I hate to love you-FF-updated-Part 5 pg 8

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Hye folks this a small FF about AR, based on the ghulami story😆you know what i mean:

Armaan after the duty comes back to the locker room, he saw a small gift box, he takes on it is written To Armaan from Atul and Rahul,

A:Gift without any occasion? he just open the packing it is a small pink box, he is looking at it,he open it and a spring clown comes out of it touching Armaan's nose it falls down attache dto its spring the clown is keep saying have a nice day have a nice day.

Ammy:He gets irritated Ye zaroor Riddhima ka idea hoga!!!

Atul and Rahul comes running and shouting Armaaaaaan!!!!they both hug Armaan tightly they grab his face.

Atul:Tu kitna dubla ho gaya hai.

Rahul turns his face towards him and says:

Rahul:Ye kitini ungliyaan hain?

Atul:Tujhay meri awaaz sunai de rahi hai na?Atul shouts in Ammy;s ears aaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!

Armaan released himself from their grip and says:

Champ,Raooool, ban dkaro ye tamasha kuch nahi hua hai mujhay!!!

both Atul and Rahul starts crying , Rahul says:

R:Mujha pata nahi tha kay tu hum se itni badi baat chupayega.

Atul:Dekhli teri dosti, mujhay apnay champ ko andheray main rakha tunay.

Armaan:Ye basket kam thi jo ab ye duno bhi, kya kya hai ye sab kya kiya mainey?

Atul:Main lut gaya main barbaad hogaya!!!

Ammy:Lut gaya???

Rahul:Kya kya khwab sajaye thay sab chakna choor ho gaye!!!!

Atul:Is ghulami kay khumaar main tu humein bhool gaya,Ghaddaaar!!!he grabs Ammy's collar Ammy does the same but Rahul comes in between.

Rahul:He says crying ye wo Armaan nahi hai jisay hum jantay thay, ye koi aur hai, ye koi aur hai, ye koi aur hai, ye koi aur hai ye koi....

Atul interrupts and whispers in Rahul's ears:Abay agay ki line bol...

Rahul:Tum humaray Armaan nahi ho!!!

Armaan:Tum duno.....

He stops saying when he says Ridz entering the locker room her hairs are flying, she enters the room, she smiles at him, Armaan is staring at her, she comes walking towards him, suddenly he shakes his head.

Ridz:Bahut buri baat hai Armaan tum kaisey bhool gaye kay ye sab tumharay dost hain, mana mana kay main tumhari Ghulam hoon laken....

Armaan:Enough Ridhima, main aakhri baar keh raha hoon, ye drama band kardo warna.

Ridhima:Sorry Armaan sir, she holds her ears apko bura laga she cries like a child Armaan again start staring at her he thinks how cute she is looking.

Now they all heard Anji and Muskaan enters wining too, they both comes crying towards Armaan he looks at everybody and disappears!!!!

they all look here and there!!

Ridz:Ghayab ho gaya, they all give each other high fives!!!!

To be continued....

Should i continue it or not!!!!😳

Maleka/Love Ammy

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey mallika yaar vry vryyyyyyy nce ff yaar iws laughng so mch poor armaan kitna pareshaan ho jayga thy wll irritate hm sooo mch nd he dissappeard omg it ws dammmmmmmmmmmm goooooooood yaar vryy nd specially thy all wre cryng jhoot moot ka nd rahoool frgt his lne.......it ws soooo fnnnnnnnnny.........plzzzzzzz u hv 2 cont.....
luv yachna
waitng fr ur nxt prt
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆 😆 😆 Awww...It sounds really nce...Do cont.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plz continue soon i love it amazing can't wait to see next part 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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funny. love armaan's sudden act of magic-disappearing. 😆 . its written amazingly 👏 . plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue. thnx 😛 😉 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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😆 😆 Funny! Cant wait for more 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was soo funny!!!! plz cont it!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i really liked it,
especially the atul-rahul dialogues 😆
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do continue
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Now Armaan is checking his patient, a little girl with a broken arm, he takes her plastered arm he gives her a sweet smile on which is written tonight at 9, Ammy smiles and says:

Ammy:you are my best date ever.

The girl whose name is honey says:

Really iska matlab hai kaam ho gaya???

Ammy:Kaam hogaya matlab???

Ridz appears behind Armman from somewhere and says yes in his ears.

Ammy turns around he says "tum" phir say.

Riddhima:Kya matlab hai phir say, ye tu pehli baar hai, tumhein yaad hai na tumnay kaha tha kay ab mujhay tumhein vegetarian dinner khilana padega.

Ammy takes her hand and pulls her outside he says:

Dekho Ridhima ye drama band karo is sab say koi farq nahi padnay wala, just.... door raho mujhsay, main aur tum dinner pay woh bhi.....

again Atul,Anji,Muski and Rahul comes wining!!!!

Atul:Humaray baghair dinner, he cries alot.

Rahul:Humnay tu socha thay kay bb match jeetnay ki khushi main tu humay dinner de ga laken tu Ridhima kay sath dinner par ja raha hai.

Armaan:Main kisi kay sath dinner pay....

Riddhima:Tu Armaan tum taiyaar rehna main tumhein khud pick karlongi, she whispers in his ear atul,anji,rahul and muski tries to listen , Ridz says:

Remember??meri sexy bike!!!Armaan gets mad he says yeah sexy bike, tum mujhay pick karogi?

Atul:Haan yaar sochnay ki baat hai Armaan tu itna bhari Riddhima usya kaisey pick kargi,Ammy stares at Atul and now he is boiling with anger!!!

Anji:Atul wo motor bike pay Armaan ko uskay ghar say pick karnay ki baat kar rahi hai.

Armaan is leaving when he heard Anji saying this ye log bhi milay huay hain kya he turns around to ask them but they all notice that and disappears again,Armaan looks here and there and than he leaves crying.

Now Ridz is standing on the counter, Armaan comes from behind he see Ridz he think that if she will se me than she will again start breathing down my neck so he hides his face in his file and is leaving slowly, keerti comes to talk with Ridhima about a case but Ridz says Armaan is handling the case, Keerti scolds why it was your case Ridz explain that it was a little girl who insists that she will only be treated by Armaan and no one else, Keerti says ok i want to talk to Armaan, Atul comes and see Armaan leaving hiding his face in the file, Atul shouts deliberately yes yes dr.Keerti Armaan tu yaheen hai , hey Armaan he shouts and the file slips from Ammy's hand and he bumbs into the wardboy who is bringing some medicines in a troly, Armaan falls and his face hits the troly, everyone's mouth is widely open. Armaan starts bleeding from the lips.

Keerti:Dr.Armaan aap theek tu hain apko bahut ziyada chot tu nahi aaee?

Riddhima:Nahi dr.Keerti bahut ziyada chot aaee hai ye subah bhi bahut zor say gir gaye thay laken phir bhi kaam karay ja rahay hain mujhay lagta inhay bahut gehri chot aaee hai,around Armaan head the bombs start exploding.

Keerti:Dr.Ridhima aap dr.Armaan ki dressing kar de jiye aur dekhaye kay inhay ko gehri chot tu nahi ayee.

Riddhima:Yes dr.Keerti.She gives a mischieveous smile to Armaan.Who is now crossing every limit of anger.

Now in the next scene Rahul and Atul are trying to lie Armaan on the strature, and he is shouting main theek hoon, main theek hoon, mujhay chod do, he tries to get up but Atul and Rahul calls two other wardboys who picks up Armaan strature and take him to the room where Ridz is waiting(the same room in which Ridz confess his love for Armaan in front of him) they all come in a fast motion put his strature here he tries to run away but they again make him sit on the bed, all this is going on in a fast motion, Armaan tries to run away but he bumps into sister lovely and falls again now Anji and Muskaan also joins, Armaan faints.

Now all Atul,Anji,Rahul and Muski comes outside and falls on each other and someone legs are shown they all looked up , Dr.Shub is staring at them very seriously, they all gets scared they stands up, Shubhankar starts lauging they all laughs too now he again stops laughing they all stop than he again starts laughing loudly they all laughs loudly too, now they are laughing alot, Shub turns around laughing and see Keerti is standing there and staring at him seriously, Shub laugh but she give him am an angry look, he stops laughing, all four behind Shub disappears.

Keerti:Aap yahan kya kar rahain hain?

Shub:wo actually mein interns ko....

he turns around but no one is there, Keerti again gives him an angry look,than Shub disappears too.

Now Ammy is unconcious and Ridz is cleaning his wound she looks at him and think she looks like a cute baby when he is sleeping than she put her hand in his hair and looks at him with love she recalls all her sweet moments with him she smiles with some tears in her eyes.She says sweet dreams Armaan, she is leaving when he holds her hand and pull her closer to him he sits on the bed they both share a close moment Armaan's expressions are full of anger, Ridz stares at him too and tries to release her hand but he holds it tightly ,finally gets up from his bed and holds her tightly, and still very angry.

Ridz tries to say something but she cant, Ammy recalls his romantic moments with her, than he recalls all the bitter moments Ridz refusing that she said i love you , taking Armaan's name in front of shish for the bhnag scene, than he released her and says:

"tum meray kareeb aao ya na aao ab mujhay koi farq nahi padta because i.....

he leaves angrily.

Now on coming out he holds his head and leaves, Ridz comes out, and says with a stern smile:

Farq tu tumhein padta hai Armaan aur nahi padta tu apki ye ghulam kis liye hai, waisey bhi aaj raat ko jo farq tumhein padega wo tu tum sari zindagi yaad rakho gay" she looks up and winks.........

Maleka/Love Ammy

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey, Very nice! I couldn't stop laughing on Armaan's state!

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