Meri Jaan Ho Tum (AK) Part14 / pge 40

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~*~kom@l~*~

@~*~kom@l~*~

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Posted: 17 years ago

hi dear....nice start....i can't believe that its your first time writing....awesome job....really detailed intro....waiting for the first part.....conti. soon

komal<3

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cheeselova

@cheeselova

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

the concept is gr8. and also liked the character sketch. cont soon

~Sana~

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shraddha

@guju_girl1

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Posted: 17 years ago

#13

Great start can't wait for the next part continue soon 😊

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Rima

@Rimsie.

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Posted: 17 years ago

#14

gr8 intro very detailed plz continue soon by the way whats the title of your ff? 😕

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ms_gujju_92

@ms_gujju_92

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#15

hey gr8 job....pls cont 😊

oh and ditto, i totally agree with you on ur inspirations...(pallavi and bheegi di)
they are the best 😳

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nuts123

@nuts123

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+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever
awesome storyline cont soon plz!!!!!!! 👏

thnxx

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nuts123

@nuts123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: ~*~kom@l~*~
hi dear....nice start....i can't believe that its your first time writing....awesome job....really detailed intro....waiting for the first part.....conti. soon

komal<3

hey thnxx...😊