*.*ONE DAY*.* FF P14 Pg 71 NEW* Note 76 - Page 40

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: dmg_sonia

awwwww its a wonderful ff...really loved the concept...n he way u hav written is brillant, mind-blowing...n yea beautifully written the description of AR'S emotions......... i loved the way armaan was feeling bad...

every line is writen soo nicely, brillantly...hays off 2 u...i wan 2 giv long comment but im very tired now as i had a long day, so sorry 4 a short comment

Thankyou so much.. ur komment is really .. really sweet ... Thanx alot.😳
Made my day 🤗

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: kvn1983

please continue soon

Kabhi zindagi ke pannon ko ulat kar dekhiyega,aapko ek shaksh yaad aayega,bhool jaaoge zamane ke diye saare gham,jab hamare saath guzara waqt yaad aayega.....

Thnx 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Catwoman

wow love to see how u pen this😳

the way i pened it was 🤢 😆 But glad u still liked it 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: vidu93

hi astha
another ff???
lage raho.but the ff is really nice.i love the starting and i dont wanna say but i hate armaan's character.how could he be like this that too to riddz. 😡
i hope he comes back to track
could u pm me whenever update another part pls
continue soon

Awww clam it down girl.. he is sweet now .. right 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mariaa.xo

cant w8 2 read d nex part astha....n u betta do it 2moro az u promised or else 😡 😆 😆

Haha .. i did do as i promised .. Smiles * 😳 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet-niz


omg dat was sch an emotional part
especialy 2 da end
poor ridz 😭
bt stil luvin it cnt wait 4 da updte
luvin it as usual
wot else cn i say left me speechless again lool
really gd updte
plzz try n updte b4r fri cnt wait dat lng lool
n thx 4 da pm
updte sooon ~Xxx~

Awww Thanx

And don;t cry .. he is all sweeto now aint he .. This man.. he makes me love him even more as the days do passing by.. 😳😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: urmila_17

hey
its amazing excellent wonderful 👏 karan grover 😆 great so finally u r making arman jelous over karan[real arman] good thought
hmm yaar when will arman change
he is hurting ridz a lot
but iam happy he is finally falling for ridz good
loved it a lot
thanks for ur pm
pls update soon

Aww ThankYou for the sweet komment.. im glad u are likin da FF 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet=me

Heyy!!! That was such an emotionally charged part....but I loved it....especially the way Armaan was falling for Ridz...Only the end was sad...When will Armaan change himself n stop hurting Ridz?? She loves him sooo much....Oh well I'm sure he'll change soon n for the better...Btw,Muskaan n Angie are too funny.. 😆 😆 Do continue soon....Can't wait...Thanks for the pm....
Love,
Ananya

Haha!! Thankyou so much... love ur koomeent.. Haha!! Muskaan and angie .. don't even say they are funny .. incase ridhima hears 😉

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Bloomsanchitha

aww astha.....awesome promo and update..... 👏 👏 hayes off to u sweety 👏 😃 [ls continue asap 😳 thanx for the pm

Awww Thank You so much 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: muskaan_2008

Asthu 🤗 hats off 😉
Will comment in detail later have to revise for my test which i have tommorow
sorry 😳

Aww Thnx any way 😳

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