Zindagi Bus Yu Hi updated pg. 150/ 22.12.09 - Page 74

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

totally awesome n mindblowing......

thank u 😊 😊 😊

muskaan n sarthak part was too romantic n beautiful.....
again a huge thanks 😉 😉 😉

loved it

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: varshita

Hieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee kinna soda update tha yaar.😳 Mai to padh bhi nahi paa rahi thi itne sharam aa rahi thi mujhe to. 😉

oho kab se thaare ko sharam aave lagi sodiyon?😆 😆 😆
Loved this update so much.😛
thanks, par maane pata tha ki thaare ko accha lagega ye ud.😉 😉 😉
Sarthak kitna naughty hai na vo to ek chance bhi nahi chodta Muski ko paas laane ka.😳
accha hai na , lage raho dono.😛 😛 😛
Muski bhi kam nahi hai jab Sarthak ne kaha chalo tab us ka mood nahi tha aur ab janab ka mood nahi hai.😆
hehehehehe aisa chalta rehta hai.😳 😳 😳
Kitne baar sab kehte reh gaye ab vapas aa jaao par dono hi jaise lagta hai jaana nahi chahte hain vapas.😉
Kahan chod k jaayenge ek doosre ko ye dono.😳 😳 😳
continue karo jaldi.

thanks mam.😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pritib0


HIIIIII VARTIKA HOPE UR FINE............

THE UD WAS..............
AWESOOOOOOOOOOME............
SUPERB................
GR8............
JUST TOO GOOD.................
DO CONT. SOON....................

Thanks a lot Preeti 😉 😉 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: desaiprachi07

Hey what a romantic n sweet one yaar,😃

thanks buddy 😊 😊 😊
ek baat to maani hogi ki tum jaisa romance kam hi log likh paate hain.😉
pata nahi ye to par yahan sab bahut dhasoo likhte hain.😉 😉 😉
Ek simple se story ko bhi tu itna khoobsurat kar deti hai ki..............mai kya kahoon aage i am speechless😊.
😳 😳 😳
Sarthak Muskaan k saath har moment enjoy kar raha hai aur Muskaan bhi jaise lagta hai us se door nahi hona chahti hai 😳 tabhi to us ne phone hi bund kar diya Sarthak ka.😆
accha kiya na vaise bhi yahan Sarthak us k saath aaya hai time bitane na ki phone par baat karne.😛 😛 😛
Sarthak us ko tease karne ka koi bhi mauka nahi chodta hai na.😊 Loved the way they were loosing their control.😳
hehehehe, accha laga na i knew.😉 😉 😉
jaldi se aage likho na i am impatience to read more.😳

thanks 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Shafoo

wowowow awesome part

thank u so much.😉 😉 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
thank u darling 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: varshita

Mai bhi yahi chahoongi ki tumhare fic aise hi sucessful hote rahein aur tum aise hi humesha hum sab k saath raho. 👏

thank u so much Versha sweety 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 49:-
"What?" Sarthak was shocked.

"Haan, isiliye Nikki ne call ki thi." She told.

"Par vo dono sale to kal aane waale the na." Sarthak quarried.

"Hey, u mind ur tongue, they r my brothers." She warned him.

"Tabhi to vo mere sale hain." He replied smiling.

She gave him a hopeless look to which he smiled and both of them soon drove to Sarthak's Bunglow. When she reached there she found a taxi outside the Bunglow she frightens to be caught but Sarthak relaxed her.

Actually he knew a back door from where he can enter inside his house safely. He said Muskaan to send an sms to Nikki about this. Muskaan did it quickly and Sarthak held her hand and both started sneaking carefully, suddenly a thorn hit Muski's leg and she screamed with pain.

"Shit", Sarthak cursed.

"Koi hai kya bahar?" Vedoo asked.

Nikki was not there and after hearing Muski's scream Sakshi was sure that Nikki is gone to bring her inside.

"Nahi koi???.koi to nahi hai vahan." She tried to cover up.

"Nahi I am sure koi tha jaroor vahan, tune suna Sahil?" he asked Sahil too.

"Haan mujhe bhi laga ki vahan koi hai." Sahil confirmed.

"Chalna chal k dehte hain." Vedant suggested.

"Maine kaha na koi nahi hai vahan to kya karne jaa rahe ho, chalo kuch kha lo pehle." Sakshi insisted.

"Nahi hum abhi aaye." They both left leaving Sakshi worried but what she can do she went behind them.

Here in room:-

Sarthak brought Muskaan carrying in his arms n placed her gently on the bed. Muskaan was just looking at her and she forgot her pain. She was adoring him the way he cared her and brought her here.

Sarthak looked at her and asked "Kya hua aise kya dekh rahi ho?"

She smiled and said, "I love u Sarthak." And she hugged him.

Sarthak was first surprised by her behavior but soon he hugged her back n kissed her temple. "Me too, par ab mujhe lagta hai mujhe jaana chahiye varna tum to mujhe jaane dogi nahi." He winked her.

"Dhatt", she blushed but didn't leave him.

"I think agar hum thodi der aise hi aur yahan baithe rahe to tumhare bhai aa kar mujhe yahan se peete hue le jaayenge aur tab tum gaana gaate hue mujhe bachane ki koshish karogi. Pata hai kaun sa?" he said mischievously.

"Kaun sa." She was still hugging him. It seems that his chest was giving her a comfort so she doesn't want to loose it soon.

"Koi patthar se na mare mere deewane ko." He gave a short laugh.

She give him a loving punch on his chest.

"Oho kya kar rahi ho ? Koi dekhega to kya sochega ki mai ek ladki se maar kha raha hoon." He said making a sad face but naughtiness was evident in his eyes.

"To keh dena sab se ki ye vo hi ek hai jis k liye mai kuch bhi kar sakta hoon aur jo mere saath kuch bhi kar sakti hai." She said smiling.

"Aur jis k saath mai kuch bhi kar sakta hoon kyoun?" he teased her looking in her eyes.

They stared at each other forgetting the surroundings and the happenings around them. Sarthak was drowning in her eyes whereas she was feeling his gaze was melting her from inside. His lustfull eyes were making her blush hard as she understood his intentions and on the same way she was unable to hold her desires more.

Than he did one unexpected thing he touched her feet from where the throne was sticked, he indicated her to lie down n he started removing that.

"Ouch", she moarned and he looked at her feeling the pain she had suffered.

"Is it ok?" he asked.

"Hmm", she replied.

He leaned n kissed her foot where the thorn hurt her. As his thirsty lips touched her bare feet she shivered by his touch. He placed a few kisses there making her moarn with pleasure.

"Sarthak", she whispered softly.

"Hmmmm", he replied.

Muskaan pulled his hand n now he was on top of her. They looked into each other's eyes and got busy in an eye lock. He was again losing all his control over him. It was very hard for him. He placed a kiss on her throat; she loved it when he kissed her there. The heat was increasing by each passing minute b/w them.

ishk e sarbat ke bina,dil ham me basti nahi.
teri yadon ke mehfil ke bina,
sehanayiyan meri dil me goonjti nahi,
tum me khoye bina,
hame aj kal neend ati nahi.


He placed a series of kisses on her throat then he moved towards her shoulders and striping of her sleeves he started kissing them while his hands were traveling on her tummy under her kurta. She was overjoyed and was so happy for being touched by him after so much time like this.

eisi kya kasak thi teri kamoshi me,

jo hum aine se sarma baithe.

sarab ko dhare bina,

sarabi hum kahlane lage.

jo dil ne bune he aarju tere liye,

he khuda tu jala ke mujhe usko bayan kar de.

He moved towards her tummy and placed a kiss on her naval, a light moarn escaped from her mouth. He moved upwards and sealed her lips with his forcly as if he is going to eat her lips like that, she also responded with equal passion in her. His fingers were still playing with her naval n this was making her mad. Soon his hands started caressing her curves over her dress. She moaned again and Sarthak felt that she liked it.

Here out of the house:-

"Maine kaha tha na ki yahan koi nahi hai?" Sakshi claimed.

"Nahi maine awaaz to suni thi aisa ho hi nahi sakta hai." Vedant was determined this time.

"To koi yahan dikh kyoun nahi raha hai?" she shot.

"Yahi to samajh nahi aa raha hai mujhe." They were confused.

Tabhi Nikki aayi vahan. "Guys tum sab yahan kya kar rahe ho?" she asked them quite knowing the answers.

They narrated what they heard.

"Oh to ye baat hai." She took a deep breath than continued, " Actually mera koi samaan gir gaya tha yahan to mai vahi lene yahan aayi thi aur jab vo yahan nahi mila to jaise hi mai palti jaane k liye to mera pair is pade se takra gaya aur mai gir gayi bus vahi screaming sound suna hoga aap sab ne." she made really a good excuse.

"Par tum ne hume kyoun nahi bulaya." Sahil asked in confused way.

"Are yaar mai uth sakti hoon apne aap sab ko bulane ki kya jaroorat hai is me?" She answered.

"OK, theek hai ho gaya chalo in dono ko kuch khane to do." Sakshi tried to change the topic.

"Nahi pehle mujhe Muski ko dekhna hai, tum ne bola than a ki us ko fever hai." Vedoo was concerned and Sahil also gave his agreement to it.

"Pehle khana kha lo vaise bhi vo abhi so rahi hai." Nikki said.

"Nahi maine kaha na?????" Vedoo was about to say further.

"Theek hai jo man aaye vahi karo vaise bhi meri yahan suntan kaun hai kuch?" Sakshi left irritatingly.

"Sakshi sun to???.." Sahil went behind her.

"Kya bhai aap bhi na." Nikki said Vedoo making sad face.

Idhar andar:-

Sakshi gusse me jaa rahi thi jab Sahil ne peeche se aa kar us ka haath pakad liya.

"Maine kaha na ki mujhe kisi se baat nahi karni hai abhi." She replied with anger.

"Sshhhhh", he came in front of him n placed his finger on her lips.

Sakshi felt a wired sensation on his touch to her lips she couldn't say anything further.

"Tum ko pata hai gusse me tum bahut khoobsurat lagti ho." He murmured in her ears.

"Par mai vo??" she was unable to continue further because she didn't get a chance for it. Sahil placed his lips gently on her hand n he poured his heart out today, "I love u Sakshi."

She was shocked rather than happy, "Tum ye kya keh rahe ho?" she was not expecting it.

Just than Vedant was entering n when he heard overall conversation he smiled.

"Kahan gayi Sakshi?" Nikki asked coming there when Vedoo caught her hand.

"Chalo yahan se mera khana nikalo."

"Par Bhaiya vo................." but Vedant indicated her to be silent.

"Chal na." and both left the place without creating any disturbance.

"Maine jo kaha vo sach hai Sakshi, mai tum se bahut pyaar karta hoon aur kab se ye to mai bhi nahi jaanta hoon. Shayad tab se jab se mere dil ne pyaar ko samajhna shuru kiya hai tab se maine apne khayalon me pyaar ko bus tumhare roop me hi dekha hai aur mai chahta hoon zindagi ka ye safar hum dono saath mil kar nibhayein." Sab kuch ek hi saans me keh gaya tha Sahil.

"Par maine kabhi is tarah se tumahre baare me socha nahi Sahil." She said with hesitation looking down.

"To koi baat nahi ab sochna shuru kar do dekhna tum ko bhi mujh se pyaar ho jaayega bahut jaldi hi." He winked her.

Sakshi was still unsure what to say.

Here in one room of the house:-

"Aah", a gal screamed when Vedoo noticed it n ran in that direction because he was just passing from there.

"Kya hua?" he opened the door n reached but when he saw the view he became shocked n alert.

"Mujhe bachao Vedoo pls." she has started sobbing now.

"Wait mai kuch karta hoon, u don't worry mai hoon na." he assured her.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Welldone darling. 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Mujhe khushi hai ki tereis topic ne 100 pg aur 50 ud's complete kar liye hain.😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
Mai chahoongi ki aage bhi aise tu aur tere fics kamaal karte rahein.😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉
Keep it up darling.👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
Edited by desaiprachi07 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice part. Gud dat Sarthak n Muskaan r bak home safely without any1's notice. But these 2 luv birds get into romance everywhere. But thats actually really cute.
I'm happy dat Sahil has confessed his feelings to Sakshi. And I luved this line-"To koi baat nahi ab sochna shuru kar do dekhna tum ko bhi mujh se pyaar ho jaayega bahut jaldi hi."
The ending was confusing. Wanna knw who was the girl n all.
PLS CONTINUE SOON.

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