I hate to love you-FF-updated-Part 5 pg 8 - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
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too good plz continue soon can't wait for next plz continue soon 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwww
ur ff is great
really nce updte
da precp sounds even betr
plzz updte soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome maleka!!!!!! plz continue soon!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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LOL..Ur FF is too funny...But the next part seems very intense...Plz continue soon!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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maleka this part was outstanding.it was so hillarious specially the food part when parso ram is tied
continue soon
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nice ff yaar.......but cont sooooooon.....precap sounds interesting...
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this ff is amazing👏 👏
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Now they both reach Lonavala , Armaan with a headache cause Ridz talked alot whole way, sir drive the car slowly it could be dangerous, sir stop the car and take rest, sir drive fast now its safe.

When they came out of the car all the children gathered around them ,bua comes and they both hug her, children are so much crowded near he tells them that he wil play with them later he is tired now.

One kid:Armaan bhaiyaa aap tu bimaar lag rahein hian.

Armaan:Ofcourse poray rastay jab 5.4" kay bacteria kay sath travel karonga tu beemar nahi honga tu aur kya honga.

A girl:koi itna bada bacteria bhi hota hai?

Armaan:Haan hota hai na.

Children ask:kahan???

Armaan pointed towards Ridz who is talking to bua she get aside and Armaan's finger is now towards bua.

Children:Haaaaaah!!!

Armaan:Nahi..wo.

Kidz:Hum bua ko batayengay kay apnay unhay bacteria kaha.

Riddhima:Sir kitni buri baat hai, ap bua ko...

Armaan:Riddhima...!!!

Bua:Chalo tum duno jakay fresh ho jao, phir lunch kartay hain.

Armaan:Haan.

Now AR checks the kidz.

A boy says to Ridz:

"Ye Armaan bhaiyaa ka mood kuyn itna kharab hai?"

Ridz:She looks at Armaan who is checking a boy.

Ridz:Wo, hospital main kuch baat ho gayee thi isi liye.

Boy:aisa lagta tu nahi hai.

The boys whom Armaan is checking says:

"Kya aap Riddhima didi say naraaz"

Armaan:Abb nahi aisa kuch nahi hai, wo he starts starin Riddhima who is checking a boy, helooks at her and smile remembering the time when they come to lonavala last time, water splashing the romantic dance, but Ridz looks at her he turns his face off her.

Ridz notices that she smiles.

She says whispers something in the ear of that boy, now the biy tell this thing to every child, now Ridz:

Chalo bachoo time for some fun, chalo aank macholi kheltay hain.

Armaan:Ofcourse is game main tu aap expert hain.

Ridz:Aur tum nahi ho kya?

Armaan:Main nahi nadan ho aur nahi nasamajh jo ye bacho kay khel khelon.

Ridz:Such tu ye hai kay tum pakray janay kay dar say khelna nahi chahtay, khel bacho ka ho ya bado ka hota to khel hi hai, right bacho.

Kidz:Right!!!

Ridz:Chalo start karttay hain.

Armaan gets angry:He says to himself "abhi batata hoon"

Armaan:Chalo main bhi agaya, ab jo bhi pakra jayega usay aankoon par pattii band kar is poray farm kay konay konay main jakar hum subko dhoondna hoga.

Kidz says ok, now Armaan catches gappu and says something in its ears.

Now gappu is tied the patti on his eyes, and he starts finding everyone, now Ridz think Armaan ki zaroor ye koi nai shararat hai, main jhariyoon main chup jati hoon takay mujhay koi pakar hi na sakay hmmm, sab bhaag rahe honagy kisi ko kya pata chaley ga, she runs and hide in the bushes.Now gappu slips deliberately on the ground Armaan comes to find out he is ok and tells him she is hiding behind the bushes, now gappu goes and catches Riddhima, gappy says pakar liya, aray ye tu Riddhima didi hain.

Armaan:Ab aya oont pahar kay neechay he thinks and smiles.

Now Riddhima starts finding everyone around the whole farm, she heards someone running yaaan zaroor koi chupa hai, she goes in that direction, she thinks yahaan tu koi bhi dikhai nahi de raha, hmmm thodi si cheating karnay main kya hrj hai yahan top say pora farm dikhta sab pata chal jayega kaun kahan chupa hai, now she climbt the stairs and goes on the hut and see the whole farm, she saw a kid hiding there hmmmmm, she again ties the patti and goes where the kid is hiding, she comes doing tip toed and she thinks its the kid she says pakar liya, she takes off the patti from her eyes and sees Armaan in front of him, he stares at her she also stares at him they both share a silent moment, Riddhima's hairs are flying, and comin gon her face, Armaan touches her face, he starts caressing on her cheek, she just stares him, she is alos about to touch his face, when children comes running wo dekho wo dekho Riddhima didi nay Armaa bhaiyaa ko pakara liya, ab apki bari bhaiyaa chakkar lagany ki.They both get back and feels shy.

At night Armaan is in his room wearing a white kurta salwar, he is lying on the bed and recalling the events of that day, in the dhaba, the aank macholi game, when his mobile phone rings its an sms fromRidz who says meet me at the hut, now.

Armaan says hut main, he goes saw Riddhima standing outside the hut wearing a red sari, he comes and says hye, she turns around, hye.He looks her from top to bottom, Ridz in silent and looking at Armaan, dekho Armaan kuch bhi nahi badla, sab kuch waisa ka waisa hai, tum kuyn itnay badal gaye ho, Armaan:Riddhima kuch bhi na badalta agar tumne...

Riddhima:Tumnay kuch kaha?

Armaan:Nahi , tumehin kuch kehna tha?

Riddhima:Haan, nahi, kuch khaas nahi , tum is waqt yahaan kya kar rahey ho.

Armaan:Ye phir tumhara koi naya natak hai?tumhin nay tu bulaya hai mujhay.

Riddhima:Mainey, main tumhein kuyn bulaongi?

Armaan:Yeah ofcourse tu m kuyn bulaogi?

Riddhima:Armaan main serious hoon, mainey such main tumhin nahi bulaya....

Armaan:Yeah right he leaves starts walking angrily, his watch fells on the floor of the hut, he comes back to take it, he heards Riddhima talking on the phone with Bi.

Riddhima:Abhi tu Armaan phir ghussay main agaya, bi kuch sochay, warna sara plan fail ho jayega, Riddhima's back is towards Armaan, he gets very very veyr angry he slowly says plan.

Ridz continues:Itni mushkil say tu wo line par aya hai, ab apnay kaam par dehaan bhi denay laga mujhay darr hai kahin phir say..

Armaan claps:Wow what a plan!!!!

Ridz turns around:Armaan tum..!!!!

Armaan:Wow tumharay is paln ki jitney taref ki jaye utni kam hai Dr.Ridhdima Shishank Gupta, (it starts raining now)he says sarcasticall and angrily he goes out of the hut, Riddhima follows him saying Armaan Armaan, ruko tum jaisa soch rahe waisa kuch bhi nahi hai!!

Armaan stops and again walks back towards Riddhima angrily and grabs her tightly and says:

A:Ye plan, ye sub kuch waisa kuch bhi nahi jo main soch raha hoon, tum mujhay line par la rahi thi...

Ridz:Armaan ye such nahi hai.

Armaan:Ya right kuynkay tum meri feelings kay sath khel rahi thi ab tak, tum janti ho kay main tumse....

Ridz:Armaan please, mujhay sirf tumhari fikar thi tumharay career ke liye...

Armaan:O thanx alot, mujhay tumhari hamdardi ki tumharay is raham ki zarootat bilkul nahi hai, ye meri zindagi aur mujhay isay kaisey jeena hai ye sochna mera kaam hai, kisi ghair ka nahi.How silly of me aik baar ohir main ye samajh betha kay tum ab bhi mujhsay pyaar karti ho..

Ridz:Armaan main tu sirf tumhay khush...

Armaan:O please apna ye natak band karo, Riddhima main tumse nafrat karta hoon, is duniya main agar sab say ziyadio mujhay kisi say nafrat hai tu wo tum ho, ab main kabhie kisi say bhi pyaar nahi kar paaonga, main abhi isi waqt yahaan say ja raha hoon.

he leaves angrily, Riddhima, starts crying alone in rain, Armaan stops by hearing the voice of her crying but he does'nt turn around he leaves.

Now he gets ready he packed his things and tries to find a file.

A:Files Riddhima kay paas hongi, he comes out, and goes to her room there is no one, in the room he took the file and is leaving when he heard a voice message on the phone from Anji,

Anji:Ridz iplease pick up the phome waisey hi call bahut mushkil say mili hai its urgent,acha dekho agar tu m yahan nahi ho tu mera msg miltayhi mujhay foran contact karo, dekho Ridzi har baa tki aik limit hoti hai, tum kab tak Armaan ke liye apnay career ko dao pay lagogi aaj dad bahut naraaz thay unho nay tumhein Monitor ki duty say hata diya hai, aur tumharay marks bhi low hain,main janti hoon that you love Armaan but usay pyaar ka sahi matlab samjhanay ke liye kya tum apnay aap ko aur apnay career ko dao pay lagaogi, dad ko shak ho gaya that kay tum apni marzi say lonawala ja rahi ho, mainey badi muskil say bahana banaya hai,dr.Keerti bi bahut ghusaa ho rahi thi, ab tum kal hi wapas ajao ok, take care bye.

Armaan:Armaan gets so soften again, he thinks "Riddhima tumnay meray liye.."ho sakta hai shayad main hi Riddhima ko samajh nahi paya, Riddhima hai kahan???wo ab tak ayee kuyn nahi????....

Precap:Riddhima is walking on the street while Armaan follows her in the car, Riddhima please meri baat suno kabhie main agay agay tum peechay peecha kya sari zindagi yehi hota rahega humaray beech? he finally stops the car in front of her, Riddhima turns around tum tu mujhsay nafrat kartay ho na, phir kuyn arahay ho meray, peechay, mainey tumharay peecha is liye thi kunkay main tumse she turns around and faces Armaan she has tears in her eyes, now in the car,Armaan is holding Riddhima's face in his hands and eye in eye he says, i hate......Ridz says what?????

Maleka/Love Ammy

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey omg yaar kya shock diya wht a wonderful update wow i lvd tht gme ankh micholi nd armaan cheatd nd ridz ne ar ko dhoon dliya fnnnnnnnnnnnny nd omg yaar ar ko sab pata chal gaya nd he ws dam angryk ya kya bol diya use ek to usne apna career dao pe laga diya sirf uske karan nd bt uski bhi kya galti nd agar usne angie ka message nahi suna hota to shayad ohhhhhhhhhhhh god yaar ridz ws so hurt.............nd precap ws dammmmmmmmmmmm goooooooood yaar ar said hamesha main tumhare peeche peeche or tum age age kab tak chalega omggggggg ridz ws cryng i hope sab thik ho jayga ink beech kab tak ladte rahenge..........
plzzzzzzzzzz cont soooooooooooon
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Edited by yachna - 17 years ago
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i jst cant wait...plz continue asap........plz plz plz plz...n patch them up...........

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