Shaadi hui..Aur fir. Epilougue,P-49 29/12/09

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#291

What a nautanki update yaar. 👏👏👏

Pyaar hai par ikraar karne se darte hain 😕😕😕 dono sab jaante hai ek doosre k baare me par jaan kar bhi samjhana nahi chahte hain.

Naina k liye sach kaha Raj ne Akriti se aur ye bhi sach hai ki is saare bawaal ki wajah bhi Abhi aur Akriti hi hain.😡😡😡

Pehli baar aaj Abhi aur AKriti ne ulti ganga bahai 😆😆😆 Abhi ko Naina se aur Akriti ko Raj se sympathy ho rahi thi.😲😲😲

Raj ne realize kar liya ki Naina us se pyaar karti hai aur i hope Naina bhi jaldihi ye baat realize kar legi.😳😳😳

Kya patti padhai hai Sultaan Singh ko Raj ne ki 1 crore ka inaam milega un logon ko vow 😆😆😆! dimaag ab chalne laga hai Raj ka bhi kaafi tej kya karein Naina ki sangat ka asar jo hai.😉😉😉

Raj fauran samajh gaya Sultan Singh k way of description se ki kis ki baat kar raha hai vo aur sab yaad aane laga .😛😛😛

Sach kaha Raj ne ki jaldi se jaldi Bhairon ko laana hai varna bechare Raj ka pata nahi kya ho?😕😕😕

Accha excuse banaya raat ko un theen deviyon se peecha chudane ka 😛😛😛 aur Naina to Raj ki chinta hi kiye jaa rahi hai itni chinta ki us ne ki bukhaar hi ho gaya us ko.

Raj bhi fauran dauda doc lene.😊😊😊

nice update, update soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#292

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Bechara Raj!!! Kya haalat ho gayi hai uski!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Banduk ke naam se Raj ko jaana pada warna to jawab nahi de raha tha!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆

I liked Raj's comment ke Navjot toh ladkon ka naam hota hai Navjot Singh Sidhu!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Raj put two and two together and realized that Navjot is none other than Naina!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne inko bola ke uska asli naam Naina hai aur woh pagal hai!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛Raj is too much!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆

Waise half of his story is true about the hanger and the chair!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Ek crore ke nam pe toh yeh log Raj ki har baat maan rahe hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Abhimanyu pagal ho gaya hai police ke paas daur daur ke magar Raj nahi hai kum se kum usse office toh sambhalna chahiye!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Well Akriti is right ke saare bawal ki wajah Abhi aur Akriti hi hai!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Aaj toh ulti ganga beh rahi hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Abhi is feeling sympathetic towards Naina and Akriti towards Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

But Raj wakai Jatin ke case mein was very calm!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Koi aur hota toh Naina ko chhod chuka hota!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is clever ke usne saari baatein english mein kahi taaki kisi ko samaj mein naa aaye!!!!! 😊 😊 😊

Abhi kehta hai Raj killer hai when he heard about three wives!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj is so sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊He is not angry with her and said how can he be she is his wife!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj has realized that Naina usse bahut pyaar karti hai aur kehta hai wohi gadha hai jo samaj nahi paaya!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️

Shayad Naina bhi nahi janti ke kitna pyaar karti hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊I hope Naina also realizes soon that Raj loves her so much!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Abhi Guddu se kya kahe raha hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛Aur inke beech phir chalu!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣Hey Bhagwaan!!!!

Accha bahana banaya Raj ne raat ko teen devion se dur rahene ka aur Naina pe nazar bhi rakhne ka!!!! 😊 😊 😊

Naina bhi ajeeb hai Raj ko aise dekhke mazze bhi leti hai raat ko uske baare mein sochke roti bhi hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ko bukhar hai aur Raj uske paas jaa bhi nahi sakta!!!! Poor Raj!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

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varshita

@varshita

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#293

Kya dhansoon update tha yaar. 👏

Raj ne bhi acchi patti padhai hai Sultan Singh ko ki uski to bloti hi bund ho gayi hai.😉

Naina ko nahi pata hai ki us k peeche Raj apni aur Naina ki jaan bachane k liye kya nautanki plan kar k baitha hai.😛

Pehli baar mujhe Abhi n Akriti jee kee baat acchi lagi 😉 kyounki mujhe lagta hai ki shayad first time dono dimaag waali baatein kar rahe the.😆

Ek kaam accha hua ki Raj ko ehsaas ho gaya kam se kam ki Naina bahut pyaar karti hai us se par abhi Naina ko ye baat khud clear nahi hai.👍🏼

Abhi ne fir se apne bete se bina akal waale dad k jaise baat karna start kar diya na.😕

I hope jaldi hi sab theek ho jaaye.😊

update asap.

Edited by varshita - 16 years ago

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#294

@digimon_pokemon

Thanks Sarah..yaar..mera net ka problem ho raha hai..kyaa karoon?I am sorry..for the delay

@starasdf

Thanks..yes..Raj and Naina..they used to have great battles..keep reading..

@vvdn

Yes..Raj realised that Naina loves him..but it is yet to be realised by Naina..

@rituka7

Thanks..keep reading..

@prerna1

Thanks..for loving my fic..keep reading..

@yyyy

Yes.Raj is an exceptional person..he reads Naina's silence..

I am sorry..as I am not being able to update due my network problem.

@sea_nyx

Yes..their brain has to be fixed by someone.Raj is aware about his feelings..Naina has to be aware of her own feelings about Raj too..

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha
What a nautanki update yaar. 👏👏👏 ==Thanks..
Pyaar hai par ikraar karne se darte hain 😕😕😕 dono sab jaante hai ek doosre k baare me par jaan kar bhi samjhana nahi chahte hain. ==Dono sankhi hain..

Naina k liye sach kaha Raj ne Akriti se aur ye bhi sach hai ki is saare bawaal ki wajah bhi Abhi aur Akriti hi hain.😡😡😡 ==Abhi and Akriti..dono ne mohabbat ki..par unme hi dum nahi tha duniya ka saamna karne ka..

Pehli baar aaj Abhi aur AKriti ne ulti ganga bahai 😆😆😆 Abhi ko Naina se aur Akriti ko Raj se sympathy ho rahi thi.😲😲😲 ==Haan..unko bhi bura lag raha hai..😭

Raj ne realize kar liya ki Naina us se pyaar karti hai aur i hope Naina bhi jaldihi ye baat realize kar legi.😳😳😳 ==Hope so..😕

Kya patti padhai hai Sultaan Singh ko Raj ne ki 1 crore ka inaam milega un logon ko vow 😆😆😆! dimaag ab chalne laga hai Raj ka bhi kaafi tej kya karein Naina ki sangat ka asar jo hai.😉😉😉 ==Haan..ab jaa kar Raj ka dimaag kaam karne laga hai..

Raj fauran samajh gaya Sultan Singh k way of description se ki kis ki baat kar raha hai vo aur sab yaad aane laga .😛😛😛

Sach kaha Raj ne ki jaldi se jaldi Bhairon ko laana hai varna bechare Raj ka pata nahi kya ho?😕😕😕 ==Raj will be..gangraped..😆

Accha excuse banaya raat ko un theen deviyon se peecha chudane ka 😛😛😛 aur Naina to Raj ki chinta hi kiye jaa rahi hai itni chinta ki us ne ki bukhaar hi ho gaya us ko. ==Kaho Naa,Pyaar hai..

Raj bhi fauran dauda doc lene.😊😊😊 ==Husband material..

nice update, update soon.

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#296

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!! ==Thanks..

Bechara Raj!!! Kya haalat ho gayi hai uski!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 ==Haan..bechara..😡😭

Banduk ke naam se Raj ko jaana pada warna to jawab nahi de raha tha!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆==Haan..Raj ,The Super Hero..

I liked Raj's comment ke Navjot toh ladkon ka naam hota hai Navjot Singh Sidhu!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 ==Yes...Raj has a good sense of humour..

Raj put two and two together and realized that Navjot is none other than Naina!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 ==Yes..Raj is so smart..

Raj ne inko bola ke uska asli naam Naina hai aur woh pagal hai!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛Raj is too much!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 ==Haan..Murge ki ek taang hai..Raj..

Waise half of his story is true about the hanger and the chair!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 ==Yes..Raj was the victim himself..

Ek crore ke nam pe toh yeh log Raj ki har baat maan rahe hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆==Baap bada na Bhaiyya..sab se bada rupaiyya..

Abhimanyu pagal ho gaya hai police ke paas daur daur ke magar Raj nahi hai kum se kum usse office toh sambhalna chahiye!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒==Abhimanyu..aaj agar woh kaabil hota..toh yeh sab nahi hota..

Well Akriti is right ke saare bawal ki wajah Abhi aur Akriti hi hai!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒==Haan..unko ab jaa kar samajh me aa raha hai..😡

Aaj toh ulti ganga beh rahi hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Abhi is feeling sympathetic towards Naina and Akriti towards Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊==Iske siva aur kuchh kar bhi nahi sakte..😛

But Raj wakai Jatin ke case mein was very calm!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Koi aur hota toh Naina ko chhod chuka hota!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊==Yes..you are right..

Raj is clever ke usne saari baatein english mein kahi taaki kisi ko samaj mein naa aaye!!!!! 😊 😊 😊==Haan..Naina ka asar hai..

Abhi kehta hai Raj killer hai when he heard about three wives!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆==🤣

Raj is so sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊He is not angry with her and said how can he be she is his wife!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳==Hmm..Raj itna bhi bura nahi hai..bas thoda sa sankhi hai..

Raj has realized that Naina usse bahut pyaar karti hai aur kehta hai wohi gadha hai jo samaj nahi paaya!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️==Raj khud ko Praful samajh raha hai..

Shayad Naina bhi nahi janti ke kitna pyaar karti hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊I hope Naina also realizes soon that Raj loves her so much!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊==Hmm..hope so..

Abhi Guddu se kya kahe raha hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😛Aur inke beech phir chalu!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣Hey Bhagwaan!!!! ==Eternal story..

Accha bahana banaya Raj ne raat ko teen devion se dur rahene ka aur Naina pe nazar bhi rakhne ka!!!! 😊 😊 😊==Raj..bahut chalu ban gaya hai..hota hai..aksar aisa bhi hota hai..

Naina bhi ajeeb hai Raj ko aise dekhke mazze bhi leti hai raat ko uske baare mein sochke roti bhi hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊==Mohabbat..Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Ghum..😭😃

Naina ko bukhar hai aur Raj uske paas jaa bhi nahi sakta!!!! Poor Raj!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

==Kyaa hoga in dono ka??😃

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: varshita
Kya dhansoon update tha yaar. 👏 ==Thanks..
Raj ne bhi acchi patti padhai hai Sultan Singh ko ki uski to bloti hi bund ho gayi hai.😉 ==Raj is too smart..

Naina ko nahi pata hai ki us k peeche Raj apni aur Naina ki jaan bachane k liye kya nautanki plan kar k baitha hai.😛 ==Naina ko bahut kuchh pata hai..yehi sab se badi problem hai..😛

Pehli baar mujhe Abhi n Akriti jee kee baat acchi lagi 😉 kyounki mujhe lagta hai ki shayad first time dono dimaag waali baatein kar rahe the.😆 ==Haan..agar dono me dimaag hota..toh aaj Naina aur Raj k beech yeh sab nahi hota..

Ek kaam accha hua ki Raj ko ehsaas ho gaya kam se kam ki Naina bahut pyaar karti hai us se par abhi Naina ko ye baat khud clear nahi hai.👍🏼==Do Anjaane...😛

Abhi ne fir se apne bete se bina akal waale dad k jaise baat karna start kar diya na.😕==Abhi...😡

I hope jaldi hi sab theek ho jaaye.😊

update asap.

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ANANYA ROY

@yakkudimag

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#298

Naina ki aankhe khuli,tab Doctor uske saamne thi..paaswale health centre se Raj usko le kar aaya tha.Doctor ne Naina ko bahut kuchh kaha, "Aap ko samajh me nahi aata...k aap is waqt kis haalat me hain?Aise waqt par aap is tarha sab se door is gaaon me ghoom rahi hain!!Aapke Pati ne aap ko akele aane kaise dia?Itna kaun sa zaroori business ka kaam aa pada..k aap is

tarha chali aai apne ghar se?Madam..you have to be careful..aap jitni jaldi ho sake..apne Husband k paas jaaiye..achanak se aapki tabiyat kharab ho gayi.. toh kaun zimmedar hoga?Agar aapko kuchh ho gaya..toh kya aap khud ko maaf kar paayengi?"

Raj mann hi mann khush ho raha tha,kyonki jo baatein woh Naina ko kehna chaahta tha..is Doctor ne sab kaha..Naina se. Naina ne sirf suni har baat, khamosh ho kar..Doctor kuchh advices de kar chali gayi..Naina k mobile par Akriti ka phone aaya..

Naina--Hello..

Akriti--Yeh kyaa hai Naina?Kyon kar rahi hai yeh sab?

Naina--Mujhe kuchh achha nahi lagta..main kyaa karoon?

Akriti--Raj k saath waapas aa jaa..sab achha lagne lagega..

Naina--Nahi..

Akriti--Kyon nahi..Naina..tera ghar hai ..tera Pati hai Raj..tu aur kaha rahegi?Please bahut hua..Raj k baare me soch..teri wajah se usko kyaa kyaa jhelna padh raha hai..aur woh sab bardasht kar raha hai..sirf tere lia..

Naina--Maine kaha kya yeh sab karne k lia?Mere peechhe aane k lia..?

Akriti--Wahi zid..wahi gussa..tu kab tak usse naraz rahegi?

Naina--Main kisi se naraz nahi hoon Didi..bas mujhe sab akela chhod de..aur kuchh nahi chahie mujhe..

Akriti--Teri tabiyat kaisi hai ab?

Naina--Theek hoon..

Akriti--Is waqt Raj tere paas nahi hai..aur tu theek hai?!

Naina--Sach me ..mujhe koi takleef nahi hai..mann karta hai yehi reh jaaoon..humesha k lia..

Akriti--Naina..main bahut naraz hoon tujhse..tu ghar aa..pehla mauka milte hi tu ghar aa..Naina..mazak ki bhi had hoti hai..

Naina--Bye..

Akriti--Par Naina sun toh..

Naina ne phone cut kar dia..

Raat ko Naina kamre me tahel rahi hai..Kamla doodh se bhara hua glass rakh kar gayi uske lia..Naina ne haath bhi nahi lagaya...kuchh der baad Naina so gayi bistar me..

"Doodh kyon nahi peea?"

Naina chauk gayi..Raj ki awaz sun kar..Raj khada hai..kamre me andhera hai..chandni baahar se aa rahi hai..Raj Naina k kareeb aaya..

Naina--Kyon aaye ho yeha?

Raj--Tumhare lia..

Naina--Jaao yeha se..

Raj--Nahi jaaoonga.

Naina--Kyaa chaahte ho?

Raj--Tumhe ghar waapas le jaana chaahta hoon...

Naina--Kyon?

Raj--Kyonki woh ghar tumhara hai..tumhare bina waha kuchh bhi nahi..

Naina--Dekho..mera tumhari zindagi me hona..tumhare lia achha nahi hai..

Raj--Naina bahut hua..ab aur naatak nahi chahie..ghar chalo,mujhe

pareshan dekhna chaahti thi tum..toh dekh lo..meri haalat kitni kharab hai yehaa..bardasht kar raha hoon..sirf tumhare lia..aur kyaa chahie tumhe?Aur kitna pareshaan dekhna chaahti ho tum mujhe..?

Naina--Toh chale jaao yeha se..

Raj--Naina..puri duniya me..mera aur koi nahi..Buajee aur tum ko chhod kar..kyon sata rahi ho is tarha mujhe?

Naina--Dekho..yeh shaadi ghalat thi..aur humara rishta bhi ghalat..tha..

Raj--Kyaa ghalat hai isme..batao..humne shaadi ki hai..kanooni shaadi hai. Paanch saal hue hain shaadi ko..aur ab humara bachcha aanewala hai.. isme kyaa ghalat hai?

Naina--Shaadi karne ki wajah..

Raj--Tumhe kyaa lagta hai..maine tumse shaadi kyon ki?

Naina--Tumhe pata hoga..

Raj--I fell in love with you..bas..main khud samajh nahi paaya..varna Jateen k saath tumko dekh kar mujhe kyon jalan hoti thi?Jab Akriti ko bachane k lia tum Jateen k saath Hotel k room k andar gayi..tab mera dimaag kyon jal gaya?Tumhe isse pata nahi chalta..samajhti nahi ho..yaa samajhna nahi chaahti..?

Naina--Nahi samajhna mujhe....

Raj--You know what ghalati meri hai..tumhari har harkat ko nazarandaz kia maine..Jateen k saath tumhara shaadi k baad bhi milna joolna tha..koi aur hota na..aur..mere hi bedroom se tumne kai baar mujhe nikala..par maine sab kuchh bardasht kia,kyonki mujhe yakeen tha..k tum,meri hi rahogi.. humesha..kuchh bhi ho..tum mujhse door nahi jaaogi..aur agar mujhse problem thi..toh mujhe ghar se nikaalti tum..khud kyon chali aai ghar se?Zara si oonchi awaz me maine baat ki..aur tum..

Naina--In sab baaton ka koi faaida nahi..

Raj--Faida nahi..!!Iska kyaa matlab?Yeh sab baatein tumhare siva aur kisse kahoonga?Bolo..mujhe aaj jaanna hai.Main tumhara Pati hoon..agar mujhe kuchh kehna hoga..toh main kisse kahoonga..?Jhagda karna ho toh kisse karoonga?Apna gussa nikaalna ho..toh aur kis par nikaaloonga?Is puri duniya me kaun hai..batao..paanch saal..se hum saath hain..ab tak tum nahi samajh paai mujhe?

Naina--Mujhe kahi nahi jaana...

Raj--Ab tak maine jo nahi kia..ab mujhe wahi karne par majboor mat karna Naina..mere sar par khoon sawaar hai..aaj subha..tumhe andaza hai..k main kitna darr gaya tha?Yeh sab ab khatam karo..I can't take it anymore..Mumbai se yeha tak..tumko pata nahi hai..main kaise aaya hoon..dill me darr tha..k pata nahi..agle hi pal kyaa sunne ko mile..tum kis haal me milogi..aur ab main teen Biwian aur baara bachchon k beech fans gaya hoon...aur tumko bhi yehi ghar mila tha ..rookne k lia..?

Naina--Mujhe yehi rehna hai..mujhe bahut achha lag raha hai yeha..

Raj--Achha lagna gaya bhaad me..achanak se kuchh ho gaya..toh main kyaa karoonga..?

Naina--Nahi..mujhe yehi rehna hai...

Raj--Okay..kab tak..?

Naina--Jab tak mera bachcha naa ho jaaye..

Raj--Dimaag kaha gaya hai..tumhara?Paagal ho?

Naina--Mujhe yehi rehna hai..rehna hai..matlab rehna hai..

Raj--Theek hai..Naina..don't get hyper ..hum yehi rahenge...aisa karte hain.. Bikaner chalte hain..Bua k paas..fir..tumhari delivery ho jaayegi..fir hum teeno chalenge..waapas Mumbai..

Naina--Mujhe Bua k paas nahi jaana..

Raj--Naina..samjho..yeha is gaaon me..is waqt..seedhi si baat hai..main koi risk nahi lena chaahta..agar sharafat se nahi maanogi..mujhe tumko zabardasti le jaana padega...aur yeh Sultan Singh ki puri fauj mera kuchh nahi bigaad paayegi..main bata raha hoon..waise bhi..yeh teen Devian..kab mujhe baksh dengi mujhe nahi malum...kahi teeno ne mil kar mujh par humla kia toh?

Naina--Bahut achha hoga..

Raj--Tumhe isse khushi hogi?

Naina--Haan..main dekhna chaahti thi..tumko is tarha..kaisa lagta hai..Raj..jab tumko din raat is tarha torture kia jaa raha hai..paanch saal..maine yehi sab bardasht kia hai..aur paanch din me tumhari yeh haalat?Ab andaza hota hai.. k kaisa lagta tha mujhe?

Raj--Haan..mujhe ehsaas hai..maine achha nahi kia..par puraani baatein yaad kar k..hum kyon apne aanewale kal ko barbad kar rahe hain? Suno....ab jaisa tum kaho..waisa hoga..ek baar ghar chalo..fir kabhi tumko pareshaan nahi karoonga..ab tumhari pasand ka hoga..sab kuchh ghar me..chalo..

Naina--Tum itna request kar rahe ho..ek hi wajah hai..kyonki main pregnant hoon...isi lia..agar aisa naa hota..toh tum is tarha mere peechhe nahi aate..

Raj--Really!!Us waqt toh tum pregnant nahi thi..jab Jateen se tumhara jhamela hua tha..tab mujhe kyaa padi thi...tumhare peechhe aane ki..batao.. main in sab baaton ko kehna nahi chaahta tha..par tumne majboor kia.. Naina..ab main jhagda nahi karna chaahta..please..ab khatam karo..kyaa chaahti ho.. tumhare pairon me geer kar maafi maangni padegi mujhe?Main woh bhi karne ko taiyyar hoon..Naina..please..mere baare me nahi sochna chaahti toh..at least..for sake of the our child..zid chhod do..isse kuchh bhi haasil nahi hoga..aur tumhara chehra ..kitna utar gaya hai..dekha hai tumne khud ko aaine me?

Naina--Raj..please...

Raj--Bahut manmaani ho gayi..ab chalo..ghar chalo..

Naina--Nahi....kabhi nahi...

Aise me darwaze par knock.. "Main hoon Kamla..darwaza kholo Navjot.."

Raj jaa kar chhup gaya..bistar k neeche..Naina ne darwaza khola..

Kamla--Main poochhne aai thi..kuchh chahie tha tanne?Tabiyat theek hai na?

Naina--Haan..theek hai..aap so jaaiye..mujhe bhi neend aa rahi hai..

Kamla--Achha..

Kamla chali gayi..Ab jaa kar Naina ko yeh hosh aaya..k darwaza bandh tha.. fir Raj kaha se aaya?Naina ne darwaza bandh kia..aur dekha Raj bistar me baitha hai..

Naina--Aaye kaha se?Darwaza toh bandh tha..

Raj--Mera bura waqt chal raha hai..samajh me aa raha hai..varna apni Biwi se milne aana padh raha hai..khidki se ..choron ki tarha..waah..

Naina--Tum jaao ab..mujhe sona hai..

Raj--Main raat bhar aangan me khatiye par nahi so sakta..mujhe bhi yehi sona hai...

Naina--Mujhe neend aa rahi hai..

Raj--Doodh pee lo..pahle..fir so jaana..

Naina--Mujhe nahi peena..

Raj--Main gharwalon ko bulata hoon..

Naina--Tum hi fansoge..

Raj--I don't care..zyada se zyada..mujhe kisi Devi k kamre me bhej denge..fir

soch lo..tumhare saamne..mere saath kyaa karenge yeh log..apni aankho k saamne..apne Pati ki izzat lootte hue dekh sakti ho..toh mat peeo doodh,mat lo davai..mujhe kyaa..main bula raha hoon..

Naina--Nahiii...main pee rahi hoon na..do mujhe..

Raj hansne laga...kahne laga.. "Ab aai tum raaste me..tumse isi tarha deal karna hai..jab tak jhamela nahi hota..musibat nahi aati..baat samajh me hi nahi aati...lo davai lo...."

Naina ne davai le li..aur uski nazar Raj k haath par gayi..waha par kharonch k nishaan bane the..

Naina--Kyaa hua?

Raj--Deewar se chadhte waqt lag gayi chot..

Naina--Rooko..main Band-Aid laga deti hoon..mere bag me hai..

Naina ne Raj k haath me Band-Aid laga dia..Raj ne kaha , "Thank you.."

Naina--Is ka kyaa matlab?

Raj--Arre..Thank you bhi nahi keh sakta?

Naina--Neend aa rahi hai..

Raj--Par yeha se jaana hoga..kaise jaayenge?Yeh log toh mujhe jaane nahi denge..jis tarha mujhe pakda tha..uff..aur yeh Bhairon kaun hai..teen teen shadian kar sakta hai..aur zimmedari nahi nibha sakta..aur baara bachche ..baap re..

Naina--Toh tum hi raho na..Bhairon ban kar..

Raj--Nahiiiiiii...ek Biwi main samhaal nahi sakta..aur yeh teen hai..main mar jaoonga..Naina..please..tum ghar chalo..mujhe jitni marzi gaali do..maar lo.. please..main yeha nahi rahoonga..it's horrible..

Naina--Issi lia..isi lia..Bhairon Singh bhaag khada hua..aur tum fans gaye... mujhe bahut maza aa raha hai...

Raj--Bhairon Singh ko dhoondhne k lia bol dia hai..jitni jaldi woh aa jaaye.. utna hi achha..I hope..Matre Saab kuchh kar paaye..pata hai..main jab gaya tha Abhi k saath tumhare baare me report likhaane..Matre ki shakal dekhne laayak thi..matlab..main aur Abhi..dono pareshaan hai..jab k log humari wajah se pareshaan hote hain..

Naina--Matre bhi..uski kismat hi kharab hai..

Raj--Woh poochh raha tha..k kahi tum kisi aur k saath toh nahi bhaag gayi?

Naina--Koi bhi yehi poochhega..

Raj--Par kal hi..hum yeha se jaayenge..

Naina--Nahi..mujhe kuchh din aur rehna hai..Bhairon Singh aa jaaye..fir hum chale jaayenge..mujhe kuchh din rahne do na..please..bahut achhi hai yeh jagah...mujhe kuchh nahi hoga..

Raj--Theek hai..zyada se zyada ek hafta..uske baad..main jaisa kahoonga.. waisa karogi..theek hai?

Naina--Okay..yeha par ek mandir hai..bahut achhi jagah hai..kal main waha jaaoongi..

Raj--Hmm...mujhe bhi aana hoga..

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Agle din Naina ghoomne k lia nikal gayi..aur Sultan Singh ne Raj ko Naina k peechhe bheja..Mandir k paas ek jheel thi..zyada paani nahi hai..baarish hoti hai..tab paani hota hai ..Mandir me Pooja ho rahi thi...

Pandit--Pooja kis lia karani hai?

Raj--Meri Patni aur honewale bachche k lia..

Pandit--Yeh Devi Maa ka sindoor hai..Patni k maang me bhariye..aise pooja karte waqt maang sooni ho..achhi baat nahi..

Pooja k baad Raj Naina ko lekar jheel k paas ghoomne aaya..ek bargat ka pedh tha..uski chhaaon me Raj baith gaya..Naina jheel k paas ghoomne lagi.. Naina k baal khule hue the..Naina ko is tarha kabhi dekha nahi tha Raj ne..koi hesitation nahi hai Naina me..Raj Naina ki taraf dekhne laga..Naina ko rishtey me baandhna tha..par Raj ne ghalati ki,usko mutthi me bandh karne ki koshish ki Raj ne,is waqt Naina,Naina thi..jis par koi dabav nahi hai..jiske saath Shekhawat k naam ka bojh nahi hai....Naina..sirf Naina..Naina idhar udhar ghoom rahi thi..Raj dekh raha tha Naina ko..Raj ko bahut achha lag raha tha..is tarha kabhi Naina Raj k saath nahi thi.Naina ab khul kar saamne aai hai Raj k saamne..Naina ko dekh kar lagta hi nahi hai..k yeh ladki ghar se bhaag kar aai hai..isko kisi bhi baat ka darr nahi hai..Naina ne Raj ko dekha.. Raj akela baitha tha..Naina daur kar aai..

Raj--Arre..daur kar kyon aai?

Naina--Sorry..tum yeha aise hi baithe rahoge..

Raj--Haan..kyon?

Naina--Nahi..kuchh nahi..

Raj ki nazar Naina k maang par gayi..maang se sindoor naak par geera hai.. achanak Raj ne kuchh mehsoos kia..Raj k andar ek zaroorat paida hui.. Raj,sar se le kar paao tak heel gaya..beejli daur gayi..Raj k andar..

Raj--Naina..

Naina khadi thi..usne kaha.. "Kyaa hai?"

Raj--Idhar aao..

Naina uske paas aai..Raj ne Naina k haathon ko apne haathon me lia..kuchh der Naina k haathon ko sehlaya Raj ne..fir Naina ki taraf dekha..Naina ko apni taraf khinch lia Raj ne..aur usko apne goad me bithaya..Naina k sar se apna sar jod kar kuchh der Raj khamosh raha..Naina k baayen haath ko..apne kandhe par rakha Raj ne..dono sar jod kar baithe rahe kuchh der..Raj ki aankhe bandh thi..fir Raj ne Naina ki taraf dekha..aur Naina k honthon par kiss kia Raj ne..pahle dheere..fir ..zor se..bahut der baad jab Raj ka dhyaan toota..tab Naina ne apni nazre neeche kar li thi..

Raj--Kyaa hua?

Naina ne sar hilaya , "Kuchh nahi.."

Raj--Kuchh ghalat kia maine?

Naina ne fir se sar hila kar jawab dia.. "Nahi.."

Raj--Fir?

Naina--Kuchh nahi..

Raj--Kuchh kaise nahi?Kuchh toh hai..in fact bahut kuchh hai..

Naina ne Raj ko gale laga lia..

Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

#299

damn cool
awesome
update soon long asap

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Posted: 16 years ago

#300

nice part.,awesome update........i just wanna know why is naina so stubborn ...raj is so sensitive and caring but why does she love to see raj in trouble...it's unfair it always raj who suffers in ur fic...why??

anyway continue soon...

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