Shaadi hui..Aur fir. Epilougue,P-49 29/12/09 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Raj office ja raha hai...Abhi to kisi hotel me jake chhup gaya hai..

Raj office pahucha..

koi khaas appointment bhi nahi hai..

Raj apne cabin me baitha hai..


kuchh purani baatein yaad aa rahi hai..

2000..August 18..

Hayyat me fashion show..Abhimanyu aur Rajveer k paas bhi invitation aya tha..

show k bad party...ek nai designer k kaam ki kaafi taarif hui hai

Naina Sareen...Supermodel Akriti Mehra ki dost ..dost se zada bahen..

Abhimanyu to Akriti k lia hi aya tha..

Raj ko Abhi ki maa ne bheja tha..ta k Abhi us Akriti se zada chipak na sake... Akriti ko zara bhi pasand nahi karti hai Abhi ki maa..

Raj gaya..Raj..pahle bhi itna hi khadoos..

adhe adhe kapdo me models ko dekh kar usko zara bhi khushi nahi hui..

Abhi--Hey Raj..bata..kaun si ladki pasand hai tujhe inme se..

Raj--koi bhi nahi..chal yeha se..

Abhi--hey Raj abhi to aye hai..

Raj--thik hai..main khuchh peene k lia lata hoon..aur tu jaa..us Akriti k pichhe..

Raj counter me aya.."taquila.."

"one Gin please.."

Raj ne dekha..yeh to wahi designer hai..jiska collection ramp me dikhaya gaya..kyaa naam hai iska? Haa..Naina Sareen...

Raj--hello..

Naina--hiii..

Raj--your designs..cool..

Naina--thanks..

aise me ek Page 3 ki reporter aai..aur dono ko saath me capture kia..camera me..

Reporter--Mr. Shekhawat..kya Vs Enterprises bhi soch raha hai fashion ki dunia me entry lene k bare me?

Raj--well..garments to hum banate hi hai..aur abhi tak aisa kuchh socha nahi hai..aur main apne dost k sath aya hoon party me..

Reporter--Ms. Sareen..aapka pahla show itna kamyab raha..age kyaa karne ka irada hai?

Naina--dekhiye..main koi professional to hoon nahi..yuh hi ek din sketches bana rahi thi..aur Akriti ne bola k inko ramp par utaaro..maine utaar dia..bas.. age kuchh socha nahi..

Reporter--so amature designer?

Naina--yaa..almost..

Reporter--aap dono sath me..kya hum soch le k Shekhawat and Vij k agle venture aap bhi sath hongi?

Naina--main inko janti tak nahi..aapse hi inka naam pata chala..aur aap to teer chhodne lagi..

Raj ko hichki lagi..yeh ladki usko nahi jaanti!!

Raj ko jhatka laga..aur jhatke ne uski drink geera di..Naina k dress k upar..

Naina--You are disgusting..

Naina chali gai...

ek to Page 3 reporter k samne itni beizzati..upar se Naina se kharikhoti..Raj ki sulagh gai..

Abhi aya...

Raj--Akriti se mila..

Abhi--nahi..Maa ne itna kuchh bol dia hai usko..mujhse baat hi nahi karna chaahti..

Raj--achhi baat hai..

Abhi--abe tu dost hai yaa rakshas...tujhe khushi hoti hai..

Raj--chhod de na uska pichha..

Abhi--mujhe lecture de raha hai..aur us ladki se kyaa khusur phusur kar raha tha?


Raj--kaun..woh ladki..koi nahi..bas aise hi..

Abhi--beta main sab samajhta hoon..tu hai tharki..par sab k samne show off aise karta hai k Bhishma ki tarha tune bhi kasam li hai..shadi na karne ki..yaa kisi par line na marne ki..


Raj--tharki??main tharki??

Abhi--haa..pahle darje ka tharki..chal chalte hai yeha se..Akriti ja chuki hai..

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"Sir,Sir..woh Mr. Mehta aye hain.."

Raj--ooohh..haa..unko bhejo andar..


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udhar Akriti k ghar...

Naina--tum log yeh karte rahte ho??iska koi matlab nikalta hai kya?

Akriti--are Abhi isi layak hai..

Naina--aisa hai to usse shadi kyon ki?

Akriti--us waqt sahi laga..

Naina--aur is chakkar me meri shadi Raj se ho gai...meri to zindagi barbad ho gai...tum dono ki shadi ho isi lia maine Raj se shadi ki thi..aur ab tum dono hi..shit....

Akriti--tu talak de de Raj ko...aur Jateen k paas chali jaa..Sydney..

Naina--jaise woh mere lia baitha hai..abhi tak..shadi ho gai uski shayad..

Akriti--are ek bar usko phone to kar..

Naina--yeh koi solution hai kya?

Akriti--mera aur Abhi ka rishta jude isi lia tune Raj se shadi ki..ab jab humara rishta nahi hai..tab tu bhi..

Guddu paas hi me khel raha tha..

Naina--achha hain..humara koi bachcha nahi hua..

Akriti--agar hota ..to tum log itna jhagadte nahi..on the second thought...itna jhagda hota hai ..isi lia tum logo ka koi bachcha nahi hua..


Naina--humare bare me charcha baad me karna..abhi yeh socho k Abhi bhaiya ko kaise wapas laya jaye..

Akriti--jaha hai wahi rahe..main maafi nahi mangne wali usse..

Naina--good..that is the spirit..


phone baja..Naina ne kaha,"agar Raj phone kare to mat bolna k main yeha hoon."

Raj ne hi phone kia tha..

Akriti--haa..kaun..Raj??haa..nahi..Naina to yeha nahi aai hai..anewali thi..nahi yeha nahi aai..


phone cut ho gaya..


Naina ka mobile baja..

Naina--hello..

Raj--kaha ho tum?

Naina--Akriti k ghar pe..main aaj raat ghar nahi lautungi..ok..bye..

Akriti--tujhe Raj ko istarha satane me maza ata hai kya?

Naina--haa..

Raj sochne laga..sari raat kaha rahegi?Akriti k ghar to nahi gai..to kya.. nahiiiiiiiiiiiii...Raj teri izzat loot jayegi..are jiski biwi raat bhar kisi gair k saath rahe..uski to thoo thoo ho jati hai..mar gaye..

Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
awsome update di
too good 👏
fantastic
waiting for u'r next update
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13

Too good!!!!

Naina Raj ko aise satati hai!!! 😆 😆

Raj aur Naina aise milethe!!!Woh mile thhe..... Uun mile thhe..... bas aur ab aage ka mat poochna ke kyun mile thhe 😆 !!!!!

Akriti and Naina were too good!!!!

Par haan agar Raj aur Naina ka ek baccha hota toh shayad halat aise na hote!!!!!




Edited by Shaina_b - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
wow..tumko pasand aya..gr8

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!

Naina Raj ko aise satati hai!!! 😆 😆

Raj aur Naina aise milethe!!!Woh mile thhe..... Uun mile thhe..... bas aur ab aage ka mat poochna ke kyun mile thhe 😆 !!!!!

Akriti and Naina were too good!!!!


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Posted: 17 years ago
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both the parts were just terrific.... 😛 👏 kya likha hai aapne.....its mindblowing ff.... 👏 suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuperb....dialogues were outstanding...thanku soo much di for these hilarious and interesting updates....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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roz update nahi hoga..har alternate day me ek fic ka update hoga..mere vital exams hai May aur June me.

Originally posted by: quietrajpri1623

both the parts were just terrific.... 😛 👏 kya likha hai aapne.....its mindblowing ff.... 👏 suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuperb....dialogues were outstanding...thanku soo much di for these hilarious and interesting updates....

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Posted: 17 years ago
#17

raat ko Raj jab ghar lauta...vakei me Naina nahi thi ghar me..

freege k upar ek note chipka dia usne..

"khana freege me hai..oven me garam kar k khaa lena..yaa fir naukar ko bolna."

Raj bed room me aya..

dekha bed room bahut saja hua hai..

bahut achhi khushboo aa rahi hai...naya room freshener use kia hoga..

fresh hone k lia bathroom gaya..

dekha, dhula hua night suit ..iron kia gaya..hanger pe tanga hai..

bathroom me naya saboon bhi hai..naya shampoo bhi.

bathroom k shelf k upar ek note..

"bas aj raat k lia aish kar lo.."


Raj nigh suit pahen k neeche aya..Raj ne shave ki..aur nahaya bhi..

khana khaya..aur fir upar chala gaya..

dressing table paas gaya cream lagane k lia..waha par bhi ek note...

"tum shayad bahut hairan ho rahe ho k maine itna achha intezam kyon kia? well..main aaj raat k lia ghar me nahi hoon..to tumhara khula maidan hai.. bathroom tumhara..aur bedroom bhi...aaj aish kar lo..kyaa pata..kal tumhe kick out kar doon..bed room se.have fun darling."

aram se bistar me let gaya..

shadi ka pahla ek saal to "Hii,Hello.." karte karte beet gaya..

fir..Raj ne apna kadam badhaya..Naina ki taraf..

Raj wahi baatein soch raha hai let kar.


kareeb 4 saal pahle..ki baat hai..

Raj ne apna gaal check kia..nahi chikna hai..

par us din shave thik se kia nahi tha usne..


us raat ko..

Naina bistar me lete kitaab padh rahi thi..Raj ne pichhe se usko pakda..

pahle to Naina chauk gai..fir...


Raj made an attempt of french kiss...

Naina--Raj..mouth freashner kaunsa istemaal kia?

Raj ko jhatka laga..

usne ignore kia..

fir se usne koshish ki..

Naina--Raj..yeh kaun sa perfume use karte ho?foothpath se kharida hai kya? achhe brand ka product kyon nahi use karte?


Raj chidh gaya.."had hai..main tumko kiss karne ki koshish kar raha hoon.. aur tum brand endorsement ka project kar rahi ho..kuchh karne dogi k nahi?

Naina chup..

Raj ne fir se try kia..

is baar kamyab bhi hua..

Naina k honth aur Raj k honth mile hue the...Raj ne apni zuban se Naina k zuban ko kaid kar lia tha...

He was kissing her lips so perfectly...

achanak..

Naina--thik se shave kia karo..tumhari daadhi chubh rahi hai..


Raj--now..this is the limit..yaar..tumne kasam khai hai kya meri insult karne ki?

Naina--nahi..

Raj--to fir yeh kyaa hai..kabhi mouth freashner..kabhi shaving..kabhi perfume...

Naina--oo..tumhara after shave bhi bahut outdated smell kar rahi hai..naya kuchh kharido na..


Raj--yaa..tum bhi ek saal se zada purani ho gai ho..tumko badal k dusri biha laaon kya?

Naina--maine roka hai kya?

Raj--are..kyaa pagal hai...

Naina--pagal hoon..varna tumse shadi kyon karti?

Raj--main kya itna bura hoon?

Naina--nahi utna nahi..usse kai zada..

Raj--kyaa kia hai maine?

Naina--mujhse shadi..

Raj--tumhari marzi se..


Naina--marzi??wow..blackmail kia..aur meri marzi??really..awesome..


Raj--ok..fine..akele rahne ka bahut shaukh hai tumko..achha hai..raho akeli..

Raj gussa hoke jane laga..

Naina ne haath pakad lia..

Naina--kaha ja rahe ho?

Raj--bahar..drawing room me ..sone..

Naina--mat jao naa..

Raj--to kyaa karoon?

Naina--mere paas raho..aur mere sath...

Raj--tumhare sath kyaa?


Naina--Ludo khelo..


Raj--meri zindagi ka sara romance ..Ludo k board me simat k rah gai..dhatt.. Naina..sharafat se mere paas ati ho..yaaa..


Naina--ok..main..jo Ludo me jeetega ..woh jo bole..wahi hoga..

Raj--tere Ludo ki to main...

Raj ne Ludo ka board utha k fek dia..

aur fir..jo hua..uske lia Naina taiyar nahi thi..

subha jab neend tooti..tab Naina ne discover kia..k kal raat ki haatha pai me..Raj ne uski favourite nighty ka button tod dia hai..


bass..Naina ko aa gaya gussa..

room k kone me rakha hua dnda utha lia..aur Raj ko maarne lagi..

pahle to Raj ko samajh hi nahi aya k usko maar pad rahi hai..

Naina ne bed sheet ko khud par odh lia tha ..usi haalat me yeh jung jaari hai...

Raj ne bhi khud ko pillow se cover kia..


Raj--are maine kia kyaa hai??

Naina--dekho..tumne meri nighty ki button tod di..

Naina floor pe se nighty uthakar dikhati hai..


Raj--oo..god..to see lo..yaa naya khareed lo..

Naina--mera favourite tha woh..main abhi tumhari ek taang tod doon..aur bolu..k plaster karwa lo?

Raj--are kaha teri nighty..kaha meri taang..dimag me bhusa bhara hai kya??pata bhi nahi k kyaa bak rahi hai...


"ok fine"..yeh kah k..Naina ne bulaya usko apne paas..

Raj bhi seduced ho gaya...Naina ne usko baahon le kar chalna shuru kia..aur fir..kab room k darwaze k paas aai.pata nahi chala..aur Raj ko bahar nikaal dia..uske ek laute cover ..pillow k sath..

shukar hai..us din naukaro ko chhutti mili thi..varna..pata nahi kyaa hota..

tab se yeh room se bahar nikaal ne ka silsila chaaloo hai..aaj bhi aisa hota hai.

kabhi agar yeh dono LOVE MAKING type ka kuchh karte hai..uske pahle aur uske baad koi na koi jhamela laga rahta hai..

isi lia..LOVE MAKING to hai..par LOVE nahi..na hi ROMANCE hai..


Edited by yakkudimag - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 too good.plz cont soon.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh my god di, kya update thi, totally mast
u rocked,its really funny
😆
awsome
superb
fatafati
great going 👏
waiting for u'r next update
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
👏 awesome yaar

This is really a different type of ff.....

raj and naina are samples 😆 😆 ...even after 5yrs of marriage they are not able to care for each other..that's very strange

abhi and akiriti are sweet ....

so is this ff all about after effects of marriage or love after marriage??

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