Shaadi hui..Aur fir. Epilougue,P-49 29/12/09 - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
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2001,February 14th..Abhimanyu ne Akriti ko shadi k lia propose kia..

Naina aur Jateen bhi us party me the..

Party ki photo Page 3 me aai..

Raj chidh gaya..

Abhimanyu as businessman..efficient nahi..infact sara kaam Raj samhalta hai..aur fir is Akriti k chakkar me uski band baj gai..

jab Raj ne suna..k Abhi Akriti se shadi karne ja raha hai..tab Raj ne aitraaz kia.

Abhimanyu--Akriti me kyaa kharabi hai?

Raj--kisi aur se shadi kar le..Aunty ko yeh rishta manzoor nahi tha..

Abhi--purani baaton ko bhul jana chahie Raj..aur Maa nahi chaahti thi..par ab Maa rahi nahi..

Raj--oohh..to tune Aunty k samne natak kia tha..Akriti se alag hone ka..

Abhi--aur koi rasta tha?

Raj--its very clear Abhi..agar Akriti chahie to mujhse dosti tod de..

Abhi--kyaa kah raha hai Raj?

Raj--main vakil se baat karunga k yeh partnership bhi dissolve kar de..

Abhi--tere bina business kaise karunga?

Raj--choice is yours..think about it..take your own time.

Abhi ne Akriti aur Naina se baat ki..


Naina--Raj ko is baat se kyaa problem hai?

Abhi--maa ka beta woh zada hai..mujhse bhi zada ..

Naina--par agar Raj partnership tod bhi de..to kyaa fark padta hai?

Abhi--paagal ho gai ho..Raj k bina main kuchh nahi..agar usne saath chhod dia..to company k shares k daam girenge..

Akriti--then leave me..

Abhi--I can't Akriti..I love you..

Naina--main baat kar k dekhu..usse..?

Abhi--koi faida nahi

Naina--koshish karne me koi harj nahi..

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Naina aai VS k office me..

Raj--hello..

"Sir..koi Ms. Sareen aapse milna chaahti hai.."

Raj--send her in

Naina--may I come in?

Raj--yes please.


Naina--thanks..

Raj--take your seat..

Naina--no thanks..pahle yeh bataiye..k khud ko kyaa samajhte hai aap?do log shadi karna chaahte hai aur aap aise..ulti sidhi shart rakh rahe hai?

Raj--meri marzi..agar pyaar karne ka itna shaukh hai to har baat k lia taiyar hona chahie...

Naina--yeh kaam usually zaalim baap karta hai..bete ko bedakhal karne ki dhamki dekar..aapki umar itni lagti nahi...

Raj--waah..mere office me akar ..mujhe hi dhamki..I like it..

Naina--I don't care..whether you like it or not..but the point is ..Abhi and Akriti ..they love each other..aapko sharam nahi aati..kaise dost hai aap?

Raj--yeh to sach hai k main dost achha nahi..atleast apke jaisa to nahi..k kisi k office ake bheek mangu...aur bheek mangne ka tarika bhi sahi nahi

Naina--main bheek nahi maang rahi hoon..

Raj--achha?to yeh kyaa tha?


Naina--main chetavni dene aai hoon..

Raj--yeh dhamki hai?

Naina--hai ..to?

Raj-- I like it..

Naina--main dikhne me aisi innocent hoon..par asal me hoon nahi..

Raj--kisne kaha k aap dikhne me innocent hai?aap bahut pahuchi hui chees lagti hai..Jateen k sath..

Naina--that is my personal matter..

Raj--agar yeh shadi nahi hui to..?

Naina--dekhiye..baat gussa dikhane ki nahi hai..aapne khud dekha hai Akriti ki haalat..agar Abhi se shadi hone se woh sahi raah par aa jati hai..to aapka jata kyaa hai?

Raj--aapki bahut achhi dost lagti hai Akriti..

Naina--meri badi bahen jaisi hai..infact aaj jo bhi mera naam hai..Akriti ki wajah se hai...

Raj--kyaa kar sakti hai..aap Akriti ki zindagi k lia..

Naina--bahut kuchh..

Raj--Ms. Sareen..Abhimanyu ko dekha hai apne..kya aap chaahti hai k Akriti ki shadi aise insaan k saath ho jo dusre par dependent ho?

Naina--main samajhti hoon..par Akriti pyaar karti hai..Abhimanyu se..

Raj--aapko lagta hai ..k unka pyaar sachcha hai?

Naina--100%..

Raj--aisa pyaar nakamyab ho..to buri baat hai..nahi?

Naina--haa..

Raj--kab karana chaahti hai..aap in dono ki shadi?

Naina--as soon as possible..1 maheene k andar..

Raj--ok..main court me notice deta hoon..2 notice dena hai..

Naina--2 kyon?

Raj--ek Akriti ki shadi..aur dusri aapki...

Naina--whaaaaaatttttttttttttttttttt?

Raj--yes..

Naina--Jateen se abhi tak shadi ki baat nahi ki maine..

Raj--karna bhi mat..kyon ki aapki shadi Jateen se nahi hogi..

Naina--kyaa mazak hai..we love each other..humari shadi hogi..

Raj--nahi..aapki shadi mujhse hogi..


Naina--this is the limit...aisa nahi ho sakta..

Raj--thik hai..to koi bhi notice dene ki zaroorat nahi...agar aap nahi kar sakti mujhse shadi..to main kyon shadi karvaoon ..Abhi Akriti ki?

Naina--aap paagal hai kya?


Raj--nahi..I am serious..

bas..yeh thi shadi ki kahani...

March k 1st week me Raj aur Naina ne shadi ki..court me..uske dusre hafte me Abhimanyu aur Akriti ki shadi hui..

Naina aaj bhi usdin ko yaad kar k bhagwan ko kosti hai..


upar se Akriti Abhimanyu ko gaali bhi deti hai..

inka rishta jud sake is lia Naina ne itna bada risk lia..aur yeh dono..lad rahe hai..ladne do..par Abhimanyu ko wapas lana hai..

varna usko zindagi bhar Raj k sath rahena hoga.

aur Naina k paas mauka hai..is pinjre se bhaagne ka..


Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago
sania_58 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
awsome
superb
great going 👏
loved the update 😛
waiting for u'r next update
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
hai re what a golmaal...amazing update...full of interesting dialogues...thanks di for this fantabulous part...
Nikkisha thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
amazing
awesome
superrrrrrr 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45
firstly a huge sorrrrrrrrry for the late reply....

but yaar, kya mindblowing superbbbbbbbb updates hai.
love ths fic also, its funny, inetersting and different and got a light mood........... 👏

toh yeh thi kahani raj aur naina ki shaadi ke picche......wowwwww, raj kitna pyaar karta hai naina se........
waiting for the next dhasu update!!
yakkudimag thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: daisy_luvs_ ff

firstly a huge sorrrrrrrrry for the late reply....

but yaar, kya mindblowing superbbbbbbbb updates hai.
love ths fic also, its funny, inetersting and different and got a light mood........... 👏

toh yeh thi kahani raj aur naina ki shaadi ke picche......wowwwww, raj kitna pyaar karta hai naina se........
waiting for the next dhasu update!!

I don't think..k Raj ne Naina se isi lia shadi ki thi kyonki usko usse pyaar hua tha..

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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
but then why for such a long time he ws all this jealous and everything abt naina and jateen, just becoz she defied him, thats y????

ho bhi sakta, human minds are verrrrrrrry complicated!! 😕 😕
yakkudimag thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: daisy_luvs_ ff

but then why for such a long time he ws all this jealous and everything abt naina and jateen, just becoz she defied him, thats y????

ho bhi sakta, human minds are verrrrrrrry complicated!! 😕 😕

there you are
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
Too good!!!!

Toh yeh thi kahani Raj aur Naina ke shaadi ke peeche!!!!Aur jinke liye Naina ne yeh shaadi ki woh toh ladte hi rehte hai!!!! 😡 😡

Raj usse kitna pyaar karta tha 😆 😆 !!!!

Par Raj aur Naina dono paanch saal pehle jaise thhe .....aaj bhi waise hi hai!!Unke beech kuch nahi badla!!!! 😊 😆


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Posted: 17 years ago
#50
hahahahhahaha
itna mazedar ff
grat dear tum kitna acha likhti ho
u r toooooooooooooooooo good
n u know raj naina ladte huye ache nahin lagte na hahahhaahaha
par han kash in dono me thoda pyar ajata
aur naina aur raj kabhi kabar romance kar liya karte hahahahahahahha
i would love to see
n e ways tumhari jaisi brilliant writer mene nahin dekha u r the best dear👏

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