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Posted: 17 years ago
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Before the chapals come out,I just wanna say I'm soooooooooo sorry!!!! Yaar I actually read your update ageees ago but somehow I never got a chance to comment...was soooo busy off late with my exams coming up.... Sorry sweety...
Anyway coming to the part..Irsa,u were fab!!!! I loooooved it!!! You totally captured the essence of the growing attachment between AR.I can't believe that Ridz waited for ageeees for Armaan to come back just so that she could appologize...It was really sweet...Then again,AR always were cute...
OMG this Rahul is giving me the creeps...Why does he have to be all goody-two-shoes and appologize to her in place of Armaan?!?! I mean it's alright if he does but I sense a growing attachment towards Ridzi..I hope that doesn't happen yaar....
I'm seriously looking forward to the next part.The match of their love has been lit...Just waiting for the fire...passionate fire I should add..😉.. lol....Do update soon n thanks a ton for the pm....
Love u loads,
Ananya
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: angel1117

hey great part!!!! cant wait til the next one.........can u pm me pls when u update? thanks!!


Thanks... will sure do pm u😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was gr8. and don't even think it was tiny bit boring. i enjoyed it---the AR bonding. awwww they r in love.😳the little thing they do for each other is heartwarming like Ridz waiting for Armaan and Armaan teasing her by just ignoring her. u have one heck of a gr8 plot here. thnx for ur pm. this is an amazing story. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey amazing ff !!!!!!!!!!!!!! i just started readin n like read the entire thing !!!!!!!! i just couldnt wait to read on .. kept thinkin i shud stop now n go study or somethin but evry time a part ended i just ended up lookin for the other one ... loveddddddddddddd it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was totally awesome!!!!!!!! plz cont soon n pm me!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: angel1117

hey great part!!!! cant wait til the next one.........can u pm me pls when u update? thanks!!


thanks...

sure will pm u😉
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet=me

~Reserved~

*edited*
Before the chapals come out,I just wanna say I'm soooooooooo sorry!!!! Yaar I actually read your update ageees ago but somehow I never got a chance to comment...was soooo busy off late with my exams coming up.... Sorry sweety...
Anyway coming to the part..Irsa,u were fab!!!! I loooooved it!!! You totally captured the essence of the growing attachment between AR.I can't believe that Ridz waited for ageeees for Armaan to come back just so that she could appologize...It was really sweet...Then again,AR always were cute...
OMG this Rahul is giving me the creeps...Why does he have to be all goody-two-shoes and appologize to her in place of Armaan?!?! I mean it's alright if he does but I sense a growing attachment towards Ridzi..I hope that doesn't happen yaar....
I'm seriously looking forward to the next part.The match of their love has been lit...Just waiting for the fire...passionate fire I should add..😉.. lol....Do update soon n thanks a ton for the pm....
Love u loads,
Ananya


omg ananya, your posts crack me up

good that you commented, otherwise i had all my chapals ready..😆.lol jkn'

'passionate' fire would soon start, i hope i can do justice to it😳😆

yeh, there attactchment is sure growing... slowly but eventually😆...will try and spead things up now...lol

Rahul had always been attracted 2 ridz, but doesn't say anything as armaan hates her😕😛

will try and continue soon

love u loadz too hun😛
nuts123 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: inuyasharocks

that was gr8. and don't even think it was tiny bit boring. i enjoyed it---the AR bonding. awwww they r in love.😳the little thing they do for each other is heartwarming like Ridz waiting for Armaan and Armaan teasing her by just ignoring her. u have one heck of a gr8 plot here. thnx for ur pm. this is an amazing story. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon


thanks...i'm so glad u liked it....i found the first half a drag, but the second half really funny, even though it was meant 2 b 'serious'...lol
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: chaiti!

hey amazing ff !!!!!!!!!!!!!! i just started readin n like read the entire thing !!!!!!!! i just couldnt wait to read on .. kept thinkin i shud stop now n go study or somethin but evry time a part ended i just ended up lookin for the other one ... loveddddddddddddd it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was totally awesome!!!!!!!! plz cont soon n pm me!


Thanks Chaiti...i'm so glad u liked it

lol, yeh same thing happens 2 me... especially during exams i find really good fics, which is really irrataing...lol😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: anitamalik

IRSA! Yay, you finally updated after all the insisting I did..lol.. lol...all thanks to you i actually updated😛

Ok, first off I've told you many times before that your parts are never boring..I LOVED this part, really! This part was entirely important for Armaan to fight his thoughts and figure out what is exactly happening to him, and to strenghten the AR bond. After the whole gunda incident, Im sure both will look at each other and understand each other in a different light. You did complete justice to the part!👏Thanks Anita... your comments are always the sweetest... yeh, now Ridz would trust Armaan more, and see the different side to him, the one she always choose to ignore
So, first of, I loved how Rahul came and apologized for Armaan's actions...

'Actually, Armaan ne tumhare saath bohat bura kiya… he shouldn't have done that… to uss ki jaga mai maafi maang raha hu… it was just a joke, so no hard feelings', he offered his hand.

So sweet of Rahul to actually apologize on his friend's behalf.. i guess the guilt was hurting him too! Yeh, he had felt bad for her from the start so appologised... but he may create problems between AR later on
Sadly, RIddhima doesn't know why he exaclty was apologizing..and she shouldn't find out either! I hope Manek doesn't display her photos for everyone to see...She would be utterly disgusted with herself and then she would find out that Armaan drugged her...Hopefully, she wouldn't find out..lol...lol hopefully!!!😆.. but she's going to have to find out some time😕...that too not a very good way (or from armaan as you've probly guessed) ...so sometime after the confession,... as I want to start with their romance now in a couple more parts...😳😆

The other 'gali ka gunda' got up and they both began following her, 'Arre yaar, bharakta kyu hai?? Fifety-fifety kar lete hai na… aadhi teri…aur aadhi meri', he sneered and both did a high- five. 'Ai chikni, chalti hai kya no do gyaarah…',

I loved the tapori language..It so gave the feel of Riddhima being messed with. You did a brilliant job of handling the tapori language...I could clearly visualize everything happening in front of my eyes..
lol, the 'tappori' language!!! it actually made me laugh (or you can say smile😆) when I read it through, even though i tried to make the part serious...lol, i guess it's due to the words!!!
Thank God Armaan came and saved his love--although he doesn't exaclty admit it as yet. from the gundas! he will do soon..he'll have to

just because he couldn't stop thinking about someone, it doesn't 'exactly' mean he loves them, right?

Yeah Right..😆 lol...Armaan needs to admit that he is in love with RIddhima! When you can't stop thinking about someone, you are definitely in love and have been bitten by the love bug...Your Armaan needs to go learn something from the Armaan in my fic..LOL!😆...lol, yep, the armaan in your fic has admitted to his feelings... MY armaan would do too very soon😳😆... he sure has been bitten by the love bug... Ridz would too really soon
As always Irsa, you made me happy with such a update.. Good jobb..and continue soon or else I'm gonna pester you again!😆lol...thanks... And you have to PM me the website for the tapori language...as I was also thinking about posting a gunda scene later on in my fic..lol.. hehe lol, a lot of people have asked for that... but i haven't had chance to pm them... yeh, will pm you the link soon😆.... you know what??? the language's actually called 'bhindi'!!!... see!! you sure do learn something new everyday😆...lmao
GOOD JOB!
-Anita



Thanks Anita for the super duper long comment, you surely made my day... or night!!!😆

and sorry for replying to your comment really late...😳
ashluvdmg thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
pls cont soon..
reli cnt wait 4 anothr dy..
update soon
😭

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