Meri Jaan Ho Tum (AR)Prt 14/pge 123-*Note pge 140* - Page 91

hi irsa

thks for the pm dear

amazing part yaar

ridz is trying to say sorry to armi and return his jacket

armi cooled down and he is very mischeivous

he s getting very bold idea and dreams of them both

update sooooooooooooooooooooon

luv soumya

sry 2 comment late dear...

Originally posted by: Kiran_1

I love ure ff 😛

Gr8 update 👏

Anjali is such a B***H 🤢

And Riddhima is so innocent apologing and doing whatever she can so that Armaan forgives her ⭐️

Armaan is sooooooo sweet for standing up for Riddhima 😳

LOL both Armaan and Riddhima are interupted whether its the bus driver, Muskhaan or Anjali 😆😆😆 Its cute as well as funny that both of them are either lost in thoughts of each other or in each other i mean the way Armaan stares at Riddhima

And to answer your question I think the pace the story is going is perfect well it is to me

Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soooooooooooooooon

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing part

i really liked the way u showed how ridz was willing to do anything 2 say sorry to armaan but each time people were interupting her. im glad armaan is finall starting to take care of ridz and the way he stood up to anjali 4 ridz was really sweet.

i think the pace of the story is going great cant wait 2 read the next part.

Originally posted by: .:.MONA.:.

wow update from u after so long........well but i still remember ur story line as it is one of my favorite.....about the question i think everything is perfect inur ff..........nothing need to change or removed or anything......everything is perfect......so for me everything is in place....thankc 4 thepm.........continue soon......i hope u dont have much school work now....do u?

❤️MONA

Originally posted by: forevercharmed

awesome part!!!!!!!!! i love everything between AR!! hopefully something will happen on the trip! please continue soon!

Avanti

Originally posted by: meow23

atlast u contd.. luvd d pace at which d story is movng..gotta 2 c loads of developments.. brilliant prt..

thnxx, 4 d pm uppdate soon

Originally posted by: bary

i am so happy u updated,the story is going great,i pm u later

Originally posted by: musicdiva

finally!! ahaha

great part though!

AR pace is going quite well,, but i think it kinda fell behind in this part :S

otherwise it's been great!

just dont drag AR confession now! hahaha

cont soon!

Originally posted by: Robin_M

wow so good to read your fic after so long! it was a really good part! especially their growing attraction for one another! hehe armaan having erotic fantisies of riddhima! oh my

i really like the pace your going at, if u go any faster it will see rushed, if you go slower it might seem to stretched, so i think this pace is perfect!

so glad you could update, and hope you dont keep us waiting too long for the next part!

Originally posted by: er.Sheetal

Hi Irsa... thanx for d PM fren... np

Oh god... after such a longggggggggggggggg time... i waited for like d lifetime for dis one to b updated...sorry 4 the delay...had too much going on😕..

how were ur exams anyways...??? Exams haven't started yet, they start in Jan

Aw' so Riddima still had his Jacket' so sweet' Armaan had started liking her' we knew dat' but its new dat Riddima is also liking him now' I guess' I mean she looked attracted to him too' Yeh, she's getting attracted to him more and more...plus armaans trying not 2 give her any more rteasons 2 hate him

but she wasn't considering him lately' Riddima is absolutely right' Muskaan has a bad sense of timing' Wow Armaan supported Riddima over Anjali' gr8'LOL, bechari anjie na...she had her hopes up 2 high wanting 2 be with armi

I was loving reading d whole travel scene' Thanks but it ended as soon as it started' I mean dis part was after such a long time' & it was too short' I wanted just to keep reading & reading more' LOL, it was nearly 7 pages long, how much more do u want?😆😆...can't promise whether the next one would be 'as' long as this though, 😕

AR are d BESTEST & d most favoritely loved couple' I think d kind of response u got in 'dis' thread must have given u enough evidences' LOL true about tht...i guess the AK fans just started reading this 1 b4 seeing the other.......I am loving dis AR FF' Thank uuu

Please try to make it a little longer next time' if possible'

I will wait desperately for d next part' hope u wont take too long dis time' will try not to

Love

- Sheetal

Originally posted by: princess4120

WOW!! so glad you updated... was eagerly waiting for you to continue this ff... loved this part.. Thanks armaan is attracted to ridz... fantasizing about her.. LOL...abhi yeh haal hai to baad mai kya hoga, when he actually falls in love😳😳/..... omg! hahah.. and ridz.. blushes.. shys around him.. sooo cute... i think the pace is fine of this ff.. because they went from hating to this.. i hope armaan doesnt do anything ... hastily to scare her and all that.. i hope whatever he does.. its sweet.. romantic.. and gains her trust.....that sounded filmy😆/...lol

i hope you continue sooner.. will be waiting for the next part..

thanks for the pm!! take care

Originally posted by: arvanu

hey irsa,

updated after so long.......great to see u back with such an awesome part........i really loved it.....especially armi-ridz conversation was very sweet.......and regarding the speed i think its going fine but would love to see some more cute scenes between the two...do continue soon!!

thanks for the pm!!

-surbhi😊

Originally posted by: sony_123

hey, u updated after a really long time. i forgot what happened previously and i had to read the last 2-3 parts again. 😆😆. thanks for pm😊😊😊...Aw, sorry about tht... wil try to not take as longer to update

nice update. 👏👏👏wow finally they are on a trip😊😊😊. ridz, muskaan did shoping😊😊, waiting to see what ridhima wears in the trip. ridz was apologing armaan soo many times. what would she do once she comes to know the whole truth😆😆😆....u can probly guess wht she'll do...in this case its ridz ke gussa that armi shud be scared off, not the other way around😆😆...lol...... i liked armaan supporting ridz. 😊😊....

ans to ur question - i think AR story should move a little faster. the current phase is also ok, but i wouls like them to recognize thrir love soon. atleast armaan...kk, will keep that in mind, and wont drag the fic on and on.. will pair them up in a few more parts