*.*ONE DAY*.* FF P14 Pg 71 NEW* Note 76 - Page 39

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

heyy aastha
gr8 part
loved it
thanks for the pm

Sonia

Awww Thnx 😳

Originally posted by: heyy_babyy

OMG!!!...The next parts are super intense...Plz continue soon!!!

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Originally posted by: spln

awsom update hun....cant wait patiently for the next part!!!!!!

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Originally posted by: shalika

nice update
do continue soon

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Originally posted by: alvina

👏
good job
waiting for the update

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Originally posted by: cute_unknown_fr

tooo gud astha & nice promo
thanx for pm
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Originally posted by: Catwoman

hmmm looks like they both crumbling to the core

Great update 👏 👏 👏

Love Kat

Awww ThankYou Di 😳😳

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

reserved
hey astha
will comment later
sorry for late comments but im having an imp exam coming up so im a bit busy with its prep so ill coment in detail later on but ill be reading the updates
sorry
😭 😭 😭

Aww is Okii 😳

Haha!! im thankin You Late ... Way Late Too 😆😆

Originally posted by: dmgfan

nicce part....continue soon

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Originally posted by: jia..

Asthu........ 🤗

Aaahhhhhhhh wat a wonderful part......superbly excellent....just brilliant.......gosh wat beautiful description of emotions.........specially i loved the way armaan was feeling bad.......

Awww ThankYouu So much 😳


WHY DID I FEEL BAD? He quested himself as he punches the punching bag. Taking all his anger out on it as what just happening few mins ago flashed in his mind. He walks back in the room just to find her combing her hair all dressed in a beautiful pink sari.As the cold water drops start to hit on his body he remembers her face. WHAT THE HECK IS WRONG WITH ME. WHY IM I FEELING BAD FOR WHAT I DID TO HER TODAY.
He remembers her words "You don't have any rights". DO I REALLY DON'T.
He bangs the wall behind him, coming out of the bathroom his eyes look round for he


Those lines are superfantabulous......goshhhhhh

Aww Bless 😳

*Jia stands up to give Asthu standing ovation*......

Yaar Stop na ... Gettin me all blushy 😆

Next Ridz too simply awesome........her thoughts.......abt men being pigs.....lol it craked me up....then the way she melts..and then cums back to her senses.......outstanding......
BTW the promo..........first scene awesome.........
But the next one...............ridz shouting..him wild.........OMG........continue soon yaar.........

Haha!! I No .. But dw u no dat was the past .. now he is all lovin and romantic to his dear wifey.. his soniye 😉

Am already superduper addicted to ur ff........usual orders frm my side......u better continue soon.......or.......... 😉 😈

Haha!! Mummy Bacho.. Jia is scarin me 😆

Love ya
Jia 🤗

Love You 🤗