Always Smile ff rahul muskaan last part!

Ok, so this is my first ever fanfic, and it's about Rahul and Muskaan from dmg

Just bear in mind that I am not from India, and have never actually learnt Hindi, just the stuff from movies and serials!

Enjoy!

luvs

sommi😊

Part 1

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15 years ago…

'yeh kya Muskaan?'

'ha muskaaaaaaaaaaaan yeh kya?'

The older boys sneer as they pull one of her curls-

'STOP IT! Stop teasing her!'

A cute little boy with anger raging in his eyes comes charging towards the two bullies, and hits the bigger one square in the jaw, while the other runs off…

The little boy comes slowly towards Muskaan, as if afraid he might scare her if he came any faster

'Muskaan…tum theek to ho na Muskaan?'

'me..Mein theek hoon Rahul'

She says this even as a small tear escapes her large auburn eyes

'Rahul' she sighs, and couldn't hold it in any longer…she launches herself into his arms,

'Ro mat Muskaan, smile….always smile' saying this he hugs her tighter as her sobs cease, and a small smile appears on her face

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Present day

Her eyes filled with tears as memories of her past…their past, came into her mind. That was the first time Muskaan saw Rahul as something other than the obnoxious boy her parents made her be nice to at get togethers and picnics. That was the day Muskaan saw something different.

She saw her hero.

The taxi lunged forward. Traffic.

What else could go wrong?

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He had to find her…

Where is she? Where is she????

It was his engagement, one of the most important days of his life and she chooses now to be angry with him?

'Muskaan….where are you'

Saying this he bolts towards the door…..

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well even so feel free to critisize!
i wont cry lol!

Hey ther! Its reli gud...i reli liked the the childhood memory...its reli nice, u should definitely continue with it!

hey Sommi, great part!
I like how they've known each other since childhood, is it their engagement? Why's she mad?
Continue soon! 😳

Woow..its really nice..do continue..The starting para is so cute! 😳

o thanx sooooo much guyz!

ok so what i want to kno is would all u lovely people who read this want a long fanfic
or a short one?

short would be be about 10 parts
long would be about 50 parts

cuz im not sure 😆

so i am leaving it up to u guyz!!

luvs
sommi

Hiya! I just read part one! I love it- but dont u think the part was too short? 😛

I like short FF's but I also like long ones. I think you should continue a few more parts- then ask. :)

But please continue soon okie? Dont keep me waiting for too long!

ya lol my parts are gonna be pretty short! just a warning 😆
im gonna write the 2nd part tonight so watch out for it tommorow

probably gonna be about their relationship through their school yrs 😳

and an insight into whats gone wrong

luvs
sommi

Sommi, i think we as readers are just dying to read some RM scenes, the length of the story i'll leave up to you, whatever you feel will be easier for you 😳

Hey Sommi! You should make it long! Continue soon!!!


Komal