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Posted: 17 years ago
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very nice part 👏 bt really ritu and angad r just immpossible.......plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Dear Friends,

I have some important things to decide with you. I am getting disappoint that i dont get many comments like others. I will love to have bigger comments. Just like Sun_423 and let_me_star. When i get bigger comments, it encourage me to write something very quick. I dont get that much excited from the comments.As a writer, you need excited and passion.to write something. My passion ios all of yours love and support. It comes through comments. I feel like i am not providing what you guys expected from me. There is a link between my writings and your comments. I feel like it is broken. I am trying my best to prove my self but i think i failed this time. If you want me to continue, you guys need to encourage me from your bigger comments. I always appriciate those who regularly post their comments.

Thank You

Love

Kashish
Edited by goodkashish - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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dee frm nxt time i gonna post big comments.....bt plz don't stop writing............i m huge fan of ur all ff stories.............they all r so nice and mindblowing ..ur write so differently. ..that now i addicted of ur ff stories........plz contiunue soon
Edited by angel 16 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yaar plz don't stop writing i will post big comments...................plz plz plz don't stop i m very big fan of ur fics.................. 😭

all ur fics r superb and mindblowing 👏


plz don't stop ur fics plz plz plz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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the story is really getting interesting angad and ritu came to know about sujal and kashish love for each other.....i just hope they sujal and kashish will unite very soon.......
and kashish plzzzz dont stop writing 😭 ..plzzz continue with ur stories
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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
kashish dear from now on you will get bigger comments from me.. do continue soon.... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.........sujal n kashish told everything too ritu and angad 😲 😊 😲!!!!!,....i was totally shocked that they tell them the truth😕 but i'm happy that they know the reality ...n also why they are really marrying them 😭!!!!!!!!!...........angad how can u douth that kashish would have an affair wt sujal if she meat him after marrige 😡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!............i wonder what will you do if b4 your marrige sujal n kashish meet and confess their love too each other...will they??????.....would you support them or no???????........................finally sujal it was time that you tell ritu how you feal for not having her attention and always been busy wt her business 😭!!!!!......😭!!!!!!!!!!!!!............hey is ritu really in love wt sujal??? coz in the ontro u said that sujal 4 her is like a trohpy that she has won 😭!!!...............will she support sujal if he meet kashish b4 marrige or will she smth too separete them 😭 😕 😭??????????...........kitni ajeed baat hay na key wo dono itne nasdiq hoque bhie kitne door hay 😭 😭 😭!!!!!!.... continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.......................great going 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏!!!!!!!!!!!!..............aawesome part>>>>>>>>>>>............ ............

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part-12

Kashish raat ko apne kamre me so rahi thi.....Mehek usi kamre me apni padhai kar rahi hoti hai.............jab achanak se kashish chikhti hai.........

Kashish: SUJALLLLLLLL...........

Mehek daud ke Kashish ke pass aati hai........

Mekek: dii...........kya hua.........

Kashish: Sujal......kisi musibat me hai............woh sahi salamat nahi hai.......

Mehek: dii.......aap kham kha pareshan ho rahi hai..........aapne koi bura sapna dekha hoga........unhe kuch nahi hua hoga........

Kashish: nahi Mehek............yeh koi sapna nahi tha......kyunki kahi na kahi muje dard hua........mera dil keh raha hai ki woh koi musibat me hai..........aur main use mehsoos kar sakti hoon........use meri zaroorat hai.....Mehek......main uske saath hona chahti hoon is waqt.............main kya karoon mehek........

Mehek: dii......hum kuch nahi kar sakte..........hum sirf upperwale se dua kar sakte hai.........

Kashish: hey bhagwan............maine aaj tak aapse kuch nahi manga.....per Sujal jaha pe ho sahi salamat ho........use aapki zaroorat hai..........mere pyaar ki raksha karna...........

Mehek Kashish ko samja bujake so jati hai.........

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Raat ke kareeban ek baje Sujal ghar aata hai.........Prerna Sujal ka intzaar kar rahi hoti hai.......Prerna Sujal ke sir pe pati dekh ke ghabra jati hai........

Prerna: Sujal....yeh sab kaise hua.......yeh chaut kaise lagi..........

Sujal; kuch nahi mama........woh ek chota sa accidant ho gaya......

Prerna: accidant ........per kaise.......

Sujal: jab main office se gahr aa raha tha.........tab office ka elevator raste me kharab ho gaya aur ek chota sa hadsa ho gaya.......lekin ghabraiye mat choti si chaut hai..........cho char din me thik ho jayegi.......

Prerna: chal apne kamre me.........main tere liye dard ki dawa aur dudh lati hoon........

Prerna Sujal ko dawai pilati hai aur use aaram karne ko kehti hai.......

Prerna: ab tu do teen din ke liye office nahi jayega...........

Sujal: mama......kal meri ek important meeting hai.......

Prerna: koi baat nahi.............Ritu shambhal legi.......

Sujal: use to pata bhi nahi ki muje chaut lagi hai.........apne dosto ke saath party me busy hogi........

Prerna ko bahot bura lagta hai.......

Prerna: aisa nahi sochte...........tu soja........tuje aaram ki zaroorat hai........

Prerna Sujal ke forehead ko chumke chali jati hai........

Sujal: mama........agar aaj kashish hoti to use shayad mere dard ka ehsaas hota..........

Sujal bhi so jata hai............

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agle din Kashish ko Amit ka phir se phone aata hai.........

Kashish:haa Amit bolo........kya kaam tha.......

Amit: Kashish......tumhari book taiyaar ho gayi hai.........hum uski inogation ke liye taiyaar hai...sara intjam ho gaya hai.........aur janti ho tumhari book shayad is saal ki sabse achchi kitabo me se hogi.........

Kashish: kab inogation hai..........

Amit: 3 july ko........

Kashish: main us din nahi aa paungi...........

Amit: per kyun.......

Kashish: us din meri mehndi aur sangeet hai.........

Amit: woh to sham ko hogi........inogation to subaah hai.......aur sirf do ghante ki to baat hai...........aur yeh hamare book ke liye bahot zaroori hai.........tumhara waha pe hona..........

Kashish: thik hai.........main aur meri behen aa jayenge.......mama ko to bahot kaam hoga to.......

Amit: thik hai.......muje aap logo ka intzaar rahega............bye.......

Kashsih: bye..........

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Mehek: dii........kisse baat ho rahi thi.......

Kashish: Amit se.......meri book taiyaar ho gayi hai.........

Mehek: sach.......i am so happy for u..........waise inogation kab hai.......

Kashish: 3 july ko.......

Mehek: lekin dii.......

kashish: sangeet aur mehndi hai........lekin hume subaah me sirf do ghanto ke liye jana hoga.......

mehek: achcha hai isi bahane thoda kam kaam karna hoga.........waise dii aap khush to hogi na........aap ka sapna pura hone ja raha hai..........

Kashish: ha..........aur yeh sapna sirf Sujal ki waje se pura ho raha hai..........

Mehek: dii aaj aise khushi ke moke pe aap udas mat hoiye..........waise main aapko ek surprize dene wali hoon.......

Kashish: surprize ........kaisa surprize.........

Mehek: kuch nahi.........book ki inogation pe main aapko kisi se milwana chahti hoon...........bahot hi khass dost hai woh meri.........

Kashish: ab apni behen se bhi apne dosto ko chupane lagi........

Mehek: aisa nahi hai...........uske gharwale ka problem hai.....use kahi akele jane nahi dete.........lekin woh apne bhai se baat kar legi........aur woh hamare yaha shaadi pe bhi aayegi........

Kashish: achcha hai isi bahane yeh dekhne ko bhi mil jayega ki hamari mehek kaise dost banati hai.......

Mehek: dii aapko use milke achcha lagega.............waise abhi main nikalti hoon muje college ke liye dair ho rahi hai..........bye dii......

Kashsih: bye..........

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Prerna: Sujal...kya kar raha hai.........

Sujal: kuch nahi office jane ki taiyariyaan......

Prerna: tu kahi nahi ja raha hai.....kam se kam aaj ke din.........ek din to aaram kar le........

Sujal: nahi mama main ghar pe rehke bor ho jaunga......

Prerna: to thik hai.....tu mere saath chal......main mandir ja rahi hoon.....

Sujal: Mandir.......

Prerna: kyun apne mama ke saath mandir jane me tuje sharam aa rahi hai........

Sujal; nahi mama...........aisi baat nahi hai.........chaliye.......

Sujal aur Prerna mandir ke liye nikalte hai..........

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Maya: Kashish......yeh pooja ki thali leke kaha ja rahi hao.........

Kashish: woh Mama book publish hone ja rahi hai........is liye bhagwan ka shukriya karne mandir ja rahi hoon.......bad thodi dair me aajungi....

Maya: thik hai.........ab ja hi rahi ho to laut te waqt bank me se kuch paise nikal ke aana..........shaadi ka mahol hai paise ki kabhi bhi zaroorat ho sakti hai........

kashish: thik hai.......main bank se hoke aaungi........muje aane me dair hogi......is liye aap apna lunch kar lijiye........main aake kha lungi.......

Maya: thik hai beya.........bye......

kashish: bye...........

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Sujal Prerna ko leke Mandir aata hai........jaha pe already Kashish hoti hai.....lekin kashish mandir me aage sir pe dupatta liye khadi hoti hai....Sujal sirf Kashish ko piche se dekh raha hota hai........is liye dono itne pass hoke bhi ek dusre se anjaan hote hai.......Prerna ki pooja khatam hote hi woh Sujal ke saath lautne lagti hai aur Kashish abhi bhi wahi khadi hoti hai........Sujal aur prerna sidiyon se neeche utharte hai jaha pe kuch panditjee haath ki lakeere dekh rahe hote hai..........Prerna Sujal ko ek panditjee ke pass le jati hai.........jab upper se sidiyaan utarke Kashish dusri aur bethe panditjee ke pass jati hai apni lakeere batane............dono ek dusre ke samne bethe huye hota hai lekin anjaan .......kyunki dono ek dusre ke pith ke bal bethe huye hote hai...........

Panditjee: beta.......tumhare haath ki lakeere dekh ke lagta hai ki tum bahot hi jaldi apni kismat badal ne wale ho.........

Panditjee: beti..........bahot hi jaldi koi aisa insaan tumhari zindagi me aayega jo tumhari kismat badal dega........

Panditjee: beta.......jis raah pe tum ja rahe ho woh tumhari manzil nahi .........tumhari manzil tumhara intzaar kar rahi hai......

Panditjee: beti......tum apni manzil ke pass hoke bhi use dekh nahi pa rahi.......lekin bahot hi jaldi woh khud tumhare pass hogi.......

Panditjee: beta........bahot hi jald tum apne pyaar se milnewale ho.......

Panditjee: beti..........bahot hi jaldi tumhe tumhara pyaar milnewala hai.........

Prerna: lekin mere bete ki sagai ho chuki hai.......

Panditjee: to yeh sagai uska pyaar nahi hai......kyunki yahi uski lakeere bata rahi hai.......aap ka beta abhi bhi apne pyaar ki talash kar raha hai aur bahot hi jaldi uski talash khatam honewali hai.......

Kashsih: lekin panditjee........meri sagai ho chuki hai.......

Panditjee: beti........yeh sagai huyi hai shaadi nahi........abhi to tumhe apne pyaar ko pana hai........aur tumhara pyaar itni jaldi tumse picha chutne wala nahi.......bahot hi jaldi tumhari zindagi ka mod badalnewala hai...........

Kashish bina kuch kahe waha se chali jati hai.........aur Sujal bhi Prerna ke saath chala jata hai lekin abhi bhi kisi ne ek dusre ko dekha nahi hota..........

Edited by goodkashish - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome part. 👏 This is called love chot ek ko lagti hai dard dusre ko hota hai. I think they might each other on the inaugration day. Waiting for more.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome part di 👏 bt i m feeling bad fior sujal i mean ritu is just immpossible sujal is her fiuonce and she doesn't care abt him.. 😡 wat a girl she is ...... idiot part freak person and on d other hand kashish .jo uske pass na hokar bhi uski itni fikr karti hai 😳 ........ aur pandit jee ke batein bilkul sahi thi waise bhi they bothr made for each other aur abhi tak to sirf sagayi hi hui hai................and i m waiting for inogration of kashish's book . i hope sk gonna met again on that inogration ceremony 😳 and thanx for continuing di
Edited by angel 16 - 17 years ago

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