I hate to love you-FF-updated-Part 5 pg 8 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
oye hoye means the dance scene is coming up in your FF
good good
great FF keep it up
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: kdrs

Hey, Very nice! I couldn't stop laughing on Armaan's state!

me too😆and u notice he is almost sufferening form this state these days coz of Riddhima😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
hi maleka.i just read ur ff
awesome yaar.i couldnt stop laughing.it was so funny and poor armaan
continue soon
Edited by vidu93 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg!!! that was sooo funny!! poor armaan!! sounds like u have something fantastical planned in ur next update!! can't wait!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏
verii nyc ff..
plzzzzzzzzzz continue soon..

Edited by sonalkhullar - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ammy is going to home to his way home he recalls all the crazy things tht happen, he make faces but when he recalls the moment when Riddhima was dressing on his wound he smiles he said to himself that "wo abhi bhi pyaa karti hai mujhse, laken bharosa nahi karti, aur bharosay kay baghair pyaar ka koi matlab nahi, laken aisa meray sath hi kuyn hua, kuyn aaee Riddhima meri zindagi mein, kuyn, jab dur hoti hai tu bhi raha nahi jata aur jab wo paas aati hai to uski shakal dekhnay ko dil nahi karta" finally he reached home, when he comes out of his car he saw another car outside his house"Ye tu Anjali ki gaadhi mera ghar kay bahir?"he walks into his house and Atul opens the door.

Ammy:Champ tu , tu meray ghar mein kya kar raha hai parso ram kahan....

he saw that he is tied up with to chair in ropes, Ammy gets angry.

Atul:Armaan meray dost meray yaar, tu uski fikar mat kar humnay usay khana khila diya hai.

Ammy:Khana..???tum..tum log andar kaisay aye?

"Ridhima,Anji and Muski says together khirki say"

they all have plates of food in their hands, and they are wearing long caps like chefs they all serve food on his table in the fast motion, they try to make Ammy sit on the table but he refuses he tries to run away from the window but the somehow manage to make him sit on the table,now a lot of food is in front of him.

Rahul:Riddhima nay kitney pyaar se banaya hai teray liye ab khalay na yaar.

Ammy:Hunh.

Riddhima:Armaan sir subnay meri itni madad ki hai sabki mehnat bekaar jayegi.

Ammy:Meray doston meri behno, i mean bhaiyoon ki behno...

Atul:Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!

Ammy:Champ..Atul feels dizzy his eyes rolled and he is baout to fell down when Rahul holds him, Anjali meri behen now he gets unconcious.

Muski and Anji says ohhh, Anji rolls her eyes.

Ammy shouts:Champ ladies and gentleman, Atul again wakes up.

Rahul:That's better.

Ammy:Aap sab nay jo kuch bhi meray liye kiya uskliye mein aap sab ka shukar guzar hoon, laken mujhay aap logon ki sewa service nahi chahiye aap log bahut thak gaye hai ja kar ghar pay gehri neend so jayee aur mujhay bhi sonay de.

Atul:Haan ye bhaut thak gaya hai.

Rahul:Aur waisey bhi abhi tu kal ka dose bhi dena hai he winked at Riddhima.

Ammy notices that, he gets jealous he said to himslef salay Raoool tunay Riddhima ko ankh mari.

Ammy:Raoool, kaunsa dose.

Atul gives Rahul an elbow hit:Meri ankh mein kuch chala gaya hai, ab chaltay hain.

Ammy:Aur ye ye kkk..kaunsa dose yekis dose ki baat ho rahi hai?

Muski:Uskay kehnay ka matlab hai kay wo aaa wo aaaa.

Anji:Ab tum so jao warna tum kal patients ko dose kaisey dogay.

Ridhima smiles:Haaan!!!

Ammy:Theek hai jao laken ye sab saaf karkay.

Riddhima:Main kardongi tum sab jao, haan main karlongi, parso ram haina meri madad karnay ke liye.

Atul open his ropes and says haan, jao uski madad karo, warna...

Parsoram:Jata hon jata hoon.

Now Armaan sits down on the sofa, while Ridz clean all the things, now she comes out of the kitchen looks tired also, she see Ammy is sleeping on the sofa she puts on a blanket on him and tries to whiper somethings in his ears but she did'nt she looks at him and gets lost into his thoughts she recalls all her romantci moments with him ,she says to herself Armaan main tumhein kabhie totnay nahi dongi kabhie nahi, aur tu m hein ab hasna hoga meray liye she is near to cry when she suddenly wakes up and is leaving when her dupatta stuck up, she gets a little scared she thinks that it is Armaan who is wake up she says "chodo"she turns around slowly and takes a sigh of relief on seeing that her dupatta is stuck in th sofa on which is Armaan sleeping she takes it out slowly and is leaving when her dupatta stuck up again she turns around on thinking that her dupatta is stuck in sofa again but this time its Armaan who is holding it, Ridz look at him and they both looks into each other's eyes, Armaan pulls her hand get her closer to himself Ridhima's hairs spread on her face bcause of the breeze and Armaan remove those hairs from her face, he touches his face and than he sits on the sofa, he holds her face into his hands, Riddhima says nothing she just stares at him,he is about to kiss her when he wakes up from the dream, he says"Kitna bura khwab tha".

Now in the morning when he wakes up his servant give him a small piece of paper on which is written "khana pasand aya"with a winking smiley drawn on it he crushed the paper angrily but he again open it because Ridz name is written on that"Apki ghula Riddhima"he puts his hand on the name, and gets angry again.

Now in Sanjeevani Keerti informs him that he has to goto Lonaval for a 2 days trip for the routine checkup of kids in the sanjeevani orphanage, he takes a sigh of relief.

Ammy to himself:Ab poray 48 ghanto ke lye us pagal ghulam say peecha chotay ga do din main kay baad akar sabko theek kardonga aur aisa theek karonga kaykisi ka ghulam bannay se pehly 10 baar sochaygay.

Now on his way to lonavala his stop buy his car stops working he comes out to check it a bus is also stop by here there is a dhaba near, some goons said bad things to the old man, and Ammy give the goons some punches, the old man thanked Armaan and give him blessing another goon comes to hit on Ammy from behind when someone hits him with a stick and he falls down, Ammy turns around and make an irritating face,"TUM"

It is Riddhima , haan main,"

Ammy:Tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho?

Ridz:Wo hi jo aap kar rahien malik, woi funda Dr.KEerti ka one male one female you know...

Ammy:I know.. he gets angry.

Now they both goto a dhaba, Ridz order something and Armaan orders a glass of water she comes and sits in front of him, he goes to another bench but hs ealso comes their now he roam around all the dhaba like this finally they sit together.

Ridz:Aap kuhc kha nahi rahey sir?

Ammy:Kuch logo ko dkeh kar meri bhok mar jati hai.

Ridz:Too bad sir ye apki sehet ki liye acha nahi hai, she tries ot feed him daal roti which he refuses to take when he saw Ridz eating he feels hungry too he orders too, now he cant be able to eat with roti.

Ridz:Main khilaaon???

Ammy:Main khud khalonga.

Ridz:Please....

He stares at her she looks so cute and innocent she tires ot feed hima nd bring it closer to his mouth after little hasitation he eats it and now he eats wih her hand he starts coughing and Riddhima gives him a glass of water he puts hishand on hers when taking the glass they again share a romantic look Armaan removes his hand form hers, she blueshes and Ammy gives a slight smile.

Riddhima:Whoooops meri bus tu chali gayee, ab..???

Ammy:Catch another bus.

A sardar ji comes:Oye paji kaise gallan kartay ho tussii, apni biwi ko akela chod kar ja rahey ho.

Ammy:Paji wo meri biwi...

Riddhima:Aik baat ko lekar aap itna naraaz ho gaye, kay aap mukhay akela janey dengay aur aik main hoon jo kabsay apko mananey ki koshish kar rhai hoon.

Ammy gets into a complete shock he stares at her angrily she pretends that she is crying, now all the sardar ji gathers and looks at Armaan threatingly,Ridz winked at Ammy, he imagines that lava is coming out of his head.

Precap:Ridz is wearing a red sari and he is wearing a white kurta salwar, its raining, Ammy says to Ridz that what do you think of yourself, he holds her tightly but Ridz says nothing she is just lookin at him, Ammy says i hate you you are the person i hate most in this world, he walks away leaving Riddhima alone standing in a hut.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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😳 Nice part, Maleka... 😆 😆 Ridz pretending to be his biwi.. can't wait to see wat happens next
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@Zaineb:I will continue again and soon 😉 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
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woww ur part was awesumm
plzz continuee soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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maleka it was awesome...jus read all three parts...ridz is making his life hell by trubling him hehe...he is saying im his wife wow man...thats kool yaar...n yea she started cooking 4 him 2 awesome
but the recap sounds sad, poor ridz

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