*.*ONE DAY*.* FF P14 Pg 71 NEW* Note 76 - Page 22

OMG THAT WAS SIMPLY FANTASTICALLY AMAZING
luved evry single moment it was so beatifuly written 😉
n full of ssoo much emotion n drama luved everybit
jus amazin you've left me sppechless wot mre can i say and the songs that u picked out as wel went wiv the theme of your updte was singing it in ma head n all
sorts lool bt serisuly jus luved it defintly has to be ne of my favourite updtes n thx 4 da long updte well worhth the wait 4 sure

your such an amzin writr lvu readin ur ff and you've 😉 defintly got me addicted to this ff which i aint a gd thing by the way lool. truley amazin n cnt wait 4 da nxt part poor armi n ridz have gone thorugh soooo much n luved how u used differnt ppl to show lke differnt aspects of their sort of personalities lke dat lil kid. this has to be the lngest comment i'v writen bt wel worth written it lool
well done ur doing a fab job updte sooon cnt wait
luv nizma x

omg i hope armaan will be allrite 😭
but at least this will make ridz reconsider the divorce
idea
fab update 👏
loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

awesome part and i think this part was my favorite so far....thanks for making it long..cant wait till Thursday

Awesome part, the way you got all the emotions in the same part is so amazing 👏 the 1st dance of Rakhi sawat...the boys seeing them truly HAHK style...the punishment was good...despite Ridz being so angry with him, joined in her sisters to punish her husband....the lady maid was hilarious, reminded me of the actual DMG track now....then the slow song dance, which really broke Ridz was heart breaking, its so true, she wants to forgive him, but her head doesn't allow her....then Arman making efforts to win her back...but when he ripped off her blouse, I was a little scared, that he is all over doing the same mistake....but the other little gestures...good morning kiss, helping her with sari & all was so cute & romantic..I thought she might give into him now...but then you had to give us a shock, by her asking for a divorce.....her imagining Arman was so sweet, she really loves him, but can't forget that he forced himself on her...poor girl...feel sorry for her as well as for Arman.....lastly by Arman having an accident, now them coming back togather is a so sure possibility....this was a fantastic long part....so was my reply...couldn't help it....do update soon.....take care......

👏
amazing part,....
loved the length...
plz cont sooooon....


Sonia

This was a super long part...
With many twists && turns...
Hopefully AR will get back together!!!
Ill be waiitng for your update!!!

thanks for the update its reallya nice one and a long one thanks yaar please continue it soon

hey asthu 😊
thanks for the pm sweety 😉
lovely long part 😊
it was worth reading 2-3 parts together loved it to bits
actually this came as a pleasant surprise
w posted the whole marriage function n a few days after it part together wow it was amazing yaar
how did u manage to write so much 😕
but it was fun reading it
dont mind my coment getting longer coz of the long update 😉
well to start off
this part contained the most hillarious scenes n very emotional n romantic ones also 😳
this part is my personal favourite
i loved their romance felt bad for the whole crying n emotional part
n also loved the punishments 😆
they were simply superb 😆
cant stop laughing still
well at the end armi meets with an accident ... 😭 😭
i know this will bring them closer 😳 😳 😳
at last i would conclude(finally i hope i didnt bore u)
this was perfect
👏

OMG! tha was soooooooo awesome yaar
really amazing m dyin 2 read the next part

OMG i have no wordz at all to explain how gud part 7 was. I felt sooo sorry for Armaan wen ridhimma wudnt lissen to him. and now he's in hospital 😭 😭 plz make him bette.r and u shud make ridhimma his doctor so tth they can clear everyfin and get bck together. this part was soooooooo long i was soo happy.
PM me wen part 8 is up


x...Aneesa