you guys did all those drills in the serial! Kya ho gaya hai sabko?! Please try harder, your characters should look realistic…

After an hour's struggle they all manage to climb the rock.

Kunal: baapre mere lungs fat jayenge

Harshad: mujhe paani chahiye yaar, isse achha toh mera romantic role hai, kyon marne aya main yahan

Priyanka: guys mere pair dukh raha hai, abhi wapas jaake sek lena padega

Vikas: Dekha Rajeev ko yeh kuchh nehi karwaya, kyon bhai Aaliya aapka kya setting hai unke sath, sirf hume marwa rahi ho

Aliya calls from down: Guys jaldi se neeche aa jaiye sab

Arjun: helicopter bhej meri ma

They all come down with equal effort.

Aaliya: I can't believe this! You guys were frustrating! And especially you Priyanka, that was so so bad! I mean you are in the lead role aur tum aise karoge apne action scenes?!! Aur tum bhi Ghazal, you don't look fit enough for a cadet's role.I think you need to practice more, please try doing it once again.Baki log doosra warm up exercises kare, the officer will help you, Priyanka and Ghazal please proceed.

Priyanka and Ghazal finish their second session of rock climbing and come down all exhausted.

Arjun: le jaldi se paani pi, bechari

Aaliya: you need more practice Priyanka, tum iss role ke liye bahut hi weak lag rahe ho. Ghazal you are still okay, Priyanka tum aur ek baar phir se try karo

Priyanka feels a little uncomfortable. Somehow she feels she's being targeted a bit…anyway director saheba ki marzi hai, karma toh padega hi…..she proceeds towards the rock again

Arjun: Aaliya ji aapko nehi lagta aaj kuchh zayada ho raha hai uske liye

Kunal: hum ek baar karke hi itna thak gaye hai aur woh 3 baar!!

Gazal: aap hum dono se kuchh zyada sakti se pesh aa rahi hai…thik hai kar lijiye bas thode dino ki hi toh baat hai

Aaliya: matlab? Anyway guys mujhe mera kaam mat sikhao

By now Rajeev had also joined them and he speaks out for Priyanka.

Rajeev: come on Aaliya, tum poora Hitler ban gayee ho, bechari ko pehle din mein hi itna torture mat karo

Aaliya: dekho Rajeev am in no mood for jokes, mujhe kaam mein compromise pasand nehi

Rajeev: kisko pasand hai compromise? Priyanka ek bahut talented actor hai, woh scenes asani se kar legi, uske liye aise military training ki koi zaroorat nehi

Aaliya: oho, tumhe itna biswas hai?

Rajeev: bilkul, maine kaam kiya hai uske saath, after all yeh sab naye artists hai, they are all serious about their work

Aliya: tum kuchh zyada hi concerned ho Priyanka ko lekar

Rajeev: nehi main sabki baat kar raha hoon…I can see you are trying to make things look realistic par meri mano itni hard training ki zaroorat nehi hai, you can take my word as a senior artist, these guys are wonderful

Aaliya: all right, lagta hai tum mujhse zyada in logo ke baare mein jaante ho, thik hai. we'll begin our shooting from tomorrow, training bandh, directly scenes mein hi dekha jayega

Vikas: aap kya hume challenge kar rahi hai?

Aaliya: Nehi toh, tum log agar kar loge toh mujhe kya problem hai. See you all tomorrow.

By now Priyanka comes down after finishing her exercise, she is surprised, "kya hua aaj ka training khatam, kahan gaaye poore unit ke log?"

Kunal: le tujhe tere mentor ne bancha liya

Priyanka: matlab?

Arjun: Matlab aaj Rajeev ne tujhe Ms Hitler se bancha liya, hum sab ko bhi, thanks Rajeev

"No problem at all," says Rajeev and looks at Priyanka.

She was totally exhausted, sweating profusely, breathing heavily clenching her tummy but determination shone in her eyes…..Rajeev was admiring the sincerity of this young girl, she never spoke a word against the hard work!! Hats off to her dedication, thought an impressed Rajeev, staring with admiration at Priyanka…. 😳 😳



hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii SWEEEEEEETY..😃...WELL HOW R UUUUUUUUU.....😛 I KNOW I HAVEN'T COMMENTED YET SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLY😕😕😕.....I HAVE A REASON FOR THAT.....U KNOW A DEVIL LIKE THING "STUDY"😡...I WAS TOTALLY CAPTURED BY THAT DEVIL...I WAS HARDLLY GETTING TIME TO COME ONLINE....WELL NOW I HAVE GOT DURGA POOJA HOLIDAY....SO THOUGHT OF RESUME MY FAVOURITE WORK...SOOOO HERE GOES MY COMMENT FOR EPISODE WISE.....HOPE U WILL LIKE THEM....



First of all i loveeeeeee uuuuuuuu for such beautiful and longest update...totally awestruck by these amaaaaaaaazing update....👏👏

It was a great feeling while reading....u have taken care of every bit of scenes in giving realistic touch...hats off to u dear...⭐️⭐️⭐️

Pri and Rajeev convo was sooooo delightful....love that scene😳😳😳

training session was great...described very tactfully...i was laughing when Arjun said...helicopter bhej meri maa....😆😆😆

i hate Aliya for torturing Pri soo much...but proud of Pri...she didn't say any word and proceeded with her training👏👏👏nahin toh aaj kal ke actorress logo ke bhaw hi bade hue rahte hai...Happy to see our Rajeev scolded Aliya for this.....last scene reminded me of fressers party where Rajveer had admired Naina....😳😳😳


so so so sweeeeeeeeeeeeet update😳😳😳....thankuuuuuuuuuuuu sooooooooooooooooo mucccccch for this eventfull update....i wouldn't say update soon...u know na why😉


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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: george eliot

EPISODE 11:

That day evening.

Our famous six gather at the nearby caf'. They see the institute's cadets chilling out in their evening there

Priyanka: yaad hai hamare zyada se zyada scenes caf' mein hi hota tha, they look just like our onscreen characters hai na?

Ghazal (smiling) haan in cadets ko dekh ke sach mein bahut achha lagta hai

Harshad: chal tera mood toh achha hua

Tabhi yeh log dekhte hai ki a young girl cadet walks in the caf' and starts shouting at a guy cadet. The boy tries to convince her but she leaves in a fury.

Vikas: arrey arrey isko dekh, bilkul Huda aur Phoolan! Hey boy, hello

The boy is very thin, nervous, wears black rimmed glasses and looks too benign

Boy: are you calling me?

Vikas: Yes bro, come join us (He introduces everyone)'''.and I am Vikas Manektala. We are here shooting for our film, tum yahan ke cadet ho na?

Boy: Yes, I am Huda

Everybody: whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat???????????????????

Boy: kyon kya hua? Mera naam Huda hai, Aman Singh Huda

Everybody: you must be kidding!!!!!!!!!! Seriously?????????????

Aman: haan kyon? Aap log itne chauk kyon gaye?

Vikas: aur woh ladki jo abhi abhi gaye hai who kaun hai bhai?!!!

Aman: arrey boliye mat, woh Nayanika hai, mere batchmate, lekin sab usse darte hai, bahut gussewali hai woh'.sab se zyada gussa toh woh mere pe karti hai, ishiliye main usse Phoolan bulata hoon'''''.

Kunal: guys please hold me, I am feeling sick''''

Vikas: main bhi, this is too much, achha bhai Huda yeh batao tum apni Phoolan se, I mean Nayanika se pyar karte ho na?

Huda: haan woh toh main karta hoon, lekin aapko kaise pata!!!!!!!!!!!!! yeh toh maine kisiko nahi bataya, main bahut darta hoon usse'''..lekin aaplog itna shocked kyon dikh rahe hai, kuchh problem hai kya?

Priyanka: guys please hold on, this is just a coincidence, nehi Aman, actually hum na ek serial mein bilkul tumhare jaise roles kiye hai ishilye sab chauk gaye, btw tumne kabhi left right left dekha hai?

Aman: nehi par naam suna hai, achha usme similar characters the?

Vikas: similar nahi bhai same!! Matlab naam bhi almost same aur situations bhi, achha yeh batao tumhare friends mein se koi Ali, Aalekh, Pooja, Yudi bhi hai kya?

Aman: haan Pooja toh hai lekin aapko kaise pata?!!! Pooja toh hamesha mobile pe baate karti rehti hai, aapko abhi dikh jayegi aur ek hai Iqbal woh bahut funny hai, Mumbai se hai toh tapori language mein baate karta rehta hai'.baki ka toh naam nahi suna''.

Arjun: this is crazy man, I can't believe it!!

Vikas: This is more than a coincidence yaar, pata hai, humare serial mein bilkul aise characters the, anyway aao na hamare sath coffee peeyo

Aman: nehi bas mujhe ab jana hai, nice meeting you people, aaplog hai na abhi shooting ke liye, toh bas mulakaat hote rahenge'bye

Priyanka: sach mein kuchh zyada ho gaya, real life aur reel life ek dusre mein mix!!!

Arjun: aise toh ek real life Neelu bhi hogi! Aur ek real life Rajveer sir!

Tabhi Rajeev enters the caf' to pick up some food He sees the gang and joins them.

Rajeev: hi guys, can I join you?

Priyanka: oh sure, btw aapko congratulate karna bhul gayee thi, congratulations.

Everybody remembers and congratulates Rajeev.

Rajeev: kisliye bhai?

Ghazal: aarey aapke film Aamir ko jo itna achha review mila, suna hai bahut achha film hai

Rajeev: o thanks a lot (looking at Priyanka and smiling) thanks for remembering. By the way tum sab thoda dazed dikh rahe ho, is everything allright?

Arjun: haan bas humko abhi pata chala ke humare characters real life mein bhi hai! Vikas tells him everything.

Rajeev: 'really?!!!!!!!!! That's amazing!! (thinking) mujhe bhi in real cadets se baat karna chahiye, pata nehi shayad Prachi ke investigation ke baare mein kuchh suraagh mile''

Rajeev feels a little guilty. He hasn't done anything about Prachi's case since he has come here. He decides to leave right now: ok guys enjoy your coffee, I'll see you tomorrow

Kunal: arrey aapko kya hua? Suddenly ja rahe hai?

Rajeev: kuchh kaam yaad aa gaya, chalo see you, bye.

Rajeev decides to go and look for the jwellery shop whose name was embossed on Prachi's ring. Suddenly he realizes he shouldn't be taking Prachi along with him. Prachi was sleeping in his room, now she's wide awake.

He has kept Prachi out of most of the unit, only his co-actors and Aaliya know about her. Kiske paas chhodke jaaye? Priyanka? Nehi he didn't want to bother her after a hard day's work''.toh fir Aaliya? Chalo dekhte hai woh free hai ki nahi. Rajeev goes and knocks on Aaliya's door.

Aaliya comes out in a white nighty, she looked a little upset.

Rajeev: sorry Aaliya, did I disturb you?sleeping?

Aaliya: nehi boliye

Rajeev: woh actually main soch raha tha ki Prachi ko kuchh der ke liye tumhare paas rakhke jayoon, but only if you have no problems

Aaliya: (not looking at him) okay

Rajeev feels a little uncomfortable: tumhe sach mein koi problem nehi hai na? u are looking a little tired

Aaliya: (still not looking at him): no, main thik hoon. Lekin aap soch lijiye do u trust me with your daughter?

Rajeev: tum aise kyon bol rahi ho?!!!!!!!!arrey tum mujhse gussa ho kya?

Aaliya: nehi you don't trust me with your co-actors, you think I am a slave driver and penalizing them for no reason

Rajeev: arrey aisi koi baat nehi par haan aaj training kuchh zyada tough ho raha tha ishiliye maine bola

Aaliya: I am sorry Rajeev mujhe aapke cadets ko, especially Priyanka ko, itna hard work karwana nehi chahiye tha

Rajeev: tum baar baar Priyanka ka naam kyon le rahi ho? I was talking about all of them aur sach mein mera maano, your shots will be perfect! Ab please gussa chhodo, chalo sorry tumhe bura laga toh

Aaliya: chalo yeh toh pata chala ke aap ko mera bhi thoda khayal hai, ab jayiye jahan ha rahe the, Prachi can stay with me, waise aap ja kahan rahe hai?

Rajeev: bas thoda sa kaam hai, thanks and sorry again,

Aaliya smiles: bye, aur suniye aapna khayal rakhna

Rajeev comes out of the academy. 'Galaxy jwellers': the name embossed on Prachi's ring. He had no clue how to start his investigation, filhaal toh yeh dukaan dhoonda jaaye. Tabhi he spots a cadet lurking near the gate.

Rajeev: Hi, I am Rajeev Khandelwal, am here for shooting a film, are you a cadet here?

Cadet: kyon tereko apun ki uniform nehi dikhta?

Rajeev: ahem'haan mereko woh toh dikhta hai, actually mujhe kuchh poochna tha, aap bata sakte ho yahan market wagera kahan hai jahan pe jwellery shop mil sakta hai

Cadet: apun ko yahan ka sab kuchh pata hai, tujhe leke bhi chal sakta hoon par uske badle mein mujhe kya milega?

Rajeev: (thinking) baapre yeh toh Aalekh ka real life sanskaran hai, shayad isse bhi daru hi chahiye (aloud) ahem, aap batao, what do u want, how many bottles?

Cadet: bottles? Nehi apun ko tere film mein ek guest appearance chahiye, bas

Rajeev: okay hum toh aise hi kucch real life cadets ko shoot karnewale hai, ab please batao yahan ka market place kahan hai

Cadet: tere ko kaunsi dukan chahiye?

Rajeev: jwellery shop, Galaxy jwellers naam ka kuchh hai na?

Cadet: haan toh yeh bol na, Galaxy jwellers yahan ka sabse bara jwellery shop hai, lekin kuchh din pehleich wahan pe ek funny cheez ho gaili thi

Rajeev: achha? Woh kya?

Cadet: gundo ne dukaan tahasnahas kar diya tha, lekin gehne nehi loota ! police bhi hairan hai!!

Rajeev: (thinking) this is becoming more and more complicated, I really need to go to the shop at once (aloud) thanks for your information cadet'.?

Cadet: Cadet Iqbal

Rajeev: glad to meet you cadet Iqbal, mujhe ab jana hai

Cadet Iqbal: chaliye apun bhi tere saath chalte hai

Rajeev: no cadet, mujhe akele jana hai, agar aur koi kaam ho toh main tumhe zaroor yaad karunga

Rajeev walks towards the market. It's a small town ordinary market, few shops and even fewer people. He asked a couple of people and quickly spotted Galaxy jwellers towards the end of the market. Nobody seemed to recognize him much, only a couple of old ladies he met on the way called him 'Sujal!!!'

Rajeev steps in Galaxy jwellers, unaware of the fact that two people are watching him from a distance.

One of them make a phone call: Sir, Rajeev Galaxy jwellers aa gaye, hamara sak sahi nikla

The other voice on the phone says: Don't do anything, keep watching. Attack only if he walks out with that.

Next episode: Rajeev: Priyanka tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?

Priyanka: (thinking) ab main inhe kaise batau main yahan kya karne ayee hoon

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Priyanka: ajeeb hai yahan pe aisa humla ho sakta hai maine kabhi socha bhi nehi tha

Rajeev: (thinking) yeh humla koi ordinary humla nehi hai'aur Priyanka tum kya kar rahi hi itne der raat ko akele'.



first of all a big🤗to u....u r just mindblowing...how do i define u....never thought this update would be full of surprises..specially that of cadets and our dearest actors....its really a reel and real life....a round of appalause for connecting these two life with sooooooo much dedication....i was feeling like jumping when i read those amazing convo between our heroes...now it would two love story too😳😳😳...woooooooowwwwwww....i will love to read them....and YES AMIR IS REALLY A GREAT MOVIE....CONGO RAJEEV.....and this Aliya....ooo why Rajeev is trusting her soooo much....This Aliya is soo fisy...and that Iqbal😆he is a carbon copy of Alekh....love his character...totally kaidi....😳😳😳and the story is moving in a amaaaaaaazing way⭐️....can't able to resist to give u clap and stars for this update....

PRECAPE IS VERY SHOCKING...HOPPING PRIYANKA IS NOT BEHIND THESE ALL SUSPENSES......

totalllllllllllllllllllly a oooooooouuuuuuuuuuuuuuutstanding update....👍🏼

Edited by quietrajpri1623 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: george eliot

Episode 12:

Rajeev walks in Galaxy jwellers. He had no clue how to proceed with the questioning; cadet Iqbal's information has raised his concerns: there must be some clue hidden in this shop which other people are trying to reach as well'.

'Can I help you Sir,' asked a young salesperson seeing Rajeev standing in the shop.

Rajeev: ahem'actually I need to change this ring, I had ordered a bigger size but galti se shayad mujhe yeh size deliver kiya gaya hai

Salesman: one minute, please let me have a look, ring mein order number likha hoga, main abhi check karke batata hoon

The salesman takes the ring and tries looking for the order number. 'Here it is Sir, order number ALO21, abhi main register check karke batata hoon. The man looks for the entries in the register'''.he doesn't seem to find it 'Sir yeh ring aapne kab order kiya tha?' Rajeev is in a fix, 'a'.actually shayad ek saal pehle.' 'oho tab toh mujhe pichhle saal ka registers dekhna padega'

The man brings down a whole lot of dusty registers. 'Isme se kaise dhoond payange hum' Rajeev thinks. After an hour's work the salesman finally spots the number. 'haan mil gayee, dekhte hain isme kya hai'. They both pour over the register to see this written:

ALO21: size 2m ring: delivered 21st August: payment due Rs. 5285. 50

'arrey yeh kya? Isme toh payment due hai!'

Rajeev: woh main de dunga, aap yeh batao isme address kya likha hai.

Salesman: (searching for it) actually isme address kuchh likha hi nahi hai !!!!

Rajeev: matlab?!!!

Salesman: actually hum sirf home delivery ke addresses likhte hain, baki customers toh dukaan mein aakar hi delivery le jaate hai

Rajeev: achha aapne naam kya likha hai?

Salesman: ek baat bataiye, yeh aapka order hain toh fir aapko name address nahi pata? aap hai kaun? Aapko kahi dekha hua lagta hai....

Rajeev knew he was about to be discovered. Oho yeh chehra! Kash ekbaar ke liye woh iss chehre ko chhupa sakta! He knew what was coming 'aap toh Sujal hai' 'mere biwi aapka bahut bada fan hain' 'ek autograph de dijiye please''aap yaha shooting kar rahe hain?' By now the other customers in the shop had started looking at him and started talking among themselves. He needed to move out fast.

Rajeev: nehi actually mere friend ne order diya tha, mujhe pata nahi kya likh diya usne, dekhiye na payment bhi complete nehi kiya, okay main baad mein ata hoon

Salesman: o achha, ab payment settled hai, oho aapko maine pehchan liya, aap Rajeev Khandelwal ho, hamara 'sujal'!!!!!!

Rajeev: dost aapne thik pehchana, okay main chalta hoon yeh lijiye 6000 rupees, khulle rakh lijiye'and storms out of the shop.

Uff Rajeev didn't know whether to be happy or angry! So many people knew him even in this small town but this is going to be a major obstacle in finding out about Prachi'.dekha jaldi mein usne register pe likhe naam bhi nahi pada, how stupid!!!!! Rajeev felt frustrated, he hasn't done anything apart from drawing public attention'. he really needed an allias to help him, but who can he trust?

Tabhi he spots Priyanka outside the shop peeping inside.

Rajeev: Priyanka tum yahan kya kar rahi ho? Itne raat gaye akele?

Priyanka: woh mujhe kuchh kaam tha toh main chali ayee, mujhe laga maine aapko andar dekha toh wohi dekh rahi thi

Rajeev: tum yahan itne raat gaye!!!! Woh bhi akele? It's not a very safe place…aisa kya kaam tha tumhe?

Priyanka: (thinking) ab main inhe kaise batau main yahan kya karne ayee hoon

(aloud) haan tha kuchh kaam, anyway chaliye wapas chalte hai

Rajeev: tum mujhse kuchh chhupa rahi ho Priyanka, batao kya baat hai

Priyanka: arrey main kya chhupayoongi?!! Bas kuchh kaam tha

Rajeev: (suspiciously) wohi pooch raha hoon na (thinking) Dukaan mein jhak kar kya dekh rahi thi tum!!!

Priyanka: (irritated) of ho maine kahan na kuchh zaroori kaam tha, sab kuchh aap ko batana padega kya? (thinking) ab yeh sawal poochna bandh karega

Rajeev: (thinking) aha very suspicious! Aisa kya hai ki Priyanka mujhe batana nehi chahti hai, main toh woh jaankar hi rahoonga (aloud) there is a reason why I am asking, tum batao mujhe itne raat gaye akele tumhe aisi kya zaroorat padh gayi yahan???

Priyanka: (angry) arrey ajeeb admi hai! main bilkul nehi bataungi, zabardasti hai kya?!!! And starts to walk away.

Rajeev runs after her. Tabhi two men pounce on him all of a sudden. Rajeev falls on the ground, Priyanka hears the commotion, turns and stands shocked, "Rajeeeeeeeeev" she lets out a sharp cry……… One of them flashes a sharp knife at him and commands the other guy: Tallashi lo

The other man searches Rajeev's pockets: mobile, purse, key-chain, id card and yes Prachi's ring! They search all the stuff carefully, take away Prachis's ring and throw away the rest on the ground. And they were off in a second on their motorbike. Interestingly, they didn't even look at Priyanka!

Rajeev: aarrey roko roko, chor chor!!

Priyanka comes running to him: aap thik hai na? kahi laga toh nehi, o my god that was so scary!! yahan pe aisa humla ho sakta hai maine kabhi socha bhi nehi tha!!

Rajeev: mujhe nehi lagta yeh humla koi ordinary humla hai…Oh God they took away the ring!!

Priyanka: ring? Haan aapse sirf ring chhin liya!!!!! must be some local goons, baapre kitna dangerous place hain!! Chaliye police station chalte hai

Rajeev: not local goons……unhe sirf ring chahiye tha…unhe zaroor pata tha ki main yahan aanewala hoon…

Priyanka: aap kya bol rahe hai mujhe kuchh samajh nehi aa raha hai!! Kaun hai yeh log……….

Rajeev: wohi toh pata karna hai, kaun mera peecha kar raha tha, aur unhe pata kaise chala main yahan aanewala hoon……..zaroor academy se koi information bheja hoga……ya fir wahan se koi mera peecha kar raha hai……..(turns to Priyanka) ya rahi hai!!

Priyanka: matlab? Aap aise kyon dekh rahe hai mujhe!!

Rajeev: (looking intently at Priyanka) tum mere peechhe peechhe academy se nikle na?

Priyanka: pata nahi…shayad…kyon?

Rajeev: (looking suspiciously at her) tumne bataya nehi tum kya kaam karne ayi thi dukaan ke bahar?

Priyanka: arrey fir wohi baat!! Maine kahan na maine aapko andar dekha ishiliye ruk gayee, mujhe kuchh aur kaam tha

Rajeev: wohi batana padega kya kaam tha

Priyanka: main…..main medicine kharidne aye thi, ab chaliye

Priyanka jane lagti hai, tab Rajeev Priyanka ka haath pakad leta hain. He pulls her closer…….

Priyanka: kya kar rahe hai aap, mera hath chhodiye

Rajeev pulls her towards him. (tightening his jaws) dikhao woh medicine, itne raat gaye tumhe achanak jiski zaroorat padi

Priyanka: it's hurting Rajeev, chhodo

Rajeev pulls her all the more closer, looks straight into her eyes…then he suddenly snatches Priyanka's bag and starts looking into it!

Priyanka: (releasing herself from Rajeev's grip) STOP IT! I SAID STOP IT!

Rajeev doesn't listen to her and pours the bag out. A packet of "Whisper" drops from her bag!!!!!!!!!!!

Priyanka: (extremely angry) What do you think of yourself Mr Rajeev Khandelwal! tab se badtamizi kiye ja rahe hai aur main chupchap sun rahi hoon!! Mujhe pata nehi aapko kya problem hai: kaun aap pe spying kar rahe hai, kaun aap pe humla kar rahe hai that's all your problem, I am least bothered, but how dare you search my bag like this?!!!!!! Ab dekh liya na kya kharidne ayi thi main?

Ab bataiye main aapko kya batati? Kuchh socha samjha nehi bas mujhpe sak kiye ja rahe hai?!!!!!! There are some things that women cannot share with men, but you need to be a gentleman to understand that, you are so disgusting Rajeev (Priyanka is almost on the verge of tears) and you suspected me!!

Rajeev stands stunned as Priyanka walks off angrily.


u r a real star yaar.....how do u manage to write these scenes with soooooooooo much expressions....really whole update had just bound me to read on and on...it was full of suspenses....very excellently described....👏....Raj and Pri...oooo god...i never knew that this will go so far...Rajeev is suspecting Pri....and that WISPER's scene...laughing and angry at the same time😡....Pri is right.....something can't be shared with men...and who were those goons😡...they had taken only ring😡😡....my god this Prachi case is really dangerous....everthing has become like a web.....hatts off to u dear for giving such socking and amaaaaaazing update...🤗

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: george eliot

EPISODE 13:

Next day morning. Shooting Day 1

Rajeev wakes up with a terrible mood. He remembered everything that happened last night'.Galaxy jwellers''the attack''Prachi's ring stolen and his embarrassing encounter with Priyanka. It was a bad bad day, he thought with a sour heart! He hadn't progressed anywhere in Prachi's case, even lost the ring and all the more, there are dangerous people involved in Prachi's case which scared him all the more'''Why were they after Galaxy jwellers? Why did they want the ring? The records said nothing, fir us ring mein aisi kya khas baat hai? yeh kaun log hai?

He became increasingly worried about Prachi. It was no longer safe to leave her when he's off for shooting. He was sure yahan se hi koi uske upar nazar rakh raha hai'.no it's not Priyanka'.the moment he remembered her name he felt terribly embarrassed! It was so rude on his part, aur fir bag search karna'''.chhi chhi''.Rajeev felt like sinking in the ground with shame and remorse'''the more he thought about it, the worse he felt'.he needed to apologise but how would he explain himself!!! Nothing was going right around him! What can he do now? He felt like shouting out loudly'''.

He reached the sets with a heavy heart. He decided to carry Prachi to the sets, jab tak koi baby sitter nehi mil jata Prachi ko sath mein lana hi padega, he hoped Aaliya understood his situation.Aaliya was busy setting up the set, Priyanka and Vikas stood in one corner, he cast a glance at Priyanka, Priyanka looked at him and turned her face away''' he walks up to Aaliya

Rajeev: Aaliya aaj Prachi ko set pe lana pada, hope it is not a problem

Aaliya looks at Rajeev for 10 seconds and smiles: Rajeev tumhe kya lagta hai main sach mein Hitler hoon!!

Rajeev: nehi actually'

Aaliya keeps her hand on Rajeev's hands assuringly and smiles: it's perfectly okay Rajeev, I never doubt your dedication, Prachi can stay in the sets

Rajeev feels relieved: Thanks Aaliya, you are really an angel

Aaliya: come on tum decide karlo ki tum mujhe apne dost mante ho ya nahi'agar haan toh yeh sab thank you wank you chhodo'

Aaliya pats Rajeev's back lovingly, Rajeev smiles back

In another corner

Vikas: arrey wah dekh dekh Rajeev aur Aaliya ko dekh

Harshad: haan yaar they look nice together

Arjun: chhod Rajeev ka already ek girl friend hai'.kya naam hai uska

Kunal: arrey nehi woh toh sirf unka achhi dost hai

Vikas: not bad, wahan pe ek aur yahan pe ek

Kunal: come on he's not like that

Vikas: yeh lo yeh aur ek hai Rajeev's fan'Priyanka tu kuchh nehi bol rahi hai

Priyanka: shot ready hai, chale?

Vikas: girlfriends ko gussa kyon ata hai

Priyanka: kya?

Vikas: chal shooting ke baad tera mood achha karta hoon, chal ab

Aaliya: alright guys, jaise aap sab ko pata hai, the script is quite similar to the serial's script, we are going to include the main scenes on a cinematic scale, okay so we will start with the first scene : cadets and Rajveer's entry, sirf ek change hai, Priyanka and Rajeev enter together and clash with each other, the rest is same'.okay everybody ready?

Lights! Camera! action! The scenes are shot well, only in a more dramatic way'.Pooja is shown hiding her mangalsutra inside her shirt, she is a married woman! One of the KMA cadets teases Ali's sisters and he takes off his shirt and fights with him! Aalekh is shown with a bearded face, a quadi fresh out of jail, only Huda's entry will be kept unchanged but shot later, Aparna Tilak will reach the set today.

All right, good job guys, now Rajveer and Naina's entry, Rajeev and Priyanka you will start entering separately, each with a separate voice over and you come and clash with each other, you pull her up, look into her eyes, she looks into yours, you say sorry'then she leaves in a hurry aur tum uski scraf jo gir jata hai woh utha lete ho'.all right?

Okay lights! Camera! Action!

Naina is shown entering with a very strict face, she is shown carrying a bottle which contains ashes, the voiceover speaking about her brother, 'badle ki aag mein jalti hui Naina, jab tak apni bhai ke katilon ko saza na de woh asthiya nehi bahayegi'.' The camera zooms on Rajeev simultaneously; he is entering the gates of KMA like Shahrukh Khan in KKHH only in a raincoat instead of an overcoat'..Cut! cut! Cut!

Aaliya shouts. Rajeev's raincoat was not flying like Sharukh's!

Fans faster, lights, camera, action'camera rolling 1'2'3

Retake: Rajeev runs inside the gates of KMA in a black raincoat, a briefcase in hand, his raincoat flying'Perfect shot!

He enters the building and clashes with Naina near the stairs.

They both look at each other''Cut! Cut! Cut!

Aaliya shouts again: Priyanka tumhare expression amazement ka hona chahiye, not of anger, you are looking so angrily at Rajeev aur Rajeev tum bhi, yeh kya expression hai!?? you are looking so guiltily at Priyanka, as if koi gunah kiye ho, arrey abhi toh Naina ko pata bhi nehi tum uske bhai ka katil ho!!

Take23! Lights! Camera! Action!

They clash, Rajeev picks her up holding her arms,'this time the expressions are more or less okay' they look at each other'.one sec, 2 sec, 3 sec, 4, sec, 5 sec Priyanka looks away'Rajeev keeps looking, ' sorry,' 'really sorry'.. he doesn't release Priyanka' 6 sec, 10 secs, 15 secs, 20 secs'''CUT! CUT!

Aalya: arrey 5 secs is enough, u don't have to look at her for so long! Look for 5 secs and move on, and say just one sorry'Rajeev pick up her scarf'simple sa to shot hai'.okay Retake

The shot is okayed in the next retake.

Aaliya: Alright guys, good job, okay lunch break.

Vikas: tu kya khayegi lunch pe?

Priyanka: mujhe zyada bhukh nehi hai, ek juice bol de mere liye bas'main van mein ja rahi hoon

Priyanka apni van mein chali jati hai, she is resting in her van when she hears a knock

Rajeev: sorry for disturbing Priyanka, can I talk to you for a moment

Priyanka: I am really tired Rajeev

Rajeev : I know, but I just wanted to apologise for last night

Priyanka: I don't want to talk about it

Rajeev: I am sorry Priyanka'.mujhe sach mein tum par sak nehi karna chahiye tha, par tumne dekha na kya hua mere saath, something is wrong'.

Priyanka: sak toh abhi bhi aap mere upar kar sakte hai! mere bag mein whisper hona yeh toh prove nehi karta ki main aap ka peechha nehi kar rahi thi (Priyanka angrily turns away from him)

Rajeev: please Priyanka'listen to me (woh Priyanka ko apne taraf ghuma leta hai)

Tabhi Vikas enters Priyanka's van. He is stunned to see Rajeev and Priyanka so close to each other face to face

Vikas: aap yahan? (Vikas looks a little irritated)

Rajeev: woh' main Priyanka se kuchh discuss kar raha tha'anyway you guys carry on. He walks out

Vikas: (frowning) kya kar raha tha woh yahan

Priyanka: kuchh nehi

Vikas: tu kuchh chhupa rahi hai

Priyanka: please Vikas, will somebody please leave me alone!

Vikas: achha baba, chal khana kha le

Priyanka: mujhe bhukh nehi hai, tu kha le

Priyanka didn't know why she felt so bad'it was not so much because the contents of her bag was revealed in front of Rajeev'it was something more than embarrassment''it was a feeling of hurt that stuck to her throat'how could he suspect her! Is this the respect he has for her?!!! He took her for a petty spy!

Udhar Rajeev walks out with a heavy heart too'he thought he will apologise properly to Priyanka and tell her everything'.but now he felt a little hurt too'..Priyanka ne khud dekha kaise humla hua uske upar, fir bhi woh situation ko samajhna nehi chahti? Kuchh sunna hi nahi chahti! Itna ego? Itni nasamajh? What can he do to explain his action''.the feeling of remorse overtook him once again, he felt horribly low.


touched by this update...feeling bad for my fav. jodi....i can't see them like this..😕😕😕..as usual scenes description was great...👏Pri ka gussa jayaz hai...shooting scene was cool and lovely...pooja is a married women..😛😛😛.film hai to toda spicy hona chahiye..👍🏼..love RN entry scene....and i never knew that for each scene time r being alloted....thanks for telling this.....😛😛and Rajeev watched Pri for atleast 20 sec...great😳😳😳...it reminded me of that eye locking scenes after appraisal.....i love that scene...don't know how much...in that scene too,dono almost 30 secs tak dekhe honge....😳..sayad us time RP ko cut sunaii nahin diya hoga jaise iss update mein hua.....😳...last scene was great...oooohhh this vikas😡😡😡...agar aaj wo nahin aata toh sayad thik se Rajeev Pri se maafi maang lete....any ways...love the whole update...thats not new...i love ur every update...no doubt about that...a standing ovation for this outstanding update👏
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: george eliot

Episode 14:

That day after shooting

Aaliya: Rajeev are you alright?

Rajeev is still thinking and doesn't answer

Aaliya: Rajeeeeeeeeev

Rajeev: oh sorry tumne kuchh kahan

Aaliya looks at Rajeev for a few minutes

Aliya: chalo coffee peene chale? Fir baat karenge, Prachi ko bhi saath le lo

Rajeev: okay chalo, Prachi ka bhi pizza time ho gaya hai!

Aliya: pizza time? Oh hyaan who toh pizza ke siwa kuchh khati hi nahi!!

Rajeev: tumhe kaise pata?

Aliya: mujhe aur bahut kuchh pata, ab chale?

Dono cafeteria mein jaate hai

Aliya: ab batao tumhe ho kya gaya hai

Rajeev: kuchh nehi, bas aaj mood kuchh thik nehi lag raha hai

Aliya: Rajeev agar problem hai toh batao, akhir friend ke saath share nehi karoge?

Rajeev dilemma mein pad jata hai, usse Prachi ke case ke baare mein batayen ya na batayen? He wanted to share his problems with someone, but didn't know if Aliya was the right person'

Aliya: itna mat socho, batao Rajeev'thik hai chalo main hi batati hoon, tum Prachi ko lekar pareshan ho ya fir Priyanka ke saath tumhara jhagda hua hai!

Rajeev: (surprised) arrey nehi'.(thinking) baapre yeh toh lady Sherlock holmes hai main ab kya karoon, batau usko ya nehi' (aloud) haan actually tumne sahi samjha, shayad Prachi ko yahan lana thik nehi tha

Aaliya: yeh batao tumne Prachi ko yahan laye kyon?

Rajeev: ahem'woh actually'matlab maine socha Prachi ko yahan ghuma layoon par yahan itna kaam hai ki main usse time nehi de pa raha hoon

Aaliya: hmmm'achha Prachi tumahara adopted daughter hai na? uske family ke baare mein kuchh jante ho tum?

Rajeev: abhi tak toh nahi par dekhte hai kuchh pata chalta hai ya nehi'..actually tum itna guess kar chooki ho toh tumhe bata hi deta hoon, par please yeh baat kisiko mat kehna, woh actually mujhe lagta hai ki Prachi ke sath is jagah ka koi sambandh hai

Aliya: aha'toh tumhe koi clue mila hai

Rajeev: nehi aisa kuchh nehi par haan uske haath mein jo ring tha usme yahan ka koi jwellery shop ka pata tha

Aliya: toh chalo na chalte hai, pata karte hai

Rajeev: woh maine already kar liya, par wahan se koi suraag nehi mila

Aliya: bas wohi clue tha tumhare paas?

Rajeev: haan aur kuchh nehi''..

Aliya: hmmmm''.don't worry Rajeev, zaroor kuchh na kuchh mil jayega, ab mere doosre sawal ka jawab do

Rajeev: (surprised) kaunsa sawal?

Aliya: about Priyanka

Rajeev: arrey tum bhi, nehi aisa kuchh nehi, bas hum dono ladte hi rehte hai

Aliya: (suppressing her smile) off screen ya on screen?

Rajeev: samajh lo both, but it's nothing serious

Aliya: hmm samjhi

Rajeev: tum pagal ho gaye ho Aliya, aisa kuchh bhi nehi hai, mere dil mein Priyanka ke liye aisa koi feelings nehi hai, main kyon pyar karunga usse, woh toh bas mera co star hai''

Aliya: (laughing) Rajeev maine kuchh kahan kya? Tum khud hi bole ja rahe ho! Too much denial is confession

Rajeev feels embarrassed, true Aaliya had not spoken a word about his and Priyanka's relationship, fir woh kya baka ja raha tha!!

Aaliya: lagta hain dono lovers ko paas lane ke liye kuchh karna padega

Rajeev: (embarrassed) please aisa kuchh nehi hai''..

'Can I take a photo of you?' They turn and see a girl cadet holding her camera phone at them

Aliya: oh sure but why do u want to take our photo?

Girl: aapki nehi mujhe toh bas Rajeev ji ki photo chahiye, haaaaaaaai, main kitini badi fan hoon aapki

Rajeev: oh really' thanks

Girl: haan maine aapke sab sms padh liya hai matlab maine sab serials dekhe hain, pehle pehle left right left ko lekar TV room mein bahut jhagra hota tha, kisi kisi ko kuchh aur dekhna hota tha, aur hume Left Right Left, toh roz hamare network mein clash ho jata tha'sab kehte hai mere saath Pooja ka sim card bahuth milti hai

Rajeev: woh toh dikh hi raha hai, aapka naam kya hai?

Girl: naam bhi same, Pooja!!

Rajeev: real life Aalekh! Ab real life Pooja! Ab real life Rajveer na mil jaaye!

Aliya: achha Rajeev main chalti hoon, tum apne fan ke saath baat karo

Rajeev: arrey ruko main bhi ata hoon, cadet Pooja, main ab chalta hoon, baad mein baat karenge, bye

Another part of the academy

Priyanka: Vikas just leave me alone please

Vikas: arrey shun na, achha baba nehi poochunga, lekin apni mood toh thik kar

Priyanka: mood thik hi hai, tu sawal karma bandh kar bas

Vikas: (looking intently at Priyanka) tu mujhse pyar karti ya nehi?

Priyanka: yeh kya sawal hai?

Vikas: nehi aaj tujhe batana padega

Priyanka: dekh yeh main tujhe pehle bhi keh chuki hoon, I need to think about it, mere pas ab apne career ke siwah koi concern nehi hai

Vikas (holding her arm) 'look at me Priyanka', Priyanka chhudane ki koshish karti hai'.

'Don't bother the girl, leave her' They are startled and turn to see a stern looking girl cadet staring strictly at Vikas.

Vikas: tu kaun hai mere ma? Aur maine kya kiya hai?

Girl: I am cadet Nayanika and I hate guys who bother women, men have been doing this for ages

Vikas: baapre tum toh pura feminist ho yaar, hi am Vikas and this is my girlfriend

Priyanka: I am not!

Nayanika: zyada hoshiyari dikhane ki koshish mat karo, I know you men very well, ladki dekha nehi ki bother karna shuru

Vikas: (trying to flirt) wow! Wow! U are a red hot chilly! Waise u are very beautiful

Nayanika: stop it

Priyanka: Vikas stop flirting with her, Nayanika thanks for your concern but he's a friend of mine

Nayanika: then it's alright, let me know if any man tries to harass any girl in this campus

Vikas: arrey tum toh sach mein Phoolan ho, chalo ek baar handshake toh kar lo

Nayanika: sure

She comes forward, holds Vikas' hand and presses it too hard

Vikas: aaaaaaaaah aaaah, oh my God, chhod chhod, baapre haath hai ki loha

Nayanika: dekh liya ladkiyan bhi strong ho sakti hai, don't mess with them anymore

She leaves

Priyanka laughs out loudly, Vikas is still nursing his hand, 'baapre ladki hai ya Don! upar se radicle feminist, this is a dangerous campus'

Suddenly they spot some men trying to climb out the academy walls.

Priyanka: arrey arrey, yeh kaun log bhag rahe hai, hello

They run away in haste as they hear Priyanka's voice.

Vikas: very suspicious, kaun hai yeh log?

Priyanka: pata nehi, chal Vikas hume yahan ek authorities ko inform karna chahiye

Vikas: What if they are students sneaking out at night

Priyanka: kuchh bhi ho, hume inform karna chahiye,

They walk towards the guesthouse. As they reach the guesthouse they see Aliya, Harshad and Arjun in the reception, all tensed.

Priyanka and Viaks: kay hua, is everything alright?

Arjun: arrey kahan the tum dono? Yahan Prachi ki tabiyat bahut kharab ho gayi hai, hum child specialist ke number dhoond rahe hai

Priyanka: (worried) kya hua Prachi ko?

Aliya: who ulti kiye ja rahi hai, aur pet pakarke bahut ro rahi hai, poor thing ya, kuchh bol bhi nehi pati

Priyanka: (gets angry) mujhe pata tha, mujhe pata tha aisa hi hoga

They are all stunned, Arjun: kya pata tha? Kya hua?

Priyanka: tu child specialist ko jaldi se call kar, main Prachi ke paas jati hoon

And she walks towards Rajeev's room, leaving the rest gaping in wonder

Priyanka enters Rajeev's room angrily and sees Rajeev trying to soothe her, Gazal and Kunal were sitting too, Gazal was trying to feed some water to her

Priyanka to Rajeev: Do mujhe do bachhi ko, (she takes Prachi from Rajeev's lap, Prachi chali bhi jaati hai! ) tumhare jaisa baap toh kisi ko na mile!

Rajeev: (stunned): kyon'''maine kya kiya'..pata nehi Prachi ko achanak kya ho gaya, sham tak toh thik hi thi, pizza bhi khayi

Priyanka: (angry) wohi toh, wohi reason hai, 3 din se Prachi ko pizza khila rahe ho Rajeev! Kuchh toh sense hona chahiye!

Rajeev: (guiltily) You think that's the reason she fell sick? (looking totally helpless) lekin woh aur kuchh khana hi nehi chahti, u can ask Vikas and Arjun'''.

Priyanka: who bachhi hai Rajeev, woh khana nehi khayegi toh tum khilayoge nehi??!!! Aur bachhi ko khilana janna padta hai, aise nehi hota!

Rajeev: (guilty) I am such a bad father Priyanka'.mujhe Prachi ko yahan lana hi nehi tha

By now Prachi was much calmer in Priyanka's lap, Priyanka was trying to divert her attention, talking to her, singing songs to her''Rajeev dono ko bahut pyar se dekhne lage'

Gazal: arrey wah, tujhe toh bachhe sambhalna bahut ache tarah se ata hai

Priyanka: nehi toh kya, Pranay mere paas hi bara hua hai

By now the doctor had come, he checked Prachi and said it was due to bad food! He writes a prescription for her and asks : who's her mother?

Rajeev: woh actually uski ma nehi ayi hai, aap mujhe hi bata sakte hai

Doctor: apko? aap hi hai na jo usko pizza khilate rahe 3 din se!

Rajeev feels extremely guilty, he keeps quiet.

Doctor: itni chhoti bachhi ko ma ke bina yahan laye hai? uske ma ko bula lijiye, she needs her mother

All look uncomfortable, Harshad bolne lagta hain, 'actually woh Rajeev ji ke ado'.' Priyanak cuts him short, 'aap mujhe bata sakte hai, main hi hoon uski ma' The doctor looks at her with suspicion, 'all right if you insist, yeh lijiye iski diet chart, aur uska khub khayal rakhiyega.' He leaves.

Sab jaane lagte hain, Prachi ab Priyanka ke godh mein so gayi hai,

Priyanka to Rajeev: aj Prachi ko mere paas hi rehne dijiye

Rajeev: (looking at her with a mixed expression of gratitude and adoration) Priyanka thanks a lot, main kaise tumhare shukriya ada karoon'''.

Priyanka: mat kijiye, maine jo bhi kiya Prachi ke liye kiya, ok goodnight, see you tomorrow

Priyanka Prachi ko lekar chali jaate hai, Rajeev keeps staring at both of them'''..


looooooooooooooooooooooovely update.....love the way Pri had scolded Rajeev😳...he deserved that...😉😉😉...Pri was behaving like his wife and Prachi's mom at the same time...😳...great...chalo abhi se hi practice karlo darling...baad bhaut jhelna hai😉 and this Aliya...again something fisy fisy...why Rajeev told her everything about Prachi....but at the same i will appreciate Aliya to force Rajeev to confess...😛and real life Pooja and Naina..woooooooow...both of them are real lrl characters...laughing when Nayonika shaked hand with Vikas and pressed it hard😆..rolling on floor....coooool dear....again this update was full of lil suspenses and excitments....👏...u r a great writer dear....👏

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Posted by: Mystic_Muse

11 years ago

~Love makes Life~ KRIYAANSH DRABBLE SERIES 'completed'

Banner Credit goes to -chamkilli- A girl full of enjoyment lives in a chawl, never tries to get effected by any one, she and her sis live with

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