*.*ONE DAY*.* FF P14 Pg 71 NEW* Note 76

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#221

please update it soon its really a nice one 👏👏

Good Morning
i mean Good Evening
i mean Good Night hmmm..
i think..time is not important
i Just want 2 Say that i rememberd u.

Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago

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Natasha

@Ladoo645

Dazzler

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Posted: 17 years ago

#222

Nv felt so SATISFED that u have made me 😉

Suuchhh a lonnnnnnnnngggggggggggggg part...it like woowwerss.....

seriously really GOOD!!!

-Natasha

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Sheetal

@er.Sheetal

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#223

Sorry to comment so late...

Awwww, finally Armaan have started falling in love wid Ridz...

I felt bad dat he had an accident... but some things r meant to b for gud... I m sure dis will bring AR closer... Also it will give Armaan full access to d realization of his mistake... May b it will also help Ridz forgive Armaan...

Very well done... 👏
i know dat u ra lil stick up, but still Plzzzzz update soon...

- Sheetal

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@Karan.T

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#224

Very nice 👏
Continue soon

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Jia

@jia..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#225

Awweeeeeeee Asthu 🤗

Now wer shud i start from??? 😳

First of all a big hug for such a long part. 🤗 I was literally thrilled seeing its length. Ahh love such long updates. Keep them cuming as they make me grin. 😃

Next along with the length i muct say its brilliance was gawjus. The entire confusion of ridz was excellently displayed. She wants to forgive, give him a hug but she cant. Hope she gets out of this mess soon.

Ahh Armaan is just getting better and better. Loved his dilema too. He wants her to forgive him but he still cant get over is aggression. Just hats of for such outstanding portrayal of emotions Asthu. 👏

Next i must say ur a master at wrk wen it cums to describing dance seqs. Yet again u stole the show again with brilliant dance seq. a huge round of applause for u there. 👏

Finally i loved the way he addressed her as wifey and her calling him shona......so sweet. shona seems to be ur fav word huh??? 😳😉

Ahh my heart broke wen sheasked for divorce, and then he meets with an accident.OMG hope its for good. Waiting eagerly for the next part Asthu.......take care of urself. 😳🤗

Love ya
Jia

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sweet=me

@sweet=me

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#226

OMG!!! This part was awesome!!!! Soooo many emotions!!!! It was simply BRILLIANT!!! Loved the fact that it was soooooo long....OMG Armaan's in the hospital??? Poor guy...I hope their relationship becomes ok after this....Wanna c them together soon...
Love,
Ananya

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Mona

@.:.MONA.:.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#227

hey wow yaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr soooooooooooooooooooooooooo long part....loved it....Omg Ammy met with an accident..but i hope this bring ar back on track...i want to read their romatic scene and that is only possible when ridz forgive ammy and ammy realise his love for her...
i know this accident will bring them both back as we all know that love is not alway about happiness sometime sadness and sepration make long bond stronger..
....i am waiting for that parts...please pm when u update next time...
i really enjoyed reading it...so please continue soon....

❤️MONA